Okay, my fault there! Sorry FangClaw! XD I will continue from where we left off.
*Later that night*
Danny was suspicious. Erica was acting nervous all of a sudden, and sees a stack of papers in a file labeled SECRET, KEEP OUT! He doesn't look, obviously they were secret.
He goes to bed. He feels disappointed that Erica couldn't trust him. Just when he's about to go to sleep, he starts coughing uncontrollably.
Erica was guilty. She knew that it was wrong to hide the file from Danny, but she couldn't help it. Ecto Fever was deadly, and if he found out who was destined to get it... No, she wasn't going to think about it.
She goes into the bathroom, and starts brushing her teeth. She wonders if Danny was ever going to find out, or if it was a joke that Clockwork was playing. She looks towards Danny's room, afraid for him, when she hears coughing. Oh no.. She thinks as she rushes into his room. It's worse than I thought...
Is that okay? Sorry, I TOTALLY forgot about the double! Isn't her name Erica?
As we traveled through the forest, the cuccaburra flew towards me with a note tied to his leg. I untied the note and started reading it. I felt the color drain from my face as I read it. ?Erika, Danny is in critical condition. You must hurry or he?ll die. Through my travels, I have found out the remaining supply of ecto roses are in a small island in the middle of the Ghost Zone. You will find it there, be careful, it is guarded by several ghosts. Be careful, Sammy.? I quickly dug out a map out of my backpack, and slowly found the island. ?We?ll stop here for the rest of the day, get rested for tonight.? I instructed Sam and Tucker, ?We have a long journey ahead of us.? I began to set up the tent and build a fire, Tucker brought up the food. ?Where are we going tonight?? ?The center of the Ghost Zone, it has the antidote for Danny.?
BTW, if you guys have any OCs or ideas for the fanfic, post them here. I?ll be glad to accept them. The format for OCs must be like this.
Glad you like Sammy, I just quickly wrote that down.
Oh and btw
Erika: Thanks Amber, the forest is much scarier but I think I know the way. I think I stopped at that island when I grabbed the ecto rose, I ended up with some pretty bad burns and a broken wrist. Hope I do much better this time.
Me: Really, Erika? Really, you also got a sprained ankle and a scar circling all around your right hand until your wrist. You didn't do very well.
Erika: Oh yeah, I should be terrified, but I'm not. Wish me good luck!
Me: I forbid you. (Erika rushes off) She's the bit of a rebel. Hope she makes it this time. She may, she may not.
Yay! You used my suggestion! And Whaa?! Sammy, DO NOT SAY THAT!!!!!! You CAN do anything!
Another idea, courtesy of my OC, Amber: There is a small abandoned island in the middle of the Ghost Zone. Smack dab in the middle. On that island, there are strange and unusual new plants. BUT, they are guarded by ghosts. Those plants MIGHT save Danny.
Me: Geez Amber, way to destroy the mood
Amber: I HAVE been there! It is SO freaky! But it just might save Danny. Oh, and hi Erika! I know about time, too. Too bad I'm a half-ghost though...
Amber: What? Plus, I hate Vlad, too. Who DOES NOT hate Vlad? Himself?
I rushed to get Danny?s fever down, nothing was working, his fever was getting higher by the minute and he was ghostly pale. ?Danny, you cannot die on me, your friends are trying. Don?t die on them, please don?t.? I muttered, I had tried absolutely everything, and nothing was working. I sat down in the corner and started crying, he was going to die, and there was nothing to be done. ?Hope the others are doing okay.? I mumbled and sobbed. "I can't do anything."
