ok well heres my very first fanfic in the kfp universe. Please comment and enjoy. It took me 1 school day and night to write what i've got. I even lost sleep over this! :)
Hahaha! Awesome chapter. Poor Neo, I hope the doctor/nurse comes back VERY soon. Also, I love how Silvermist was in such a daze and went crazy with the bell.
Me: Run Bluewire! We'll go to some random country. I don't care which!
Travis; You can run all you want, but you should know that we've chipped you.
Me: *I look at him* You chipped me?!
Silvermist: Travis, that was supposed to be a secret.
Me: You knew about this?!
Silvermist: Umm...
Me: When did this happen?!
Travis: We didn't plant a chip in your brain or skin or something like that. We just...
Silvermist: *covers his mouth* Hush up!
@batksee
Me: RUN BATSKEE!!
Neo: THERE YOU ARE!
Me:AAAAHHH!!!
Neo: YOU WILL BE MY PUPIL!!!!
Part 27
Neo was staring at the note on the door?
Neo: will return in 10 minutes?
He flung his arms up to the sky and yelled.
Neo: NOOOOO!!!!!!!
of course he forgot his arm was broken soooo
Neo: ak!
There was a pop sound and he just sat there holding his arm and trying to fight the tears.
Neo: ooouuuuch?
- - -
Silvermist entered the antique store and a bell rang that was up at the top corner of the door. No one came to greet her so he went to the front counter and saw a bell. She smiled as if she got a present for Christmas. She looked at the bell for a second and then went crazy.
*Ring! Ring! Ring! Ring! Ring! Ring!
There was some shuffling in the drape behind the counter. There was a loud crashing sound followed by a grunt and then finally some foot prints emanated from behind the curtain. A black bear thumped out from behind the curtains.
???: what, WHAT, WHAAAAT?!?!? WHAT DO YOU WHAT!?!?
Silvermist just continued to ring the bell non-stop. Not noticing the bear at all.
*Ring! Ring! Ring! Ring! Ring! Ring! Rin-
The bear grew tired of this annoyance so he used 2 claws to stop the bell from actually ringing. Silvermist got out of her daze and looked at the paw then up the arm to the face of the bear. He had a very agitated face and just looked at silvermist. She smiled sheepishly.
Silvermist: hi?
TBC
Me: *whispering undering desk* Good chapter, Bluewire! I wonder what the red cross hospital sign said.
Silvermist: *sniffing ground close by the desk I'm hiding under* Batskee's scent. I sense she's close by.
Me: Yikes...
Silvermist: She's here. In this very room.
Me: I say we go somewhere far, far away from here. Someplace where they'd never expect we'd go! Like...
Silvermist: Alaska? Nah. Master Kainen loves going back to his home town.
Me: Yeah that is...AHHHH!!!
~*Batskee*~
Feel free to use any of my characters as well.
@batskee
Me to batskee: good plan! But where are we going to go!?!?
Neo: bluewirrrre, where are yooooou?
I look behind us.
Me: yea...we should probably start running now!
-Feel free to use neo or whatever-
Part 26
Neo walked/limped down the dirt road and finally found the red plus symbol. The building was fairly large and had steps going up to the door. Neo looked up the steps and they just grew longer and longer.
Neo: oh no?.
- - -
Silvermist: NEO! NEO!?
She yelled trying to get through the crowded market. But then as she just glanced past a store while yelling?
Silvermist: THERE IT IS!!!!
She began to do her victory dance and moon-walked over to the entrance of the store. She spun around excited to read the name of the store.
Silvermist: Cugo?s knickknacks, bagatelles, and sundries? Hmm?wonder if he can tell me about the map!
Silvermist got to the door of the store and entered the establishment, not knowing what lay ahead.
- - -
Neo struggled to climb the staircase of what seemed a hundred steps. He was crawling up one step at a time exhausted. But finally he reached the top.
Neo: (huff) I (huff) made (it)?huh?
He got up to his feet. There was something on the door of the hospital. Neo read it and fell to his knees. His eyes didn?t move from the sign.
Neo: no?it can?t be?
