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Date: 08/21/12 7:41 PM
From: kia3333

Ok THANK U SWIFTCANDY!!! Without u I wouldnt have this idea to do it!!!!
It was a normal day for fourteen year old Danny Fenton.The ghost boy.He was quickly running into school as Dash chased him
"GET BACK HERE FENTON"Dash screamed
"Why today"Danny moaned as he ran around the corner.If he could just get to class he would be safe.To his misfortune he ran into someone,slowing him down just enough for Dash to catch him.
"Im so sorry"He said helping the person up.
"Its alright young man"
Apparently he ran into a grown man with a creepy voice.
"Im Mr.Octopus the new Science Teacher"The man said
"Oh"Danny said as Dash grabbed him
"Ok Fenton TIME TO-"
"My dear boy but I would suggest putting him down"Mr.Octopus suggested
"Why old man"Dash said
"Cause Im Mr.Octopus the NEW science teache rand u have detention this afternoon"He said and Dash dropped Danny.
"This isnt over Fenton"With that Dashw as gone
"Thanks"Danny said
"Not a problem"Mr.Octopus said
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Date: 01/12/13 10:28 PM
From: StarPaw007

dannygal...
Hmmm... that's actually a REALLY good idea! I might take some of that... Although, who know's if they'll succeed.

So yeah.... Hopefully I'll remember that, because I might actually use that idea.... Hmmm....

INSIDE STARPAW'S HEAD....
Tony stark, Danny, Doc. Ock, failing, winning, nano bots, fight scenes.... knock out, ghost ray, punch, kick, villains defeated, villains take over the world.....

SO MANY IDEAS!!!!
StarPaw,

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Date: 01/12/13 2:46 PM
From: DeltaRogue

I'm reading!
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Date: 01/11/13 10:00 PM
From: StarPaw007

SO SORRY for the wait... BUSY, BUSY, BUSY! I've never been so busy in my life! But... at least it keeps me on my toes...

Sorry for making you wait so long... as usual... But here's the next part....

Spiderman took Danny to the Helicarrier.
Spiderman NEEDED to know what was going on! Danny seemed tense... and something wasn't right. Like the way he had collapsed in his room...
"Spiderman? Danny? What are you doing here?" Fury asked, as Spiderman dragged Danny to the seat, and made him sit down.
Danny kept shuffling, and looking every which way... like he was uncomfortable with them here.
"Okay, to sum it up... Danny's acting strange, and I'm kinda worried."
Fury stared at Spiderman and sighed.
"I don't know what I can possibly do... I mean, as long as he isn't hurting anybody-"
At these words, Spiderman saw Danny cringe.
Hmmmm....
"But when I talked to him, he collapsed all of the sudden..." Spiderman added.
"I'm FINE!"
"No... I'm pretty sure you're not."
"Okay... fine..." Fury took a deep breath, and looked at Danny.
"Can you tell us what's going on kid?"
"No... I cant." Danny had his head down, as if ashamed.
"SIR!" Someone shouted. We turned to see some guy in a uniform. "Doc. Ock escaped last night!"
Danny cringed again, and Spiderman started to get suspiscious.
"Does this have anything to do with Doc. Ock?" Spiderman asked Danny.
"N-NO!! Of course not!" Danny yelled, but Spiderman could tell he wasn't telling the truth.
"LIAR!"
"I'm not a liar!"
"YOU ARE!"
"No I'm NOT!!"
Spiderman and Danny stared a each other for a few seconds, then Danny looked away.
"Kid. When you joined S. H. I. E. L. D... you joined the team. And teammates don't keep important things a secret."
Danny took a deep breath...
"It's about Doc. Ock... and a ghost called Ember... They... they put nano bots in my bloodstream and are... threatening me unless I.... get rid of-" Danny cut off, and looked at Spiderman.
"ME?!" Spiderman yelled. "Why is it ALWAY'S me?! Doc. Ock want's to chase me... villains wanna chase me, daily bugle wanna make fun of me... It's like Imma target or something!"
"Calm down Spiderman. I'm sure Danny would NEVER try to hurt you." Fury gave Danny a look.
"I WOULDN'T! I wouldn't... I promise!"
"Good... it was the right choice telling us kid."...

