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Date: 09/11/12 9:51 PM
From: betas4567

Hi people! I am really nervous about posting my very first fan-fic so....... yeah. I wrote this because my all time favorite fan-fic author, Tigress16, inspired me. I used to be a silent reader, until I decided that you guys should know how awesome you are. I will post the first P.O.V. as soon as I see this up on the boards. I have already written some of the story so I'll try to post often. Again this is my very first fan-fic so please read and please comment.
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Date: 02/01/13 9:50 PM
From: Batskee

@Betas4567:
That's nice. Shifu told Tigress he was proud of her! Pretty much what Tigress has wanted to hear from him for practically her whole life!

@Bluewire:
I scrolled down and saw I was giving out popcorn to people I guess? Here's the salt.
Travis: Um, isn't it a little late to hand him some salt when he probably already ate the popcorn and got some salt?
Master Kainen: *takes salt and sprinkles it on buttery rice* Don't ask questions, Travis. Just take it.

~*Batskee*~

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Date: 01/30/13 6:13 PM
From: bluewire

herro
-bluewire-
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Date: 01/23/13 4:33 PM
From: bluewire

awwww <3 these emotional moments are the best! XD
-bluewire-
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Date: 01/19/13 3:37 PM
From: Tigress16

AWESOME, AWESOME, AWESOME!! Oh gosh, that was AWESOME! Sorry for taking so long to read it, but it ROCKED! LOVED IT!!!!

Your fan and friend...
Tigress16

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Date: 01/15/13 3:47 PM
From: betas4567

@lola595
Thanks!

@Tigress714
Thanks! I'm glad you like it!

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Date: 01/15/13 9:59 AM
From: betas4567


Okay guys! I'm in Spanish right now, so I better type this quick. Anyway,

here it is!

Master Shifu's POV

I walked over to Tigress after we ate, and saw that she was awake.

"Good. You are awake," I said. She looked at me and moaned in response. I

checked her over worredly. She was simply exausted, and pretty bruised up.

I told her that she would feel better soon, and she nodded slowly. "I am

very proud of you, my daughter," I whispered. I knew that she heard me,

because her eyes shone, and she slowly started to smile. I had finally told

her what I had wanted to my whole life. I had told her I was proud.

Ok, guys. Sorry that its so short, but like I said, I'm in Spanish, so I

have like three more POVs to put up after I type them.
-betas4567

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Date: 01/14/13 9:13 PM
From: lola595

That's ok, I know how you feel. Don't worry you were just building up the suspense!
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Date: 01/14/13 4:20 PM
From: betas4567

Oh my gosh! I am SO SO SO sorry guys!! Things have been really busy lately! I have exams, semester tests, and benchmarks (probably spelled that wrong) coming up, so I haven't been able to get on nick very often. I am typing up and proof reading the next chapter RIGHT NOW. Again I am really sorry guys! I didn't abandon this! I promise!

~betas4567~

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Date: 12/31/12 8:45 PM
From: Tigress714

Keep going! Its really good! I love it!
your fan,
~Tigress714~
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Date: 12/12/12 2:28 PM
From: bluewire

cant wait to see what happens next!
-bluewire-
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Date: 12/06/12 4:12 PM
From: betas4567

@Tigress16 & Shadow
Me: YEAH! Join the side of AWESOMENESS!!!!
Andy: I'll join Shadow's side. Betas is getting on my nerves.
Me: HEY!!!!
Andy: I'm right here! You don't need to yell!
Me: Right were? I don't see anyone?
Andy: Right in front of your face blind one!
Me: Athina? Do you hear something?
Athina: Yeah. It sounded like the voice of betrayal!!
Andy: Man! I feel ya Shadow. I feel ya.
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Date: 12/05/12 9:22 PM
From: Tigress16

Me: YES!
Shadow: Man... I was hoping someone would be on my side...
Me: Nope! Join the awesomenss side!
Shadow: Only if you CHILL!
Me: I'll think about it.
Shadow: *facepalm*

Your friends...
Tigress16 and Shadow

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Date: 12/05/12 5:03 PM
From: bluewire

@batskee
Me: sweet! got any salt?
-bluewire-
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Date: 12/05/12 3:45 PM
From: betas4567

@Tigress16
Me: Yup! Posative!
Athina: You aren't annoying us either T16!
Me: She never has been and never will be annoying to us!
Me: And we are POSATIVE about that too!

