PART 1 The RV stopped at a run down town. Danny was on another one of those family vacations. Only this time he convinced Sam and Tucker to go. "There's no internet service!" Danny heard Tucker complain. "Come on lets get going!" Jack said. "We're gonna have so much fun camping out in the woods!" Maddy said. They walked down a dusty old trail. They stopped at a run down building. "Welcome to the Mystery Shack! Come on in and buy something." An old man said. "Sure, wont that be fun kids! You look in the Gift Shop and we'll set up the camp." Maddy said. "Sir, your signs missing the S." Sam said. "You got a problem with it?" The guy asked. "No sir." Sam said rolling her eyes. They walked into the shop. This place was a joke. Everything was obviously fake. "Hi, I'm Dipper." Said a 12 year old boy. He had brown hair and a hat. "I'm Mabel." Said a girl with long brown hair and a kitty sweater. She must have been his twin. "Are there any ghosts here?" Tucker asked. "Um, well between you and me, I've seen ghosts and even more weird stuff in this town." Dipper said. "What do you mean?" Danny asked. "Meet me tonight." Dipper said. It looked like this vacation had gotten a lot more complicated.... Hope you liked it. If you have any ideas just post them, i might use it! Brought to you by, StarPaw
Part 4
danny POV
"what do you mean a mater of natinol security" tucker yelled "i dont like your tone Mr." the ghost lady said. "can you please tell my what direction they went" sam asked sweet and kind. with a big grin on his face on his grin the ghost man gussed "well mabel actualy told us they were going to speack to a genuis over at the cemetery" well with a bunch of thank yous i then cloned himself again and flew to the cemetery were i saw a door under a stute that was open so i gussed that were they are so once we landed we all walked in sam was amazed of all the stuf in there the secret files but tucker found a opened file about some guy named sir lord Quintin Trembly the 3rd esq. so i asked tucker who is this guy but when he checked the name there was nothing about him but then we herd a noise in the next room "i think its agood idea" we heard but then we heard dippers voice say "look you wanted us to help you so that meaans you need `to listen" then we herd Mr.Waddles so we ran in and said "let them go" "what the blob are you talking about" Mabel said looking confused with a excited grin Dipper said with a hug "guys your back horray" with a welcome expresin on there faces sam asked "what were you guys talking about? and whos this guy" " this is the 8 and a 1/2 president of the united of america Quntin Trembly" mabel explaned "but because he didnt sign the approprite paper he is still the preisednt and we were helping run the country since he was chased out of office" dipper also explaed but of course Tucker asked why so dipper explaned" he but 6 baby on the supreme court, started a war on pancakes, and signed a law that you cant were pants" "that was a great thursday" the presidnt said with a proud voice and sam was confused so she asked how are you still alive "i sealed my self in a block of peanut brittle" Quintin said while looking hungrey "were helpin because of that and im his secret advisor/vice preident and mabel a offical congrsmen" dipper again explaned. wow just wow
hi im Clockwurk but origanly i was Widf
part 3
with shocked faces and tucker sweating danny asked why with a sorry stare and a sad smile the multi-bear replied "well, ummm teens gave them a heart attack and cause the sweet coupel into teen revenge thirsty monsters" "aw no we need save dipper" yelled sam so with a copy danny flew his pales other to the old creepy mini mart but after leaving a dark figure appered and the multi bear started to scream. but back to are heros so as soon as they entered the mini mart there bravery was lost when the door shut and then in the middle of the store 2 figures appered but tucker made it worse when he said "ow no how well we defend are self aginst old people haaha" but in a dark booming voice the old man said "you dare make fun of us you holligon" tucker was so scared he wet himself but danny gathering up his courage he asked "where is dipper" and with a kind and gentle voice the ghost lady said " ow why didnt you say so ow weres me manners would you like a cookie" and a bow of cookie was sudnley hovering over there heads but for once tucker wasent hungry but sam was acting kind to the sweet eldey couple and asked "weres danny mame" so with a suprised look the couple answerd "dipper was just here with mable and mr.waddles there were going to the cemetery but they didnt say why when we asked they said if they told us it would be a thret on natinol security.
Part 2
after 5 minutes of soos bear hugging he finaly let go and while trying to breath danny ask soos "do you know where dipper is?" after hearing that he scratch his chin and said "you just miss him he was sneecking all spy like up to the that redicules high mountain and 3 meters away i saw mabel fallwing him to with walldes" thanks yeled are 3 heros and after looking at that montain tucker started complain about it to high so sam slap him and told him "danny can fly remember" so danny cloned him self and took sam and tucker up to the montain were sam found a cave but as they enter the cave thinking dipper was in there tucker saw a bone and scream like a little baby but then they all scream after seeing what tucker called "a monster made out of bears" danny blast it with a ecto-blast and as the 2 were figting sam threw a rock at it and yelled "what did you do with dipper" soon the monster spock and screamed "wait stop" the other couldnt belive it. it could talk and it contined it sentence "you know dipper?" with a nod they all said "yes" "wonderful" the bear scream in joy " im a friend of his he meets me hear every day to listen to baba in peace with me"" relly mr. monster" a frighten tucker ask so of course the monster replied "yes, and my name is the multi-bear" so with his courage back danny asked "weres dipper" so wounce it was said with a now kind voice the multi bear told them "he went down to that haunted mini mart to talk to the ghost and beware the ghost Hate teens so tell them your looking for dipper or they will destroy you and good luck.
hi im sorry i havent been wrighting i thought this fan-fic was destroied but im back and im gonna countinue make this fan-fic rise from the ashes like the mighty phinx
I have been doing great!! DANNY DRAWINGS GALORE!! I actually SHOULD be drawing right now... I got distracted... T^T
Danny: "HOW DARE YOU THROW ME OUT OF THE WINDOW!?!"