SOMEWHERE ELSE....
Doc. Ock slammed his mechanical arm on the control panel in a moment of sheer rage.
"THIS IS A DISASTER!" He screamed.
"Whoa, whoa. Calm down. I'm sure we could turn this situation around." Ember assured him.
"Fine... fine..."
"Then lets give Danny another taste of what he's up against if he doesn't follow our orders..."....

BACK AT HELICARRIER....
Danny felt a little better now that he had told them what was going on.
But as Spiderman and Fury were talking, another jolt of pain went through Danny.
It was stronger this time, and had to grip the table to keep from falling.
"YOU HEAR ME?! DO AS YOU'RE TOLD OR WE WILL END YOU!!" Doc. Ock seemed to scream in his head.
"Danny, you okay?" Spiderman asked.
Danny nodded his head. The pain ceased.
"That must have been the nano bots... so they weren't bluffing..." Fury said, looking at Danny.
"This could be serious... Very serious." Fury added.
Danny nodded, and so did Spiderman. This wasn't a good situation to be in.... not at all....
Again... sorry for the wait... been busy.... By the way, is anyone but Dannygal reading this?
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Continued by,
StarPaw,

Started by,
Kia3333,

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Date: 01/11/13 9:27 PM
From: StarPaw007

dannygal,
Thanks so much! And I'm SO sorry... I've been REALLY busy... I've had to TRY to work on my drawings, make my other fan-fics... school, and balance EVERYTHING else in life... it's hard. AND I gotta keep my reading up, cuz I needa read a LOT more if I wanna get first place... So far, I've been reading manga lately.
So SORRY!! I hate having to do all this at once... and I don't wanna keep people waiting either... SO CONFUSING!!

Oh well... I still like making these fan-fics, and I will NEVER, EVER quit them. No matter WHAT!

Your REALLY sorry,
StarPaw,
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Date: 01/06/13 12:32 PM
From: StarPaw007

Danny flew back to his house... he was FREAKING!
He didn't want to hurt Peter, but yet... he didn't want to either!
Maybe they were bluffing about the nano bots... maybe... maybe....
Someone knocked on Danny's door.
He opened it to find his mom and Peter.
Danny tensed.
No, no... NO! Don't let him in! Danny thought desperately.
"See.... Danny's here. Hello Sweetie! Peter's here!" Maddie said, then she left.
Peter tried to come in, but Danny began to close the door.
Peter stopped it with his foot, and tried to push it open.
"Right now's a HORRIBLE time! Maybe later? Yeah... later." Danny stammered trying to close the door.
"DANNY! What's going on? Let me in." Peter said, making the door open little by little.
Danny fell down, and the door flew open.
Peter fell down, got up, and helped me up too.
"What's going on?" Peter asked.
"Nothing..." Danny lied.

SOMEWHERE ELSE....
Doc. Ock and Ember looked at the screen. Danny was talking to Peter obviously... but he wasn't trying to fight him.
Doc. Ock picked up the microphone.
"DANNY!! LAY WASTE TO HIM ALREADY!!!"
On the screen Danny covered his ears, and looked around confused.
"What's wrong?" Peter asked.
"Nothing." Danny replied.
"Let me have that!" Ember yelled, and took the microphone...

BACK AT DANNY'S HOUSE......
Danny heard Ember say "Let me have that!" in the background.
"HEY DIPSTICK! Why aren't you attacking?! WE GAVE YOU AN ORDER! Or are you forgetting the Nano bots?"
Danny gritted his teeth angrily.
"I WONT DO IT!!" He screamed.
"Do what? Danny, who are you talking to?" Peter looked worried now.
"No one!" Danny snapped.
"I see you're making this difficult... fine... then we'll just have to give you a little taste of what you're in for..." Ember said from, where? Inside Danny's head? He didn't know how they were doing this...

SOMEWHERE ELSE....
Ember gave Doc. Ock a look, and Doc. Ock knew what she wanted him to do.
Doc. Ock took out a controller, and turned a dial.....

