Replying to: Yay! It's back! Sorry for the ?'s, I can't fix it. Anyways, I will start now!
Chapter 1: The beginning
Tallest Miyuki?s POV
I stood on a high, floating platform in a huge theater. Cameramen surrounded me, I saw my face from many angles on a screen probably 200 feet long. Rows after rows of Irkens were sitting in rows after rows of seats. The theater was slightly slanted, but it reached very high at the far end. I was told the theater could hold 200,000 Irkens. After thinking for what seemed like a hour about the immensity of the crowd, I realized how loudly everyone was cheering. I raised my hand to symbolize silence. Then, I spoke.
?Most of you probably know what this about? I said, hearing my voice back from 100s of screens. Then I heard someone from the back of the crowd yell ?NO!!! I DON?T!!! MY TALLEST, WHAT IS THIS ABOUT!??. I responded how I had planned. ?We are all here to celebrate a historical event. This is arguably the greatest thing Irkens have ever done. This greatness will help us reach our goal of conquering THE UNIVERSE!!!? I said, pausing for dramatic effect. ?WHAT IS IT!?? The same person yelled. I sighed, and then continued. ?Irken scientists have unlocked the code to Irken modification? I said, waiting for it to sink in. I then continued. ?THEY HAVE FINISHED THE NEW RACE!!!? I yelled in excitement. I was the tallest in charge when this event happened. ME. ?So, I have the Irken scientists in charge during the event here to tell us about it? I continued. My platform lowered, and a group of 6 Irken scientists stepped out from behind the curtain. I stepped off my pad, and they stepped on. ?The new Irken will have the ability to hypnotize? The lead scientist started.
~3 Hours later~
?This? is how we will win.? he finished. The platform lowered, and they stepped off. The group of thousands upon thousands of Irkens started flooding out of the room. I then followed the scientists to see the developing smeet that was going to replace me in fifteen years.
~A long time later~
Zeter?s POV
A cold robotic arm pulled me out of my tube. Inside of the tube was all I?d ever seen. But, in a few seconds, a whole new world opened up to me. Before I could comprehend it, I heard a voice. It said, sternly, ?Welcome to life, Zestoria?. ?What?? I asked. ?You are named Zestoria?. I heard back. ?And you are going to be great?. ?I don?t like that name. I prefer Zeter? I responded. ?Oh, really?? The voice responded. ?Yes. I think Zestoria is a horrible name.? I responded as stern as he had been to me. ?Well, it?s yours? the voice said back. Before I could respond, I was shoved out of the room. Zeter
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Chapter 2 coming... when this one is out!
Posted by:Zeterirkenon12.03.12 9:27 AM
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RE: Welcome to Earth, Zeter (fanfic)
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