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Date: 05/26/12 10:24 PM
From: magicstar4

Episode One: Let The Singin? BEGIN!!

Announcer: Welcome to Avatar Idol, and if you thinking we got copied American Idol, you are wrong. They copy us?pff, all there singing and stuff. Here we welcome all talents, no matter how lame they are! Now, our judges are Toph?

Toph: Sup!

Announcer: Aang

Aang: Hi

Announcer: Kor?wait can this be right, if she?s here should of all of you should be dead by now.

Me (behind the curtains): She time-traveled so?hurry up, I gotta watch American Idol after this.

Announcer: What, shouldn?t you be happy for this show?

Me: Don?t make me fire you

Announcer: Make me

Me: Men, bring the fire

Announcer: WHAT!

--Announcer ran away?

Me: Bring in the new announcer

New Announcer (N.A): Ok, Korra. CLAP!

--Everyone started to clap--

Random Fan 1: I love Korra!

Aang: What about me

Crowd: BOOOO!!

Aang: Come on!

N.A: And, Magic

Me: Hi, weirdoes

N.A: Now here are the contestants?Sokka

Sokka: Sokka is in the house!

N.A: ?Katara

Katara: Hi

Random Fan 2 (RF 2): BOOO!!

Katara: What!

RF 2: You didn?t marry Zuko

Katara: So?

RF 2: I am a Zutara fan. I wanna you two to get married until I watch ?The Legend of Korra?

Katara: Ok, who else is a Zutara Fan?

--Lots of hand rose up--

Toph: Wow, people sure hate you

N.A: Now here is Zuko

Zuko: Hi?wait why I am I here

--A random fan took his watch?

Zuko: HEY! MY WATCH!

N.A: Mako?

Mako: IM THE NEW ZUKO

--Girls screamed--
Zuko: Wait what!

N.A: Bolin?

Bolin: Hiya, Cheer for the FIRE FERRETS

Random Guy (Ripped his shirt off and his stomach say ?GO FIRE FERRET?: WOOO

--Then notice that everyone is watching him; he quietly sat down-

N.A: And that?s it! For the animal shorts, here?s Appa, Naga, Momo, and Pabu

--Pabu came out?

Crowd: Awww

--Rest came--
N.A: Alright, now if you want to join Avatar Idol. Here is the sign-up sheet:
Name:
Gender:
Age:
Looks:
Talent:
Extra:
Me: Now, I?m going to erase your memory and fill with it picture of Sokka in his underwear only, if you don?t sign-up??is this still on cut it off

Camera-Guy: We still have two minute

--I throw a shoe at the camera--
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This is my second comedy show; my first didn?t work out so well. Hope people will enjoy it.
And Thanks 4 all the comedies writers for inspiring me to write this. (Like Abatani and IMissUBlue, Blue?ect)

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Date: 04/27/13 5:39 PM
From: YinYang975

Magic-Sorry I haven't checked in a while. But hey, are you going to be posting an episode soon?

Mods-Why do you keep cutting my replies to Magic? I've noticed some parts have been left off. Is it a glitch or are there somethings not appropriate to post?

-Abatani

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Date: 04/26/13 9:57 PM
From: taytay239

Hi-hi!

Name: Blair Brooks
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Looks:Bronze skin tone, light brown hair with some blonde highlights, wears a jean top with a blue and white skirt white heels
Talent: LOVES TO SING! She likes to sing Beyonce songs and soul songs from Whitney Houston and Etta James. She's also a skilled firebender... SHE LOVES ZUKO TOO (Zutara fan!! whooo!!)
Traits (Extra): Funny, bubbly, determined and confident

BlairBear

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Date: 04/25/13 7:47 PM
From: iluvdbz464

Can I pwetty pweez be on?
Name:Mana
Age:17
Gender:F
Talent: Because she is a wizard I wanna do this. She is an Element Dragon Slayer. She is sorta like the Avatar, but a thousand times more powerful. She is going to sing while dancing. When she's dancing she will control her fire and water and do different things like fire ribbons. Despite her rough nature she has a beutiful singing voice. She sounds like a mix of Demi Lovato, Pink, Taylor Swift, and Adele. She can hit really high notes and hold them for a long time. She will sing "We're The Stars" by Aimi Terakawa. It's in Japanese.
Looks: She is very appealing. She wears a blue spaghetti strap tank top with gold lining, a gold jacket over that, black caprices, and gold heels. She can also attract any guy in a 10 mile radius. (she is very busty).Her hair color is caramel colored with red, blue, and white streaks in it.

Personality: Sweet, but slightly shy. When she starts preforming all of her shyness goes away. If you insult her she goes she-devil on you.

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Date: 04/15/13 8:39 AM
From: YinYang975

Still, great episode! I know I've been kind of a silent reader lately. I just haven't had time to post.