BACK AT DANNY'S HOUSE....
"Danny... are you sure you're okay? You can tell me anything..." Peter started.
"I'm FINE!" Danny snapped again... but suddenly a wave of pain coursed through Danny's body.
Danny let out a yell, and fell to the floor in a flurry of pain and confusion.
"DANNY!" Peter yelled, crouching down next to them.
"Now you see what happens when you disobey us boy... do what you're told." Doc. Ock said.
Danny clenched his teeth, and the pain started to fade.
Danny's whole body throbbed. He tried to get up.
"I'm taking you to Fury... now. Something's not right... I can tell...." Peter stated, letting Danny lean on him.
"I told you, I'm all right!"
"No you're not." Peter replied.
"You're going to Fury, and you're gonna tell us what's happening...".......................................................................................

StarPaw,

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Date: 01/06/13 9:39 AM
From: DeltaRogue

Cool!
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Date: 01/05/13 8:37 PM
From: xavier

thay are super cool
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Date: 01/04/13 5:58 PM
From: StarPaw007

Danny woke up to find himself chained up to a wall, inside of a small room.
"Where am I?!" Danny screamed. "SHOW YOURSELF DOC. OCK!"
"Stop screaming. My ears are gonna bleed if you go on like that." Ember's voice came from a small speaker.
"We'll let you out. But on one condition..."
"What?!" Danny asked, trying to break the chains, but failed.
"Let me tell him." Danny hear Doc. Ock say.
"Fine..."
"We want you to..."
"What?!" Danny asked impatiently.
"We want you to get rid of the spider."
"A pet spider? A spider on the ceiling, or a spider in your shoe?" Danny joked, but he knew EXACTLY who they were talking about.
"Spider-Man Dipstick! SPIDERMAN!" Ember yelled.
If Danny could move his arms, he would cover his ears. She was that loud.
"Fine, fine. Just give me the key to these cuffs..." Danny lied.
"Uh, uh uh... We need to know you're telling the truth. And that you'll ACTUALLY do what we want." Doc. Ock stated.
"What? Cant trust me? Well, there's no way to know for sure. You'll just have to find out." Danny said coolly.
"Actually... we know you're lying Danny. SO! Doc. Ock suggested we used nano's, and put them in your blood stream so if you disobey us... well... you get the rest."
"What?! Where did you get Nano Bots?!" Danny screamed.

MEANWHILE....
Vlad: "OH BUTTERED CHEESE BREAD!! Where are those Nano Bots?!"

BACK AT THE PLOT.....

"Oh... we sorta... borrowed them." Ember explained.
"The important thing is... you have NO choice but to obey us." Doc. Ock told Danny from the speaker.
Danny sighed. He didn't have much of a choice... but how could he hurt Peter?
But then again, Danny couldn't let them kill him... He didn't wanna die yet!
"F-fine... I'll... I'll do it." Danny stammered, hanging his head.
"That's a GOOD boy! Now, we'll let you go. But make sure to do what you're told."
The handcuffs on Danny's wrists opened, and he was set free.
A door opened, and it led outside.
"Go on..." Doc. Ock ordered Danny with mock sweetness.
"You have a job to do....."
What's wrong with me and Cliffhangers?! I'M SO EVIL!!

StarPaw,

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Date: 01/01/13 8:28 PM
From: StarPaw007

