I am going to write a story about tylees life and in her point of view. the first chapter will be in a new post because it is way too long to fit in this.
"Shoot! It's Tai-swen!" Scar thought, as he raced after the horde of prisoners. He looked at the stick in his hand, then back at Tai-swen, then back and forth. He grinned, and rushed straight towards Tai-swen. Scar skillfully dodged all the incoming rocks, hit her on the side of the head with his stick, and knocked her out. "Hate you." he muttered at her unconscious body, then he ran back to join the escaping group. He ran up to Sang? He didn't know if that was her name or not. "Hey, so where we headed? You guys got a plan, right? Otherwise I'm going off on my own."
"We're going to help everyone get back to their homes, that's our plan, unless any of them want to help us." Sang replied, running fast as ever. "What about you? You looked like you were used to fighting with...a sword?"
"I used to practice some sword fighting at home." Scar replied. "Yeah, I guess I'll stick around and fight. Don't go looking around for me if I suddenly disappear I don't like sticking around with other people for long." he explained. "Oh, and before I forget. I was a 'special case' because I attacked two of their best members, single handedly." he smirked. "And also because they didn't bother to move me."
"You defeated them?" Sang's eyes widened. His grin widened.
"And I loved every second of it." He chuckled darkly to himself, then picked up speed and went up within the crowd. Sang watched him leave, and she began to think to herself.
"He's no better than the BRNBD!" she thought. But while part of her was a bit angry at him, the other part was feeling pity, as he must have been through a lot to become so...dark.
Sang launched herself through the air and quickly knocked him out with one punch. He crumpled to the floor. The other four and the surrounding prisoners looked on in surprise. "We've got a job to do." Sang said simply. "We're being rescued!" A girl and boy sitting in a cell hugged each other happily. "Finally." An old man croacked. The five looked at each other. How could they leave these people? Sang grabbed the keys from the gaurd she had knocked out and started unlocking the cells. Mai began picking locks with a dagger to move things along. Sang stopped when she came to the last cell. A girl was laying limp on the floor, her grungy black hair was hiding her face. She unlocked the cell and helped the girl sit up. "Hey are you okay?" Sang asked. The girl mumbled something. "It's going to be okay, we're getting you out of here." Sang brushed the girl's hair out of her face and gasped. "Hoku!" Sang said. "S-s." Hoku tried to say Sang. "Ty-Lee! It's Hoku!" Sang said. Ty-Lee rushed to them. "Oh Hoku!" Ty-Lee said. The two girls picked up Hoku and brought her out of the cell. "Azula went ahead with some of the others. We're going to get the families out now." Mai explained. "Anyone who is able bodied we're going to need your help." Leiland said. "Help anyone who can't walk or needs help. If we run into trouble, anyone who can fight will need to fight. No hesitations." Leiland explained. The prisoners nodded. The large group headed back up the hallway for the other cells. Azula was already there breaking people out. "Guess you guys are better than I thought." The sarcastic boy mumbled as he got out of the cell. "Come on. We have to move fast now." Azula took the lead. The group got all the way to the main hallway before the trouble started. "Hello sister." Lily smirked as she stepped in front of the exit. "I see you've found little Hoku. Remeber when I used to baby sit you?" Lily smirked. Hoku muttered something unintelligble. Ty-Lee and Sang handed Hoku to the sarcastic boy. He put her around his shoulders in a fireman hold. "I see this is a family visit." Ty-Lee said when MayBell walked in. A tough looking girl walked in from another direction. "This will be fun." She said. Soon a bunch of BRNBD memebers surrounded them. "See." The sarcastic boy said. Everyone ignored him. "What now?" Sang said. Mai threw a shuriken pinning a BRNBD to the wall. "We fight." Mai said. And the battle began. Ty-Lee chi blocked someone and when they fell to the ground she saw the person behind them. "Han." She said. "Sorry." He blasted her against the wall. "TY-LEE!" Azula let out a wall of blue flame towards Han. He dodged and he and Azula started fighting. "SANG!" Leiland yelled as he clear a path to the exit. "GET THEM OUT NOW!" He said. "Everyone run!!!!" Sang herded out the prisoners. The sarcastic boy cam running back through the exit. "What are you doing?!" Sang asked as she punched a BRNBD member and then pushed a little girl out through the exit. "Figured I'd help." The boy shrugged. He held a stick in his hands. "Sorta like a sword." He tested it out by banging it into the side of a BRNBD member. "Ouch!" The girl cried. "That really hurt!" She pouted. "Guess it works." The guy chuckled. "Oh you are so going to get it!" The girl raised her fists in a fighting stance. 'EVERYONE GET OUT!!!!" Mai screeched in such a loud tone that everyone stopped and stared at her. "COME ON GUYS!!!! GO!!!!" She ran towards the exit. Azula grabbed Sang's arm and pulled her along. "Wait! Ty-Lee!" Sang cried. "We got her!" Azula replied. The sarcastic boy followed after them. "AFTER THEM!!!!!!" The girl earth bender yelled.
Chapter somebody think of a clever name
Part 2 ( Post was to long, had to break it up!)
......................................2 Hours Later.............................
"Is everyone ready?" Mai asked. "Yes." Azula replied. She created a flame of blue fire in her hand. "They won't know what's hit them." She smirked. "Don't do any firebending though for as long as you possible can. It'll give us away." Leiland said. "Okay." Azula frowned. "It's only because your the only person who can bend blue fire. They'd know it's us in a second." Leiland explained. "Alright." Azula looked a little happier. "Stay safe." Ty-Lee turned to Leah, Ling and Blossom. "What if you don't come back?" Blossom asked tearfully. Sang knealt down in front of her. "We will." Sang said. "But what if you don't?" Blossom pressed. "No buts. We will come back." Sang hugged the little girl. She got back up and joined the others. "You know the plan." Leiland said to Leah. Leah nodded. "Let's go." He said. The five swiftly melted into the darkness. "What plan?" Ling asked Leah. "The plan if they don't come back." Leah said softly so Blossom couldn't hear. "You really think there might be a chance....." Ling trailed off. "The BRNBD don't play around." Leah said. "I know that for a fact."
