PART 1 The RV stopped at a run down town. Danny was on another one of those family vacations. Only this time he convinced Sam and Tucker to go. "There's no internet service!" Danny heard Tucker complain. "Come on lets get going!" Jack said. "We're gonna have so much fun camping out in the woods!" Maddy said. They walked down a dusty old trail. They stopped at a run down building. "Welcome to the Mystery Shack! Come on in and buy something." An old man said. "Sure, wont that be fun kids! You look in the Gift Shop and we'll set up the camp." Maddy said. "Sir, your signs missing the S." Sam said. "You got a problem with it?" The guy asked. "No sir." Sam said rolling her eyes. They walked into the shop. This place was a joke. Everything was obviously fake. "Hi, I'm Dipper." Said a 12 year old boy. He had brown hair and a hat. "I'm Mabel." Said a girl with long brown hair and a kitty sweater. She must have been his twin. "Are there any ghosts here?" Tucker asked. "Um, well between you and me, I've seen ghosts and even more weird stuff in this town." Dipper said. "What do you mean?" Danny asked. "Meet me tonight." Dipper said. It looked like this vacation had gotten a lot more complicated.... Hope you liked it. If you have any ideas just post them, i might use it! Brought to you by, StarPaw
I'm doing fine Happymumbl!! And yeah, that pie is the left over Danny pie....
Danny: "Does it taste like me?" *Reaches out to touch*
Me: "Don't touch it!"
Danny: "...Awww..." *Pulls hand slowly away, puts them in pockets, and looks away.*
Me: "SO. How ya doin' Happymumbl? I've been drawing a lot more than writing. Been getting pretty good I guess."
Danny: *Whispers* "She has too many drawings of me to count. It's a bit creepy..."
Me: *Blushes* "YOU LOOKED THROUGH MY SKETCHBOOKS!?!?!?"
Danny: "AND your diary."
Me: ".... I'll be... right back...."
*drags Danny away and throws him out the window*
Me: "So, cant wait to talk to you again!" StarPaw,
I AM BACK!!!! :) Happy to be!! XD *looks over and sees pie* *Sniffs* EWWWW SMELLS LIKE DANNY!! we need the Fra breeze XD bad spelling..... HOW CHU DOING?
HAPPYMUMBL
cool.... but why did you make two first parts?
Can I give a tip? Try not to say said too much, use things like yelled, whispered, replied.... and ext, ext.
Also, try to use " when they say something.
example:
"Do you know where Dipper and Mable are?" Tucker asked Stan.
"For 20.00 bucks I'll tell you." Stan stated, holding out his hand. "Oh brother." Danny moaned.
Not trying to be bossy. But I like it so far! I wonder if the fire ghost will return... Or will they have to face a new threat?... what'll happen with Kitty? Will she come back?...
Anyways... cant wait to hear more! StarPaw,
ounce again Danny, Sam, and Tucker were on a Fenton family vacation to Gravity Falls, Oregon but this time are 3 heroes were excited because they wanted to see Dipper and his silly twin Mabel. ever séance last summer with the fire ghost dipper has been writing to Danny about his adventure as same with Danny. And after an hour of jack singing camp town ghost being blast in the R.V.the finally stop ounce again at the mystery shack. As soon as they stop Danny, Tucker, and Sam ran out toward the mystery shack. Come back before dark! yelled Maddie. Because were Making smores! yelled Jack. as soon as the trio walk into the Mystery Shack Stan popped out of no where and said welcome to the Mystery Shack where your wallets mysteriesly disappear. then Danny and Sam said ow brother. then tucker said do you know were Dipper and Mabel are? the Stan said for $20.00 bucks ill tell you. then Danny says that unfair! then Stan said life unfair.
this my story now
Season 2 episode 1
the R.V. stopped once again at gravity falls Oregon. but this time Danny was excited. Dipper has been writing him all of there adventures and Danny, Sam and Tucker cant wait to see them. as soon as it stop Danny, Sam, and Tucker ran out of the R.V. as soon as it stop. come back before dark said Maddie because were making smores yelled jack. After 10 minutes they were there at the mystery shack. Grunkle Stan came out saying ''Welcome to the mystery hack were your money disapears'' Then danny said Stan where is Dipper and mabel . I will tell you for ten bucks said stan. sam said oh please scasticly and gave him ten bucks then Stan said I don't know ask soos then stan ran away. then Soos shod up at of know were and said hello and gave a giant bear hug . And with a gasp of air tucker said hi can you stop stangling me?
please conment
sigend the Oracle
star paws why dont you post new things on this fanfic as next summer and include all the cool stuff dipper has seen like president trembly, the multi bear, and all the others
later that night Danny could meet Dipper out back of the shack and all the sudden in the middle of their conversation Skulker appears and captures Danny and brings him to the ghost zone and its up to Dipper,Mable,Sam,and Tucker to save him.But while trying to save Danny one of them also get caught by Skulker
lol.
It's alright. I hate how my ipod corrects me, and it turns out it's doing more harm than good.
But sometimes I wish I could go on the boards with my ipod... but it doesn't let me... *Pouty face* StarPaw,