TBC
Me to you: I say we should go to a different state or country, change our names, and act like we've lived their our whole lives! Then, possibly change our whole look and speak in accents!
Silvermist: *looking around town* Ohhh Batskee! Where are you?
Ruby; Come out, come out, wherever you are!
Jared; You too Bluewire. We want to have a little..."discussion".
Me to you: And we should probably go as soon as possible!
~*Batskee*~
Nice chapters. Haha, Silvermist running ahead without looking back sounds like her. I hope Neo will be okay.
@batskee
Me:aaaaahhhh!!!! Neo, get away from me!!!!
Neo: you will learn my ways!
I run over to batskee.
Me to batskee: where do we go?!?!
?TBC
Part 25
Silvermist and neo awoke again, packed up, and set off for the last time. They walked along the path parallel to the river and soon found the giant mill in the clearing.
Silvermist: look that?s the mill!
They ran to the village at full speed but neo forgot about his injuries. He strained his leg but continued to limp/ walk to the village instead.
neo to himself: ouch!...that?s gona hurt for a while?
When neo finally got there the village was full of life. Now neo had to find silvermist? he walked around for a while and thought to himself.
Neo: ugh! Ah! My arm!
He clenched his broken arm till the pain went away.
Neo: alright?to the hospital?.
- - -
Silvermist ran ahead and straight into the market. There were several stands selling food and jewelry.
Silvermist: now where is that serpent?.
- - -
Neo finally gave up looking for the hospital and asked one of the locals. He approached a pig.
Neo: hi?is there a hospital nearby?
Pig: yea, it?s down the street with a red-Cross symbol on the door. Ya can?t miss it!
Neo: thanks?
- - -
Silvermist was looking for the serpent diligently. She held her hand above her eyes so the light didn?t get in the way. But then grew tired of looking.
Silvermist: wait?where?s neo!?
She looked behind her at the crowd of merchants and villagers.
TBC I hope this one?s alright ,I have mixed feelings about it?
Thanks. I'm still working out some other future stories that'll come before that.
Awesome! I think I inspired someone to do something in their stories!
Ruby: Great job Batskee! You actually did something good for once!
Me: Yeah I...HEY!
Ruby: Hahaha!
Silvermist: Apprentice?! I'll save you Bluewire! *runs out door*
Travis: Oh no. Run Neo! She's coming after you!
Master Kainen: I just thought of something. We could have Batskee as our apprentice since we're Kung Fu Masters.
Ruby: *grins slyly* Come here my pupil!
Me: *gulp* Bluewire! We need to run and go someplace in hiding!
~*Batskee*~
Ruby: You can run, but you can't hide from your Kung Fu Master! Just like you can't run from the Kung Fu Master Neo!
@batskee
Sorry for being so late  been really busy moving and stuff. If you made such a story, I would totally read it! Hmmm?someone actually stealing the stars? I might mention or even tell another story about it oh yea and I?ll try to post tomorrow: 3
Neo: a kung fu master? Awesome!!!!!! THANKS RUBY!!
Me: I?ll never hear the end of this?
Neo: hear that!? I?m a kung fu master!
Me: yea I did?
Neo: if I?m a kung fu master then that makes you?
Me: oh no.
Neo: my APPRENTICE!!
Me: uhh?what?
Neo: COME YOUNG ONE! YOU HAVE MUCH TO LEARN!
Me: HELP ME!!!!!!!
-Bluewire-
Yeah, I think so. I'm not entirely sure though. But anyways,
Silvermist: The stars can be taken away??
Me: The star can be stolen from the sky??
Ruby: Woah. For a second, Neo sounded like a wise Kung Fu Master. Almost like Oogway.
Silvermist: Heh-heh, Batskee had in mind a story, that had a little bit something to do with the stars. But not exactly like this.
Me: Shush! Hmm, I wonder if anyone was 'planning' to take away the stars.
@batskee
Yea! I can?t wait for summer break! What is it like 3 months away?
Part 24
Neo and silvermist sat close to the campfire as day turned to night. They just finished eating the left over sticky rice.
Silvermist: so what?s so amazing that you wanted to show me?
Neo: here?
