Hello everybody on the Avatar boards! I know I said that I'll do a small series, prequel to my old fanfiction but I decided to postpone it and come up with this story!
It's about the second Avatar after Korra, Kanade, and the ugly truth behind her family, self and role.
I'm going to accept some characters...
1 sister and 1 brother for Kanade (sister older)
2 girls friends of Kanade (every element you want)
4 Council members (exept Firenation)
and any other character you want that will maybe appear at some moment for help or something!
Thank you! and Prologue will be up asap!
- Reia ~If the king does not lead, how can he expect his sabordinates to follow?
You'll make it I'm sure.
The two last chapters of LoK gave me some inspiration to write the next chapters and settle the plot thing. So because I think I have to explain the time setting...
Korra died when she was 20 and the next Avatar was a boy from the Earth Kingdom. He did a terrible thing that Korra wanted to prevent but the people unaware of the consequences let it pass. That thing that he did has major impact in the story. He died when he was 20 too and that brings us to Kanade who has to correct his mistake.
Thanks and wait for shockers! I don't know when but there will be some of them
)*U*( CUCUMBER SOUP )*U*( -And that was my new random siggy!
I was sitting on the couch watching TV from the window. There was someone at that appartment that had a TV so I was watching quietly while Kimi was prepairing a poor dinner.
The programm suddenly changed and a young woman appeared on the screen. '' The police arrested two benders today near the Water Tribe Cultural Center. One of the got arrested for vandalism and the other for waterbending. The two of them were led to the police headquarters for questioning and will be inprizoned right after it'' the woman said as images of a young man with brown hair took her place. After that, images of Decha flooded the small screen.
'' Kimi?'' I said shocked and worried.
'' Yeah?'' she turned from her station where she was cutting some things.
'' I think Decha got arrested'' I mumbled and headed to the door.
'' WHAT?!'' she yelled and threw away the knife she was holding. SHe quickly wore her fur boots and rushed out of the room as I followed trying to wear my jacket. At least I could go to the police station without arresting me too cause Kimi gave me a haircut. My hair were now mid back length as two strands holded by three golden rings framed my face and my bangs hanged over my eyes, but that wasn't the time to think about hair.
I was sitting in a cold cell for the last three hours and the worst part? I was together with that guy from earlier.
He was sitting with crossed arms and legs on the floor looking at the silling and I was sitting on that bench thinking of how much Kimi would scream when she found out. ''Kimi's going to be soooo mad'' I noticed.
'' Who's Kimi? Your girlfriend?'' he finally spoke, brushing his dirty hair with his dirty fingers.
'' WHAT?! NO?! Of course she's not! She's my big sister!'' I quickly shouted blushing and then turned away in embareshment. '' And why do you care anyway?''
'' I just made a thought. You know it's boring sitting on the ground all the time, and on top of that there is you who keeps worring about what he's sister gonna say. Am I right?'' he half smilled.
'' Don't play with me, vandal!'' I shouted at him.
'' Okay, Okay...Now because it seems we'll stay in this cell for a lot more time, tell me about 'ya'' he placed his hands on his knees and turned he's body at my direction.
'' Well, um...I'll always love my sister more than anything but there's a certain girl that I think I start to like...'' I rubbed my head blushing like crazy. I was taking to an unknown vandal about my feelings! Why?! ''...And? Does she have a name?'' he asked taking a more 'ready to laugh my butt out' expression than before. ''...Yeah, her name is-'' The cell's door bursted open as I and him jumped up from surprize.
'' KANADE?! KIMI?!'' I shouted shocked and the man gave me a look implaing something.
'' Oh, hello beautiful ladies, I'm Tyshi'' he said and kissed Kimi's hand. He then moved on to Kanade but she just shook her hand. Both of the girls looking awkwardly at both of us. '' Oh, your friend talled me so much about you...Kanade? I suppose?'' he started smilling evily at me.
I quickly stepped on his left foot making him shout in pain.
'' I was going to stop you know!'' he shouted and sat down rubbing his foot.
'' Decha we'll get you out of here!'' Kimi hugged me after she shook her head to unstack of the frozen pose she had.
'' We were so worried about you'' Kanade added closing the door behind her.
'' Well it would be nice to get me out of here now but take your time, I'll be here'' I said sarcastically being squeezed by Kimiosho. '' We would by after Kanade, sorry, Setstuna...You know that won't pass as a normal name! How you even thought of that?'' she stopped and said to Kanade.
'' I don't know! I read it in a book!'' she replied raising her shoulders and then Kimi continued.
'' Okay, let's try Usha, it's a nice common name. Anyway we wanted to check the security and the place first before we end up coming here. And what he was saying about you having talled him a lot about Kan- I mean Usha?'' she shouted after finished running through the paln and the name finding.
'' It's nothing, really nothing.'' I said blushing again. I swear this will become a habbit.