Danny woke up. He took a look at his clock... 1:00 am...
"Uggghhh!!" Danny groaned... he tried to go back to bed... but something bothered him....
Something didn't feel right....
Danny got up quickly. Something was DEFINITELY going on... though he had no idea what.
Danny looked around his room... something seemed... well you get the point... wrong.
He was colder than usual... and suddenly his ghost sense went off.
"Great..." Danny muttered under his breathe.
"GOIN' GHO-" Danny started, but a hand covered his mouth.
"Mmmmfff!! Hmmmfff!!" Danny tried to scream, but the hand muffled his voice.
Someone grabbed him from the dark.
Danny screamed.
"Chill dipstick." A girl voice said.
Danny looked harder in the dark, and saw a familiar shape... it looked like... Ember!
Danny turned into his ghost self, and struggled in her grip.
Ember was stronger than you would think....
"Mffff, fff, yfffff, mmmmffff." Danny tried to make a witty joke, but Ember's hand didn't allow him to.
Danny narrowed his eyes, and got a Ghost Ray ready.
His hand glowed, and he elbowed Ember.
She let go, and stumbled backwards.
"As I was trying to say... Record companies turn you down again?"
"Laugh while you can Danny." Ember warned. She shot him with a ghost ray, and Danny flew right into a shelf. And broke one of his spaceship models.
"HEY! I built that." Danny complained, turning to Ember.
"Oooh! Little astronaught. I'm SOO scared." Ember teased.
She grabbed her guitar, and turned the dile.
"Get ready for a few bars of PAIN!" Ember strummed something, and a giant pink hand smashed into Danny.
"Pink seems to be a popular color with the bad guys..." Danny joked, shooting Ember with his green ghost ray.
"I am SO glad I have green ghost rays..."
"How would you like to turn Black and Blue?!" Ember asked, and punched Danny in the face.
"Owww! Well, I gotta say... it's much better than being pink..."
Ember rolled her eyes, grabbed Danny, and flipped him. Slamming him to the ground.
Danny went limp.
"Ha! Guess you're not so tough after all..."
Ember let her guard down... NOW!!
Danny jumped up, and slammed into Ember using a headbutt.
She flew back, and slammed into the wall.
Danny put his hands on his hips.
"Oldest trick in the book and you fell for it..."
"Oh, on the contrary..." A voice said from behind Danny.
He jumped a bit, surprised.
My ghost sense didn't go off... then... who is this?....
Danny turned around, just as a mechanical arm slammed into him.
It pinned him to the wall, and another one turned into a saw. Coming dangerously close to his face.
"WOA!! Whoa, WHOA!!" Danny screamed, flinching.
"Cool it Doctor. We don't want him dead... yet. What's the use if we don't have a little... fun?" Ember ordered.
Doc. Ock gave her a look, but put his saw away.
"You're got lucky this time."
"What? You working for her now? Really?! Come on Doc. You cant be working for a GIRL!" Danny teased.
"Hey! That's very offensive! To me, AND your little girlfriend." Ember stated.
Danny blushed.
"NOT MY GIRLFRIEND!"
"Yeah... okay. Fine."
"What should we do with him?" Doc. Ock asked.
"Hmmm... let's let him go back to sleep. Wouldn't that be nice Danny?" Ember asked in mock sweetness.
Danny's heart pounded.
"Perfect idea..."
Doc. Ock's arm lighted up with electrical energy... and it spread up his arm towards Danny.
Danny struggled, but it was too late. He felt a searing pain as he was shocked.
It was so powerful, his vision started to blur... and dots appeared across his vision.
Danny tried to fight it... but his eyes started to close... and he soon fell unconscious.....

ANOTHER CLIFFHANGER!!
I'm SO evil!!
Mwaahhahhhaaa!!

StarPaw,

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Date: 01/01/13 7:49 PM
From: StarPaw007

dannygal,
I like Spiderman a lot too! I'm having a hard time choosing between Spiderman, and Danny. Who do I like best? THEY'RE BOTH SO AWESOME! Now... this Spiderman might not be my choice. But the Spiderman from Spectacular Spiderman is so awesome! But also... Danny is so awesome! LOVE THEM BOTH!!
And the next part... should probably get on that... yeah... hehe.

Sorry! I've just been SO busy! I've been trying to draw a lot more... and improve my skills. But I have VERY, VERY, VEEEERRRYY Low confidence levels... so I just feel so horrible... and like all my art is horrible...
I know deep down that it's not... but it just feels that way...
(Sorry... got a little touchy there....)

So yeah... should probably get on that... because there's no way I'll be able to draw anything in the mood I'm in.....

StarPaw,

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Date: 12/31/12 10:20 AM
From: DeltaRogue

Cool!
I was expecting the Box Ghost to team up with Doc Ock but Ember is more cool!
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Date: 12/30/12 3:43 PM
From: StarPaw007

Doc. Ock sat in his prison cell with an overly large straight jacket on.
"Those children were smarter than I thought... oh well.... I still know their secret identities... and my new partner should be here any minute..."
Just as he spoke there were shouts outside his cell.
"What the-?! WHO ARE YOU??! I'M WARNING YOU!! YOU'RE NOT ALOUD IN HERE!!! Hey... HEY!!"
Doc. Ock smiled.
"He's here...."
The prison door busted open, and smoke flew everywhere.
"Hello..." A voice said from the mist.
"ARE YOU READY TO ROCK?!!" To Doc. Ock's surprise... a teenager with Blue flaming hair, skull boots, and a guitar burst into his cell.
"Who're you? Where's that guy who was supposed to free me."
"You're looking at her. And by the way... I'm a girl dipstick. Not that you've probably seen too many of them." The girl said, holding her nose.
"You sure stink."
"WHY YOU LITTLE- WAIT UNTIL MY NEW PARTNER FINDS OUT YOU'RE HERE!!" Doc. Ock screamed angrily.
"You mean the one you're already looking at?" She asked, fiddling with her guitar.
"You mean... you're the person that was on the other end of the phone?!" Doc. Ock asked, remembering his talk with the mysterious person....