@Batskee
THANKS!!!!!

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Date: 12/04/12 2:50 PM
From: Batskee

@Betas4567
Heh-heh! Po has the word AWESOME in almost every sentance. That is definately Po!

@Bluewire:

Me: Yep! I got more popcorn.
*Ruby accidently kicks popcorn box out of hand*
Me; Hey! Watch it!
Ruby: I'm a little busy right now!
*all of them continue to fight*

~*Batskee*~
Me: I knew a brought a spare container of popcorn for a reason!

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Date: 12/04/12 12:05 PM
From: Tigress16

Me: HA! TOLD YOU!
Shadow: Are you SURE she's not scaring you? Or even annoying you?
Me: Hey!
Shadow: What? I'm just asking a question.
Me: Humph...
Shadow: Heh heh.

Your friends...
Tigress16 and Shadow

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Date: 12/03/12 5:58 PM
From: bluewire

^^ po's version on everything has to have "awesome" eh? i think you missed a few chances tho! awesomely awesome could have been one^^ lol
perhaps an "awesomeness" somewhere in there...
-bluewire-
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Date: 12/03/12 3:48 PM
From: betas4567

@Tigress16
Me: Thanks!!
Athina: Yeah, you aren't scaring us.
Me: Don't worry T16, Shadow is the scared one!
Athina: Really? Are we talking about the same Shadow here?
Me: Oh...good point.
~your fans & freinds~
betas4567 & Athina
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Date: 12/03/12 10:36 AM
From: Tigress16

Shadow: Are you SURE she's not scaring you?
Me: HA! IN YO FACE!
Shadow: *facepalm* ugh...
Me: Oh man, that was SO TOTALLY ROCKEN AWESOME!!! LOVE IT! ALWAYS LOVE IT!!!
Shadow: Heh heh, I must agree, that was awesome. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Me: SAME!!!

Your fans and friends...
Tigress16 and Shadow

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Date: 12/03/12 7:36 AM
From: betas4567

@Tigress16
Me: Don't worry! You aren't scaring us!
Athina: *sneaking up behind me* BOO!!
Me: *screams*

@Batskee
Me: HAHAHA!!!
Athina: Oh, gee. That's one big fight!


OK people, finally got the next one up! Sorry for the wait!

Master Shifu's POV

I stared worredly down at my daughter. I had seen the whole thing. The others were waiting half a mile away from the camp. I knew that Le-Dong would be coming soon. I had no idea if we could save her or not. I knew one thing though, I would try to save her. I lifted her carefully, and started running as fast as I could towards the others. After I got out of the camp, I saw Tigress' bag in one of the bushes. I ran over to it and carefully set Tigress down. I opened the bag and found bandages and disinfectant. Perfect. I grabbed the stuff and turned to Tigress. I then rolled her onto her stomach and applied the disinfectant then tightly wrapped her torso in bandages. After I finished that, I slung the bag over one shoulder and lifted Tigress again, before continuing to run. I made it back to the others just as the sun began to set.

Po's POV

Just as the sun began to set, Master Shifu ran into camp holding Tigress. We stared at him and Tigress as he rolled out a bed-mat-thing. He placed her on it and looked back at us. I finally broke the silence by saying what was on everyone's mind,"Soo....what happened?" Master Shifu then explained the whole thing, about how she AWESOMELY defeated 500 bandits, before she was TRAGICLY hit with an arrow, and then she jumped back up, and she AWESOMELY defeated another 200 bandits!! All I said after that was, "AWESOME!!!" Everyone looked at Tigress, and then back at me with a "Really?" face. "SHE DEFEATED 200 BANDITS, WHILE SHE WAS HURT!! THAT IS AWESOME!!," I said, "Not the fact that she was hurt though..." Luckily, at that moment, my stomach growled. I went over to Tigress' bag and found some food. I then made dinner out of what we had, and we ate. No one said anything, but goodnight, for the rest of the night.

Tigress' POV

I opened my eyes to find myself on the ground, on a sleeping mat. I tried to sit up, but it hurt too much, so I turned my head to the left. I didn't see anything, but the woods. I turned my head to the right, and I saw all of my freinds sitting in a circle, and eating. Just then Master Shifu walked over to me, and saw that I was awake.


Alright. Hope you liked it!
-betas4567

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