ok well heres my very first fanfic in the kfp universe. Please comment and enjoy. It took me 1 school day and night to write what i've got. I even lost sleep over this! :)
WHOA! You put Silvermist in!
Blaze: SWEET! It's miss Silvermisty!
Silver: TO AWESOME!
Me: I totally agaree! I love it, this is just TO awesome! I'm so glad that Neo is okay, and now he's got a traveling partner too! AWESOMENESS!!!!!
Your fans and friends...
Tigress16, Silver and Blaze
@batskee
Thanks! Making it up as I go XD
Part 17
Silvermist: yea, why?
Neo: its five miles away for Don Zaou?s fortress. I saw a sign before I was kidnapped in the fortress. Do you have a map?
Silvermist: uh-huh, here.
She shuffles through a bag near her and pulls out a detailed map. She hands it to neo and he unfolds it to look at their guide to safety.
Neo: now which route were you taking?
Silvermist points to a route that leads right past the fortress.
Silvermist: there.
Neo: we have to find another way. If we even go near the fortress, Zaou?s guards could capture us. Why don?t we go here?
Silvermist: but that will take way longer than my original plan!
Neo examined the map a little more.
Neo: wait, right there!
Silvermist: but that?s a river.
Neo: exactly. Look where it leads.
Silvermist took a look at where neo was pointing to.
Silvermist: oh! The river leads right into town!
Neo: yea!
Silvermist: alright then! Looks like we have a bit of a ways to got tomorrow!
Get some rest.
Neo: yea, Night silvermist.
Silvermist: night neo.
Neo began to sleep and silvermist stayed up for awhile longer.
(SNAP!)
Silvermist looked up from the fire she was tending to.
Silvermist: huh?
TBC
@batskee
Mischief eh? Hmmm?
Part 16
He turned around slowly and the first thing he saw were silver eyes as wide as can be. Her face was a foot away from his and he moved back to get some distance. The she-wolf?s fur was gleaming in the light of the campfire. She had a dark metal-gray vest along with black kung fu pants.
???: so your awake!
She kneeled down to neo?s level.
Neo: uh, yea?how did I get here?
???: oh well I found you while I was traveling. You seemed hurt so I did what I could to help. So what?s your name?
Neo looked consciously at the young she wolf.
Neo: I?m neo, what?s your name?
???: I?m Silvermist Chun!
Neo: Silvermist huh? Well thanks again.
Silvermist: when I found you, you had 2 arrows in your back. Who were you running from?
Neo: this clouded leopard named Don Zaou? he tricked me into thinking he was alright and then WAM! I?m out cold.
Neo reached for the back of his head. He winced at the tenderness.
Neo: oh man...what a fall. So Silvermist, Where were you headed?
Silvermist: oh I was headed to huno village, but now?WE are going.
Neo looked up at her. He felt a little more at ease but then filled with dread.
Neo: did you say huno village?.?
TBC-hope
Part 15
Neo flies through the air into the treetops. He falls and hits every branch, stick, and leaf on his way down. He hit the ground so fierce that he was knocked out cold upon impact. As neo laid there unconscious a silver wolf in a dark metal-gray vest was reading a map and noticed something large was on the ground. She looked down to find a wolf face down in the grass.
???: huh?
She leaned down and touched neo?s shoulder to try and wake him up. Just then her eyes widened as she saw the 2 arrows in his back. She hastily put the map away and dragged neo into a small field. She then set up camp and began to remove and patch up neo?s wounds. The next morning neo woke up near a fire and quickly tried to get up. A sharp pain jolted from his back and left arm. He looked to where he was hurt and examined the wraps and bandages he didn't have before. He looked at his left arm wondering who helped him. Neo proceeded to looked around a bit more trying to find anyone.
???: hi!
Neo jumped up a little bit and slowly turned around so he didn?t hurt himself.
TBC
Shopping? Ohh, I hate shopping. Especially clothes shopping. Shopping for video games....that's a different story. But anyways, I'm looking forward to the next part! So, this part tells how Silvermist and Neo met huh? Cool!
@everyone
next part is coming up soon!
with a little help from batskee, i think this part will be interesting.
also, sorry to everyone for not posting! my mom "stole" my weekend buying some cloths. to be honest, it took longer than i wanted >3<
-bluewire-
Whoa! The arrows struck him down! I hope he's okay.
Silvermist: He just got hit with arrows! *shouts* Wolf down! Wolf down!
Me: Don't yell in my ear!
Silvermist: I don't care. Neo's hurt. He has to be okay. Yes. He's alright. He's telling the story. Unless...
