Face The Nations
I'm back! Making my second true fanfic, I don't count the Avatar March Madness Tournament. But I finished "Pai Sho Me The Way" a while ago, and I thought of another idea, and I had fun making the first one, so here's another. I hope everyone likes it.
Face the Nations is based on the future of the Avatar Universe, but is set with all the technologies of 2013, since I can only make a story about one of the futures. I don't want to guess about the technology to come. The story takes place mostly in the Firenation, since the Avatar, Ron, is originally from the Firenation. He will face many external problems from the public, since everything is extremely publicized. So, he will have every eye in the world on him, watching every decision. Also, there will be some spirits involved, one that is known from ATLA.
I do like when people post back, so I know who's reading, it could just be "Hi" or secrets you want to tell me. Maybe guy troubles. I'm a guy, I'm open for discussion. I might ask questions too. But one thing, I will probably post more often if I see people are there, reading. It helps motivate. Anyways, I hope it meets your expectations, or supersedes them.
The Penguin: I have more important things to worry about than beating you at basketball, like a season of varsity basketball. Sorry, I'll stop.
-Blind stars of fortune, each have several rays, On the wings of maybe, down in birds of prey. Kind of makes me feel sometimes, didn't have to grow, But as the eagle leaves the nest, it's got so far to go ("Ten Years Gone" by Led Zeppelin)
I just realized what your asking! AND that is offencive man! just kidding but really theres like a bunch of girls at my schoolwho can beat you at bball blindfolded and one on one(including me meowahha)!! no joke!! but heres a more seariousisisis <-(is that even a word?) question. "how badley will we(by we I mean I) beat you 50-0 or 50-0?" multi-ply choice question choose wisely ^-^ (and don't do that stupid thing ex. "c:none of the above" cause you cant just cant 0__0 ) no offence to you ^-^ ohh just got out smarted *chants* im an idiot im an idiot who just out smarted you
Sereen2002/2002neereS: No offence to girls and basketball, but what inspired a NICKname referencing it? Sorry if it sounds rude but that's a serious question. To make up for it, here's a new part.
*Chapter 24 ~ Finding This, Looking for That ~ Part3*
Well, we went out looking for Ron, hoping that we could track down Koh, but instead we found Koh, while tracking down Ron. I stood there ready for battle and ready to find a way to put Koh back where he belongs, the spirit world. But how? Koh was starting for Hossa when Mikki then peacefully offers, ``Great Spirit, please leave this world alone. We have tried working with many spirits, and I am sorry if we do not do this well enough. We can come to an agreement without fighting.``
Just after, Koh shot fire from his mouth on Ron`s face that I missed so much. It`s funny to see the face of just the guy that I want to be here but not have him. And as I was thinking that, Fan blocked the fire and fanned it off, shooting more back at him. ``Fan!`` I yelled, ``Don`t try to destroy him, that won`t help.`` He nodded. Just as we were ready to make another move, Koh disappeared.
``Well, I guess we dodged one there,`` I said, unaware that he could go into the spirit world and reappear wherever he wanted. And maybe I jinxed us but he then appeared right behind Hossa. He felt this and tossed him, lifting the rock behind his left shoulder. Koh was flying through the air for at least 20 feet and landed on his front. He got up and was set to attack, and it seemed he wouldn`t stop until he got a face.
Koh charged for fan, and Fan did his own Oley, stepping out of the way and covering Koh in a sheet of fire (which didn`t have any effect on him). It was like he was fighting a bull-pig. And as Koh moved from his slight embarrassment, I saw Ron in the back. I shouted in excitement, ``RON!`` And just as I said that Koh disappeared and reappeared on my back without me even noticing. He then grabbed me and held my arms down.
``Rose!`` Everyone yelled. I couldn`t move and I was a little scared if I could keep my composure.
Ron spoke firmly and clearly to Koh, ``Koh, put her down. You don`t want to do this.`` I could sense his deep emotions filled with desperation and anger.
Koh looked at him and spoke, ``Young Avatar, I am the face stealer, of course I want to do this.`` He then turned back to me with his serious blue face, took my mask off and waited for me to show emotion. I was keeping cool but I could tell Ron wasn`t because I felt the ground shaking. Ron had his face back, and when he opened his eyes they were glowing.
``This is not happening now!`` He composedly stated. Ron started bending the air between Koh and me, and separated us. I was now free, and saw Koh being picked up by the air and being tossed within Ron`s reach. Ron bended water from the street tree, and began swirling it around Koh, as it lit up like lights on New Year`s Eve. As all of the water around Koh lit up, he dissolved into pixels and never went back there. Ron whispered with many voices, ``Go in peace, Koh,`` as his whole face slowly left. As Ron started falling to his knees, I caught him and thanked him with a kiss on his cheek.
``Rose,`` he whispered, ``I`m sorry. I got myself lost when searching for the spiritual guide. I would have been here earlier if I knew that I could feel connections pretty easily with some Avatar powers I didn`t know about.`` I just smiled after hearing this.
Great chapter Dave!! The Team Avatar(Squad, I know...) is amazing at this moment(I'm not saying that it wasn't before) Anyway, I just hav to say that I've read the chapter several days ago and totally forgot about commenting on it!
