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Date: 12/07/12 6:33 PM
From: KawaiiGrrl

Well, here it goes again. Posting fan fiction after fan fiction when it gets deleted. Maybe this one will survive. >_<

In the small town of Evilville, there is (obviously) tons of evil as if you didn't know that from the name. Anyway, the town needs a hero so the evil people will stop doing evil stuff because evil stuff is evil...

Hyuna: *walking on street eating a chocolate bar when Random guy comes out of a bush* GAH!

Random Theif: *takes out book* According to my Evil Handbook of Evil, the worst thing I can do at my level is steal chocolate bars from little girls so -

Hyuna: I'm twelve. That's not little.

Random Theif: Anyway, I'M GOING TO STEAL THAT CHOCOLATE BAR FROM YOU SO GIVE ME IT OR ELSE I'LL ATTACK YOU WITH MY BOOK!

Hyuna: ...

Random Theif: Very well then. *ahem* Brushes and paints, power and complaints, her little friend will get to paint and she'll get to faint. She'll have a great trouble because it isn't all light and bubblesr. She'll lose her faith and everything in between. Have a good life, you dumb little tween! *disappears*

Author Me: Yes, terrible poetry. No fan fic of mine is complete without it.

Hyuna: Well, that was weird BUT I STILL HAVE MY CHOCOLATE BAR SO THAT'S ALL WHAT REALLY MATTERS! :D *continues eating chocolate bar*

At Friend's House...

Nanami: Hi Hyuna!

Hyuna: Hey Nanami! The weirdest thing happened.

Nanami: What happened? Did anyone try to tease you? THEY'LL HAVE TO LEARN WITH MY FIREBENDING! *starts punching the air*

Hyuna: Um... no? Someone tried to steal my chocolate bar.

Nanami: OH IT'S ON NOW...

Hyuna: The weirdest part was that he said a weird poem. Something about painting. I don't even paint!

Nanami: I do! Want me to teach -

Hyuna: NO.

Nanami: I was going to ask to teach your DOG. What did you think I was going to say?

Hyuna: Um... nothing.

Nanami: Okay! COME ON DOGGY! *Hyuna's dog comes in* Let's teach you how to paint! ^_^

Hyuna: Um, are you sure this won't get the animal people down the street call the police?

Nanami: Positive! :D

ONE TORTUROUS FUN PAINTING LESSON LATER

Nanami: Bye Hyuna!

Hyuna: Um, why did you dip the dog's tail in paint?

Nanami: It's the only way it could paint!

Hyuna: Umm... see you later? *leaves house* Poor Okami, you must be really tired.

Okami: No kidding!

Hyuna: O____O

Okami: What?

Hyuna: D-DOGS ARE NOT SUPPOSED TO TALK...

Okami: Hmm... good point. So what do youu want me to say, then?

Hyuna: ...

Okami: Okay then. Moo.

Hyuna: Y-you're not a cow. O_O

Okami: But I thought... nevermind. I'm hungry. Can you give me a bone?

Hyuna: O_O Okay... as soon as we go home I'll feed you.

OH SNAP! Talking dogs? THAT'S THE BEST SUPERPOWER EVER. Ya, not really. But a better part is coming soon! :3 Sorry for the dry dialogue. Is it dry? *tastes dialogue* Ya... kind of. Anyway, stay tuned for part 2!

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Date: 04/08/13 6:36 PM
From: KawaiiGrrl

@ Lali

Okay, then. I won't for you and all of my readers It's because I've been working on other things for another account not on this website (and to be honest I'm actually procastinating on this T_T I'm sowwie!) But maybe when I post it I'll tell you about it :3

_^*KawaiiGrrl*^_

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Date: 04/05/13 1:37 AM
From: makololpop

NOOO!!!! AAAAAAAH!!! *FREAKS OUT TEN FOLD*

Kawaii, you can't just leave!! You're one of my AFAACM (Awesome Funny Amazing Avatar Comedy Models)! I look up to you gurl! Don't you be walking out on me grrl! *shakes head and holds finger in the air* UH-UH. You're awesome. Nuff said. DOOOOON'T LEAVEEEEEE!!! *sobs* :(

~Le Lali of Lollipops~
Just a fan of Karika, The Savior of the Elements, Okami- Light, Darkness, and Paint Brushes,Comedy Central X, Avatar Randomness A Comedy: Season 2,Sacrifice of Dream Makorra, Leerika, Jack Frost, Hope Estheim, and lollipops!

