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Blasting Jelly Blues [A One-Shot]

Date: 05/11/12 11:13 AM
From: 94beaker64

Blasting Jelly Blues
[A One-Shot]


What if Toph had been with the Gaang when they met the freedom fighters? What would have been different?
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Longshot lit the end of the arrow and waited for the signal. He was startled when he heard a voice behind him. "Why would you do that?" She asked. Longshot lowered his bow and turned to her. "To kill all those inoccent people just to get rid of a few soilders? Is it really worth it?" She leaned against the trunk of the tree. Longshot


looked down at his feet from where he stood on the branch. "Why don't you speak? Is it because you can't or you choose not to?" Toph asked. Longshot didn't reply. "It's because you choose not to I exspect." Toph idly twirled a stick inbetween her fingers. "You seem very wise. I wouldn't think that you would do something like this. But

it's because of Jet isn't it? You trust him because he helped you when no one would. You felt helpless. You still feel helpless." Toph continued to mess with the stick. "Now don't get mad." Toph said when his heart rate started to

beat faster. "I know how you felt. I used to feel helpless." Toph sighed and threw the stick to the side. It fell to the forest floor. "That was before I could earthbend. Before I could see." She twiddled her thumbs. "I know your confused now. Cause you don't know." Toph lifted her

bangs to show her milky eyes. "I'm blind as a wolfbat." She felt Longshot's heart speed up again in surprise. "Didn't realize did you?" She smirked. "I learned earthbending from badger moles. They helped me see. I see from vibrations." Toph stood up. "But just because they taught

me and helped me doesn't mean I would listen to them all the time. I made my own choices. Made them really mad but thats irrelevant. Really, don't anger a badgermole." Toph chuckled. "Make your own choices. You don't have

to listen to Jet just cause your friends. It's corny, but listen to your heart." Toph stood up and brushed herself off. Right then a whistle sounded through the forest. "I'm not going to stop you if you decide to shoot that arrow, I'm

just telling you to think first." Toph jumped off the tree limb onto a rock piller she made. She vanished from sight. Longshot aimed again for the blasting jelly. But stopped and lowered his bow. He really didn't want to be a murderer. He was glad to have talked to Toph. Er...Listened.
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That has been my lastest oneshot. Tell me if its horrible. If you can....Tell me gently.

Beaky

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Date: 04/06/13 10:35 AM
From: 94beaker64

I'm going to post a new chapter soon, I just gotta edit it a little bit more!

Beaky


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Date: 03/31/13 11:40 PM
From: friday2400

OMG!! YOU ARE SOO GOOD!!
Once I started I couldn't stop, PLEASE write more. AMAZING!!
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Date: 03/31/13 5:30 PM
From: xKAROUx

i just started reading all of it and it's great.keep on
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Date: 03/30/13 11:54 PM
From: adeyla

Aw, I feel kind of sad for Jet, even though he was acting like a total jerk.

Adeyla
Proud author of Kila of the Sothern Water Tribe

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Date: 03/30/13 2:32 PM
From: Notizbuch

I just read all of it, and it's all really good! Keepon Writing!

|-tHe wAy-|

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Date: 03/24/13 4:15 PM
From: xomadtayxo

I read it! You're doing a great job!! :]

-MadTay

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Date: 03/24/13 10:43 AM
From: 94beaker64

I just posted a new chapter! Has anybody read it?


Beaky


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Date: 03/21/13 5:21 PM
From: 94beaker64

Chapter Six

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Jet looked around. Very few Freedom Fighters were left. And all of them were acting sulky. He knew it wouldn't be long till they deserted him too. They were half heartedly eating dinner at the now much to long table.

There was no one talking and laughing now. Used to be you could hardly hear yourself over the din of noise. The shouts and cheers filled the trees just like the cries and songs of birds.

Jet savored those memories. He knew there'd never be another chance to make them again. Just like he'd asked himself every day since their numbers started to dwindle, what happened? When had it all crumbled?

Their hearts seemed to break just a little more when another person left. Even though they knew it was going to happen, they couldn't stop the pain. Only about seven people were left besides him. And it wasn't the people he'd thought would stick with him to the end.

Those people had left first. It had been the others to follow. Jet had really misjudged their charaters. Or maybe, they had misjudged his. "Stop thinking like that. It's not your fault." Jet whispered to himself.

The other Freedom Fighters looked up at him. "Heh, yeah and it's everybody elses right? You were the one who started it. The moment you kicked out Longshot was when we saw what you had become." The kid said. Jet stared at him. "I've been wanting to leave for a long time." The kid continued.

"Well what's stopping you Lou?" Jet said nastily. "Nothing." Lou said and walked away. "You coming Pigtails?" Lou turned around partially and looked at the girl sitting at the table. She glanced at Jet quickly then got up. "Yeah I am." Pigtails grasped Lou's hand and together they walked away.

"Who needs them anyway? We're better off without them!" Said. "No we're not." A tall girl scoffed. She got up and left too. One by one kids got up and left. Three kids remained. They looked at Jet. Jet glared at him.

"GET AWAY! I DON'T WANT YOU HERE!" Jet threw some bread at them. The kids fled quickly. One of them turned around and stuck his tounge out at Jet. Jet started to get up, his eyes clouded in rage.

The kid turned around and high tailed it out of the trees with his friends. Jet calmed himself. "What just happened?" Jet asked aloud. "Everyone has left me." Jet stared straight ahead not seeing. "Everyone."

Everyone was gone.

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Jet's done it now. What can I say? I'm not surprised.

Beaky

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Date: 03/12/13 8:04 PM
From: xomadtayxo

WOOOO!

-MadTay

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Date: 03/07/13 4:42 PM
From: 94beaker64

THE COMPUTER IS FIXED!!!

YAY!!!!

New chapter tomorrow or so.

Beaky

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Date: 03/02/13 8:07 AM
From: 94beaker64

I know you guys are sick of hearing it, but when the computer is fixed, I'll post.

Beaky


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Date: 02/25/13 6:19 PM
From: 94beaker64

As soon as the computer is fixed I'll post a new chapter! I promise!!!!

Beaky

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Date: 02/15/13 10:48 AM
From: 94beaker64

Still broken.

I'm so angry at the computer right now.

Beaky


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Date: 02/06/13 2:14 PM
From: 94beaker64

I. Can't. Believe. That. The. Computer. Is. Still. BROKEN.


Grrrr.


Beaky

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Date: 01/24/13 9:21 AM
From: 94beaker64

Thanks for the support Airautumn!


Beaky


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Date: 01/20/13 7:03 PM
From: airautumn

@ Beaky

No problem! Take all the time you need!

Airautumn

I'm back!

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Date: 01/14/13 12:50 PM
From: 94beaker64

A week later........Still broken!!!!! GRRRR! I can't get to any of my stories!!!! It makes me so mad! Curse modern technolgy!!!!!!!!!!

Sorry guys.


Beaky

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Date: 01/07/13 7:09 PM
From: 94beaker64

Computer is broken so it will be a while till a new chapter. I'm on my moms now. Sigh...


Beaky

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Date: 01/01/13 9:06 PM
From: 94beaker64

First post of the new year! Yay!! Woo Hoo!!!

Beaky

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Date: 12/31/12 8:30 PM
From: 94beaker64

6+6 = 12

66 posts is what I had before this post.


It's the end of the 12.


GOODBYE 2012!


Beaky


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