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Okami - Light, Darkness, and Paint Brushes

Date: 12/07/12 6:33 PM
From: KawaiiGrrl

Well, here it goes again. Posting fan fiction after fan fiction when it gets deleted. Maybe this one will survive. >_<

In the small town of Evilville, there is (obviously) tons of evil as if you didn't know that from the name. Anyway, the town needs a hero so the evil people will stop doing evil stuff because evil stuff is evil...

Hyuna: *walking on street eating a chocolate bar when Random guy comes out of a bush* GAH!

Random Theif: *takes out book* According to my Evil Handbook of Evil, the worst thing I can do at my level is steal chocolate bars from little girls so -

Hyuna: I'm twelve. That's not little.

Random Theif: Anyway, I'M GOING TO STEAL THAT CHOCOLATE BAR FROM YOU SO GIVE ME IT OR ELSE I'LL ATTACK YOU WITH MY BOOK!

Hyuna: ...

Random Theif: Very well then. *ahem* Brushes and paints, power and complaints, her little friend will get to paint and she'll get to faint. She'll have a great trouble because it isn't all light and bubblesr. She'll lose her faith and everything in between. Have a good life, you dumb little tween! *disappears*

Author Me: Yes, terrible poetry. No fan fic of mine is complete without it.

Hyuna: Well, that was weird BUT I STILL HAVE MY CHOCOLATE BAR SO THAT'S ALL WHAT REALLY MATTERS! :D *continues eating chocolate bar*

At Friend's House...

Nanami: Hi Hyuna!

Hyuna: Hey Nanami! The weirdest thing happened.

Nanami: What happened? Did anyone try to tease you? THEY'LL HAVE TO LEARN WITH MY FIREBENDING! *starts punching the air*

Hyuna: Um... no? Someone tried to steal my chocolate bar.

Nanami: OH IT'S ON NOW...

Hyuna: The weirdest part was that he said a weird poem. Something about painting. I don't even paint!

Nanami: I do! Want me to teach -

Hyuna: NO.

Nanami: I was going to ask to teach your DOG. What did you think I was going to say?

Hyuna: Um... nothing.

Nanami: Okay! COME ON DOGGY! *Hyuna's dog comes in* Let's teach you how to paint! ^_^

Hyuna: Um, are you sure this won't get the animal people down the street call the police?

Nanami: Positive! :D

ONE TORTUROUS FUN PAINTING LESSON LATER

Nanami: Bye Hyuna!

Hyuna: Um, why did you dip the dog's tail in paint?

Nanami: It's the only way it could paint!

Hyuna: Umm... see you later? *leaves house* Poor Okami, you must be really tired.

Okami: No kidding!

Hyuna: O____O

Okami: What?

Hyuna: D-DOGS ARE NOT SUPPOSED TO TALK...

Okami: Hmm... good point. So what do youu want me to say, then?

Hyuna: ...

Okami: Okay then. Moo.

Hyuna: Y-you're not a cow. O_O

Okami: But I thought... nevermind. I'm hungry. Can you give me a bone?

Hyuna: O_O Okay... as soon as we go home I'll feed you.

OH SNAP! Talking dogs? THAT'S THE BEST SUPERPOWER EVER. Ya, not really. But a better part is coming soon! :3 Sorry for the dry dialogue. Is it dry? *tastes dialogue* Ya... kind of. Anyway, stay tuned for part 2!

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Date: 06/14/13 11:24 AM
From: makololpop

KAAAWAAAIIII!!!!! AAAAAAHHH!!! YOU'RE BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACCCCKKK!!!!! YAAAAAAYYYYY!!! I LOVED THE EPISODE!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!! OH AND ALSO I HAVE A ONE YEAR ANNIVERSARY CELEBRATION. SO YEAH YOU SHOULD CHECK IT OUT! :)

~Le Lali of Lollipops~
Just a fan of Karika, The Savior of the Elements, Okami- Light, Darkness, and Paint Brushes,Comedy Central X, Avatar Randomness A Comedy: Season 2,Sacrifice of Dream, One Person, One Hope, One Chance, Makorra, Leerika, Jack Frost, Hope Estheim, and lollipops!

