Ruby: Ahhh, ya gotta love lollipops.
Me: I'm not a big fan.
*you hear the music* dun Dun DUNNNN!
Me: Where did that come from?
Master Kainen: Oh, hey guys. I started a band. We're practicing music. *raises paw and they start practicing again*
Me: *sigh* Anyway, great part! I hope Neo's injuries recover soon. I wonder if those group of guards have something to do with that purse snatching ox...
well thats a shame. oh well!
i gotta work on my story!
Neo went to the front desk of the hospital with a proper cast, some bandages on his arms and face, and an orange lollypop. He walked to the nurse at the front desk.
Neo: oh hey, can I have an extra one?
He gestured to the lollypop in his hand by raising it up.
Nurse: sure. She opened a drawer in her desk and grabbed one and handed it over to him.
Neo: thanks! (He put his extra lollypop away)
Nurse: have a nice day!
Neo left the doctor?s office, walked outside and opened up the lollypop in his hand. Its orange transparency and perfect spherical form glimmered in the sunlight. A choir made a resonating ?aaaahhhhh?. Once his little moment was finished he looked to see where the choir hum was coming from. He saw a nearby group of ducks, pigs, and goats dressed in all white. They were all singing in unison right next to the hospital. He looked at them confused. A duck closest to him squinted offended.
Duck: what?! We?re practicing!
He just shook his head and continued to eat his lollypop when a huge group of guards charged past the hospital down the street and around the corner.
Neo: eh, might as well.
He walked down the steps of the hospital and followed the guards to see where they were heading off too.
TBC-feels short :/
Yes! New part! Go Silvermist go! Haha, good part, my friend.
Now, for your question. I'm not sure about Stuffpup. I don't really talk with her much. But I heard her stories are pretty good! Nystar15 likes TMNT, so she might be on those boards. I think she said she wouldn't be doing stories here anymore.
~back at the market place
Silvermist walked through the market looking for any trace of Neo. She also asked around until-
Silvermist: excuse me.
The pig turned around from looking at some merchandise at a nearby stand.
Silvermist: have you seen a grey & white wolf, about this tall, broken arm?
Pig: oh yea, he wanted to see a doctor or somethin?.
The pig pointed in the direction he pointed neo.
Pig: its down this road and past a few houses. It has a big square board with a white plus on it. Ya? can?t miss it.
Silvermist: thank you!
Silvermist walked away from the stand and the pig looked to a goat next to him.
Pig: since when am I a directory?!
The goat just shrugged and went back to looking at the merchandise.
Silvermist walked down the road and was almost to the hospital when down a few houses, an Ox with an axe burst out of the door of the house, looked down both roads to see which one was clear and ran in the opposite direction of silvermist.
Lady pig: SOME ONE HELP! THAT MAN JUST ROBBED ME!
A few dozen guards heard the commotion and came running. Silvermist moved as fast as the wind, down the street after the rouge Ox. The Ox ran around the corner with silvermist closing in from behind.
Back at Dr.Hu?s offace.
Dr.hu: alright young man, I need to gather some information before I administer any kind of treatment.
The doctor sat neo down on an examination table and gave him a diagnosis. A nurse stood aside idly waiting patiently for when the doctor needed assistance. She stood next to neo with a clipboard as the doctor worked. The doctor finished and the nurse handed the clipboard to the doctor. He shuffled through the papers.
Dr.Hu: well Mr.Neo, it seems you have a few hairline fractures in your thoracic cage,-
The nurse whispered to neo, translating what the doctor said into ?English?
Nurse: you nearly broke some ribs.
Dr.Hu: Some lacerations and contusions-
Nurse: some cuts and bruises.
Dr.Hu: on your hands, forearms, forehead, cheeks, and jaw. Also you seem to have Traumatic fractures in your Ulna and radius.
Nurse: your broken arm.
The doctor hands the nurse the clipboard and gets some supplies from a cabinet underneath the examination table.
Dr.Hu: new let?s take a look at your arm.
TBC- mostly because that?s all I got down
Ah, recaps. Kinda reminds me of what I had done for Minetigr20/Pen02guin for Mt. Frost. Anyway, I can't wait for the next part you post. It's been awhile.
Silvermist: You're the one to talk. You still haven't posted anything on your stories.
Me: Yeah I have!
Silvermist: Since when?
Silvermist: *pushes me aside* Forget about her. So, on with our conversation. We look forward to the next part/chapter of Neo's past.
Me: Can I come back into view now?
Silvermist: No. And if you don't listen, Master Kainen will duck tape you to the wall.
Me: 0_0 Wha-?!
Silvermist: You heard me.
Me: But I own this laptop! I shou-
Silvermist: *turns on walky-talky* She's not listening.
Master Kainen: *says back* Alright. I'll come right over.
Me: Excuse me while I run away now. *I run away*
@batskee & Rtfacts(might be misspelled, sorry)
It?s funny that you 2 are writing more on my topic than i am XD anyway i think I?ll write a recap of the story so far so that i don?t lose my place.
Thanks! Not many others come to read but your always welcome!
alright, so before i begin, I?m just saying that i wont recap from book 1...that would take way too long and I?m sure we all have lives XD
In the begging of book 3-The Tale of Neo: Chronicles?.