FLASHBACK...
*Doc Ock's phone rang*
Doc. Ock: "Hello?..."
Person: "Hello... I hear you're in a bit of a pickle..."
Doc. Ock: "Who is this?"
Person: "Nevermind that. I'm here to help. Now... I will be dropping by your cell. Then after that.... we can talk about getting rid of the Phantom Kid."
Doc, Ock: "What about Spiderman?"
Person: "Of course... both of them will wish they were never born once we're through with them."
Doc. Ock: "Perfect....."

BACK TO THE PRESENT....

"Yeah I was old man. Though I thought you would look less..."
"Crazy?"
"I was gonna say look less like a crazy phsyco bent on revenge he'll never get without help... but yea. That too."
"Listen princess. I don't know who you think you are-" Doc. Ock started.
"I'm Ember. Never heard my song? Well... I guess old folks don't like music too much." The girl said, strumming her guitar a bit.
"HEY! I'll never work with you if you make fun of me like that! You're just lucky I'm in this straight jacket or you'd be begging for mercy about now...." Doc. Ock threatened.
"I don't wanna work with you."
"W-what?" Doc. Ock stammered. He was utterly surprised.
"I want YOU to work for ME. "....
StarPaw,
Yeah... was starting to get boring... and I wanted to add someone to join up with Doc. Ock. I was thinking Skulker or Vlad... but those are such popular choices. You'd totally be expecting that. So I decided to switch it up a bit.....

Continued by,
StarPaw,

Started by,
Kia3333,

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Date: 12/30/12 3:29 AM
From: invadercgc

this is hilarious my brother's nickname is spiderman and mine's Danny so this is pretty funny
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Date: 12/27/12 11:44 AM
From: StarPaw007

"White Tiger?" Danny gulped.
"Yes. Now let's go inviso-boy." White Tiger teased, Grabbing Danny by his jumpsuit.
"Uh... it's inviso-bill.... I mean Danny Phantom! " Danny stammered.
White Tiger led him back into the training area.
"Ready-" Fury started.
"Not really..." Danny muttered.
"Set.... FIGHT!"
White Tiger swiped her claws out, almost cutting Danny.
"What's wrong kitty?" Danny joked, dodging, and kicked her on the side of her head.
White Tiger straightened herself, and knocked Danny's legs out from under him.
She pinned him on the ground with her foot.
"I think that means I win." She stated confidently.
"Don't underestimate what you cant touch." Danny warned.
"What's that supposed to mea-"
Danny suddenly turned intangible, and phased through the floor.
White Tiger looked around wildly, not knowing where Danny had gone.
Danny flew up through the floor, and punched White Tiger in the jaw.
She was knocked back onto the floor, and Danny pinned her.
"Warned ya."
"Oh yeah? Well I'm not called White Tiger for nothing. And I have the claws to prove it."
White Tiger sliced Danny's jumpsuit right at the D, and punched him in the face.
"Ow! You know how hard it is to fix this jumpsuit? I don't even know how to sew!" Danny complained gesturing to the ripped suit.
"Come on. Stop joking around and fight." White Tiger demanded, throwing a punch at Danny.
He put up an ecto shield. And White Tiger hit it with her fists.
"Owww!" She shook her hand in the air.
Danny expanded his shield and it hit White Tiger and knocked her into the wall.
"Okay... I give. You win." She got up, and rolled her neck.
"You're a pretty good fighter,"
"Thanks, you are too. I can see you didn't go full out."
"You didn't either."
Danny shrugged.
"I wouldn't wanna hurt a lady."
"Don't you make me use these claws."
"Okay guys. That was good. Very impressive." Fury said from the other side of the glass.
"THANKS!"
Fury, Spiderman, Iron Fist, and Powerman entered the room along with Agent Colsen.
"Who's that?" Danny asked, pointing to him.
"Fury. You're really considering adding him to the team? He is a ghost, and you cant trust those things. You should just send this kid home." Agent Colsen ignored Danny.
"Trust in my judgment. I know a good superhero when I see one."
"You do realize this kid has been caught stealing from banks, attacking the former mayor of Amity Park, and other various crimes since he first appeared. He's more often called Public Ghost Enemy number 1 than a super hero."
"I'll have you know I'm plenty hero! And most of those attacks and robbery's were either staged or misunderstandings!" Danny defended.
"Besides. He's a kid." Agent Colsen went on as if Danny hadn't spoken.
"We're all kids." Spiderman stated.
"Yes. But he's only 14. Younger still than all of you."
Danny's eyes seemed to glow brighter.
Why was Colsen being such a meat head?!
"I WAS TALKING TO YOU!" Danny yelled.
Silence.
"Thank you."
"Well... that was rude." Colsen stated, fixing his tie.
"You're rude!" Danny shot back.
"Why you little runt! SEE! This is why we shouldn't allow him on the team!"
"Maybe you should mind your own beez wax!" Danny retorted.
They faced each other.
"He's on the team." Fury said suddenly.
"What?!" They both blurted suddenly.
"I said the kids on the team." Fury repeated.
"He's a lot of things. And I think he could do with a little bit of training. Though he's already better than Spiderman was when he first joined."
"HEY!"
"You'll regret this. You will." Colsen threatened. Shooting a nasty look Danny's way as he left the room.
Danny stuck out his tongue.
"Good riddance...................................................................................................

