Here is the remake of my spin-off FanFic. Here is the first part, Enjoy:
Hi, I?m Dani Fenton (my real name is Danielle Lillian Fenton). I?m 12 years old (a preteen) and this is a story of how my life changed forever. But first, let me tell you about my background. My hometown is Amity Park and I live in a house with an Op-center on the roof called ?Fenton Works?. I have a Dad named Jack Fenton (from the original show). My dad is really obsessed with ghost and he makes inventions that involves ghost and plus ONE of his inventions changed one of his daughter?s...well, you know. I have a Mom named Mindy Fenton (she?s an image of Maddie Fenton from the original show). She is also obsessed with ghost and also, she?s pregnant. I have an overprotective, know-at-all 16 year old sister named Sarah (her real name is Stephanie Amanda Fenton & she?s an image of Jazz from the original show). I also have a bratty, annoying 7 year old brother named Ricky (his real name is Ricky Johnny Fenton). I also have a dog that I got for my 10th birthday named Midnight because she?s a Black Lab. And she knows A LOT of tricks that I taught her. I have 2 best friends that are my age, Susan McMurphy and Zachary ?Zack? Hillfield. Susan and I have been friends since forever. We love One Direction, but she can be a little sour and extreme. Zack and I meet in the 2nd grade and we became friends right away. Zack is sometimes called ?a technogeek? because he loves technology and we love playing video games and/or computer games together because I?m actually a tomboy not a girly girl. I?m the second eldest in my family. My school is called Old Hamper Middle School and I?m in the 6th Grade. Sarah goes to Casper High School in the 11th Grade. Ricky goes to Baker Elementary School in the 1st Grade. My hang-out is called ?The Nasty Burger? and my friends and I go there like almost every time and the mall is too, but we stick with The Nasty Burger. My one goal is that I want to be an astronaut when I grow up, but there is also another goal I also have to do. This is a long story of how my life changed forever, but there?s one thing I must ask you all...can you all keep this whole thing a secret?
After school, Susan, Zack, and I went to the park to hang out. Ever since Zack and I became best friends, we?ve all been hanging out at the park when we were young. Those were the good old days. ?Girl, why don?t you join the basketball team; you clearly go the skills to pay the bills?? Susan asked. ?I don?t think I want to, Susan. Probably one of the reasons is that Alicia might trip me and humiliate me.? I said. ?Dani, stop underestimating yourself. You got something that no other kids our age don?t have, and only you can make it come out.? Zack said. ?And what is it that I have that Alicia doesn?t? Ghost obsessed parent? Unpopularity?? I asked angrily and yes, my friends and I are unpopular, but we don?t care that much, but actually I do. ?Girl, everyone has a gift that does make them unique, and?even you.? Susan said as she placed her hand on my shoulder to comfort me. I brush her hand from my shoulder. ?Even though I?m good at basketball and I?m a good singer.? I admittied. ?Danielle, I don?t think that?s what we meant.? Zack said and I frowned. ?Then what did you guys mean?? I asked with my hands on my hips. They just shrugged. ?Yeah, that?s what I thought.? I said sarcastically. Then, someone threw a volleyball at me, hard. I landed on the ground and rubbed my head. I looked up and saw Alicia. ?Hey Fenton; how?s your walk through the park?? She asked in a mean way. ?It was going fine until you came along.? I half shouted angrily. ?Listen Fenton; you will never find your gift and it won?t be like you will be strong enough to verse me. Admit it, Fenton; you?re not good at anything.? She mocked and I glared at her. ?Hey, back off Baxter!? Zack exclaimed which gave our attentions. Alicia walked over to him. ?Well, looks like Fenton?s boyfriend is standing up for her.? She mocked. ?What?! She?s not my girlfriend.? Zack said. ?I?m not his girlfriend.? I said. ?Oh well.? She said and walked back to me. Then, we became face-to-face. ?Listen, Fenton; even though you have friends, that doesn?t mean you three can overpower my friends. You?re not popular.? She whispered. ?I don?t care, Baxter. I still have friends that?ll always believe me and we stay together forever.? I said. ?I?ll see you in school, Danielle.? She said and left. ?Grrrrrr...She?s so...irresponsible!? I half shouted. My alarm on my phone rang and it was time for me to go home. ?I got to go home; I?ll see you guys later.? I said and ran home.