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Date: 03/29/13 1:11 PM
From: renibee

if you retire at least make a EPIC EPIC CIPE*epic backwards!*EPIC finale with all the characters the most shocking plot twist ever and a saticfying ending 		reply
Date: 03/28/13 9:24 PM
From: KawaiiGrrl

@ renibee

I have no idea why I put that o_o Maybe I was planning an epic plot twist or something but I forgot.

Nanami: Ya, she tends to forget things quite often.

Manpuku: *reading mail* Bills, bills, check for ten million dollars, bills and - Hey Hyuna! There's this letter from this K-Pop star you've sent a letter to about three weeks ago -

Hyuna: OMGOMG GIVE IT~!! *reads letter* AH~! *faints from hapiness*

Everyone: *facepalm*

KawaiiGrrl: SOMEONE GET HYUNA SOME POPTARTS TO WAKE HER UP!

Author Me: Roger! *gets some super-frozen poptarts that would take a long time to unfreeze and puts them in the toaster* Now to wait ten years~! :3

KawaiiGrrl: ...*facepalm*

KawaiiGrrl
Don't panic, but I'm actually thinking about retiring from writing on the boards o_o *gets cactus-juiced by ten thousand people*

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Date: 03/27/13 4:09 PM
From: renibee

in the poem thing in part one what does it mean by "she'll get to faint she'll have a great trouble"? 		reply
Date: 03/24/13 9:17 PM
From: KawaiiGrrl

@ Lali

It's okay :3 I've been busy myself >.<

@ renibee

I already have the continuation started so yep I can't write that much of fan fiction because I've been busy with schoolwork (WHYYY?! T_T) and when I make it to the weekend, I have to go out of town for 90% of the day (including both Saturday and Sunday) recently due to more personal problems -.- Life's been certainly insane. But I'll write as often as I can for you guys~! :3

_^*KawaiiGrrl*^_
Had an unexpected hiatus, I know -_- My unpredictableness is "OVER 9000!!".

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Date: 03/23/13 10:38 PM
From: renibee

PLEAAAAAASE MAKE MOOOOOORE 		reply
Date: 03/20/13 10:38 PM
From: makololpop

YAY I LOVED IT!! Sorry for not commenting on this earlier. I feel bad. I LOVED IT!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!!!

~Le Lali of Lollipops~
Just a fan of Karika, The Savior of the Elements, Okami- Light, Darkness and Paint Brushes, Comedy Central X, Avatar Randomness A Comedy: Season 2,Sacrifice of Dream, Makorra, Leerika, Jack Frost, Hope Estheim, and lollipops!

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Date: 03/12/13 6:48 PM
From: KawaiiGrrl

@ renibee

I'm sowwie T_T It's just a normal thing for me because y'know must of the people here are girls *facepalm* I'm really weird sometimes...

@ rayka

So you're applying for a guest star, right? ^_^ If you aren't, I'm sorry but I can't accept anymore T_T This fan fic's getting full! T_T

_^*KawaiiGrrl*^_

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Date: 03/12/13 2:59 PM
From: rayka

name:kate
age:13
bending:earth/metal
specialpower: turns into panther
weird fact: (chibis x) also shes tuff for girl/age
petpeeves: any one who thinks little of her cause girl/age, when someone gets into her head (not literaly but if so definetly yes! :)), when someone messes whith little brother (next one), and her weakness.
weakness: temper abit, little bro, and sme people who kinda get in her head though only afew can.
animal sidekick:herself
additional info: shes protective of little bro, orphan, takes charge and good planer/fighter, and has a scar on her left cheek (someone got in her head).
name:will
age:9 1/2
bending:water
superpower:he can bloodbend any time.weird fact: he is alergic to drinking fresh water so any thing or even saltwater just not freshwater.petpeeve: not ever being taken seiriously though hes never serious, and that people bully him alot. weakness:his sillyness and that he jumps first thinks later.(im a okami lover/player t)animal a falcon 		reply
Date: 03/11/13 7:28 PM
From: renibee

my O.C. is a boy -_- 		reply
Date: 03/10/13 3:58 PM
From: KawaiiGrrl

@ renibee

She's coming soon! And fairyretro's as well. For Nanami, I'm have an idea and the next part shall be the episode! :D

_^*KawaiiGrrl*^_
C'mon let the crazy show, because if you don't life woould be so dull, y'know.