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Date: 06/13/13 5:43 PM
From: KawaiiGrrl

Meet the Secret Police - Part 2

Okami: ... Well, that was interesting.

*everyone nods heads in agreement*

Manpuku: Do you know what just happened?

Prometheus: Well, we have competition?

Manpuku: I GOT RICK FONG'S AUTOGRAPH! *O*

Everyone: *facepalm*

~ TIME SKIP ~

*everyone is minding thier own business when...*

Kai-Jin: I'm borrrreeeeddddddd... hey Ammy, what can I do?

Okami: I would prefer for you to call me Okami -_- And you can do some chores.

Kai-Jin: I don't wantttttt toooo... All I have is a computer, a Wii, a phone, Aangbook, and internet access.

Okami: *facepaw*

Kai-Jin: B to the O to the R-E-D~

Okami: *eye twitch*

Hyuna: o_O U-Uhm...

Kai-Jin: One hundred boreds of milk on the wall, one hundred bored of milk. Take on down, open the spout -

Okami: *eye twitch* -__-

Hyuna: LET'S GO TO THE BEACH!

Everyone: HUH?!

Hyuna: It's summer, right? Well, going to the beach is a summer thing to do, and since we're all bored, we should take a trip to the beach!

Everyone: ...

Hyuna: I'll buy all of you guys french fries.

Everyone (especially Orial): HOORAY FOR THE BEACH!

~ TIME SKIP ~

*heavy rain is pouring down on everyone in swim suits*

Hyuna: Um... hooray for the beach? Heheheh... ^^; *nervous smile*

Okami: *sighs* Okay, I'll start the car. *puts key into car but nothing happens* O_O

Michin: Wait... is the car working?

Okami: ...No. o_o

*everyone looks at Hyuna who brought up the idea of going to the beach*

Hyuna: ...Camping, anyone? Eheheheh... ^^;

*everyone sighs when suddenly something stirs in the water*

Kuni: What's that?

???: My name isn't "that," it's Mr. Sea Monster. -_- *a giant Godzilla comes out from the ocean*

Kagu: ...We're doomed.

Mr. Sea Monster: Rawr, I'm a sea monster :3

Hyuna: Guys! This is our chance to be heroes! Why don't we let this monster know what we're made of?!

Everyone: YEAAAAAAAH! *about to charge when a puff of smoke appears - with the Secret Police*

Chill Pinky: Hey, there ^_^

Mr. Sea Monster: OHMERGERDOHMERGERD! IT'S THE SECRET POLICE~~~!! *grabs a skyscraper* SIGN MY SKYSCRAPER! SIGN MY SKYSCRAPER!

Zincka: Sure thing, pal. Just promise us not to cause any more trouble, okay?

Mr. Sea Monster: Sure thing! Sure thing! By the way, Secret Police, thanks for all the work you do! You guys protect us from all the bad mean people!! :D

*the Secret Police sign his skyscraper*

Mr. Sea Monster: THANK YOU! :) I'll promise to be a good sea monster fo rnow on! *goes back into the ocean*

Mystic K.N.: Ya really think you can be heroes with us? No thanks. Go back to your parents, kids. *throws smoke bomb and they all disappear*

Lali: Wait, where's Orial?

Orial: *o* DOUBLE RAINBOWWWWWW!!! *points to the sky* I CAN'T EVEN CAPTURE IT N MY CAMERA!!! :D *tears of happiness*

*all guys give her a tissue*

Orial: *sobsobsob* IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL! I THINK IT'S A TRIPLE RAINBOWWWW~!!

Okami: *facepalm*

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Date: 06/12/13 4:47 PM
From: umbunny

*Causes stars to fall from the sky with Multiplying Galactic French Fries* *Erses the letter "A" from exsistnce*
Me: GWH H H! Oril is wesome... But Gngnm Style is wesomer. *Mkes Oril not ble to her Gngnm Style*
Me: My work here is done.
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Date: 06/05/13 9:36 AM
From: makololpop

KAWAII!!!!! I'm SO SO SO sorry that I haven't commented in like forever... I hope you can forgive me. This fanfiction is so AWESOME!!! I LOVED the last episode! Can't wait for the next one! :)

~Le Lali of Lollipops~
Just a fan of Karika, The Savior of the Elements, Okami- Light, Darkness, and Paint Brushes,Comedy Central X, Avatar Randomness A Comedy: Season 2,Sacrifice of Dream Makorra, Leerika, Jack Frost, Hope Estheim, and lollipops!

