Hi people! I am really nervous about posting my very first fan-fic so....... yeah. I wrote this because my all time favorite fan-fic author, Tigress16, inspired me. I used to be a silent reader, until I decided that you guys should know how awesome you are. I will post the first P.O.V. as soon as I see this up on the boards. I have already written some of the story so I'll try to post often. Again this is my very first fan-fic so please read and please comment.
@batskee
XD
Me: oh wow...just look at em'!
Neo: (sigh)
Me: do you think you should try to stop them?
Neo: na, just let them tire each other out.
Me: alright. hey you have any more popcorn batskee?
-bluewire-
Okay...okay...I just caught up on reading and I think me and my friends can say this all together in harmony...*ahem*...
Ruby, Zenghui, Travis, Silvermist, and Me sing together like a choir: AWESOME!!
Silvermist: C'mon Tigress! Don't black out on us!
Travis: She already did.
*Ruby whacks Travis*: Don't ruin the moment!
Zenghui: Don't whack him! *whacks Ruby*
Silvermist: Don't whack Ruby! *whacks Zenghui*
Travis: Fight!!
*gets into big fight*
Me: *munching on popcorn watching the fight* Please continue I REALLY like it!
Me: I'M BACK!!!
Shadow: Oh poor them...
Me: Hey!
Shadow: I should have knocked you out, before you started posting...
Me: Grr... now where was I?
Shadow: Scaring them...
Me: SHUT IT!
Shadow:
Me: Thank you. Now then... AMAZINGLY AWESOME! WHO CARES IF IT WAS LONG, IT WAS AAAAAMMMMMAAAAAZZZZZIIIINNNNGGGGG!!!!!!!!!
Shadow: Can I please knock her out now?
@bluewire
Thanks! I know, I surprised myself with how long that was!
@everyone
I guess we shall see if Tigress is alright! MWAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!
Athina: *looks up from her scroll-like book* WILL YOU STOP THAT!!!!!!!!!
Me: Give me two good reasons!
Athina: FINE!
1. You are creeping me out
and
2. I will knock you to the end of the earth if you don't
Me: ok, good enough for me.
Alright people, I'm back! Did you miss me? HAHA! JK! ok, I give you chapter now.
Tigress' POV
I quickly climbed the cell bars until I was at the top. Then I jumped from there into the rafters. I watched as a whole bunch of gaurds came rushing in and they filled the entire building. I sighed as I listened to their plan. They apearently knew that it was me who came to save them. They were looking hard. They flipped over every single thing in the room. I was smart though and I had come in through the window. One of them found the window that I had left open and they told everyone that I had escaped through the window. Le-Dong ordered the gaurds to surround the place and to make sure there were gaurds on the roof too. I smiled. They had no idea what I had planned. I saw that Le-Dong had left Fung to gaurd the cell while he went to sit on his throne. Fung looked at my freinds and father. Then he smirked and said," Not so tough now huh!?" I then jumped down from the rafters and silently landed right on his shoulders being careful to grab his snout so he couldn't alert anyone. He fell to the ground and I leaned down to whisper, "you have no idea," in his ear. His eyes widend before I punched him in the head, knocking him out. I jumped off of him and walked over to the cell. I looked at the lock and I shot out my claws. I then used them to pick the lock. The lock soon poped off with a soft click. Po was about to start cheering, but I slapped my paw over his mouth before he could say anything. He quickly quieted down and I removed my paw. I then looked at the others and motioned for them to follow me. I threw Po up into the rafters and then I climbed up myself with the others close behind me. When we got to the top I carefully removed a tile from the ceiling and put my finger to my lips motioning them to be quiet before I jumped out onto the roof. They followed me up onto the roof and I motioned for them to get the gaurds that were on the roof. They nodded and luckily there were only seven gaurds. We each snuck up behind one and swifly and silently knocked them out. Then I motioned for my freinds to stay where they were and I jumped through the trees until I was on the far side of the camp. Then I lept onto the nearest gaurd which caused the other ones to alert the whole camp. The gaurds that were gaurding the prison-like building abandoned their posts and charged at me just like I planned. I smiled when I saw my father directing my freinds into escape. I started fighting the gaurds as hard as I could. I fought them for 5 hours before I felt like I couldn't fight any longer. I then had to start dodging arrows because archers had been hiding in the trees until the saw that I was getting tired. I still had about 200 gaurds to fight if I had counted properly. That meant that I had already beaten about 500 gaurds. I was really tired I didn't think I could keep this up much longer. I never saw the arrow coming. I hit me right in the back. I fell to the ground and the Crocs instantly srounded me. I saw Shifu sitting in a tree to the left of me. He looked at me worredly. When I saw the worry in his eyes I knew that he loved me as a daughter, and it gave me the strength to keep going. I sprung upwards and yanked the arrow out of my back. I started fighting as hard as I could and soon all of the Crocs had either run away or been knocked unconsious. I saw Shifu jump out of the tree and run to my side. I also saw black dots in my vision. The scond Shifu got to me, I passed out. The last thing I remember was seeing his worried expression and him yelling my name. Then it was just darkness.
Whew! OK, that was a long chapter. It took forever for me to type! I hope that you AWESOME people liked it! PLEASE LEAVE A REPLY TO TELL ME WHAT YOU THOUGHT!!!!!!
- your freindly author betas4567
Me: AWESOMENESS, AWESOMENESS, AWESO-
*Shadow clamps her paw over my mouth*
Shadow: Shush, you're going to SCARE them!
Me: -_-...
Shadow: Thank you. Now then, that SO was Po. I totally agree.
Me: *shoving Shadow away* AWESOMENESS!
Shadow: *facepalm* Ugh...
OK, you awesome fans! I have written the next chapter!
