Well, hello!
I'm MadTay, and I used to post on here with my sister a few years ago but we got busy with school and all that, but I'm back! Haha, and this story is about a character I made up named Natanie, but it will include the Avatar characters we all know and love too.
I'll post the first chapters soon, the very first one is just Natanie's back story so the second chapter will be when the story itself starts. I hope I get some readers and that you all enjoy it!
Thanks,
-MadTay
Zuko2435: It's okay, I was gone for a little while too. I got really busy with school and stuff, and now I could really use a vacation haha. But thanks for sticking with the story, I'm glad you're still reading!
Adeyla: Thanks! I was hoping he'd come across as the "nice guy" haha.
Way: I don't know what that is exactly, but I'm sure it'd make sense if I did!
Blair: Thanks, I'm working on it now! :]
I'm doing some final revisions on the next chapter now, and I'll post it sometime soon. :D Oh, and if you haven't yet, check out my double with CosbyRock, "Venture Forth Without me"!! It's very new, but very awesome!
Hey I am finally back!!! although you probibly didn't know i was gone? anyway i bwas on vacation but i'm back now and i just read your last chapter and I have to say AWESOME!!!!!! keep going.
P.S
I just posted the latest chapter of TWLB (The Worlds Last Bender) ~Zuko2435 Clouds have two sides a light and dark and a silver lineing inbetween it's like a silver sandwitch so when life gets hard take a bite out of the silver sandwich.~Zuko
Sorry it's been so long since I've posted!! Things have been crazy lately, but it's summer now, so yay!! Hopefully all of my readers are still here. :]
Chapter 38: It's Time
We were finally safe at Miyako's house, preparing to leave as quickly as we could. While Athena, Hazen, Miyako, and I were getting our last minute things together, Tosh hung around quietly and watched. He was standing near a tree, fiddling with a small flame.
"Hey," I said as I approached him.
"Hey," he replied halfheartedly. He was still staring at the little flame in his hand, the glow of it dancing across his face.
"Listen, I just wanted to thank you for helping us back there. You had every right to turn me over or to walk away, but you didn't. I'll always be grateful for that."
He chuckled and finally put his fire out. "You didn't really think that I'd betray you, did you?"
I shook my head and twiddled with my thumbs. "I guess I didn't really know what to think."
"Just because we're not together anymore, doesn't mean I don't care about you. Girlfriend or not, you're still one of my best friends. I'll always care." Why does he have to be so nice? I thought, he should be furious with me!
"Well, thank you." I smiled at him.
"So, are you excited for the big move?"
"Yeah... I don't know. I'm afraid to leave Lee more than anything, apparently our mom isn't afraid to turn on her kids."
"I'll keep an eye on him if you want, I mean I do live right next door. It's no problem."
"Thank you so much!"
I pulled him into one last tight hug, which seemed to say everything that needed to be said.
"Nat, come on! We'll leave without you!" shouted Miyako.
I pulled away from Tosh and looked to find all of our things packed up on Zehla. We were officially ready to go to the Earth Kingdom.
"Hey, do great stuff over there!" said Tosh.
I smiled. "Thank you," I whispered.
Then, I kissed him on the cheek and ran over to meet my friends.
We all sat on Zehla and began our journey. We rode off towards the Fire Nation coast, towards our destinies.
END OF PART 2
Coming up in Part 3: Nat and her friends' adventures in the Earth Kingdom, we'll see some original ATLA characters, one of my characters may or may not go temporarily insane, and we'll see what Natanie's gang is up to on the Day of Black Sun and Sozin's comet! Also, there won't me much romance in this next part, it's mainly action!! That might or might not be a good thing for some of you, I don't really know... Anyway, stay tuned! I'm very excited! :D
Blair: Thanks, I'm glad you like it so far! Also, I read your story and it's pretty great too!
Bball: Thank you! I try to read through and reply to a lot of stories, cause it always makes me happy when someone replies to one of mine, and I figure I should make someone else happy too, lol.
I'm super busy, and I don't really have any time to write. So hopefully the next chapter will be up soon-ish!
Madtay: Yeah that's her name! I didn't know her name actually, I just knew that phrase. And Tosh is a sweet heart, reminds me a little of myself. And I would like to say that this story is awesome, but you are AWESOMER! That's not a word. Everything I've looked at you are always responding so sweetly and you're so nice, and your writing rocks!
-Words memorized. Words hypnotized. Words make my mouth exercise. Words all fail the magic prize. Nothing I can say when... ("Add it Up" by Violent Fems)
HELLO! I'm Blair, im new I just read ALL of your chapters. Theres only three words that come to my mind: ER. MER. GERD.
THEY WERE TOTALLY AMAZING! KEEP WRITING! I can't wait until the next eppie!
Bball: Yay, someone finally likes Tosh! Lol, and did you just reference Sweet Brown?! I love her! Anywho, thanks for reading! Oh, I also love Give a Little Bit too. It's one of my favorite songs.