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Date: 06/01/13 10:46 PM
From: renibee

i just realised in my oc post i once said bendung instead of bending whoops
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Date: 05/31/13 6:38 PM
From: renibee

when is my character going to get introduced? next part or end of this arc?
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Date: 05/28/13 10:41 PM
From: renibee

*drinks hyperspeed potion and forces EVERY music playing device EVER to play gangnam style on continuous loop on max volume*oh and i ate the worlds suplie of frenchfries after burning there was like 100 or so left now theres 0
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Date: 05/28/13 7:25 PM
From: KawaiiGrrl

Meet the Secret Police - Part 1

Kurow: *casually eating cereal when the doorbell rings*

Nanami: I'LL GET IT! I'LL GET IT! I'LL -

Kurow: *opens door*

Nanami: Awww. T.T

???: I'm part of an organization -

Kurow: *closes door*

Okami: *sighs and pushes Kurow out of the door, opening the door* Sorry, he forgot to take his medication today.

???: *ahem* I'm part of an organization called... *shows a badge* the Secret Police. Our members are...

??? 2: *pops out of a cloud of smoke* My name is Mystic K.N!

Manpuku: What's K.N.?

??? 2: It's my degree :3 Kinetic Naturalist!

Lali: *searches* It says here that K.N. stands "Knowledge Nerd," or "Know-It-All."

??? 2: I can cast spells on anyone! So you better watch out, or else.

??? 3: *pops out of a bush* The name's Chill Pinky! If I touch you, then you'll become meerly a statue of ice!

??? 4: *pops out of no where as well* Hey, what's up! Or rather, what's down? I have the ability to make you believe in what I believe!

Okami: That's confusing...

??? 4: Watch and learn, babe. Hey, fat dude over there!

Manpuku: HEY!

??? 4: What do you think about the Secret Police? *pupils turn purple*

Manpuku: I think they're... AWESOME! :D CAN I HAVE YOUR AUTOGRAPH? SIGN MY RAMEN! SIGN MY RAMEN! *holds up bowl of ramen*

??? 4: Sure, kiddo. *signs "Rick Fong."

???: And I'm Kizcan, the leader of the Secret Police. I can throw away your memories, so if you don't want your precious childhood memories destroyed, then you better stay away. We're super heroes, although you probably know that already.

Okami: Great! Maybe we can have brunch some time!

Kizcan: ...No. Well, ya see, we're not here to invite you for... "brunch." We're here the tell you that we came first. We're the original super heroes. And we're not letting noobs like you *points to Manpuku, who is fangirling over his ramen* ruin our reputation as the heroes of this town.

Mystic K.N.: Or else... >:D

Rick Fong: *pinches Okami's cheek* And you don't want anything bad to happen, do you?

Okami: *growls*

Kizcan: Well, we should get going 'cause, y'know. Crime to fight as stuff. Mystic, if you will?

Mystic K.N.: Sure thing, boss! *throws smoke bombs and they disappear*

Orial: ANYONE IS FINE I JUST REALLY WANT TO DATE~! ANYONE IS FINE I JUST REALLY WANT TO DATE~!

*all the boys crowd around her*

Orial: ...It's a song. I'm singing. IT'S A SONG.