Hope you guys are liking the story!
StarPaw,

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Date: 12/26/12 1:58 PM
From: StarPaw007

Thanks DeltaRouge!
I DID have a great holiday. Know what I got? ART KIT!! EEEAAAAIII!! And not a stupid one with pencils, colored pencils, crayons, and some markers. The real deal stuff! Charcoal sticks, Graphite Pencils, Watercolor pencils, Flourescent pencils.... so much stuff! Not enough time... Or space... I'M IN ART HEAVEN!! *Day dreams of art*
StarPaw,
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Date: 12/24/12 2:25 PM
From: DeltaRogue

Cool!
Hope you feel better and Happy Holidays!
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Date: 12/24/12 1:53 PM
From: StarPaw007

"I think..." Danny started. Thinking.
"What's your answer son?" Fury asked again.
"I think that..." Danny looked around. Spiderman, White Tiger, Iron Fist, and Powerman. All lead by Fury.
It seemed it could be a LOT of fun to join the team.
"Well... I guess I'll... try it out." Danny answered hesitantly.
"GREAT!!" Spiderman yelled happily.
Danny smiled.
"We'll get you instated right after we take care of old Doc here."
"Powerman, help me get him into the helicarrier." Fury ordered.
"Yes sir." Powerman picked Doc. Ock up, and carried him away.
"You guys coming? Or do you want to stay here and get even stinkier?" White Tiger asked.
"Coming!" Danny announced. Flying up.

LATER AT THE HELICARRIER....

"Now that that Doc. Ock is in custody. You might have to do a few tests to be considered qualified to join S.H.I.E.L.D." Fury stated.
"Tests?" Danny asked worriedly.
"Yep. First I want you to go into the training area." Fury ordered.
"Okay..." Danny phased through the glass, and entered the training area.
"WHAT NEXT?!" He shouted up.
"See how long it takes you to battle these robots." Fury pressed a button, and huge battle robots appeared out of the wall.
"Oh boy..." Danny gulped, and readied himself.
"Ready.... Set..... START!"
The robots came to life, and started to point guns at Danny.
They shot at him, but Danny turned intangible.
He blasted them with his ghost rays, but they started to pile on top on him.
Danny was having trouble breathing. He needed to get them off of him now.
He powered up, and sent a huge blast from his whole body, and all of the robots were knocked back and crushed.
"Where are the others?" Danny asked, looking around.
"You beat them all. With a better time than Spiderman." Fury said amused.
"YES!" Danny did his victory dance, but stopped when he realized people were watching.
"Uh... haha." Danny wiped at the invisible dust on his suit, and looked up embarrassed.
"So... what's the next test?" He asked.
"We cant test you with parachutes... since you can fly..." Fury thought for a second.
"Lets see how you fare against White Tiger...................................................................................................................................................................