-Abatani

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Date: 04/13/13 11:08 PM
From: magicstar4

Season 2- Episode 6: More Curses, More Fun

Chase: Who ever invented me, I don?t like you

Teddy: How can you say that, Chasey-Poo!

Chase: Never call me that!

Teddy: Okay, Chasey

Chase: First, a terrible idol, then an island, then a strange man curse us, then a terrible teammate who ate all my muffins

Teddy(eating a muffin): So delish

Chase: Now raining banana. What next pumpkins!

--Started to rain pumpkins?

Chase: Dislike this show very much

--At the set?

Me: Haha, I am so bored

Aang: What is with the laughing

Me: HAHAHA, I always do this when I am bored

Toph: Seriously

Me: HAHA, yes soiree?

Neko: I am bored too!

Aalia: Sacre Bleu?, you two should have an adventure

Me and Neko: Adventure

N.A: Three stages, Two girls, one big adventure at the sea. Magic and Neko!

Neko: Sure, let do it

Me: Uh?I don?t know how to swim

Aang: Let the expert tell you

Me: Oh brother

--Sam and Meko?

Meko: Sam, where are you?heh, maybe she abandon me and left me in some peace

--Sam popped out?

Sam: Hi, Love

Meko: My big mouth

Sam: Terrible bananas separating my love

--Banana started to fall?

Sam: Not this time

--Sam started to use kung-fu on the bananas?

Mako: Um?okay

--Bolin and Millie?

Bolin: And that?s the story of when the attack of the?

Millie: I was there, Bolin

Bolin: Heh, I reminds me of another story

Millie: Bolin, we found everything. Except the ancient banana peel

--Bananas started to fall out of the sky?

Bolin: THEY RETURN!!

--Back at Sey?

Toph: Back at Sey?

Me: Argh, it is a typo

Old Man: Beware the banana

--Old Man brokes the camera?

Me: TERRIBLE OLD MAN!!
``````Magic
?Urgh, okay my posting my take a long time. I have a good reason this time, though!?
Aang: And that is?
Me: Get out of here!
Aang: Fine, whatever

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Date: 03/24/13 2:53 PM
From: lefty31415

HAPPY HUNDRED!!!!

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Date: 03/24/13 1:48 PM
From: YinYang975

good episode! And happy 100th post!

-Abatani

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Date: 03/23/13 11:06 PM
From: magicstar4

Posting Episode probably Tomorrow-ish

``````Magic

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Date: 03/06/13 8:49 AM
From: magicstar4

Episode 5 Season 2: Never say Bananas?

Aang: Why?

Me: Because the title screen says so

Toph: Why do we have to listen to the title

Me: Because the title screen says so

Toph: The title screen is not even real

Me: You just believe in the screen, Toph

Toph: Never

Aang: Let just get back to the games

Me: Until this girl believes in the screen

Toph: I said never

Neko: Yay!

Aalia: Yayye!

Me: What is with this show?

Aang: I was just thinking that

Mariah: I was just thinking that we should join this Island

Toph: I told you no

Della: But, we won a contest

Aang: What was the contest about?

Me: It was about whom is the world?s favorite Avatar

Aang: That was me, of course

Della: No, we guessed Korra

Aang(sad): WHAT!?!?!

Me: Hehe, yeah

Korra: Beat that Air boy!

Toph: Where did you came from

Korra: Here, there, oh well. Let?s go to the games

Aang: My life was a lie

Korra: Yep, it was!

--Chase and Teddy?

Chase(dragging Teddy who is eating muffins): Hate?hate?this show

Teddy: Yum, yummy?where is the banana-covered bookmark?

--Banana fell from the sky?

Teddy: I SAID BOOKMARK!

Chase: Hate this so much

--Millie and Bolin?

Millie: Where is the banana workbook

Bolin: Well, this reminds me of the time that banana were evil and fell from the?

--Bananas fell from the sky?

Bolin: THE WORLD IS DOOM!!

Millie: Why couldn?t I get another partner

--Sam and Mako-

Mako: Why do you have glue

Sam: So, we can be together

Mako: Uh?

Sam: FOREVER

Mako: Help?

--Back at the Main Island?

Me: I told you to believe in the screen

Toph: Nothing happen to us

Me: Yet?

Neko: We should have pie

Aang: Why?

Korra: Hey, you rhyme

Aang: You ruin my life!

Korra: SAY WHAT!?

--Aang and Korra started to fight?

Aalia: Oo, coolio let?s have a dance fight

Korra: I know how do the Boogy

Aang: Yeah right

--They danced?

