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My Attempt at an Avatar Comedy!

Date: 12/22/12 1:31 PM
From: zukorox8

So this is my first fan fiction ever, and since I'm not much of an action or romance writer I am writing a comedy. I hope everyone likes it!

Episode 1-
Me: Hello everyone! Welcome to the- *huge crash* What is- *another huge crash*
*Aang and Sokka come running out from backstage screaming like little girls*
Me: What on earth is going on back there!?
Aang: (panting) Toph thinks she's melon lord again! She's trying to capture us all!
Sokka: Yeah, and she took ALL of the meat! What are we gonna do? I think I might just die without it! *starts crying*
Me: *rolls eyes* I'll handle this.
(I walk backstage and Toph is surrounded my flaming melons, and has Zuko tied to a chair)
Toph: Mwahahaha! Bow down to Melon Lord!
Zuko: That was a one time thing! Now untie me and give me back my bag!
Toph: Never! Mwahahaha!
Me: *looks at bag* Zuko, that's my purse! Why do you have it?
Zuko: It matches my scar. I just wanna accessorize!
Toph: *stops laughing* Wait, you're carrying her purse? *starts laughing uncontrollably again*
Me: *face palms*
(Azula comes out of nowhere)
Azula: I will destroy all of you!!!
Toph: Hey that's my job!
*They start fighting and rocks and fire go everywhere*
Katara: Does this mean the show can be over now? I have to re-loop my hair.
Me: *sighs* Yeah. See you next time on Avatar Co- *camera catches fire*
*static, then blank screen

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Date: 06/18/13 12:35 AM
From: xomadtayxo

LILY! WHERE ARE YOUU??!!

Pretty sure that'll get your attention.

-X-MadTay

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Date: 06/16/13 6:09 PM
From: MBAVFan7

Lilly please continue!
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Date: 06/02/13 8:55 PM
From: mbavfan7

Lilly are you here?
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Date: 05/26/13 2:23 PM
From: IKarika446

LILLEH! WHERE ARE YOOU?
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Date: 05/26/13 1:13 PM
From: mbavfan7

tur609,

Can my oc Kaji be friends with Kuhuna? They have a similar past, maybe they can both live in the same Earth Kingdom village and be friends? Here's her bio:

Name: Kaji
Age: 16 (same as Zuko)
Bender: Fire
Eyes: Hazel
Hair: Red, long and wavy
Personality: Kind, friendly, brave and strong when she needs to be, protective of her friends, family, and home, trustworthy
Clothes: At first Earth Kingdom clothes- A dark green vest, long light green pants, a dark green skirt over it, no shoes-then Fire Nation- a red short tank top with one strap (like Katara?s), long orange pants, a red skirt over it, and red shoes.
Background: She was born in the Fire Nation, but her parents gave her to a Water Tribe family. Once her new family found out she was a fire bender, she was taken to the Earth Kingdom. There she met another family, one that loved her, even though she was a fire bender. She was trained to use bow and arrows (so she could fight without bending) She later found a baby dragon, and took care of it, which turned out to be her best friend, and her dragon, Lightning.
Extra: She has a blue dragon named Lightning
Crush: Zuko

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Date: 05/24/13 10:45 PM
From: tur609

can you add another person? please!?
Name: kuhuna [cu-who-na]
gender: boy
age: 13
element: fire
personality: serious and ready for excitement
story: his father was originally from the fire nation. He fled to an earth kingdom village for safety. The family passes down duel swords each generation. Though not always knowing it kuhuna was a fire bender. His parents were destroyed when he was 5years old. Both parents were non-benders. When his parents were destroyed he was sent to live with another lady in the village doing hard field work. He came in season 1 the episode before jet. He taught aang how to master fighting techniques and tutored sokka most of the time. He fell in love with toph at first sight. Though not always knowing it kuhuna was a fire bender which they found out after zuko and sokka returned from the boiling rock.
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Date: 05/20/13 11:56 PM
From: xomadtayxo

Lily!!!! Where is this last episode you said we'd get?!?!?!

-MadTay

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Date: 05/12/13 12:38 AM
From: xomadtayxo

Lily! Nooooo!

-MadTay

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Date: 05/11/13 5:05 PM
From: SSchickvil

NOOOOO!!
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Date: 05/10/13 6:04 PM
From: CosbyRock

The last one?!?!....maybe I can start my comedy sooner than expected...? I SHALL ONLY DO IT TO CARRY ON THE MEMORY OF THIS AWESOMNESS!!! It'll be horrible compared to yours, though >.<

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Date: 05/10/13 5:01 PM
From: IKarika446

@Lilleh:
WAAA! Crud, now I gotta go find a comedy as good as yours TALK ABOUT MISSION IMPOSSIBLE!
IKarika446
Together together, a sad Avatar Fangirl forever..
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Date: 05/09/13 3:39 PM
From: taytay239

WHAAAAA? LAST ONE?! AWWW!! Well at least you'll be around still, i guess.

BlairBear

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Date: 05/08/13 10:51 PM
From: lilyhp8

Hey, everyone! I'll have the next episode up soon. Sadly, it'll probably be the last one. I have a lot of homework, and I'm moving soon too so I just don't have time to keep up with this fanfic. But on the bright side, I'll probably make a new story this summer! Thank you all sooooooo much for reading this, it's really been fun!

New eppie soon!

Lily

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Date: 05/08/13 9:37 PM
From: MBAVFan7

Here's another character as a guest star, u don't need to put her in if u don't want.

Name: Mizu
Age: 15
Bender: Yes, water
Looks: Long straight blonde hair, bright blue eyes, clothes are like Katara?s
Extra: Is Katara?s BFF, she owns a Saber Tooth Moose Lion as a pet, she is thinking about getting highlights (She can offer Zuko her Hot Hues (if u haven?t heard of them, their just hair highlighters) and Zuko can take her girly colors (purple and pink) and leave her with more boyish colors (green and blue)

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Date: 05/05/13 7:02 PM
From: xomadtayxo

I could've swore I replied to this already... *looks around suspiciously*

Funny episode, though! I'm kinda nervous about what Zuko is planning lol.

-MadTay

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Date: 05/04/13 6:12 PM
From: TayTay239

@Kitty

Oh, you can call me Blair And ohhhh! I thought it was some random comment about Lily plucking her eyebrows so I was like ummmmm. haha okie dokie then.

BlairBear

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Date: 05/04/13 9:40 AM
From: IKarika446

HAPPY 180, LILLEH!
-Karika
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Date: 05/04/13 7:18 AM
From: CosbyRock

*Has a wagon of cookies behind* Maybe....As long as Anasaki doesn't find out I have them, yes.

There's always someone who has to come and ruin everything, isn't there?!~Anasaki

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Date: 05/03/13 9:02 PM
From: lilyhp8

@Kitty

You can do both! But either way it still hurts lol.

@Blair

I love Sail!!! :D

Lily

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Date: 05/03/13 5:17 PM
From: taytay239

@ Kitty

What? Eyebrows?????

@Lily

Yes luv the new siggy and haha I got Beyonce songs stuck in my head all day, everyday bc I listen to "Beyonce Radio" except I have the song "Sail" stuck in my head right now.

BEYONCE FAN~~aka BlairBear

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