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Date: 03/10/13 3:28 PM
From: rayka

stop trying to combine okami ps theres okami then thers okamiden. but stop trying to combine avatar and okami it doesnt fitt! it weird. 		reply
Date: 03/10/13 11:41 AM
From: renibee

when can my O.C. be introduced? AND WHY DOES NANAMI NEED TO BREATH UNDERWATER LIKE THAT SHES A MERMAID its like the firebending 		reply
Date: 03/08/13 10:56 PM
From: KawaiiGrrl

OH YEAAA~! Finished the part! :D

Pineapples and Hamburgers Under the Sea : Part 3

*our heroes are swimming down to Bikini Bottom with Sandy, wearing helmets so they can breathe*

Okami: I wonder what we're gonna see down here...

Nanami: And I wonder when I'M GOING TO GET MY POWERS, AUTHOR ME!

Author Me: ... *slowly swims away from Nanami*

Hyuna: Wait, is this going to be one of those episodes where Author Me just puts random things at random times and watch our reaction?

Random Blonde Dude: *wearing helmet as well* HARK! THE CALL OF THE FANGIRLS, THE PIE, THE FISH! They summon me forth for a random cameo! Waka, Kawaii's gift to fangirls, is here! Bonjour! :D

Author Me: OMGOMGOMG CAN I HAVE YOUR AUTOGRAPH YOU'RE LIKE SO CHEESY BUT YOUR LIKE SO EPIC AND HAWT OMGOMGOMG *squeal*

Random Blonde Dude: o_o... *swims away*

Author Me: NUUU!! COME BACK, WAKA! T_T

Hyuna: Yep, it's one of those episodes.

Prometheus: Why is it taking so long to sink down to the Bikini Bottom?

Sandy: Don't call me dude, partner. -_- Also, it's taking so long because of the mass of the water is greater than out own as we go down, then the law of terminal velocity comes to effect and as we go down, the electrons and protons comes smashing together and, with enough energy and the perfect technology that has not been invented yet so far, cause the Earth and Sun to align, creating a wormhole in the process and... *keeps talking all sciencey stuff*

Prometheus: I regret I asked. T_T

Lali: Water, water everywhere yet not a drop to drink!

Kai-Jin: Why does that quote sound so familiar...?
*a book entitled "A Rime of the Ancient Mariner" floats by*

Kai-Jin: Oh! I remember! It's from Finding Nemo! :D

Kurow: *facepalm*

Sandy: We're here, folks!

*Bikini Bottom is in ruins*

Hyuna: Wow, this place is like Atlantis!

Lali: Actually, not really. *points to a shiny massive busy city with lights and skyscrapers underwater*

Hyuna: How do you know it's Atlantis? o_o

Lali: *points to massive sign with giant lights that say "WELCOME TO ATLANTIS! Except for Timmy Turner and Cosmo."* (anyone get that reference? :D)

Okami: What happened this place?

Sandy: Good question. Well, Plankton and this guy with a bald haircut and evil mustache and cape teamed up to -

Prometheus: Wait... what type of bald cut is it? Shiny bald, or bald bald?

Sandy: Shiny bald.

Prometheus: OMG IT'S EVIL GUY!!

Kagu: Does all the evil villains have to be bald and have a mustache?

Author Me: WHO DOESN'T LOVE CLICHES? :D

*all the cliche haters of the world come with Pie Shooter 1000s in their hands/paws*

Author Me: ... Um, WHO DOESN'T HATE CLICHES? *nervous laugh*

*all the cliche haters leave*

Sandy: *ahem* Anyway, the bald dude you call "Evil Guy" has teamed up with Plankton to rule Bikini Bottom. They're looking for the Krabby Patty Queen!