The furious five and neo wakeup to find out from shifu that there is a huge storm that is flooding the valley of peace and all they can do is wait. They all go to the kitchen for breakfast and po made some world class peach stew. There was a loud crash and everyone rushed outside to see what happened. It turns out that the training hall was struck by lightning! They couldn?t train or anything but mantis remembered that neo had a story to tell. He told/is still telling the tale of Zaou?s fortress. Neo was traveling to the valley of peace through the forest of Kadogawa when he came across a fortress, it was getting dark and he needed a place to say for the night so he was able to speak with the owner of the fortress. Don Zaou. Turns out, Zaou was an evil, deceptive clouded leopard that kept trespassers as trophies and prisoners. Neo later escaped and reunited 2 lost souls. He escaped from the fortress by catapult (not the best idea) and fell far off into some distant trees. He fell fast and hard onto the solid dirt ground below where a she-wolf found him completely by chance! They join up to find some treasure and travel to Huno village. They get separated due to their excitement (not pointing any fingers (cough)silvermist(cough)). Silvermist finds herself in the middle of the market and locates the serpent from the clue on a nearby building. She talks to the owner Griff who tells her that the previous owner could help them. She later leaves and begins to look for neo. Neo is left all alone in the village and thinks it?s a good idea to find a doctor for his broken arm. He asks a villager where it is and the pig points him in the right direction. He finds the hospital but the doctor isn?t there so he has a little episode. The doctor finds neo on the porch and invites him in for a quick checkup.
I hope this helps! It certainly helped me a lot! Gives me some focus and junk.
Ok the next one will defiantly be out soon! I PROMISE!
You're welcome. And yes, you spelled his name correctly. Also, don't worry. They won't start a riot. They wouldn't have anyways.
Ruby: Yeah. We discovered our licenses to start riots expired.
Kai: So, we're gonna go renew them!
Master Kainen: *sigh* Alright. I'll use the Teddy Bear.
Kai: Hey, maybe it'll distract the people so me and Ruby can go and continue our riot!
Also, I'm not sure what to say. I know I've felt that way before when starting a story all over again. Sometimes I just don't feel like it anymore. Too exhausting.
Hmm, we could always explain the things we know to the people who don't understand.
So, I can't give a definite answer on that. Sorry.
Haha, thanks! (Ruby please don't start a riot! Master Kainen, [that's how you spell it, right?], I'd rather you use the teddy bear than the chainsaw, thank you very much) I'd start it up again, but I can only post the parts I have saved-which would mean either re-writing the beginning (ugh) or starting the story up from the midway point. Just a little warning. It might be confusing for people who might not of read it before, or for those who forgot some of it.
Well, I think you should. I bet lots of other people on here would love it if you did. You're an awesome writer! (I'm still trying to find a better way to describe your writing, other than using the word 'Awesome'. Maybe there are no words to describe it...)
Anyway, yes. And if they don't post it, we'll just...
Ruby: Start a riot! *holds up a torch*
Kai: *holds up a pitch fork*
Master Kainen: *holds up teddy bear*
Ruby and Kai: *stare at Kainen*
Master Kainen: Uhh, sorry. Wrong pocket. *puts back Teddy Bear and takes out chain saw* There we go.
Guys! I meant we would just try again until they do accept it!
The three: Awww...
Hi back at ya! ;) Ah, I think it's Midnight the jaguarandi, not she-wolf And sooo....to refresh your memory for a sec, Haraki (coyote, Midnight's master), Caliko (clouded leopard) and Ranger (white tiger) are taking Neo, Midnight, and the three cubs somewhere, yes, Silvermist, Maya, Amy, Li, and the Furious Four are going to save them, and yes, Sage (who is a kid, too) and Mar had fallen into the Training Course and Shen had saved them.
Hi! I don't remember everything clearly, but Bluewire was correct, he was with the she-wolf (sorry, I can't remember her name) and the other two who had turned Shifu, Po, and Tigress into little ones, back at the Jade Palace, the Dragon Counsel had come to the Jade Palace as well, and I think Sage had saved one of the kung fu fighter who had been turned into a child from the training course.
@Bluewire and Batskee
Firstly, thanks. And yeah, WWWY (When We Were Young) sadly DID get deleted, and I've tried to re-post it, but NICK WON'T LET ME! I've tried like, three or four times.....I don't know why the Mods won't post it again....it's weird. And I had WWWY saved, but the pendrive I had it on got lost, so, I only have one part of it saved. Sorry. Do you guys remember what the last chapter was about? Maybe I could continue it from that point, since it didn't have many chapters left, anyway.
Yes! I remember that. It was Rtfact's story called When We Were Young. (I think that's it) I believe it got deleted sadly. Maybe she'll continue again sometime. But maybe she's a little busy with her other two stories.
I loved that story. It was so funny and made me laugh a lot.
hey, do you remember the name of that one topic that had had a bunch of us getting turned into children and neo was stuck with a female wolf and they needed to plan a way to escape with baby tigress, po, and shifu? i think silvermist was tracking neo's blood or something?
ring any bells?