?Sammy is my twin sister, we?ve been through everything together. She chose a different path than me, medicine. I went another way, and chose time. I?ve been learning everything about time, from travel to freezing it. I also speak a two different types of ectolan, time and the regular. Sammy speaks medicine and regular. We trained together, played together and fought crime together.? I said, taking a breath. ?What happened to your leg then, surely she must know.? Sam said, ?So what happened to it?? I sighed, ?I was only six years old, just got started being taught by Clockwork. Evidently, while I was sleeping, someone injected a paralyzing formula into my leg, I didn?t notice it at all. Slept right through it. I get up about two or three hours later, I collapsed trying to get a glass of water, I broke my wrist and had to start using a crutch. I hated it, now it?s my best friend, carries me everywhere, and helps me stand. It turned black, I don?t like people seeing it, might gross them out.? I showed them my right leg, which was throbbing more than ever, I didn?t tell them that though. ?When Sammy was only twelve, she caught ecto fever, it was terrible. She was fighting for life, when I decided to risk my life to save her, it didn?t go well. I almost died, and the ecto rose I brought back didn?t work. It only made the fever take her faster away.? Before I knew it, tears began to spring from my eyes and I was sobbing. ?The day she died was the worst day of my life, besides Mrs. Henderson, she was the only friend I had, and she was gone. I found her den over a year ago, I was just exploring the ghost zone, and I stumbled across this little medicine den. For the first time in a year I had felt joy, and we have been sending messages back and forth ever since.? I wiped a tear from my eye and smiled. ?I needed that, oh and by the way Tucker, I can see you.? Tucker jumped and denied crying, when clearly he was crying. ?I think it?s time for lights out.? I said as I hobbled to my tent.
Hey guys, sorry I haven't been posting much. Got kinda stuck and now I don't know what to write.
Also if any of you guys have characters you want to have in this fanfic or you don't understand what's happening just post it and I'll do all I can. I will be finishing the fanfic and if you have any ideas, just post them.
While I am sorry that this story will no longer be continued, it was beautifully written. You did a very good job on this, FangClaw66 and LunaDiana.
''Wit beyond measure is man's great treasure"-Harry Potter
I am so majorly super sorry. I know this is an excuse, but I can't do the double anymore. I have major trouble coming up with chapters, and when I think I have an idea, I forget to post it. I am super sorry. Maybe instead of writing the double ALL the time (which I have failed to do), when you need ideas I try to come up with some. Like a part time thing. Again, I am SO sorry. Please don't be TOO mad.
We traveled about ten kilometers before nightfall, we found a little cave to sleep during the night and made a fire. Tucker was eating his beef jerky and water slowly, guess the warning of no food scared him. I just sat there, thinking. "So Erika, how do you know Sammy. Was she a friend?" Sam asked. "Well actually, she's my twin sister. I know we don't look alike but we're twins. She died about two years six months 3 weeks, two days and five hours ago." I replied thoughtfully. "So how did she die?" "Of the same thing Danny might die of, ecto fever." I said, blinking tears away. "I'll tell you but if I start crying it's your fault." I said softly. then I began to tell them.
As we neared the forest, I decided to say some things. "Okay, Tucker, your tech will not work, so don't whine and complain when the signal is off. Just giving you a head's up. Most of the plants here are very poisonous and fatal to human touch. So don't touch, step on, or try to eat the plants. If you do, you will be severely poisoned . Got that? And it may rain, a lot, that is why I brought umbrellas, do not break them for they are the only protection from the rain you have here. Do not eat all the food, Tucker I'm looking at you, if we lose all the food we will starve. Any questions?" They just looked at me with blank faces. "I'll take that as a yes. Let's go in." And we entered the forest.
"I've got it!" Tucker shouted, "we go to Clockwork and turn back time!" "No, that's not going to happen. If we turn back time, I could get it, and it would be worse for me than him." I snapped, "plus after what happened with the ecto acne, he wouldn't do it. Clockwork wouldn't teach me anymore. I would discontinue my studies in time. We're not going to do it, that's final. I do know one way to save him, it's pretty risky though. It was pretty bad last time I went in there." I said softer. Sammy glanced at me, "You almost risked your life to save me from it the first time, it would sure help Danny, like it saved me." She said softly, "I think it's worth it though, if we're trying to save him, it would work best." I nodded, "Let's get ready."
Here is some info on Sammy. She is Erika's sister, (an OC), and was destroyed by ecto fever when she was 12. Sammy is Erika's twin and fellow orphan.
Name: Sammy Astribritt (as- tri- brit)
Hair: Black/white (in ponytail
Eyes: Blue/ green (like Danny's)
Clothes: black jumpsuit (like Danny's)
Extra: chipped tooth (Vlad calls her Chip), used to be a girly girl, medicine ghost of GZ (Ghost Zone), hates Vlad,
Hope this helps!