When I was a young boy, about 7 years old, a tornado stuck through BA-SING-SA, my home. It was transporting people to another universe. It was desperate times, so before it got bad, four people told me i was the avatar, then, i was sucked up. Now, i'm in a place called the united states. Everything's so weird. Different fashion, no hybrid animals, and worst of all, no bending. I mean, the avatar world citizens could still bend, but nobody else could. We had to keep our powers secret. My new house was in a place called new york city. I went to school. I did not get why they taught us these things we never need to know. I mean, why would we need to know that some random guy with powdered hair ruled the U.S.A, whatever that is. By the way, i'm now 10. I made a new friend named Benjiman. There's another thing i don't get, the names. I mea where are all the Lee's, the Lin's, maybe some Toph's or Meng's. One day Benjiman came over my house. To be continued...
It was time to contact Avatar Kyoshi. I sat in the middle of a ceromonoial circle that Avatar Kyoshi used to get into the spirit world. I started to meditate. A flash of lightning struck. There was avatar Kyoshi, sitting right in front of me. Here?s what she said. ?Comar, the world is in great danger, to help under stand your self, you must contact all the earth kingdom avatars. They will provide kowledge for you.? Then, she faded away. Lets just hope we aren?t to late.
"Cool". I got out voted. The first stop was Kyoshi Island. I had to admit, I was exited. This was a step in my Avatar journey. I was going to contact my past life of Kyoshi. In other words, first, I'll put on Kyoshi's clothes to become her, then I'll talk to her. This wasn't just any past life, it was the last earth bending avatar. It must stink being and avatar that dosn't have an Island dedicated to a past life that was your element. After we got there, a huge comotion whent about me. That guy whho got rabies after Aang arrived grandson was there, must be a tradition to freak out and have foam come out of your mouth when you see the avatar. don't worry, he's fine. You won't beleive how much attention they give to an earth bending Avatar.
Today, I finally mastered fire bending, enough to start mastering Air. We started our journey. I knew a way to travel that was only a little slower then a flying bison. I promised Benjiman and Meilin that as soon as I found an Air bending teacher, we'll use his flying bison. My way of travel was to use earth bending to travel under ground. Meilin, "The brains of the group", said that the Air Nomads found a perfect place to build a new air temple in the new world. They built it almost instantly and exactly like the ones at home. It was a long way to get there. It's estimated that it will be a month longer then Aang's trip to the north pole. There were many stops that were eaxactly like some places at home. There are earth kingdom cities like Omahshu, and Ba-Sing-Sa, my home. They also have the great divide, Republic City, And Kyoshi Island. I said that we could see those later, but Meilin Insisted on seeing them to inprove my "Awareness of the world" and Benjiman said it would be
You won't believe what happened today, I mastered fire bending! Okay, maybe not mastered it, but I mastered some fire bending moves. I can trow fire, shape fire, do a triple fire ball, and I am starting to learn how to fly with fire bending. The next time i had a fire bending class, I asked Meilin some thing very important. No, i did not ask her out on a date, i'll wait until I find a air bending teacher, maybe after I find a water bending teacher. Here's what happened. I asked Meilin why I would die when the spirits attack. Here's what she said. " The Avatar is part spirit. Even though spirits can't bend, they have a lot of chi, more then any bender there was, is, or will be. Infact, they are alive, i guess you could say, because they have Chi instead of blood. The Avatar has so little blood, and so much chi, that with no Chi, the avatar will die...
You will have to use a combination of all 4 elements. We have no time to lose, lets start fire bending!"Fire bending was... easy to start but hard to continue. "Now this is a really basic move, but fire bending is hard and dangerous. All you have to do is make fire come out of your hand" I did it. "Wow, most people don't get it on the first try, now throw it." I tried it, but it just stayed in my hand. I tried and tried, but the fire wouldn't budge. One time i almost burned myself. "That's okay" replied Mielin. "Fire is a light element, almost lighter than air, and light stuff fall shorter distances." I sighed, it will take some hard work to maste fire, let alone air and water, but i can do it.
We gathered at my house the next day after school. "My grandfather told me that the tornado would come some day" explained Meilin. "He said that all the benders would live in peace for a few years in the new world, then, two spirit portals will open. The spirits will swoop inside every bender in the new world, taking away his or her chi perminately." Meilin warned. "What about the avatar?" I asked. " That will be the worst. After his chi is taken away, he will cease to exist." "Is there any way to save him?" Benjiman asked. "2 actually. If you close the southern portal, which is closer, all benders will stay in the new world in peace. If you close the northern portal, which is farther away, all benders will be returned to the avatar world. "How long do we have?" I asked. " About six months" Replied Mielin. " So is it north or south?" She asked. "North" i replied. " Oh, and one more thing. You will have to master all four elements before you close the portal. To close it,
The next day at school, Benjiman told me to meet him at the lunch table, he had some important news. At lunch, i did exactly what he said. " There's a girl that's most likely a fire bender. She looks like one, she acts like one, she even eats like one." Benjiman whispered. The next day, We were going to ask her if she was a fire bender, if not, i would hit here just hard enough in the head with earth bending so she would forget. As we walked through the hallway, Benjiman pointed here out. She was beuitiful, she had long black hair, brown eyes, and her voice was amazing. "You ask her" i demanded. I hid behind a wall. I was so nervous, what if she wasn't one. As the finished talking, she walked to me. "I would be honored to teach you fire bending, my name is Meilin, and you are?", " Carmar" I answerd. Benjiman knew i liked her, i could tell. "Please don't tell her" i pleaded. Benjiman noded his head, we would get together tommorrow.
It was the worst time, i was practicing my earth bending. He didn't look scared, he just looked up there, "Tell me everything", he demanded. I thought about it, i decided to just run and fess up if he caught me. I took off, he was gaining, I was desperate, I made a hole in the ground, jumped in, then made my hole move. I barely moved an inch before I realized that I just showed Benjiman my earth bending. I came out of the hole. It was time to confess. After I finished, Benjiman pitched in an idea. " You know, there are most likely hundreds of benders at our school that could teach you fire bending, then we could find an air bender, then water." "But how could we find one, we kept our bending secret." I debated. "Well, there were a bunch of new kids the day you came in, and you acted kind of strange, and so did a lot of the kids that were new, so those are the benders." I hoped he is correct, because if he wasn't, I am in trouble. Hoped you like it, and you can give some ideas for char