.................................The BRNBD Base................................
"Okay, as soon as we see an opening we go for it." Ty-Lee said. "If we get caught Leiland's gonna try to distract them. They don't know his face as well as they do ours, it might take a while for them to recognize him." Ty-Lee looked towards Leiland for confirmation. He nodded. "Now!" Azula whispered. The group stealthily ran into the underground entrence. Glowing crystals lighted the corridors. The group heard a scream come from one of the corridors. "I'll bet that's where the prison is." Sang said grimly. The five walked with caution down the the hallway. They came to a small group of cells. Ty-Lee gasped in horror at what she saw. Entire familys were in cells together. A few people looked up but most didn't even bother. It looked like they hadn't eaten for days, which was probably true. A teenage boy was in a cell all alone. He glanced up. "If your here to rescue us, don't even try. They'll catch you. Leave now while you have a chance." He looked back at the was he had been staring at. "The other cells are down the hall and to the right. This is just where they put they put the families. And before you ask, I'm a special case." He smiled sarcasticly at them. The five raced to the other cells. "Do you see him?" Ty-Lee whispered. "No." Mai replied. "Intruders!" A gaurd had spotted them!
Sorry I had to break it up in parts. I wrote a super long chapter so it will be in three parts......yeah I had a writing explosion!!!!
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"I think we finally have a lead on the BRNBD head quarters." Leiland said. "When we were on our scouting mission, we saw a group of rowdy benders going into a location under ground. I think it's worth checking out." Mai concluded. "Yeah, but remember, we gotta be careful guys. They already got Han." Ty-Lee said quietly. "Agreed. Now who wants to go?" Leiland asked. Everyone put their hand up. "Keep in mind, whoever goes is risking their lives." Leiland said omniously. Leah put her hand down. "I guess I'm not then. I've got to stay with Blossom." She gestured to the little girl on her lap. They'd had grown very close. "What do you mean stay with me? I'm going to!!!" Blossom jumped up and put her hands on her hips. "Blossom, your only five years old. You need to stay where it's safe." Leah explained gently. "I'm not a baby! I can help!" Blossom said her high voice rising in volum. "Leah's right Blossom. You'll only slow us down." Mai said. Blossom let out a howl of rage. "I WANT TO GO!!!!!" She yelled. She threw herself down on the ground and began kicking and screaming. "And that's exactly why you aren't going." Azula said. Blossom stopped her tantrum throwing in confusion. Leah glared at Azula and Mai. They really had no tact when they dealt with children. Leah sighed and dragged Blossom out of the cave. "I'll try to calm her down." She muttered. "Now that the distractions are out of the way. Who's going?" Mai said. She and Leiland seemed to be taking charge of this mission. "I'll go. It's my fault they got Han." Sang said. "No! You know what they'd do to you if they caught you." Ling protested. "I'm going." Sang said firmly. "I'm going too." Ty-Lee said. "Sang and I work better as a team anyway. We can't be overpowered when there's two of us." Ty-Lee said. "You'll need a bender with you. So I'm going too." Azula said. "Leiland and I are going. So that means Ling and Leah will stay here to watch the camp. "I want to go!" Ling said. "Then you should've said something sooner." Mai replied blandly. "I need to be there to protect you Sang." Ling said. "I'll be fine." Sang said not looking at Ling. "But-" Ling started. "STOP HOVERING AROUND ME! I CAN TAKE CARE OF MYSELF. I'M NOT HELPLESS!" Sang shouted. The cave became eerily quiet. "When do we leave?" Azula broke the silence. "As soon as it's dark." Leiland replied. "Everyone you need to wear dark clothing, black is best. Let's meet outside of the cave in two hours." Leiland said. Everyone shuffled outside back to their tents to begin getting ready. Ty-Lee and Sang started rummaging around in the tent they shared. "He's thinks I can't handle myself." Sang answered the unspoken question. "Why?" Ty-Lee asked in surprise. "Ever since Han's been kidnapped he hasn't let me out of his sight. He didn't want me to go on the scouting mission or hunting. He thinks I'm just a prissy little girl who needs protection. Well I'm not." Sang searched through her clothes. "You don't know that. Maybe he's just worried about you." Ty-Lee said. "I heard him talking to Leiland! He said, and I quote ' We really need to watch out for Sang. She's not the most observant. A lot of the time she's stuck in her own little world thinking about clothes and make-up. I think sometimes she forgets we're in a war here.' Unquote." Sang said. "He didn't!" Ty-Lee said, her voice a hiss. "He did. He doesn't even know what I've been through because of this war. I doubt he could handle it." Sang sighed in frustration when she couldn't find any black clothing. "I can't believe he said that." Ty-Lee said angerily. "What did Leiland say?" Ty-Lee asked. "He said 'I don't know man. She's a pretty vicious fighter.' " Sang turned to Ty-Lee. "Well at least one boy around here has brains." Ty-Lee threw a black dress over to Sang. "You acutaly have black clothing?" Sang asked in surprised. She and Ty-Lee really only had pink, red, and white clothes. "Mai gave me some as a birthday gift one year. Decided I needed to look more depressing." Ty-Lee said with a small laugh. "Good thing she did then." Sang smiled slightly.
End of part one. I wrote a really loooooooooooong chapter so I'm going to have to post it into parts. I had this idea and ran with it. I guess I ran a little to much.....
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