ok well heres my very first fanfic in the kfp universe. Please comment and enjoy. It took me 1 school day and night to write what i've got. I even lost sleep over this! :)
AWESOME!!! You're back! Oh man, that was an EPIC chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next, this is just TO AWESOME! I'm so glad you're back, I've missed ya!
It's good to have ya back my friend! It's good that you had an o-k lazy spring break. And mine is going really good. I have a good week planned ahead. Hopefully everything won't get canceled...
But anyways, I really liked that part. I loved how Silvermist tried to immitate the voice and look of the old man. You've really got her down good!
Also, about the nut-disliking kinda thing; I shall explain it:
Silvermist, while in CuddleMuffin's dungeon like-place, the guards were given new weapons. Exploding nuts. Special powder carefully put within the nut shells allowed them to explode when thrown.
She accidently ate one and it really hurt her mouth. Kai got her to etry nuts after a long while again, but she just didn't like them after that. They tasted awful and she always remembered the loud and painful experience after that one nut.
~*Batskee*~
I was working on that explanation for awhile. I hope it's okay.
@everyone
Hello everyone! I?m back from an extremely lazy spring break!
Part 21
Neo: I didn?t get to eat for what seemed like DAYS.
What neo thought were days was actually just a few hours?silvermist thought of neo?s situation and how he even ended up in the middle of the forest with 2 arrows in his back. She was just about to ask him how he escaped but was interrupted.
Neo: so silvermist: why are you heading to Huno village?
Silvermist: I?m kinda on a treasure hunt.
She looked at him worrying what he would think.
Silvermmist to herself: seriously?!?! Treasure hunting!?! How lame is THAT?!?
Neo: treasure hunting huh? Sounds kinda exciting!
Silvermist: yea! I was following a lead I got from this one merchant who sold me the map. He told me some kind of clue. It goes like this?
Silvermist?s face scrunched up to look like an old man and she even tried to copy his voice.
?Your quest begins in the west, the village powered by water. The serpent will show you the way?? that?s all he could tell me.
Neo: how do you know huno village is even the right village?
Silvermist: I did some more investigating and found out that huno village uses the river as a wheat grinder. Huno village produces more than half of the province?s wheat supply.
Neo: the serpent will show the way?
Silvermist: I don?t get the last part either?
Neo: maybe it will make since when we get there!
Silvermist: yea!
Silvermist and neo finished eating and packed up. Silvermist was filling her canteen for the long hike ahead. She was facing away from neo and yelled over her shoulder to him. He was shuffling through the supplies for an inventory check.
Silvermist: hey neo!
Neo: yea!?
Silvermist: last night when you were asleep, something interesting happened!
Neo: oh yea!?
Silvermist: yea! A squirrel came out of nowhere!
Neo suddenly stopped shuffling through the bag and looked up to silvermist. He responded in the same tone trying not to reveal his shock and fear.
Neo: what did it do?!
Silvermist was finished filling the canteen and turned around. Neo went back to his inventory check.
She walked by him and put out the ashes of what was left of the fire.
Silvermist: oh well not much really, it ate a disgusting acorn then disappeared.
TBC not much of a cliff hanger but it?ll get there :3
@batskee
THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH!!!! >O< i would have lost this post for sure! i had an...ok spring break so how was yours? also can you explain the nut-phobia sometime?
@ everyone
wont be posting very much over spring break, mostly because i dont have a computer myself and i have to got to the library every day.....and i cant get a ride there so ja....
@tigress16 &batksee
thanks for your comments but i'll be gone for maybe the week
-bluewire- l-8erz
Really? Cool! I'm kind of a slow eater. Except that one time I had meatloaf, potatoes, and carrots at that one place....
Silvermist: You scarfed that thing down.
Me: What can I say? I was a hungry girl. I didn't time myself because I was in a public place, but still.
Silvermist: You didn't have a watch or stopwatch either.
@Bluewire:
First off: Why she doesn't like nuts, eh?
Silvermist: Those things are horrible! They're hard as rocks, they taste like dirt, they're really loud, and they hurt!
Me: Err, I'll explain a little later. Unless you want the information now.
Secondly: Hahaha! Neo, you were one hungry wolf!
Silvermist: Even though I sometimes do the same thing when hungry, I don't think I'll ever unsee that.
Travis: Here, try this. *holds delicious chicken bone in front of face*
Silvermist: *eyes wide and tail wagging* What were we talking about??
Aww, that sounds like me! I once ate a huge bowl of mac and cheese in 37 seconds! I timed myself.
Shadow: And you people think she isn't crazy...
Me: What? I was HUNGRY!
Shadow: Sure... that was it...
