Hey guys. I've decided to make a new fan-fiction. ^^ I couldn't think of another name. I think I came up with a pretty solid idea? We'll see I guess. Hope you enjoy. I will not be accepting characters. I am very sorry.
PART 1, In a lab hidden from prying eyes, a man works on probably the best experiment of his life. "Perfect." He hisses under his breath. "Absolutely perfect... Soon you will be complete. Then we can finally get our revenge on the ghost boy. We will make him pay... son."
He lets out a soft wicked laugh. And in the dark, a pair of fangs gleam in an evil grin.....
I sat in Mr. Lancers class. The clock seemed to tick slower and slower. Everyone was impatient. I flopped my head on my table and rested my head in my arms.
The speech that Mr. Lancer was giving was drowned out by the sound of the bell, and students screaming happily. "Now listen kids! I didn't dismiss you yet. SIT DOWN!"
Everyone flopped back into their seats, with mumbles of protest. "I know you are ALL excited for winter break, but that does NOT mean you can leave my class acting like wild animals!"
"Have fun over winter break, and remember to watch out for wild reindeer. They ARE wild animals. AND WILL STOMP ON YOU AS IF YOU WERE A DRIED LEAF!!" Mr. Lancer leaned over his desk.
Everyone blinked a few times, then got up to leave.
Giggles and laughs. I smiled myself.
"Hey Danny, are you gonna be the Grinch Who Stole Christmas again this year?" Tucker asked. "Or did you finally learn your lesson after LAST Christmas?" Sam added.
I gave them a glare. "THERE'S THE GRINCH WE ALL KNOW AND LOVE!!" Tucker slapped me on the back and I laughed.
"But you have to admit, it's better when he's not complaining all Christmas season long." Sam commented.
We walked out of the school. I dug around in my book bag to find my jacket.
Suddenly it was knocked out of my hands. "H-Hey!" I yelled, looking up. It was Dash... of course...
He grabbed my hair. "I'm gonna miss wailing on you Fen-TON." He threw me to the ground.
Then walked away laughing. My eyes glowed green, and I put my hand behind my back. Shooting a green plasma beam at his shoes. They melted and Dash fell over. "FEN-TOOON!"
"Run." I whispered.
"RIGHT BEHIND YOU!" Tucker announced.
"Hahahaaa!!" I held my side, and leaned against a building. Sam and Tucker were doing the same. After a few minutes of tying to control ourselves, we finally were able to stop.
"That was.... hilarious..." Tucker announced, out of breath.
"Yeah." I giggled. "It was?"
"Anyways." I sighed. "I need to get home." I walked in the direction of my house. "See you later!" I waved, and hurried on.
The air was cold and my breath came out in puffs. It was the first Christmas season, other than last year, that I was actually cheerful and happy.
I walked up the frozen steps, and opened the door. I had a great feeling about this Christmas....
Please comment and tell me what you think!! No one knows Danny's secret. Just to let you know. ^^ StarPaw,
PART 21, (Vlad's POV,)
I didn't think I could be any more proud of Danie than I had been that moment.
After a long hug, I sent him to bed. He was bound to be exhausted, and I would not allow him to fall asleep during training the next day.
I did not know that something was troubling him........
I couldn't sleep. I could hear Danny's voice in my head. He kept saying "But, it's not a bad thing. If you want to be a hero."
I tried to shake my head and clear it. NO! There was no way I could actually be considering his words. He was just trying to get into my mind. He wanted me to go up against my father, so that he didn't have to.
I nearly burst out into laughter. He should fight his own battles. I thought.
After a few moments of silence, I sighed and turned over in my bed.
Still, I couldn't sleep.
I didn't know why his words were still bothering me...
I let out a frustrated groan and stuffed my face into my pillow. It wasn't fair. I had been perfectly fine until I had saved that little girl's life. Why did I do that!?!?!
I screamed my anger out into my pillow. Why?!?!?! I thought.
Could they have been instincts??....
I sat up quickly and scolded myself for even thinking about that possibility.
Come on.. instincts? That would mean I was a natural born.. well, made... good guy. But I knew that wasn't true...
I bit my lip. I couldn't take it. I didn't know anything anymore.
I wanted to scream again, but I didn't want my Father hear me. I didn't want him to even know.
I decided there could be only one person who might understand me...
I almost gagged at the thought.
I needed to talk to Danny again..................... StarPaw,
Thank you. And to be honest, I'm really not reading anyone's fan-fics.
(Thank minecraft for that. I'm hooked now!)
I do not know what happened to my precious fan-fic Amnesia... but I do know that I have all the parts saved (haha! I only wrote 2 parts.)