'' Time's up. Leave the prizoners alone'' a fat policeman said under his thick mustasce. Kimi and Kanade left the room and I turned to Tyshi, as it seemed. '' So we'll wait till tomorow?'' I complained hitting my head on the wall.
'' Yep! And thanks for nearly braking my foot, I appriciate that a lot...Wait, I'll come with 'ya right? Cause I'm not staying here any longer.'' He suddenly realized and snapped.
'' I guess so, in the end we're here together'' I replied in a bored tone and closed my eyes whising for tommorow to come a little faster.
I think that will make it for now... Sorry for any spelling mistakes, I upload that from my big, no spell checking, laptop. >_<
Chapter VI: New friend
What could be more boring than searching for probenders next to Firelord Zuko's statue? Nothing!! Nothing at all!! This is the most boring thing in the world!
'' I'm off'' I gave a last bored glance at the people rushing by me and joined them without knowing where I was going. I saw the shops changing while I was walking with the sun hitting their windows making it nearly impossible to see inside. After a few minutes I was standing next to the fountain outside the Water Tribe Cultural Center which was now closed because a handfull of waterbenders where left in Republic City, the half of them back at home and the rest inprizoned. '' Ah'' I sighed looking at Sokka's statue, sitting on the ground, laying my back on the fountain.
I sat there for a few seconds when someone fell on me! I mean how can someone fall on a person who is sitting!?
'' Watch your step!'' I yelled at the man who was standing in front of me. His hair where messy and brown and his dirty green eyes were looking at something behind me as I was standing in front of him.
'' Get out of my way, waterbender'' he hissed and raised two large boulders from the ground. From instinct I drawn water from the fountain and made a water shield protecting my body. Then the ones that the man was looking at showed up...They were policemen. '' Great'' I whispered and let the water fall on the ground, raising my hands. The policemen came running at us when they saw me waterbending. ''Well...Hello there'' I tried to act cool.
'' WATERBENDER!'' One of them shouted and hundcufted me by bending his metal cords around my raised hands.
'' Makun, I'll go for the earthbender!'' the woman that was with him shouted as she started chasing that man.
'' You are arrested for waterbending. Anything you say may be used aigenst you'' he simply said as a desperate expresion took over my face.
After I bumped into that guy the policemen gained a little time because he was stupid enough to waterbend. I ran and ran and ran to save my butt. If Amu arrested me, Seiyu would learn about what I have done.
I looked behind me as I turned to a small street. Amu was still chasing me surfing of fire. 'Why is she still after me? The only thing I've done that can be considered illegal is destroying that small shop, but they wouldn't take Earth Kingdom money' I thought and continued running always looking behind me when I fell on something really hard and everything went black. '' A wall...'' I mumbled while falling on the ground.
Thanks MadTay! (Is there a name I can call you by except MadTay? And what 'Avatar Science Sister' means?
If you mean you want to make a character go ahead! I'll use them!
Kanade: This fanfic is starting to get filled by your correcting posts!
Kimi: Let other people post something too!
Me: Oh yo two shut up! I'll keep an eye on both of you! [gives that look Korra gave Lin when she left the police]
Thanks! Did I portrayed your characters good? I'm not sure! >_<
Well I think I might be suffering from a terrible writer's block
Kanade: You, writer's block?
Me: Yeah why?
Keya: At least you were good when you were writing our story. [superior glance at Kanade]
Ekta: You know she's right.
Kai: I don't actually care now. She managed to write the epilogue, so I'm happy we even made it till there. Though it wasn't so good.
Me: Don't speak like that for the story! You know I can rewrite the epilogue and this time you'll be the one who got lost! NOT IKEM!
Kai: Ok, ok calm down Raya!
Naruk: DID ANYONE NOTICE THAT I WAS ALIVE AT THE END?! [appearing out of nowhere]
All of us: Naruk?!
Amber: I noticed! [sparkling eyes looking at him]
Ikem: At least you appeared! No one knows where am I!
Me: You are right here.
Kanade, Kimi, Decha: Hello?! This our story! SHOO!
[Everyone leaves quietly, heads down, fake tears]
That's better! Anyway, until I'm back please KEEP THIS UP! <3
'' Hey, bro wait!'' I shouted and he stopped. I ran Aoi the corner of the building where he was now. '' What?! I'm in the middle of a hunt here! Can't you just wait?!'' he complained taking a face full of secrecy.
'' I have a competition to propose.'' I started half smiling.
'' I hear you...'' he whispered clearly interested.
'' Well, you need a firebender or an earthbender and we need Aoi test Kanade's bending and I want a small competition with my bro sooooo''
'' Yeah? Continue, continue'' he replied getting more interested in the bet.