Continued by,
StarPaw,

Started by,
Kia3333

(Yeah... forgot to put that on for the last few parts... SORRY!)

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Date: 12/23/12 8:13 PM
From: StarPaw007

SO SORRY GUYS! I've been busy with my other fan-fic... and I'm really sick with a fever and everything. But I'm gonna make some more now. To be honost, I didn't think you guys liked this fan-fic that much. I guess I was wrong then.

"You need to chill out doc!"
Doc. Ock looked at Danny confused.
"What are you talking abou-" He started, but was cut off as a wave of icy snow came out of Danny's hand and hit him full on.
Doc. Ock was knocked back into the wall of the tunnel.
"Did you really think you could defeat me with a little snow?" Doc. Ock asked.
"Actually, I think I have." Danny pointed to Doc. Ock's arms. Sparks flew, and the mechanical arm's started to be slowly encased in a thick layer of ice.
"No! THIS CANT BE!! NOOO!" Doc. Ock tried to move, but his mechanical arm's werent functioning properly.
Huh. The Web Head's plan worked. Danny thought. Didn't doubt it for a second... okay, maybe I did.....
"I cant move!" Doc. Ock whined.
"We better leave him to chill." Spiderman teased.
Doc. Ock groaned.
"Yeah. Wouldn't want to freeze." Danny added.
Doc. Ock groaned again.
"I guess this case wasn't so cold after all."
"STOP WITH THE FROZEN JOKES ALREADY!!" Doc. Ock begged.
"Fine. We'll chill off." Spiderman said one last time.
Suddenly Danny heard someone coming their way. And they turned to see who it was.
"Hey Web Head! I always said you smelled, but this is ridiculous." Nova said, appearing around the corner. Danny relaxed.
White Tiger, Power Man, and the rest of the team came too.
"Doc. What are you doing just chilling in the sewer?" Nova asked.
"WHY MUST YOU TORTURE ME??!!"
"What's his deal?" Nova asked.
"He's just a little frostbitten. That's all." Danny and Spiderman snickered.
"Good work. I see you caught him." Fury congradulated.
He turned to Danny.
"Are you sure you don't want to join the team? We would be happy to have you."
Danny thought for a second.
It COULD be cool to be working with other superhero's. I mean, it was fun beating Doc Ock.
"Well? What's your answer son?" Fury prompted.
"I think...."
StarPaw,
SORRY AGAIN GUYS! Hopefully this made up for it. And I'm really sorry at how late it is.

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Date: 12/19/12 8:19 AM
From: DeltaRogue

Cool!
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Date: 12/17/12 5:43 PM
From: StarPaw007

"Found him... I win." Spiderman announced.
"Great." Danny replied sarcastically.
"Ok then. Smarty pants. You try being the comedian. It's a very hard job." Spiderman joked.
"I wish I was smart." Danny muttered. He shot a ghost ray at one of Doc. Ock's remaining mechanical arms.
It bounced off, and came back at Danny. Danny put up a shield just before his own blast hit him.
"You really need to find some new powers kid." Doc. Ock teased, swiping at him with an arm. Danny wasn't able to dodge, and was knocked aside.
Time for Spidey to save the day again I suppose. Spiderman thought. I beat him once, how hard can it be to beat him a second time?
He shot a web at Doc's arms, trying to stick him to the ground. But Doc wasn't caught in such pitiful tricks, and he ripped right through the webbing.
"Plan A's failed. Lets see what else I have up my sleeve." Spiderman talked to himself as always. Danny came up to float beside him.
"What's the master plan now?" Danny asked, admitting he hadn't the slightest clue of how to defeat the Doc.
Spiderman thought for a second.
"I've got it!"
"What?" Danny asked impatiently.
"You see..." Spiderman dodged another of Ock's attacks. "... if we use your ice powers..." Dodged again. "... As you know, ice can have a powerful affect on a machine's circuits...." Geez, another dodge. "... we can freeze his arm's circuits. And he wont be able to move them!"
"That's.... the best idea yet!" Danny agreed.
"Then it's settled.... little too close Doc.... use your ice powers."
Danny nodded, and pointed his hand in Doc Ock's direction.
"You need to chill out doc!"..............................................................................

StarPaw,

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