I will have to see what I did wrong to make the mods get rid of it. If they keep deleting it, then I will continue it elsewhere.
I tried responding to you guys, but for some reason the comment never posted... weird..
And don't worry, I'll drink the lemonade even if it has pepper. XD
*takes a sip, coughs* It's good. *Lies* *takes another sip* StarPaw,
Hello From NickFirefly::::::
How are you Starpaw007? If you have a questionable fan fiction NICKFrog has a Fan Fiction Check board you can always use to see what might be need to be edited out or it could be nothing. Once she approves it you can post it!
Oh boy, LunaDiana, I totally get how you feel about school. I just wish Summer could last forever instead of for 3 months a year.
Desiree: And so you have wished it and so it shall--
Danny quickly sucked her in his thermos.
23horses: Hey, I just wanted to wish that Summer could last forever.
Danny: Trust me, 23horses; you don't want to see want she wanted to really do.
Danny flies off.
By the way StarPaw, you're doing great and are you reading my FanFics? No offence to LunaDiana, but I want more viewers to see my FanFics.
PART 20, (Vlad's POV,)
I let out a frustrated sigh. "Daniel's becoming a problem." I stated.
My pawns had just told me about what they saw. Though part of me was thrilled that Danie had refused Daniel's offer, proving he was still loyal to me, I was still worried that Danny might convince my son to betray me.
"I have come too far to fail again." I hissed through gritted teeth. "I will not be made a fool of."...............
I could hear my father muttering in his study, but I couldn't really make out the words.
That was all I could hear.
I knocked on his door. There was the sound of Vlad shuffling towards the door. He opened it and let me in.
"Is there anything wrong? Anything you'd like to tell me?" he asked, a bit quickly.
I shrugged. "Nothing. Cant I just come in and say 'Hi' to my own father?"
Vlad nodded. "Yes.. of course."
We sat down on a soft sofa together. There was an awkward silence for a few minutes.
"I got this for you." I said after a while. I reached into my pocket and handed Vlad a ruby the size of my palm.
He just sat there staring at it, confused. "I know you have a ton of money, Father... but I kinda stole it. For you." I smiled.
He looked at me and blinked, still confused as to why I had done this.
All of the sudden, I started blurting things out. "Listen, I just wanted you to know that I love you and that you're my father and I'd do anything for you. Anything. I'm not afraid to steal. I'm not a hero like my pathetic 'cousin' Danny. I-" before I could go on, Vlad wrapped me in a hug.
I was frozen for a second, then relaxed and hugged him back.
Even though I proved to Vlad I wasn't like Danny, I still couldn't help feeling guilty that I wasn't telling him everything. That I had been a hero for a few minutes, that Danny was trying to convince me that Vlad didn't care about me... or that somewhere deep inside of me actually believed what Danny was telling me................................... StarPaw,
I'm so sorry about your fan-fic!! *hugs tightly* don't worry. I've had PLENTY of fan-fics deleted.
I DID see the Ultimate Spiderman, but I haven't really been reading it. *embarrassed chuckle* Laziness strikes again, I suppose. StarPaw,
Dear everyone! Please read LunaDiana's fan-fic Epilogue: Dani Fenton. She really needs more people reading and commenting on her fan-fic.
She's wonderfully kind, and deserves to have her own work recognized. Thank you.
PART 19, (No one's POV,)
The three vultures followed Danie, invisibly of course. If he found out they were spying on him, he would either release his wrath on them, or immediately decide that Vlad had put them up to it. Then if Vlad found out they had been caught., well... they dared not think of what would happen to them.
It was best to stay on their master's good side. Unless they wished to vanish as if they never existed.
Danie seemed to be in deep thought, and only turned around once to see if there was anything behind him.
He didn't do anything particularly interesting. Just fly around. The vultures were becoming quite bored of spying, and wanted to call it quits. Just as Danie turned around to (hopefully) go back to the mansion,
there was a shout behind him. Someone was calling his name. The vulture's saw the young ghost boy, Danny Phantom, catch up to Danie. "This could be interesting.." The leader said to his comrades......
I needed to talk to Danie.
A little girl that I had saved an hour before, told me the whole story of how a ghost who looked just like me, only with mix-matching eyes, had saved her. She wanted to know if we were brothers, or something like that. I had only shrugged, and told her I needed to go.
I finally caught up to him. "What do you want?" he snapped once I was done catching my breath. Hmm... he seems more tense than usual. I observed.
"I heard that you saved a little girl's life." I stated plainly and simply. Danie froze. A look of panic flared on his face, but was quickly replaced with a look of defiance. "So?"
I rolled my eyes. "So?? All you can say is 'So?'"