Zuko2435: Nah, you don't have a weird mind! I was hoping you guys wouldn't be sure if he'd side with Natanie or not. And I read/replied to your latest chapter! :)
Way: Thanks! I was actually kinda unsure about it, I rewrote that chapter like three times, lol.
Great chapter Madtay I Surly thought that Tosh was going to turn on her but I just have a weird mind. lol I really liked that chapter keep going!!!!!! Btw I posted the next chapter of ?The Worlds Last Bender.?
~Zuko2435~
~Clouds have a dark side and a light side and a silver lining in between it?s like a silver sandwich. So when life gets hard take a bite out of the silver sandwich. ~Zuko
I finally caught up! It's superb! I'm a fan of Tosh, by the way, he's the nice guy and I stick up for nice guys, cause I like to think I'm one. I loved the last one, especially. Tosh should've said, "Ain't nobody got time for that"
Also, I really like the cousin-cousin thing, It's like a little side story, a comedy to me at least.
And just to tell you, when reading on Cinco De Mayo, not noticing the date you posted, that April Fools joke was kinda cruel. I was wondering why an ATLA fanfic was turning into a story of real life, thinking there's 50+ more posts. Oh, That Madtay!
The Way: Thanks, just saw that. Pink Floyd is in the top 10 for me.
-Now's the time that we need to share. So send a smile, I'm sure you care. ("Give a Little Bit" by Supertramp)
"Mom, what are you doing? I'm your daughter..." I said. She wouldn't really betray me like this, would she?
"No daughter of mine betrays her country," she replied. With that, she turned and walked away, leaving me to fight an army, and possibly Tosh as well. Tosh.
I looked over to him, and he was staring back and forth from me to the army in disbelief.
"Tosh," I said and got his attention, "it's time to chose. It looks like you're either going to fight with me, or against me." Or you could leave and go home, but I'm really hoping you'll help me fight, I thought.
He mumbled something incoherent, still obviously in shock.
"I don't have time for this!" I cried.
Instead of waiting around for Tosh to make up his mind, I faced the army men and took my battle stance. One of the guys in front threw the first flame, which I dodged. Then, I used a fire whip to knock him off his feet, and a second one to stop another guy from attacking. Next, while still partially maintaining the fire whips, I kicked out some of what I liked to call flaming waves. They looked similar to the waves you'd see in the ocean, only made of fire. Hence the name, flaming waves. My waves took out about six other men, plus the two I had confined to the fire whips.
But, for each person I took down, it seemed like two more would show up. Finally, I had to resort to lightning. It was exhilarating to use, but also dangerous, and I didn't want to hurt anyone anymore than I needed to.
Instead of aiming lightning directly at them, I shot it at their feet. The bolts were powerful enough that the ground was broken, and the guys standing in that area fell into the ditches the lightning created.
Even with my lightning, though, it was just too much for me to handle on my own. Tosh could see this too, and his gaze met mine. I looked at him pleadingly, and he nodded. Before I knew it, he was firebending alongside me. Best of all, he was using the stances we learned from the scrolls- which he had mastered. These moves were so outdated, the army guys had no idea what he was doing. There were no words to describe the funky movements some of these stances call for, and the men were thrown off, not by much, but still thrown off. This allowed for me to swoop in with more lightning and fire whips. Tosh and I were actually winning!
Just when we thought we were going to be able to escape, though, a whole new crew of army members arrived, and they were ready to fight. Tosh and I kept up as best as we could, but there were just too many. I was starting to lose hope that we would ever make it out. That is, until some of our own reinforcements showed up.
Miyako, Hazen, and Athena all three showed up on Zehla the moose hound.
"Hop on, you guys!" Miyako exclaimed.
Hazen and Athena reached out to help us on, and we took their hands.
"Alright, let's ride outta here!" Hazen shouted as Zehla starting running again, ?yee haw!"
"Yee haw? Hazen, we're not in the Southern Earth Kingdom," teased Athena.
"Guys, we've got a little more to worry about than Hazen's choice of words," said Tosh, gesturing towards the large army still trying to attack us.
"I've got an idea," I stated, "Tosh, hold my feet so I don't fall."
"What're you doing?" He asked.
"Just do it!" I yelled as I stood up.
Tosh held my feet so I could keep my balance and, using my lightning, I began blasting at anyone who got in our way, knocking them into my makeshift ditches. After doing this a few times, Zehla finally made it to the edge of the woods. She jumped over one last group of army guys, and took off through the trees at a faster speed.
They began chasing us, but after zig zagging throughout the forest for a while, we finally lost them. Soon, we made it to Miyako's hut, and everyone was safe and sound. I had officially made it through the fight of my life- well the first one anyway.
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That's not a word. Everything I've looked at you are always responding so sweetly and you're so nice, and your writing rocks!
-Words memorized. Words hypnotized. Words make my mouth exercise. Words all fail the magic prize. Nothing I can say when... ("Add it Up" by Violent Fems)
