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The Jade Palace Family (Please Read)

Date: 09/11/12 9:51 PM
From: betas4567

Hi people! I am really nervous about posting my very first fan-fic so....... yeah. I wrote this because my all time favorite fan-fic author, Tigress16, inspired me. I used to be a silent reader, until I decided that you guys should know how awesome you are. I will post the first P.O.V. as soon as I see this up on the boards. I have already written some of the story so I'll try to post often. Again this is my very first fan-fic so please read and please comment.
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Date: 04/18/13 10:02 PM
From: Batskee

@Betas4567:

Silvermist: Maybe they stole some special medicine that'll prevent them from getting sore throats.
Me: I really doubt that.
Silvermist: It's possible. Just like it's possible that you found that potion to make you fl-
Me: *covers mouth* Hush up!

~*Batskee*~

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Date: 04/03/13 9:36 PM
From: betas4567

@Batskee
Haha! Thanks! Glad you liked it! And good point Silvermist. I wonder why they don't all have sore throats...
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Date: 04/03/13 5:31 PM
From: Batskee

@Betas4567:

Silvermist: The people in the valley all cower in fear of Le-Dong. Mwahahaha--*starts coughing*
Me: What'd ya do that for? You're not a villain.
Silvermist: I know. I just wanted to see how it felt. *coughs* I'm surprised that some of those villains don't have sore throats after laughing like that!
Me: *facepalm* Anyways, Betas4567, awesome part! I wonder what else they have in mind...

~*Batskee*~

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Date: 04/03/13 3:37 PM
From: betas4567

Okay, people! Here's another one for y'all! Hope you like it!


Viper's POV

A little while after midnight, Master Shifu woke me. I went on guard duty as he went to sleep. Well, at least I finally knew that Shifu actually slept. We used to think that he meditated all night, and he never slept. I guess we were wrong. I watched over the camp for a quiet half an hour, before I heard something through the trees. I turned to the direction of the sound and looked closly. A few feet away, a single croc bandit was walking through the woods. I looked around the camp to make sure that there weren't any more, then I silently made my way towards him. I knew that we would need more information on the croc group, and what better source than a member of the group? He still hadn't noticed me when I was only five feet away. I took a deep breath and lunged. He didn't put up much of a fight. Then again, I didn't give him enough time to. I knocked him out quickly and dragged him back to our camp. I found some rope in Tigress' bag, and I used it to tie the bandit to a tree. I didn't hear, or see, anything out of the ordinary for the rest of the night. The small fight had woken me up enough where I didn't have to wake anyone else up until morning.


Alright! Back to the heros' side of the story! It wasn't as long as the last one, but I hope y'all enjoyed it anyway! Take care, and I'll see if I can maybe type up some more. Not sure how much more I can do in a day.
~your author and friend, betas4567~

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Date: 04/02/13 7:20 PM
From: betas4567

Alright! Sorry for the wait, but I finally got a long enough break to type this up! I should go to my grandparents' house more often... Anyway, on to the story!


Le-Dong's POV

I now stood in my once great camp. I only had a hand-full of bandits that actually came back after that tiger somehow destroyed my large army. These crocs were pitiful! If you want anything done around here, I guess you have to do it yourself! I told my pitifully small group to rest up. In the morning, we needed to find new recruits. Every croc bandit in China would come together in my ultimate plan to overthrow the emperor, and defeat the Master's Council. No one would stand in our way. No one. NO ONE!!!! I grinned evily at the thought. Then my stomach rumbled hungrily. I frowned. What was left of our food supplies had been destroyed, or trampled until it wasn't fit to eat, in the fight. I sighed. None of the group that I had would be fit enough to raid a village and find us enough food. Like I said earlier, If you want anything done around here, you have to do it yourself.
I gave my men a long speech about what would happen to them if they camp didn't look EXACTLY the same when I got back. Then I grabbed my large sack, and I set out to find something to satisfy my, and my men's, hunger. The closest valley was three miles away. Due to my large size, it only took me an hour of running to get to the valley. I have no clue what the name of the valley is, but I guess I didn't really need to know anyway. I walked into the valley, and I made my way to the middle of it. When I got to the middle, I found that there weren't many people out and buying things. That wasn't very surprizing. It was, judging by the position of the moon in the sky, around 11 o'clock. I made my way to the closest food stand, and as soon as I got there, the pig that was running it turned and ran into one of the nearby houses. I just shrugged, and I put all of the food in the stand into my sack. I started to leave, but then I stopped and went back for the contents of the cash box. I stuffed the money into my money pouch, and I aproched the next stand that was selling food. It had the same results as the first, except that a goat was running it. I raided every food stand in the valley, before I made my way back into the woods and to camp.
With my sack, it took me around an hour and a half of running to get back. Surprizingly, everything looked the same. When the men saw the food, they cheered. We all sat around a large fire, and we ate. We were careful not to eat all of the food, because I didn't want to have to go out again, and leave the camp with only a few guards to protect what little things that we had left. That and it would take the valley a while to resupply. Early in the morning, we would need to start repairs. If the masters of the Jade Palace thought that we were done, then they were mistaken. We have just begun.