Danie shot me a glare. "Look." I said. "I only want to know why. I mean, you're kind of Vlad's son... and a villain. Does this mean you're turning good, or something?"
Danie got stiff. "No!" he yelled back, a bit quickly. He seemed like he was trying to convince himself. "It was a one time thing... I probably wasn't feeling myself. It was nothing!" he was talking fast now. "I'm not a super hero. Not like you. I'm Vlad's son. I'm a cold, hard, bad guy who doesn't care for anyone else. I. Am. Not. A. Hero!" he spat out.
I blinked a few times in confusion. Then holding my hands out defensively, I replied "Ok, Ok. Take it easy. I was just curious, is all."
I paused, then made sure to add, "But, it's not a bad thing. If you want to be a hero." I flinched, expecting an angry yell. Or maybe even an ecto blast. But nothing came.
Danie seemed to think about what I just said.
He sighed and seemed a lot more exhausted. "I'm going." he announced dryly. Danie started floating towards the direction of Vlad's mansion. "Don't you dare talk to me about this again."
When I didn't answer, Danie turned his head to look at me. "Do you understand?!" he spat out slowly.
I nodded. With a growl, Danie flew away. Leaving me, very confused............ StarPaw, P.S. If there are any mistakes, sorry. Didn't double check this time.
I read the first part. It's not that it's bad.. It's not bad at all... but I don't really like reading fan-fics with Danny's child, or really anything that involves him as an adult. (It's probably because I don't want him to be older. I want him to be 14 forever... ) And, it kinda upsets me to think about him being an adult, married to Sam, with kids.
Danny: *whispers* "It's because she's an obsessed fan-girl."
Me: "You know, I can hear you..."
Me: "Good boy, stay quiet." -___-
I'm so sorry. I feel terrible... StarPaw,
(No happy star icon, and kitty icon for me.)
PART 18, (Vlad's POV,)
Danie had returned not long after that. He avoided me as much as he could, then hurried off to his room.
I opened the door to his bedroom softly. Danie was curled into a ball, asleep. Smiling, I walked over to the bed as quietly as I could, as to not wake him. Sitting down at the edge, I ran my hand through his hair softly. Biting my lip, I tried not to think of the possibility that he may betray me later on. I convinced myself that by that time I will have come up with some sort of plan.
Danie smiled in his sleep.
I decided to leave, and let him rest. Once I closed the door again, I hurried back over to my own room to catch up on some much needed sleep..........
The whole time we were training, I tried to avoid eye contact with Vlad. I was highly ashamed of what I had done. If he ever found out...-
"Danie, concentrate!" Vlad yelled just before I smashed into the wall.
Mumbling under my breath, I stood up and dusted myself off. Vlad had his eyes closed, and was pinching the bridge of his nose. He let out a long sigh.
"I won't bother you about what happened to make you so distracted. But I will tell you that you can NOT let it interfere with your training."
Scraping my boots against the floor, I ducked my head in shame. "I'm sorry..."
"You don't have to apologize." Vlad said finally, coming up to me and placing a hand on my shoulder. "All that I ask of you, is to try your best. You can do that, right?"
I nodded slowly. Vlad smiled, but he seemed troubled and exhausted. "Good. How about you take a break." he suggested.
I nodded. "That would be great." I hurried for the exit of the lab, not looking to see if Vlad was following me. Turning intangible, I flew through the ceiling and into the sky...
I took in a deep breath.
I thought back to last night... Why did I save that girl? I was taught to just stand by, unless it benefited me to save her. But, it was as if I was on auto pilot. Pure instincts...
I let out a frustrated sigh. Whatever. It was once... just once. Maybe it was some misunderstanding. I probably didn't feel myself. No big deal...
The hairs on the back of my neck stood up. I felt like I was being watched... I turned around and didn't see anything. Shrugging it off, I decided that it was nothing.
I didn't notice the three vultures that were following me............ StarPaw,
Hey, StarPaw, I'm glad to see you're back. I'm going to remake "Danielle Phantom (The spin-off of Danny Phantom)", but it's really going to be called "Danielle Phantom Season 1". Again, I'm glad to see you back.
From your buddy,
Yeah. What'cha think about my fanfic? Have you checked out Danny Phantom ...... And Ultimate Spiderman?!?!? yet?
Me:You've been like that for all of last night! What's wrong?
Mika: ... ... ...
Me: *facepalm* I have no further comment. Oh wait. Yeah I do.
Mika: *shakes head*
Me: You must not know Mika. She is an OC from the Yugioh boards. She can be a bit moody at times.
Me: Like now.
Mika: .... .... .....
Me: We must continue for the sake of mankind!
Mika: - .-