Tigress' POV
I packed enough food and water to last me a week. Then I grabbed my bag that was stuffed so full that you couldn't fit Mantis in there if your life depended on it and went to the back door. This was it, this was the moment that I would leave the valley unprotected. I started to wonder if I should go. What about the valley? What if the crocs came back? No. They wouldn't dare. I had to go and find my freinds. I couldn't stay while my father was out there somewhere. I would save them. I pushed all of my worries to the back of my mind and started off. I tried to focus on the footprints, and where they were leading. It took me three days of running, but I finally caught up with the Croc group. I hide my bag in a bush and jumped in tree that was tall enough where the crocs couldn't see me. I watched their every move. This was their hide-out. I knew that after three days of hiding in the shadows of the tree. I also figured out who the leader of the crocs was. It was Fung's cousin, Le-Dong. That Croc! I couldn't beileve that he had managed to make this huge gang. I also figured out that Fung was the second in comand. Surprising. I watched that camp until my food was almost gone. By then I had figured out who the gaurds were and what times of day they switched of. I knew exactly where my freinds were and had a plan. Acually I had a lot of plans. When you are trying to save six people, and one of them is Po, then you have to have a lot of plans. Now that I think about it, even if I was only rescuing Po, I would still need a lot of plans.
I waited until noon, then I carfully made my way into the place where the Crocs were keeping my freinds and father. I silently made my way to their cell. I don't know why I even bothered to be silent, because as soon as I found them Po yelled out at the top of his lungs,"WE'RE SAVED." I face-pawed. Time for plan B. Not a surprise. I hadn't even tried to get them out yet and my cover was blown.
Typical Po right! Hope you liked the chapter! Please reply! Thanks to those who have!
-your freind and author, betas4567
YES! i CAUGHT UUUUUUUUUP!!!!! yay! and this story is just GREAT! keep going! XDXD
PS: i read your new story "Athina: From the Beginning"
and Neo kinda....poped into our universe...it imploded
Neo: psh! come on! i was here the whole time!
Me: what?! really??
Neo: uh yea!
Me: then why didn't you talk to me or anything!
Neo: because im mysterious that way!
Me: so neos gona rent the attic for a while, yay! ROOMMATE!XDXD
-bluewire-
AWESOME, AWESOME, AWESOME!!! That was just AMAZINGLY OFF THE CHAIN AWESOME! Loved it SO much! You did GREAT on that. Oh man, can NOT wait to see what happens. And I'm SO glad your friend is all better now. I was praying for her! And you BET I'm sticking with your amazingly awesome story. It just ROCKS!
Hi Peoples! Sorry I took so long, but school is out tomarrow so I have time to write this. Anyhoo, Keep Reading!
Tigress' POV
I walked outside and staired at the people out there. My head hurt from the sudden light so I had to stand in the shade of the building to calm the throbing pain. The villagers looked at me expectantly. I sighed and raised my voice so that everyone cold hear, "The Palace was attacked last night while I was in bed recovering. I woke up this morning like the rest of you, wondering why the gong didn't ring. I walked to the kitchen to find it in a complete mess. I looked in the corner and saw a sleep dart. That is when I knew something was wrong. I can't find anyone anywhere so I assume that they were kidnapped and I am the only Master left to protect the valley. I will find out where the others were taken and then I will save them, but for now everyone should try to have a normal day and don't worry. I will save them." With that I turned and walked inside. I went back to the corner where I had found the sleep dart and looked for more clues. I looked for about an hour before I found a lot of foot prints at the back door. Croc foot prints. The huge Croc bandit group had done this. I immeadiatly ran to my room. I would follow those tracks. I would find my freinds and my father.
OK peoples that was the next chapter! Hope you guys liked it!
-betas4567
Hi people! Sorry if this post is kind of short, but we had our first pep rally of the year today and my head still hurts and my ears are still ringing. So next POV!
Tigress' POV
I woke up the next morning, but realized that there wasn't a gong. I remembered that Shifu said I could get up so I did. I wasn't in as much pain so I walked around. At first I thought that they had just left me to sleep a little longer, but when I got to the kitchen I saw the bowls that looked like they were from last night. The kitchen was a mess! Po never left the kitchen a mess except for when he got Monkey's cookies that one time. I knew something was wrong. Then I saw it. It was in the corner and I didn't see it at first. I was a sleep dart. now I knew that something was wrong. I looked outside and saw the villagers at the door. They oviously wanted to know why the gong didn't ring. I sighed and walked towards the door. This was going to be interesting to explain.
Hi people! Sorry if this post is kind of short, but we had our first pep rally of the year today and my head still hurts and my ears are still ringing. So next POV!
Tigress' POV
I woke up the next morning, but realized that there wasn't a gong. I remembered that Shifu said I could get up so I did. I wasn't in as much pain so I walked around. At first I thought that they had just left me to sleep a little longer, but when I got to the kitchen I saw the bowls that looked like they were from last night. The kitchen was a mess! Po never left the kitchen a mess except for when he got Monkey's cookies that one time. I knew something was wrong. Then I saw it. It was in the corner and I didn't see it at first. I was a sleep dart. now I knew that something was wrong. I looked outside and saw the villagers at the door. They oviously wanted to know why the gong didn't ring. I sighed and walked towards the door. This was going to be interesting to explain.
@Tigress16 - thanks! glad you liked it! it took a lot of thought to come up with! and yup my friend is completly better now!!! she was told that she could do everything normally on the 16th so she has been so excited! she also said that she will definatly wear a helmet from now on. Thank you so much for being so caring and always sticking with the story! You are a really great friend!
@All You Awesome Readers - I have like one POV left that I can think of so I might need to ask for ideas a little further into the story so keep reading and look for the I NEED IDEAS post to come up. It will be on this thread so keep checking!