Me: "Quiet or I won't draw you anymore."
Danny: "W-what?!"
Me: "Yep."
Danny: "That's not faaaiiirrr!!"
Me: "Go in the closet for time out."
Danny: "THERE IS NO DOOR ON THE CLOSET!!"
Me: "I don't care."
Danny: *grumbles and goes to try and sit in the very small closet*
Me: "Okay... where was I... Oh yeah... HI!!"
Danny: *reaches for Danny pie*
Me: "BAD BOY!!"
Danny: *wimpers*
Me: "ANYWAYS!!!... TO MY SKETCHBOOK TO DRAW MORE DANNY!! AWAY!!!"
Danny: "IT'S STILL CREEPY!!"
Me: "I know."
*creepy giggle* StarPaw,
XD XD XD XD XD!!!!!! SAME HERE!!!!!!! HOW YOU BEEN DOING?! AND YAY DANNY PIE!!!! wait why yay? *HAPPYMUMBL WHAT BE WRONG WITH CHU?* .... OMG DANNY DONT YOU DARE STEAL MY CHU!!!!!!!! As you can see he is also getting on my nerves too Starpaw..... WHAT A MEANIE!!!!!!! XD!
~ Happymumbl
I'm doing fine Happymumbl!! And yeah, that pie is the left over Danny pie....
Danny: "Does it taste like me?" *Reaches out to touch*
Me: "Don't touch it!"
Danny: "...Awww..." *Pulls hand slowly away, puts them in pockets, and looks away.*
Me: "SO. How ya doin' Happymumbl? I've been drawing a lot more than writing. Been getting pretty good I guess."
Danny: *Whispers* "She has too many drawings of me to count. It's a bit creepy..."
Me: *Blushes* "YOU LOOKED THROUGH MY SKETCHBOOKS!?!?!?"
Danny: "AND your diary."
Me: ".... I'll be... right back...."
*drags Danny away and throws him out the window*
Me: "So, cant wait to talk to you again!" StarPaw,
I AM BACK!!!! :) Happy to be!! XD *looks over and sees pie* *Sniffs* EWWWW SMELLS LIKE DANNY!! we need the Fra breeze XD bad spelling..... HOW CHU DOING?
HAPPYMUMBL
cool.... but why did you make two first parts?
Can I give a tip? Try not to say said too much, use things like yelled, whispered, replied.... and ext, ext.
Also, try to use " when they say something.
example:
"Do you know where Dipper and Mable are?" Tucker asked Stan.
"For 20.00 bucks I'll tell you." Stan stated, holding out his hand. "Oh brother." Danny moaned.
Not trying to be bossy. But I like it so far! I wonder if the fire ghost will return... Or will they have to face a new threat?... what'll happen with Kitty? Will she come back?...
Anyways... cant wait to hear more! StarPaw,
ounce again Danny, Sam, and Tucker were on a Fenton family vacation to Gravity Falls, Oregon but this time are 3 heroes were excited because they wanted to see Dipper and his silly twin Mabel. ever séance last summer with the fire ghost dipper has been writing to Danny about his adventure as same with Danny. And after an hour of jack singing camp town ghost being blast in the R.V.the finally stop ounce again at the mystery shack. As soon as they stop Danny, Tucker, and Sam ran out toward the mystery shack. Come back before dark! yelled Maddie. Because were Making smores! yelled Jack. as soon as the trio walk into the Mystery Shack Stan popped out of no where and said welcome to the Mystery Shack where your wallets mysteriesly disappear. then Danny and Sam said ow brother. then tucker said do you know were Dipper and Mabel are? the Stan said for $20.00 bucks ill tell you. then Danny says that unfair! then Stan said life unfair.
this my story now
Season 2 episode 1
the R.V. stopped once again at gravity falls Oregon. but this time Danny was excited. Dipper has been writing him all of there adventures and Danny, Sam and Tucker cant wait to see them. as soon as it stop Danny, Sam, and Tucker ran out of the R.V. as soon as it stop. come back before dark said Maddie because were making smores yelled jack. After 10 minutes they were there at the mystery shack. Grunkle Stan came out saying ''Welcome to the mystery hack were your money disapears'' Then danny said Stan where is Dipper and mabel . I will tell you for ten bucks said stan. sam said oh please scasticly and gave him ten bucks then Stan said I don't know ask soos then stan ran away. then Soos shod up at of know were and said hello and gave a giant bear hug . And with a gasp of air tucker said hi can you stop stangling me?
please conment
sigend the Oracle