He put the bowl down and walked over to the sleeping mats that were set parallel to each other. He sat down facing her and patted the other sleeping mat next to him.
Silvermist: what is it?
Neo: here I?ll show you.
Silvermist put down her bowl and walked over to the other mat. Neo laid down flat and looked straight up. Silvermist looked at him as she sat down. She laid down flat then looked up to where neo was looking. The sky was littered with stars.
Neo: what do you see?
Silvermist: what? There just stars?.
Neo: yea but after a while people don?t even realize they?re there?seeing stars could be as valuable as the air we breathe or the water we drink.
Silvermist: what are you talking about?
Neo: it?s just that people don?t enjoy what they have until it?s taken away?
Silvermist: how can the stars be taken away?
Neo: people take what they can get, as much as they can get, resources, money, even lives. So don?t forget?people will always find a way to even take the stars away.
Silvermist got up and walked over to the fire again.
Silvermist: I don?t know what?s up with you but it?s kinda strange?
Neo: sorry, thinking a lot tends to do that to me?
Later that night silvermist was at her sleeping mat. The fire was out and the forest was calm. Neo was already asleep. She looked up to the sky starring at the stars as they twinkled gently.
Silvermist to herself: even the stars?.
TBC
Silvermist: *puts on boxing gloves* Alright, you tent! Put'em up! Put'em up I say!
Me: *facepalm* Anyways, thank you. I had a wonderful spring break. I start doing school on Monday. The next break I get, will be the ultimate one. Summer break! Hurray!
@batskee
Oh, alright! Have fun on your break!
Part 23
Silvermist continued to try and set up her tent. Neo held his nose which was feeling a bit better with the cold cloth. He watched her while she was wrestling with the tent. But sadly, the tent was winning. Silvermist almost had the last pole in place but then she heard something click and the whole tent caved in. Silvermist was trapped underneath?THE TENT OF EVIL!!!!!! Neo put the wet cloth down and stood up.
Neo: uh, do you need some more help?
Silvermist: no, I?m going to stay here and pretend I?m a ghost.
Neo: alright, aright no need to get snippy.
Neo found the entrance to the tent and lifted the opening for silvermist to escape. She managed to get out crawling on her hands and knees. Neo looked down at her with a smirk. He held out his good hand.
Neo: looks like tents are both our enemies now!
Silvermist: yea no kidding.
She grabbed his hand and he helped her up.
Neo: don?t thing you?ll be using that tonight.
Silvermist pouted and crossed her arms.
Silvermist: but I like my tent!
Neo: don?t worry, the outdoors are even better at night!
Silvermist: oh yea how?
Neo: you?ll see later, now what?s for dinner!?!?
The sun was setting and forest began to emulate with the sound of crickets and the river.
TBC
Did I say something about not having a vacation? Well if I did, I must correct myself. I do have a vacation. In fact, I'm still on it.
Also, I liked that part! Neo VS. Tents.
Me: That should be an interesting battle.
Silvermist: Very much so. Heh-heh, tents don't go too well with me either. It takes me, Travis, and sometimes even Master Kainen to put up one tent.
Me: Also, thank you for thinking my nut-disliking theory was good.
@batskee
1)O.o you didn't get your vacation yet!?
2) Thanks for the background! Makes sense too!
@tigress16
Glad to be back! X3
Oh and did you happen to have your spring break yet?
Part 22
Neo looked up at her.
Neo: and that's it?
Silvermist: yea.
Neo: alright then, uh we got enough food for a few days.
Silvermist: that's more than enough! OK let?s go!
Neo nodded then packed up the supplies.
they headed down the side of the river listening to the calming flow of water and enjoying the sunshine that broke through the trees. silvermist had the map out and was walking ahead of neo.
Silvermist: so neo...
Neo: yea?
Silvermist: how exactly did you escape this Zaou guy's prison?
Neo: well...by catapult.
silvermist twisted around astonished.
Silvermist: by what!? Are you serious!?
She just looked at him waiting for him to answer.
Neo finally spoke.
Neo: wasn't really planned...it was a spur of the moment kinda deal.
Silvermist: reckless aren?t you?
Neo: I?d like to think of it as more spontaneous.
Silvermist turned back around while walking.