Me: Whatever. But that ROCKED! I can NOT wait to see where this goes, just TO awesome!
{{Not sure if this got posted but I'll try again}}
@batskee You never told me why he hates nuts XD
@Tigress16
Thanks
@danny253ma
Hello!
Part 20
The next morning
Silvermist woke up early and decided to make some breakfast. She searched her supplies and was able to make some sticky rice and tea. As she cooked the rice neo smelled the delectable sweetness and jolted up off of his sleeping mat.
Neo: wheres the food?
Neo stared at silvermist wide eyed.
Silvermist: it?ll be ready in a moment.
She added a few spices to the rice and they were finished.
Silvermist: dig in!
Neo grabbed a bowl full of the sweet smelling rice and took a bite. The taste was undeniably the best thing he had ever tasted EVER. He began to eat faster and faster till the chopsticks were barely visible. Silvermist stared at neo disturbed at what she saw. He finished his bowl and held it out to silvermist. His face was covered with at least half of the actual rice.
Neo: seconds please!
Silvermist: yea sure?
She handed him the bowl slowly almost afraid to see him eat once again. Neo devoured the second bowl like fat man in a hot dog eating contest. He handed the bowl to her once more.
Neo: one more please.
He ate the rice slowly this time.
Silvermist: are you alright?
Neo had a mouth full of rice so he swallowed.
Neo: yea I?m alright why?
Silvermist: you just ate 2 bowls of sticky rice in under 1 minute!
Neo: oh that?yea sorry you had to see that?
TBC
@batskee You never told me why he hates nuts XD
@Tigress16
Thanks
@danny253ma
Hello!
Part 20
The next morning
Silvermist woke up early and decided to make some breakfast. She searched her supplies and was able to make some sticky rice and tea. As she cooked the rice neo smelled the delectable sweetness and jolted up off of his sleeping mat.
Neo: wheres the food?
Neo stared at silvermist wide eyed.
Silvermist: it?ll be ready in a moment.
She added a few spices to the rice and they were finished.
Silvermist: dig in!
Neo grabbed a bowl full of the sweet smelling rice and took a bite. The taste was undeniably the best thing he had ever tasted EVER. He began to eat faster and faster till the chopsticks were barely visible. Silvermist stared at neo disturbed at what she saw. He finished his bowl and held it out to silvermist. His face was covered with at least half of the actual rice.
Neo: seconds please!
Silvermist: yea sure?
She handed him the bowl slowly almost afraid to see him eat once again. Neo devoured the second bowl like fat man in a hot dog eating contest. He handed the bowl to her once more.
Neo: one more please.
He ate the rice slowly this time.
Silvermist: are you alright?
Neo had a mouth full of rice so he swallowed.
Neo: yea I?m alright why?
Silvermist: you just ate 2 bowls of sticky rice in under 1 minute!
Neo: oh that?yea sorry you had to see that?
TBC
HAHA! Poor SIlvermist!
Shadow: That's sad.
Me: I don't see why she hates nuts so much, they're yummy! Most of them, anyways.
Shadow: Smooth.
Me: AWESOME JOB! I can NOT wait to see more!
@tigress16
Alright then! ;D
Part 19
The squirrel came back with something in its mouth. Silvermist looked at the cute little thing in wonderment as to what it had.
Silvermist: what do you got there little guy?
The squirrel stood up straight and spat out an acorn then began to eat it. Silvermist?s face began to grow pale; she closed her eyes shut and yelled?
Silvermist: how can you eat that!? It?s so gross! Yuck!
She covered her eyes and continued to make disturbing sounds as she began to think of nuts. After she was done dry-heaving, she looked up at where the squirrel was. It just vanished. She looked around for it but there was no sign of it anywhere.
Silvermist: aww! It was kinda cute? until it ate the nasty acorn.
Neo shifted his position to get comfortable. Silvermist looked at him and thought she should go sleep too.
TBC a bit short :p
@batskee
Oh I really hope not! ;D
@tigress116(previously tigress16)
Yea! Its kinda cool writing about someone else?s character!
Part 18
Silvermist investigated the loud snap that emanated from in front of her. She slowly walked over to a tree and jumped behind it. Nothing was there.
Silvermist: huh, guess it was nothing.
She began to walk back to her seat.
*SHUFFLE*
The sound came from up above. She looked up and found?
Silvermist: a squirrel? Well what are ya doing out at night? Aren?t ya supposed to be asleep? And?
She noticed something even stranger.
Silvermist: why are you white?
She kept looking at the squirrel as she got back to her seat. It just kept looking down at her with those big black eyes. But then it went away for a moment and then came back with something in its mouth.
TBC
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You never told me why he hates nuts XD