Seraphibian : Whoa, whoa, whoa...Team Avatar? This is not another Team Avatar. Fan states a couple of times that this is the Avatar Squad. If Fan saw that...pssh...you don't wanna know. But thank you, I had/have big plans with this SQUAD.
-And I know, I know, ("Ain't No Sunshine" by Bill Withers)
First, Happy Thanksgiving! I would like to say a few Avatar related things I'm thankful for: Mike and Bryan and the crew working so hard on making such a great series as a whole, you guys on the board, Aang/Korra/Wan and Gaang/Gang saving the world, and Puggie for the great double we workin on (Watch for it's mention in this part *it's my favorite in this*) Anyways, 'ere it is.
*Chapter 24 ~ Finding This, Looking for That ~ Part 2*
We were busy walking the street together, for we made a rule that we could not be more than 15 feet from each other just in case. We all had protective masks, and Fan took this as a joke by wearing an Amon mask. I turned to him, ``Fan, did you really have to wear an Amon mask?``
He turned and nodded his head, ``It`s the only one that looks flamin`. It`s not fair that one man had to ruin such a good look. . . And yes, I`m bring back flamin`.``
Fan goes against so many things I stand for, but he was a good guy in the end so we moved on. Just then my sister abruptly stopped. She said, ``Wait. I feel a disturbance in the natural flow of energy.`` She closed her eyes and looked for a feeling, ``Yes, there is some spiritual energy this way,`` she said, pointing ahead and around the corner. I wanted to run there, but I took a couple strides before looking back and seeing the fear in everyone`s body.
When we got to the corner we saw Koh face to face with the valet man of a fancy restaurant. This man was alright it seemed but I called out as Hossa blocked the man and Koh from seeing each other, ``Please Koh, go away, and leave this man in peace.``
*This is Ron*
I was thinking to myself even more, and walking very slowly because I was scared of getting more lost. What did that voice first say? I knew it was meant to be helpful, but what was it and how could it help? ``I wish Satori was here to help,`` I said.
``Let`s see, she said something about everything. And how they are. . . They are, the same. Or something. Everything is the same: What does that mean? I know that`s not true; this tree,`` I said pointing to it, ``is not the same as me. Sure, I guess there are some things we have together; we both breathe and are from the Firenation. You could say that we`re connected.`` I stopped at that word, ``That`s it! Everything is connected!``
I was so proud that I remembered; it was just on the tip of my tongue, but even still, I was not sure how those words could help. ``So what if everything has a connection? They`re not literally connected, are they?`` I gave it more thought before taking another step (I was so deep in thought that I couldn`t move), ``Well, most everything I see is grounded on Earth. I can feel a lot of it. But the air! . . . Well, some part of everything is in the air. Everything that is not on Earth. . . Well, there`s gotta be some energy or something, gravity? But gravity is not the same in different solar systems. . . But I guess we`re all part of the same universe. Huh, now, look at where I am, talking about universes! Who would ever put that much thought into something like universes? Ha, next, I`m gonna make a story about different universes or something, pssh!``
I gathered myself, ``Everything is connected,`` I thought while touching the tree. I felt a path light up and it brought me to the feeling of the scenery of my Avatar squad and Koh. I gasped, and started for this path.
Anyways, I don't want to make you girls wait too long so since I got to the 2nd part here's the 1st. Hope you like it!
*Chapter 24 ~ Finding This, Looking for That ~ Part 1*
Um, so sharing a room with Ron since this whole Avatar deal has been more than interesting. He screams, he shouts, he sleep walks, and for the first time he left and I don`t think he came back. When I got to the kitchen for our squad`s daily breakfast, Ron was not there, and that was kinda off because he`s an early riser. Ron was definitely gone, but I hadn`t had my breakfast yet so it didn`t hit me. Hossa brought that to my attention, ``Ron isn`t up yet? He always wakes up earlier than you.``
``Let me finish my breakfast,`` I said at first thought, then looked up and saw the seriousness in all of their faces. ``Um, actually no. He isn`t here?``
``We were going to go out into the city and protect people from Koh, and maybe learn a weakness or two. We`re kind of worried.`` Rose then added, ``We should look for him.``
*Ron is back, speaking (writing)*
I came back to reality, and Satori was gone. I was now fully aware of my being, but I had no clue where I was. It was some forest, and by the feelings of it there was no end. I punched the ground to get a better feel of where I was and I felt something far, probably east. I asked myself, thinking hard back, ``How do I get out?`` I felt like I was inside my head having a conversation with myself as I smoothly walked over the sticks, twigs, tall grass, and bushes along the way.
I then heard a voice, like the forest was talking, ``Everything is connected.``
I looked around and called, ``Satori?`` No one answered. I got back to the conversation with myself, ``What was that? I must be imagining.``
``No, I am a part of you.``
``OKAY! That`s it!`` I yelled. ``I know I heard something,`` I calmly said to myself, ``Is that you, Avatar Han?``
``Sure, you could call me that,`` a woman`s voice said, ``but that`s not completely correct.``
I kept talking with myself, but no one was answering anymore. I wish I knew then what I know now, because Ravaa could have really helped.
Oh and bball.... If you want to see the ending to the first part of the epic of Avatar Han (There may or may not be a second part), I reposted the entire story under the title ~A Nation in Turmoil~, and this time I'm going to finish it.... In fact I'm almost finished with it.