Silvermist: a fall like that would explain the broken arm.
Neo looked at his useless arm.
Later they walked in silence as the afternoon turned into night.
They set up camp once again. Neo had a mat to sleep one once again and silvermist was making her tent. She was struggleing with the tent like a dog struggles to lick peanut butter off its nose.
Silvermist: ugh! A little help?
Neo stood up and tried to help hold the tent up while she set up the rods. But then?
*SMACK!*
Neo: MY NOSE!!!!
Neo fell over holding face with his right paw. He rolled around in pain.
Silvermist didn?t know what she could do to help but just give him a cold damp cloth.
Silvermist: here.
Neo spoke in a voice one would hear if they had a cold or just held their nose closed while they spoke.
Neo: thanks?
Silvermist began to joke with him.
Silvermist: doesn?t look like tents like you very much!
Neo looked up at her and began to smile.
Neo: yea, my new enemy!
TBC
AWESOME!!! You're back! Oh man, that was an EPIC chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next, this is just TO AWESOME! I'm so glad you're back, I've missed ya!
It's good to have ya back my friend! It's good that you had an o-k lazy spring break. And mine is going really good. I have a good week planned ahead. Hopefully everything won't get canceled...
But anyways, I really liked that part. I loved how Silvermist tried to immitate the voice and look of the old man. You've really got her down good!
Also, about the nut-disliking kinda thing; I shall explain it:
Silvermist, while in CuddleMuffin's dungeon like-place, the guards were given new weapons. Exploding nuts. Special powder carefully put within the nut shells allowed them to explode when thrown.
She accidently ate one and it really hurt her mouth. Kai got her to etry nuts after a long while again, but she just didn't like them after that. They tasted awful and she always remembered the loud and painful experience after that one nut.
~*Batskee*~
I was working on that explanation for awhile. I hope it's okay.
@everyone
Hello everyone! I?m back from an extremely lazy spring break!
Part 21
Neo: I didn?t get to eat for what seemed like DAYS.
What neo thought were days was actually just a few hours?silvermist thought of neo?s situation and how he even ended up in the middle of the forest with 2 arrows in his back. She was just about to ask him how he escaped but was interrupted.
Neo: so silvermist: why are you heading to Huno village?
Silvermist: I?m kinda on a treasure hunt.
She looked at him worrying what he would think.
Silvermmist to herself: seriously?!?! Treasure hunting!?! How lame is THAT?!?
Neo: treasure hunting huh? Sounds kinda exciting!
Silvermist: yea! I was following a lead I got from this one merchant who sold me the map. He told me some kind of clue. It goes like this?
Silvermist?s face scrunched up to look like an old man and she even tried to copy his voice.
?Your quest begins in the west, the village powered by water. The serpent will show you the way?? that?s all he could tell me.
Neo: how do you know huno village is even the right village?
Silvermist: I did some more investigating and found out that huno village uses the river as a wheat grinder. Huno village produces more than half of the province?s wheat supply.
Neo: the serpent will show the way?
Silvermist: I don?t get the last part either?
Neo: maybe it will make since when we get there!
Silvermist: yea!
Silvermist and neo finished eating and packed up. Silvermist was filling her canteen for the long hike ahead. She was facing away from neo and yelled over her shoulder to him. He was shuffling through the supplies for an inventory check.
Silvermist: hey neo!
Neo: yea!?
Silvermist: last night when you were asleep, something interesting happened!
Neo: oh yea!?
Silvermist: yea! A squirrel came out of nowhere!
Neo suddenly stopped shuffling through the bag and looked up to silvermist. He responded in the same tone trying not to reveal his shock and fear.
Neo: what did it do?!
Silvermist was finished filling the canteen and turned around. Neo went back to his inventory check.
She walked by him and put out the ashes of what was left of the fire.
Silvermist: oh well not much really, it ate a disgusting acorn then disappeared.
TBC not much of a cliff hanger but it?ll get there :3
@batskee
THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH!!!! >O< i would have lost this post for sure! i had an...ok spring break so how was yours? also can you explain the nut-phobia sometime?
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oh yea and I?ll try to post tomorrow: 3