Boys: T__T

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Date: 05/28/13 9:41 AM
From: umbunny

@Renebii
Orial: RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWR! *Breaks random planet*
Hoshiko: Thank goodness I have ear plugs. ._.
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Date: 05/18/13 1:20 PM
From: renibee

typo in last comment i ment to say mad not made... -_- oh also *burns french frys so they cant be eaten*
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Date: 05/17/13 9:21 PM
From: renibee

hey ARIEAL *starts singing gangnam style to make her made*op op op op oppa gangnam style what ya gonna do
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Date: 05/14/13 6:36 PM
From: renibee

can we have a tie-in with phineas and ferb
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Date: 05/13/13 7:02 PM
From: fairyretro

i have a skit
Manpuku:she's mine!
Promotheus:no she is mine!
Kurow: She likes me more!
All the boys: NO!
Orial: um,hello,im standing right here
Boys: O_O*starts giving her french fries and breaking gangnam style CDs*
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Date: 05/03/13 12:48 AM
From: renibee

where 11 comments away from 150 10 now
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Date: 04/29/13 8:59 AM
From: makololpop

I'MMMMM BBAAAAACK!!! Sorry I was busy! Loved your episode!!! Can't wait for the next one!

~Le Lali of Lollipops~
Just a fan of Karika, The Savior of the Elements, Okami- Light, Darkness, and Paint Brushes,Comedy Central X, Avatar Randomness A Comedy: Season 2,Sacrifice of Dream Makorra, Leerika, Jack Frost, Hope Estheim, and lollipops!

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Date: 04/24/13 7:45 PM
From: renibee

kawaii? you there??? ooooooooooo its some leftover episode 1 dialog never got to taste it only read it *tastes* wow it really is dry WHO HAS THE FAN FIC LEFTOVER DRY DIOLOG REALLY GOOD BBQ SAUCE this is a little dry
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Date: 04/19/13 8:11 AM
From: renibee

how about the mysterious (at this spot you insert the amount of people in the group at the time) that good?
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Date: 04/18/13 1:31 PM
From: 3seraphim3

KawaiiGrrl:

Nice last script! For a name... How about The Mysterious Okami Society?

Trenton Lee Stewart: Excuse me?

Also, I posted a topic... requesting... something... you might want to do... that starts with a 'd'... ends with an 'e'... has 'oubl' in the middle...

Anyway: For crying out loud, she wants to do a double with you, Kawaii!
Me: #u# *blush*

|-tHe wAy-|

Because I'm only a crack, in this castle of glass... ~Castle of Glass, Linkin Park

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Date: 04/18/13 12:04 AM
From: KawaiiGrrl

Hamburgers and Pineapples Under The Sea : Part 4

KawaiiGrrl: I've been busy with the scary monster called real life. *sweat drop* Also, I've been doing more writing projects as well.

Manpuku: Anyway, let's get back to the story! *in deep narrator voice* So we're in like this big fish tank that's called an ocean -

Lali: We know this already -.- And if anyone reading forgot about what happened last time they can read the last part. ^_^

Manpuku: *in normal voice* BUT I WANT TO USE MY EPIC NARRATOR VOICE T_T

Sandy: So now that we know why Bikini Bottom is in peril, we should form a plan -

Kuni: LET'S KICK PLANKTON OUTA TOWN! BWAHAHAHA! BY THE POWER OF SUSANO, I, KUNI, SHALL DEFEAT THE NOTORIOUS VILLAIN PLANKTON!

Sandy: ...That is not a good plan.

Kurow: I can use my fan girls to attack Plankton.

Prometheus: That's not a wise choice of attack.

Kurow: How come?

Prometheus: The show could get sued for any injuries o_o

Kurow: Oh yeah...

Prometheus: *facepalm*

Nanami: Maybe we should attract their attention to something else.

Sandy: Nanami, that's the best darn idea I've ever heard of! But who'll be the distraction?

*everyone looks at Manpuku*

Manpuku: WHY ME? T_T

Kai-Jin: Because you're our group's scapegoat! Now go out there and distract some plankton! :D

Manpuku: But I need a disguise.

Hyuna: *holds up costume* Already covered ^_^

Manpuku: BUT I HAVEN'T EATEN -

*everyone holds up a variety of food*

Manpuku: ... T_T

Lali: THERE'S NO ESCAPING YOUR FATE! HAHAHAHA! >:D

Manpuku: *sigh* Okay then... *gets costume* I'll go change *leaves scene into changing rooms off set*

*out of no where a pie flies by and hits Hyuna in the face*

Hyuna: *with pie all over her face* CAN'T WE GO WITH ONE EPISODE WITHOUT A PIE TO THE FACE FOR ONCE?