Me: Unless? What do you mean 'unless'?
Silvermist: Unless the Neo in our time is an imposter!
Me: *facepalm*
Ruby to Neo: *in room, laying in bed with ice pack on head* I don't think I got that memo in time.
Zenghui: She made one, launched herself, aimed it wrong, and ended up getting slammed down to the ground. The ground in front of the catapult.
Ruby: I still see the dancing turkeys, Zenghui! They're so funny!
Zenghui; She's hallucinating again...
NOOOOOO!!!!! NEO!!!! AHHH! SOMEONE DO SOMETHING!!!!!!!! THIS IS HORRIBLE!!!!!
Shadow: DOn't mind her, she's just loving your story!
Me: OF COURSE I DO!!!! Don't you?
Shadow: DUH!
Me: Good... now where was I? Oh yes, panicking...
*I run around the room, screaming and Shadow facepalm's*
@nystar15
Neo: a genius?
Me: don?t let it get to your head!
Neo: well the escape WAS all my idea!
Me: ugh?
@batskee
Neo to ruby: I would hold off on making the catapult?.
Me: why?
Neo: just watch?
Part 14
The group of guards were getting closer and closer. Neo got a hold of the lever and pulled it back swiftly. The catapult shot neo violently towards the forest.
Neo: woooo hoooooo!!!!!!
The guards got into position.
Ox Capitan: Archers ready! Aim! FIRE!
As the guard Capitan said fire, he pointed his drawn sword at the airborne wolf. The archers shot at neo in a barrage of high speed arrows. An arrow whizzed past neo with a high pitched whistling sound. He did some maneuvers to dodge the arrows but it was all in vain. 2 arrows pierced neo?s middle and lower back.
Neo: AHG!
Neo reached for the arrows in his back began to plummet down into the treetops?
TBC!
Yes! Neo's going to make an escape...and in style if I might add.
Ruby: Why didn't I think of that?
Zenghui: Ruby, what are you doing?
Ruby: I'm making a catapult that shoots me all the way to the Valley of Peace!
Zenghui: You're going to hurt yourself trying.
Ruby: I will not. Owww! *gets a paper cut from messing with blueprints*
Zenghui: I told you.
@everyone
Thanks to everyone who?s reading this still! You?re all the best!
Part 13
The platform split off left and right. There was a group of guards making their way around to neo?s location from the right and the left path was clear. Neo dashed down the left path looking behind him for any guards. Neo double took what he saw. There was a guard looking down the stairs where the other two were then reached for the bell near the door. He rang the bell to alert everyone that the prisoner has escaped. The ring echoed all through the fortress and hundreds of guards marched from their posts to the prisons with haste. Neo knew he had mere moments before he was found. He ran as fast as he could down the platform passing a catapult on his way to the entrance gates. He continued running till a huge group of guards noticed him from far away.
Ox Capitan: there he is! Grab him!
Neo immediately stopped in his tracks, did a back flip to get momentum in the other direction and dashed in the other direction. As he ran he tried to formulate an escape plan. Just then he noticed the catapult ahead of him.
Neo to himself: that?s it!
He got to the catapult, which was conveniently already prepared to be fired. He jumped in the bowl shaped sling then reached for the lever to fire the catapult.
TBC-feels a little short because it is!
Awesome! Go Neo!
Ruby: Haha! I can imagine the guard falling down the steps. *turns to Zenghui* Sort of like how I pulled the rug from under you and you fell down!
Zenghui: *holding bag of ice on forehead* Don't remind me.
Part 12
After the portal closed, neo ran down the hallway and took a sharp left. There was a long staircase leading to 2 steel doors. The steel doors had small windows and light was beaming through, catching whatever dust flew into it making it visible. Neo slowly sneaked up the stairs and listened to see if any guards were posted outside.
Crock: aah man?.
The crock was rubbing his neck.
Rhino: what?
Crock: it?s just my neck; it?s been killing me for the past 2 nights.
Rhino: go to the infirmary then.
Crock: yea, you?ll be ok alone?
Rhino: yea.
The crock walked away.
Neo to himself: this is my chance!
Neo climbed up on the hallway walls by pinning his legs in such a way that comfortable and knocked on the door.
Rhino: huh? Is that you Chad?
He began to open the door and walk inside.
Rhino: you know you really gota remember your key-
Neo dropped down similarly to the last guard but landed behind the guard and roundhouse kicked him down the long flight of stairs. He quickly ran out to the platform which towered over the field in the middle of the palace. The platform ran all around the, what at first seemed to be a palace, but now looked more like a fortress.
TBC
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