Everyone: Krabby Patty Queen?

Sandy: Why, today's National Krabby Patty Day, folks! Every year, there is a contest for who will be the Krabby Patty Queen! It's an important day for Bikini Bottom, and if Plankton and Evil Guy capture the Krabby Patty Queen the holiday would be ruined! T_T

Kuni: It's just a holiday.

Sandy: Oh, did I mention that the Krabby Patty Queen wears a Krabby Patty Crown which contains the secret code to the secret recipe?

Kuni: Whut happens if he gets the recipe? It's just a hamburger -

Kai-Jin: DON'T YOU DARE SAY THAT ABOUT KRABBY PATTIES! *glare*

Kuni: ...

Kagu: Wow, this place is a wreck!

*we finally touch the ground as everything is a total wreck*

Sandy: Wait... where the flumpool is Manpuku?

Manpuku: *eating so many Krabby Patties* Whut?

Random Dude: NUUU! THAT WAS THE LAST KRABBY PATTY! WE'RE DOOMED! DOOMED! DOOMED I SAY!

Everyone: *facepalm*

Random Fish: MY ARM! MY AAARM!!

Hyuna: OH MY GOURD! What's wrong with your arm? Is it hurting? Is it throbbing with pain? DID IT TURN INTO A PIE?

Random Fish: MY ARM! is really strong :3

Hyuna: -_-

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Date: 03/02/13 7:41 PM
From: fairyretro

@kawii
sure! 		reply
Date: 03/01/13 9:27 PM
From: KawaiiGrrl

@ fairyretro and Lali

So, should I make a new topic to discuss our comedy? :3

~*KawaiiGrrl*~

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Date: 03/01/13 7:00 PM
From: makololpop

@fairyretro AND KawaiiGrrl:
Oh. My. Squash. I am really flattered! Are you sure you guys would want me to write a comedy with you guys? I'm not that funny and I don't write very good... so yeah... are you sure? I would love to do it I just don't know if I'm qualified... am I? I don't know...

If we are going to do it then maybe we could each pick an Avatar animal and write from their perspective when it's our turn to write an episode. If I'm qualified enough to write with you masters, I would pick Pabu or Appa... They're SO CUTE!!! :3 KAWAII!! :3 *O*

Thanks you guys rock! Can't wait for the next episode Kawaii! :) I understand. School. Ugh. It's a killer ma'am!

~Le Lali of Lollipops~
Just a fan of Karika, The Savior of the Elements,Okami- Light, Darkness, and Paint Brushes, Comedy Central X, Avatar Randomness A Comedy: Season 2!!!, High School., Makorra, Leerika, Jack Frost, Hope Estheim, and lollipops!

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Date: 02/28/13 5:58 PM
From: KawaiiGrrl

@ renibee

What time is it? It's... EXPLAINING TIME~! With Author Me and KawaiiGrrl! *

Well, Author Me is the Me writing the story (which is kind of like a second me who does the writing) and KawaiiGrrl is the Me who is more "down-to-earth" (ex: making sure the post isn't too long, or making sure Author Me doesn't use up the entire episode talking about her costume *glare*)

Author Me: Hey! It's an important part fo the story!Almost as important as the entire show!

KawaiiGrrl: ...Author Me?

Author Me: Yesh? :3

KawaiiGrrl: *shows plushie of Pikachu* You won't get this back for a week for invading this comment.

Author Me: *groan*

KawaiiGrrl: TWO weeks...

Author Me: ... -_-

KawaiiGrrl: Do I have to make it three?

Author Me: *leaves*

KawaiiGrrl: This, kids, is why you don't eat more than one pack of candy a day. :3

~*KawaiiGrrl*~

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Date: 02/27/13 9:10 PM
From: renibee

can their be more? oh also i forgot to say this YOUR NOT AUTHOR ME?!?! AHHH WHO IS AUTHOR ME? you have some explaining to do oh and also i have a idea ok so the characters have to go on some generic quest but the person who gave it to the group was evil and trapped them in a video game 		reply