Author Me: Hikari had a better attitude than you sometimes -_-

KawaiiGrrl: GET BACK ON TOPIC.

Author Me: Oh, right. PLANKTON COME OVER IT'S YOUR TURN ON STAGE!

Plankton: BWAHAHAHA! Evil Guy, this is epicer than when your recipe of chicken pot pie! >:D

Kai-Jin: THAT'S PROVES THAT EVIL GUY IS EVIL. Only evil people eat chicken pot pie!

(Author Note: No, they don't. I personally love chicken pot pie ^_^ Mmm... chicken...)

Plankton: Oh, and also, thank you for mention chicken pot pie because I HAVE THE ULTIMATE WEAPON FOR DESTRUCTION >:D *loads Pie Shooter 9000 with... CARROTS?!?!?!*

Hyuna: o_o C-CARROTS?

Nanami: Well, the series is doomed...

*suddenly there's random wailing*

Lali: What the hay is dat?

Hyuna: People stil say that? Wow.

Nanami: That wailing is hurting mah ears T_T

Okami: I think we should investigate *uses awesome doggy wind powers to fly*

Orial: NOOOOOO! NOT GANGNAM STYLE! *breaks cake into crumbs*

Manpuku: HEY I'M DONE CHANGING INTO THIS CARROT COSTUME - *sees destroyed cake* NOOO! WHY? It was so YOUNG T_T

Lali: *hums gangnam style*

Orial: I'LL BREAK YOU -_-

Lali: ... *backs away slowly and use distraction powers*

Orial: *sees box of fries* OMG I LOVE FRENCH FRIES :D *eats French Fries*

Manpuku: *sees Orial for the first time* Ah... she's kinda cute... AND SHE'S THE FIRST GIRL TO EAT MORE THAN ME *O*

Plankton: *ahem* Forgot about me already?

Everyone: Oh, yeah right ^_^

Orial: DON'T WORRY, GUYS! With the power of epicness I shall defeat him! >:D

Plankton: And how will you do that?

Orial: WITH DIS~! *takes out box labeled Whale Caller*

Plankton: W-Whale Caller? Is it real O_O

Orial: Wanna find out?

Plankton: NOOOO! *drops Pie Shooter 9000 and runs away*

Manpuku: Okay, we're done, SO CAN WE GO EAT SOMETHING FROM THE SURFACE WORLD NOW?

Nanami: *gets hit by a really burnt pie* WHAT? PLANKTON RAN AWAY!

Nanami: *a crack in her helmet so water is seeping in* UM... I think I need help o_o

Kurow: Hey, don't panic. You can breathe underwater, right?

Author Me: Actually, she doesn't have that power yet... *someone is walking past and spots Nanami*

???: Oh! Do you need help? *Nanami nods head* I have just the thing ^_^ *takes out a blue necklace* Here. This lets you breathe underwater when you touch it. *gives to Nanami*

Nanami: *breathes* T-Thank you so much...?

???: Michin ^_^

Nanami: Thank you Michin! Now to deal with Evil Guy *glares at evil guy*

Evil Guy: Eheheheh... *nervous smile* Well, now that I'm thinking about it, I work better with someone else. *runs away*

Everyone: So this is the end of the episode? FINALLY? AFTER SEVERAL MONTHS?

KawaiiGrrl: *walks away slowly*

Lali: LET'S ALL DO THE POLKKA TO CELEBRATE!

*everyone randomly dances to a Finnish song*

Okami: Hey! I have an idea! We should name our group instead of just being called "Super Hero People Stuff Bacon of Mythical Beasts and Carrots and Lots of Food."

Prometheus: Who gave us that name? *everyone points to Manpuku*

Hyuna: Leave comments below suggesting names!

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Date: 04/16/13 8:02 AM
From: renibee

I WANTZ MOREZ!!!!!!!! PLEASE MAKE MORE BEFORE I RELEASE KISEKI ON YOU i gave her super crazy catus juice and made her think everyone is a pikachu *holds up cage with kiseki going crazy* DONT MAKE ME DO IT!!!!
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