Me: This show is terrible

Toph: Really

`````````Magic

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Date: 02/19/13 10:37 AM
From: YinYang975

Awesome episode!

-Abatani

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Date: 02/17/13 6:33 PM
From: magicstar4

Episode Um: I really forgot what episode we are on
Me: What is today?s episode?

Toph: How would I know? I am blind

Me: Okay, we finally decided what game we are going to have and?

Ty-Lee: ROCK ON

Me: Where did you came from

Ty-Lee: From an egg, duh

Toph: Oh man, the Lee is here

Ty-Lee: Oo, the Lee. Is that like my nickname

Toph: Yep

Ty-Lee: Woohoo, rock on

Me: Okay, the first game is treasure hunting

Chase: Seriously

Me: Why did we invite this guy

Toph: He won

Me: Oh yeah

Teddy: Let?s get this party started

Blue: YEAH!!!

--Blue toss water on Sokka?

Sokka: I am melting, melting

--Sokka is actually melting--

Millie: Wow

Me: Blue, you are out for melting your teammate

Blue: Oh well

Neko: So, here is the list and let?s start the game

Bolin: And the game is called?

Me: I already said it. It is TREASURE HUNT

Ty-Lee: Whoopee!

Toph: Please just look for the treasures on the list.

--At Millie and Froggy--

Froggy: So, where do you think the rare rubies-rocks are?

Dawn: Rubies-rocks?

Sokka(popping out of nowhere): If it called rubies-rocks, why are there no rocks, get it!

Froggy: Not really

Sokka: Aren?t you supposed to be in China?

Froggy: Nope

Sokka: Well, you are now

--Sokka put a jetpack on Froggy and blasted her off?

Froggy: AHHH!!

Me: SOKKA, I told you not to blast Froggy off to China

Sokka: She deserved it.

Me: Argh, sorry Dawn, I guess that you are out of this game

Dawn: Aw

--Meanwhile with Bolin and Millie?

Bolin: And that is how I invented Chocolate-covered worms


Millie: Aren?t we suppose to find our used-milk packet

Bolin: Well, did you know that I made those as well

Millie: Err

--Meanwhile with Sam and Mako?

Sam: So, is Mako, your real name

Mako: Yeah?

Sam: That is so funny. My name is Mako, too

Mako: Isn?t you name, Sam

Sam: Hey, we found a Heroes of Olympus book

Teddy(attacking Sam): HEY! That?s is mine

Chase: I hate this show

--Back at Magic, Toph, and Ty-Lee?

Me: Hey, have you noticed that Aang is missing

Toph: You know every time Ty-Lee is here. Aang always is gone

--Magic and Toph look at Ty-Lee?

Ty-Lee: Oh look, over there

Me and Toph: Uh

--Ty-Lee poof away?

Sokka: She?s magic. Ha, get it because you are Magic and I just said?

Toph and Me: We get it
``````````````Magic

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Date: 02/15/13 11:42 PM
From: magicstar4

Probably post tomorrow.

`````````Magic

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Date: 01/20/13 1:31 PM
From: magicstar4

Season 2 Ep. 3: Okay, are we going to games or what?

Me: So, where are the contestants? I thought the pilot pushed them put already.

Aang: Maybe they fell on a banana and got curse by a wizard

Toph: Yeah, right

Me: Where are those two Neka and Aalio?

Aang: Isn?t it Nake and Alia.

Me: No.. it is Neka and Aalio

Neko: No, it is Neko and Meko

Aalia: Sacre bleu, the name is Aalia,

Neko: Yeah, Yeah?we brought the constants and Mai

Mai: I really despise you all now

Me: Good now we can finally begin the games

Chase: Games?

Me(British accent): Yes, jolly annoying fellow. Games

N.A: Our first game is?

RG: Wait..for..me

--RG came running hitting Teddy?

Teddy: OWW

Random Girl: Sorry

Toph: Who?s her?

RG: I am Mariah

Aang: Why are you here

Mariah: I am here because I won the contest to stay on this island and compete and bring one random person

Random Guy: And that?s me

Another Girl: No me

---AG pushes RG?

AG: My name is Della

Aang: But, we never had a contest..did we?

Me: Hehe

Toph: Spill it, Magic

Me: Well, a guy came and this happen then wow happen and kaboom it happen than this happen

Aang: Huh

Me: Huh is right

Della and Mariah: So, I am ready to battle

Toph: Too bad, you guys can?t be here.

Mariah: Why not?

Toph: Because..um.. Aalia says so

Aalia: Moi? Moi didn?t say anything at all

Toph: You ruin the lie

Aalia: Too bad

Della: So, can we stay

Toph: No

Della: Please

Toph: No

Della: Please

Toph: No

Della: Please

Toph: No

Della: PLEASSSSSSSSSSSSSSE

Toph: N.O

Mariah: You are so mean

Toph: I know

Me: Okay, we waste this episode because of the delinquent

Aang: Delinquent

Me: Yes, I use that word

Aang: Delinquent

Me: Yes, I use that word

Aang: Delinquent

Me: Yes, I use that word!

Toph: You know that you guys are wasting time

Me: NOOOOO

--Episode ended?