Okay, guys! Thought that I'd let you know what the villans were up to for a change. You know, to kinda spice it up a bit and keep y'all readin. Hope you liked it! I still have all day, so I'll get some more POVs typed up, and give you guys a break from waiting so much. Special thanks to all of my fans that kept me goin this whole time! You guys are AWESOME! Thank you so much!
~your author and friend, betas4567~

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Date: 03/11/13 4:42 PM
From: bluewire

@betas4567
very touching povs! cant wait for more ^^
-Bluewire-
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Date: 03/10/13 2:50 PM
From: betas4567

@T16
Thanks! Glad you liked it! :D
~ your friend, betas4567 ~
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Date: 03/08/13 6:51 PM
From: Tigress116

That. Was. EPIC! WHOO! oh gosh, that was just, SO PERFECT! Totally amazing, I'm just, totally lost for words. THAT WAS AMAZINGLY AWESOME! WHOO! LOVE IT SO MUCH! I can NOT wait to see more! TO AWESOME!!!!

Your fan and friend...
Tigress16

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Date: 03/06/13 7:32 PM
From: adaline1

like it, i love it
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Date: 03/05/13 6:58 PM
From: betas4567

@adaline1
Aww! Thank you!

@Batskee
Haha! We shall see! Glad you liked it!

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Date: 03/04/13 8:49 PM
From: Batskee

@Betas4567:
Awesome chapter! That's nice. They both seem happy that they finally got their feelings out. Maybe when Tigress feels better she can give Shifu that hug?

~*Batskee*~
Can't wait for more!

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Date: 03/04/13 7:57 PM
From: adaline1

as po whoud say your awsome!;x
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Date: 03/04/13 4:27 PM
From: betas4567

Alright! FINALLY got this typed! Sorry for the long wait.

Tigress' POV

I smiled. For the first time since he adopted me, I smiled. He finally told me what I had been wanting to hear from him my whole life. He was proud. He was actually proud of me. I said that over and over in my mind, and each time my smile grew wider and wider. I grinned up at him. "Thank you, Father." I said back. He was soon smiling as well. I wanted to hug him. If only my back would let me. He smiled down at me and gently stroked my head. After awhile, he told me that I needed to rest. I didn't want to. I wanted this moment to last forever, but I sighed and obeyed. Before I drifted off, I promised myself that I would never forget this moment for as long as I lived. Never.

Master Shifu's POV

I watched as my daughter fell asleep. I didn't want to stop watching her. I wanted to remember her peaceful look as she slept. I would never forget this moment. It felt as if a huge weight had been lifed off of my shoulders. I stayed their for what seemed like hours, but was only a few minutes. I would have stayed longer if Po haden't said something to break the trance that I was in. I turned around and said in annoyance, "What, Po?". "We were just wondering if we could all go to bed now. And if you were going to sleep." Po resonded. I looked up at the sky, and realized that the sun had set a long while ago and everything was pitch black except for the small light that the fire provided. It was late, and everyone was tired, even me. I nodded to Po in agreement. "Yes. You all need your sleep. Go rest. I'll keep guard and wake one of you for the next shift." I told them. I then watched as they, one by one, fell asleep. I then turned back to Tigress one last time, before beginning guard duty.

There you are, people! Hope you guys liked it! Please leave a comment and tell me what you think!
~Your author and (hopefully) friend, betas4567~

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Date: 02/26/13 9:28 PM
From: betas4567

@everyone
Hey, guys! Thanks for all the reviews! I'm glad that y'all liked it! Sorry for not updating in a while... Thanks for keeping this up!
~betas4567~
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Date: 02/06/13 6:23 PM
From: bluewire

Neo:hehe! worst luck ever!
-bluewire- buttery rice...mmmmm!
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Date: 02/05/13 6:06 PM
From: Batskee

@Bluewire:

Travis; Yuck...sounds disgusting.
Master Kainen: Definately.
Ginger: Oh, you'd like some rice? Why of course!
Me: Yummm! I love buttery rice!
Ginger: You may have some too.
Me: Yay!
Silvermist: Yummy! I'd like some.
Ginger: No.
Silvermist: Wha-?!
Ginger: You still need to clean up the remains of my vase, missy!
Silvermist: *looks at vase she accidently broke* Aww...

~*Batskee*~

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Date: 02/05/13 1:14 PM
From: bluewire

@batskee
Neo to travis: yea its a little late for that, the popcorn is all moldy now...yuck!
Me: hey can you pass the buttery rice?
-bluewire-
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Date: 02/01/13 9:50 PM
From: Batskee

@Betas4567:
That's nice. Shifu told Tigress he was proud of her! Pretty much what Tigress has wanted to hear from him for practically her whole life!

@Bluewire:
I scrolled down and saw I was giving out popcorn to people I guess? Here's the salt.
Travis: Um, isn't it a little late to hand him some salt when he probably already ate the popcorn and got some salt?
Master Kainen: *takes salt and sprinkles it on buttery rice* Don't ask questions, Travis. Just take it.

~*Batskee*~

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Date: 01/30/13 6:13 PM
From: bluewire

herro
-bluewire-
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Date: 01/23/13 4:33 PM
From: bluewire

awwww <3 these emotional moments are the best! XD
-bluewire-
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