'' We fight! Who will beat Kanade in the shortest time! I she's good she get's in your team, if you lose you're gonna make me dinner for a week and if I lose, that I won't, I'll acpet my defeat from the mighty Decha the waterbender who escaped the law for so long'' I pt saying that 'mighty' stuff till he broke. ''Ohhh! Alright, I'm in!'' he exclaimed and jumped.
'' That's my little bro! Now, go find your pets, shoo'' I shooed him and he left headed at Narook's Noodlery where we usually hang out as it reminds us of home. The strange thing is that the man that has the place isn't named Narook but Hiuku, probably his a relative of that Narook guy but we can figure it out. Anyway, I turned back and continued my way back at home smiling. I know how to push my brother's buttons!
I rubbed and opened my eyes only Aoi get blinded by a waterfall of chocolate brown hair with blue highlights.
'' HA! I told you she was going Aoi wake up soon or later!''
'' Oh come on now!'' A male voice complained.
'' Now, now Decha. Give your big sis the money!'' Kimi jumped happy.
'' Ah, where am I?'' I asked rubbing my head.
'' Oh, welcome to our place! Right next to Firelord Zuko's statue'' Kimi exclaimed showing me an old apartment like room filled with blue stuff with leather and fur.
'' I wouldn't say right next to the statue but it's near'' Decha corrected and sat on an old dirty couch.
'' What are those things?'' I asked referring to those things all over the place.
'' These, miss Avatar, are traditional Water Tribe things back from home, the beautiful Southern Water Tribe'' Kimi said a little sarcastically.
'' You are from the Water Tribes? You mean you are waterbenders? And you aren't caught yet?!'' I stated surprised.
'' Yup, we are still here but we need to hide all the time, thanks to you'' Decha replied frustrated probably by his losing.
'' Anyway, I know we don't know you well, you don't know us too but from what I saw out there you're with us. You don't want a war but for us to trust you, some explanations need to be spoken'' Kimi took a serious face and said Aoi me kneeling on the ground holding my hand.
'' I at least owe you that...'' I nodded and explained what I knew so far.
Councilman Sheiyu's POV
'' You are terrible! You can't even acomplise the simplest job and because of that she was able to came and ruin everything. I was not sure about you Tyshi but you? You are in a very good place, you were at the City Hall this morning and you still did nothing! I am very dspointed in you two...'' I made a pause and pinched the bridge of my nose '' Tyshi, you won't work for me any longer, you are free to return to your family or whatever you have, but if you ever speak about our business I personally will make sure you'll rot in prison'' I finished and laid back on my brown leather chair giving a second look at the plans.
'' Yes sir. I'll take my leave now sir.'' Tyshi replied and left the room closing the door. Silence fell on the room and I looked my child in the eye.
'' You agreed on this from the very beginning, you want what I want, so from now on I expect you to obey my every order and do it correctly.'' I got a nod as a response and the door opened once again.
''If she keeps getting into my way, I swear I'll give the world a new Avatar!'' I banged my fist on the desk, papers fell on the ground and a glass of water almost fell from the edge.
''...So I ran away. I couldn't stand live in the same house with a man that never loved me and used me as a tool...but about what he's planing or what he has done to the Water Tribes I have no clue'' Kanade finished with the explanations, Decha and I very interested in what she said.
'' Neither do we, from the moment we left the South we don't have any idea what has happened but when we left the people were starving, we were very poor and the South had turned to what it was in the times of Avatar Aang and it's only 57 years from when he died'' I explained remembering the Water Tribe.
'' She's right. The only time of the year when our Tribe seemed happy was during the Glacier Spirits festival when the North comes'' Decha added and walked the door grabbing his gray coat. We stopped wearing or using water tribe clothes and things when all things associated with the tribes got banded, even the people are considered criminals!
'' Where are you going?'' I asked Decha when he was ready to open the door.
'' Well I still need an earthbender and a firebender for the probending team I want to create so I have to go hunting''
'' Are you still up with this idea?!'' I asked getting angry.
'' Ah, yes? Forgot? Only the waterbenders from a probending team are't banded waterbend plus we need money and if you consider all the fame and stuff we'll earn!'' he started and simply walked out of the door.
'' How good is your bending?'' I quickly asked Kanade as an idea popped in my head.
'' I don't know, I would say average?'' she raised her shoulders.
'' Good'' I replied and ran out of the apartment trying Aoi catch up with Decha.
Kanade- Name meaning: playing music, Hair: Long dark brown, Eyes: Golden, Bending: Avatar, Skin: Pale (from not been exposed to the sun for a long long time)
Kimiosho a.k.a Kimi- Name meaning: she who is without equal, Hair: Brown (Cilly could you please post her hair and eye color so I can describe her better?), Eyes: Probably blue, Bending: Water, Skin: water tribe color
Decha- Name meaning: Powerful, Hair: Black, Eyes: Blue, Bending: Water, Skin: water tribe color
So I hoped you liked the last chapter cause more chapters coming soon and enjoy the story! Thanks