````````Magic

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Date: 01/13/13 8:29 AM
From: YinYang975

Awesome! Looking forward to it!

-Abatani

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Date: 01/12/13 9:22 AM
From: magicstar4

@Abatani

For some reason, I always forgot to post on this topic.

Actually, I have no idea why is it a pumpkin curse

Also, new episode is coming today.

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Date: 12/30/12 9:36 AM
From: YinYang975

As soon as this episode showed up, I literally screamed "OH YEAH!" I'm serious: this is my favorite comedy.

Really? The Banana Curse? And Pumpkin Curse? XD May I ask why only Chase has the Pumpkin Curse? Just curious...

-Abatani
If anything, he should have the muffin curse...OH! THE PUMPKIN MUFFIN CURSE! XD

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Date: 12/29/12 10:05 PM
From: magicstar4

Season 2, Epi. 2: The Banana Curse

N.A: Season 2 is happening and this show is weirder than ever. Will Jacob go back with Rebbeca or still live with his mother? Will Dylan get away from the crazy fan girl? Or will the naked mole rat destroy?

Toph: What are you talking about

N.A: Wait, you guys didn?t change this show into Soap Opera

--Cast shake heads?

N.A: Oh?well, um

--N.A reading her cards?

N.A: Um?will the cast of Avatar Idol survived on their downfall to the island, stay tune

Me: They already stay tune

Aang: Whose day?

Me: Not ?day?? They!

Aang: Day?

Me: No, they

--Tosh pushes them apart?

Toph: My name isn?t Tosh?

Me: Don?t blame me, blame T.V

Toph: That doesn?t make sense

Me: Oh well?

--Meanwhile?

Everyone-Who-Fell-Off-The-Plane (EWFTP): AHHH

Bolin: Why are we screaming?

Froggy: Because we are falling to our doom

Sokka: Nobody ask you!

Froggy: Bolin just did

Sokka: LAIR

--Blue spit water on Sokka?

Sokka: How can you do that? You are below me!

Blue: I have my ways

Millie: Guys! We need help!

Teddy: Chase, use you muffin parachute

Chase(sarcasm): Oh, like I have that

Teddy: So give use it

Lefty: That was sarcasm?I think

Mai: So, I will fall to my doom on an island?nice

EWFTP: AHHH!!!

--Landed in a soft squishy banana?

Millie: We are alive!

Mai: Oh man.

Old Man: Get off my banana

Dawn: Sorry sir, but we got push off a plane then we yelled for help then?

Old Man: I don?t want to listen to your babble. Because you won?t get off my banana, you guys are cursed by the Banana Curse

Chase(sarcasm): Yippee

Old Man: Except you, you are curse by the Pumpkin Curse

Chase(sarcasm): Yay

--Old Man left?

Dawn: Oh NO! We are cursed by the Banana Curse except for Chase! What should we (except for Chase) do!

--RG pops up?

Random Girl: HIYA

Dawn: AHH

RG: The name is Neko and welcome to Pain Island

EWFTP: What?

Neko: I mean Avatar Island

Chase: Island?

Neko: Yep, no more Avatar Idol, this is more epicer

Chase: ?Epicer?

Mai: I thought we are going on a relaxing resort

Neko: Well, Magic and Toph lied

Mai: I knew it

Neko: So, Magic sent me and Aalia to help

Froggy: Aalia?

Aalia: That is Moi

Mai: I hate this job

--Meanwhile at the North Pole?

Yue: As a moon I watch everything, but see nothing

Suki: That doesn?t make any sense

Yue: Well the name Suki doesn?t make sense, boyfriend-stealer

Suki: Not my fault you turn into a moon

Yue: It?s on!

--Started to fight?

``````Magic
Me: Is it okay if Aalia is french

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Date: 12/29/12 1:38 AM
From: kittyacere

Hi I just started reading and I have two things to say:

1. Wow!! Your story has been going on since June!!!
2. You didn't post for like, two months!!
3.--
Aang: Hold up you said you only had two things to say!
Me: Yeah well I changed my mind!
Aang: You lied!
Me: No!!
ten minutes later
Aang: Yes you did lie!
Me: No!
Toph: Seriously woman! What did you have to say?!!?!
Me: Ummmm, I forgot.

KittyacereS
Love you story by the way

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Date: 12/28/12 7:23 PM
From: Zutarian00

hahahahahaha lol!!!! i was laughing so hard like you wouldnt believe!!!! XD and i loooooved the zutara bit (look at my username XD lol)!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 12/27/12 2:10 PM
From: magicstar4

@Abatani

Well, my teacher force my class to read it for a essay. It is okay. O_O

``````Magic

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