We arrived in school and walked through the hallways. Susan is an African-American girl with dark, wavy hair with purple clips on both sides and has mascara and brown lipstick and green eyes (no pupils). She also wears a purple long-sleeve shirt, but put a pink short-sleeve shirt over it. She wears a set that reveals her midriff. She wears blue sweat pants, and white and pink sneakers. She?s also a tomboy, but more of a girly girl than me. Zack is like me, well all American anyway. He has pale skin, dirty blonde hair and curl zigzag bangs that covers his fore head, and one brown eye and one blue eye (no pupils). He wears a black shirt with a computer mouse on it for he loves technology. He also wears aqua-green baggy jeans and plain white sneakers. While we walked through the hallway, my enemy, Alicia Baxter, tripped me and the kids in the hallway laughed at me. I?ll explain about Alicia later, but let?s just move on. ?Girl, why are you on face? Is it Alicia?? Susan asked me. ?Yes and no. It?s just Ricky again; he woke me up...with a HORN.? I half shouted. ?Have you even tried to tell your parents?? Zack asked. ?Yeah, but it?s almost like they don?t understand me.? I said and then signed again. ?Maybe I was being a little cocky over them.? I said. I walked to 1st period, which is English/Literacy. My teacher, Mr. Lancer, also works as a Math teacher in my sister?s school every evening. I wasn?t his favorite student there; I mostly sleep during his class. ?You better not sleep again, Ms. Fenton.? He threatened. ?Don?t worry, Mr. Lancer. I?m sure it won?t happen today.? I said with a chuckle. 2nd period is Social Studies, which is one of the classes I sort of like. 3rd is Math, and I not good at Math at all. 4th is Science and is my favorite subject in school; I love reading and studying about space because I want to be an astronaut. After 4th period, my friends and I head to lunch. I just bring bag lunch instead. I mostly have PB&J or grilled cheese sandwich, potato chips, a blueberry muffin, bottled water, and yogurt. Susan and Zack have tray lunches. 5th is P.E. and trust me, I?m good at P.E and I even have some skills in basketball that some kids, even my couch, was impressed with. 6th is Choir and I?m not a bad singer. ?The way that you flip your hair gets me over whelmed, but when you smile at the ground it aren?t hard to tell...? I sang ?What make you beautiful? by 1D in a solo while all the other kids just did harmony.
OOOOHHHH!! Thanks for the memo there, Luna. That was just the background, here's Chapter 1 (up to 5 pages).
Chapter 1 (Pilot)
I was just sleeping in my bedroom when I heard someone tiptoeing and I couldn?t open my eyes when Ricky sound a loud horn in my face which forced me to wake up. ?AHHHH! RICKY!!!!!? I shouted and chased after him and I froze. ?Dani, time to wake up; you have school today!? Mom shouted from downstairs. ?Okay.? I muttered and got back to my room to change. I took off my PJs and got ready to change. When I got out of my room, my raven black hair was pulled into a ponytail by my red scrunch, but I also had bangs hanging close to my face, but you can still see both my eyes clearly. I also wore a red beanie on my head. And I wore a blue sweater/hoodie with pockets in the front. And I wore red shorts with a cameo pattern and I wore blue sneakers with white dots on the sides. Also, I have red lipstick on and I had mascara and I have icy blue eyes (pupils) and pale skin, even though I?m a tomboy, sort of. I can be more cheerful and childish than my friends, but I can be protective to my friends and family. I walked down the stairs and walked to the kitchen were my all my family, minus my dad and Ricky, were having breakfast. I sat down in my seat and I see that I?m having cereal. ?Mom, do I have to go to school today?? I complained. ?What do you mean? You have to go to school so you can be smart.? Sarah said. ?Like you?? I asked sheepishly and she just glared at me. Then, Ricky came up with a broken Superman action figure and yes, he is a Superman fan and he wears a blue t-shirt with a Superman logo on it. He also wears green short jeans and he has same sneakers as me, but only red. He has blonde hair with three spiky bangs hanging over his face and has olive green eyes (no pupils) and has the same skin as me. ?Mom, Danielle broke my action figure.? Ricky lied. ?I did not. Mom, he?s just annoying me again.? I said. ?Sweetie, I know your life may not make sense sometimes, but you?re only a...? She but I cut her off. ?Preteen. I just want a normal life and not with a bunch of eccentric parents.? I said as I got up from my seat. Mom gasped and scowled at me. ?How dare you say that in front of me, Young Lady.? He said angrily. I scoffed and said ?I?m going to school.? And I turned to the door, but Dad came out of nowhere. ?Ok, but once you get back, come see what your mom and I invented.? He said. ?Okay.? I muttered and exited the house and I saw my friends waiting for me. ?Well it took you long enough.? Susan said and we ran to school.
I have no idea why I didn't, but here's what I know. So far, I was making a story of it, I mean Dani is my most favorite character on the show *sign* I wish she could appear in more episodes than just 2.
Heads up, I'm going to post more chapters faster, because I actually have already done them, but not all.
more will come.