Replying to:Please tell me if this is good or not, because this is my first fan-fic. This is about my oc, Cosby. She is kind of like Zhalia, because Dante found her on the streets, except her personality is the complete opposite. If you like intense action, this is the fan-fic for you. I will do a combination of pov?s and scripts depending on which one fits better.
Part 1
Cosby?s pov:
As usual, I woke up late, because Dante and I had no missions. We were staying at his house in Venice, Italy. Dante was sitting on the couch when I finished breakfast. ?hey, Dante, any missions?? I asked, plopping down on the couch next to him. ?No.? he answered. Then I replied, ?but it?s been almost two weeks! Maybe the huntik foundation is giving us a break.? ?I doubt that.? Dante said. ?usually the foundation gives us the most missions.? ?Dante, I had a weird dream last night.? I said. ?it was about when you found me? except this boy with blonde hair and a really weird voice did?? then dante replied, ?you should?ve gotten over it. It was over six years ago. Oh, and more calliban training after we go shopping.? ?awww, come on!!! I was barely able to bond with him YESTERDAY! What makes you think I can invoke him?!?!?!? I yelled. ?no ignatious or solstice until you invoke him!? Dante taunted. ?now come on. We need to get back soon.? ?but I already have Ironwood, Freelancer, FrostFire, and Quicksilver.? I silently retorted.
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when we got back to the store, we were across the street from Dante?s house when we heard commotion. I couldn?t see over the large bad I was carrying until I turned my head and stop walking because dante stopped. ?Now, can someone help me? I?m a little loaded down here with these groceries.? Dante asked. Someone shot an augerfrost at dante but he blocked it with honorguard. Then dante walked toward the front gate and asked someone if they were okay. Then I heard a familiar voice. I walked forward and set the bag I was carrying down. When I stood back up I stumbled back because it was the boy from my dream.
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