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The Wolf in the Snow

Date: 10/31/12 4:35 PM
From: Batskee

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Chapter 1
A cart sped down the steep and rocky road of Hong Luan City. People jumped out of the way from the on the loose cart. The wheels on it wobbled now. It made a sharp turn and crashed through a cabbage stand and into an alley. It slammed into the walls of the narrow alley and the pegs that kept the wheels on the cart started to come loose.
White-tail Chun and his wife Ginger Chun walked away from the food stand with groceries. White-tail stopped and his eyes grew wide once he saw a cart coming their way. He stepped in front of Ginger, wanting to protect her and was going to face the cart head on!
Then the cart was coming at full speed towards the two. Then, suddenly the wheels popped off the cart and the cart slid on the rocky pavement and stopped in front of White-tail.
He looked inside the large cart and his eyes narrowed, his ears were flat down, and he felt some anger surge through him. "Silvermist!" he growled.
She slowly looked out from the cart that was big enough for her to fit in and sheepishly smiled. "Hi, Dad," she said nervously.

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Date: 03/08/13 6:27 PM
From: Tigress116

OH WOW! Poor Kai, poor Travis... WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN NOW?!?!?!?! AHHHH!!!! TO EPIC! I can NOT wait to see more, I sure am on the edge of my seat!

Your fan and friend...
Tigress16

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Date: 03/05/13 7:24 PM
From: syrup240

Nice job, Batskee!
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Date: 03/04/13 10:03 PM
From: Batskee

Master Kainen quickly round house kicked Kylie against the wall and saw Lee coming at him. Master Kainen gave him a hard punch back as well; leaving the two unconscious.
Dina and Darkmist helped Snowstar and Snowcrest up. Jade helped Mei and Chou get their capes out from the icicles.
Silvermist was relieved when she saw they were here. "Travis!" she said happily.
"Are you okay?" asked Travis, not looking away from Zainen. He feared that Zainen would try to attack while he was distracted.
"I'm alright," she responded.
Wolfy hugged Snowstar. Lou wagged his tail and said, "Snowstar! You're okay!"
Snowstar nodded, but then her attention turned towards Travis and Zainen.
Master Kainen, however, glared at Kai. Kai swallowed hard as the large polar bear shot daggers at him through the glare.
He didn't want to even think about the pain he would give him. He had enough troubles with the poison still running through him.
Travis tightened his grip on Zainen and narrowed his deep blue eyes.
Zainen just smiled sheepishly. "Brother, you wouldn't harm me would you? We are blood related."
Travis growled and said, "You are not my brother. I want nothing from you. You hurt my friends, you hurt my Dad, and you were about to take all that I loved away from me. Compared to the things I could do to you, harming you is an understatement."
Zainen was silent as Travis was about to give him a hard hit, but then Travis let him go. "If we're going to fight, I should at least give you a chance to run."
"Run? Ha!" Zainen scoffed.
"I wouldn't be laughing if I were you," said Master Kainen. Lee and Kylie tried to get free, but Master Kainen held them both back. Snowcrest and Snowstar looked at each other. They looked at Lee and Kylie and then at Master Kainen. He said to them, "Go for it."
Kai stepped back as he saw the wolves chi-block Lee and Kylie; just like the two had done to them.
He couldn't imagine what his punishment would be. He then felt a sharp pain in his stomach. The poison was starting again.
But he dared not make a wish. Especially when Travis and Zainen were about to fight.
Travis and Zainen both glared at each other. Silvermist, Wolfy, Lou, and White-tail went to help, but Master Kainen told them to stop. They looked at him curiously. "This is Travis' fight."
They couldn't do anything about it now. Travis rushed forward, giving a quick jab to Zainen's stomach. Zainen took a step back and gave a high kick at Travis.
Travis dodged and gave him a round house kick back. Zainen grabbed Travis' foot and twisted it. Travis winced and tried bring his foot back. He yanked it back and tried to swing at Zainen, but missed from his poor balance.
Zainen still held onto his foot and held it up into different angles, making Travis nearly fall down from time to time.
Travis finally got out of Zainen's hold and tried to chi-block him. He chi-blocked his arm and it just hung down lifelessly.
Travis tried to strike the other arm, but Zainen dodged it. Zainen jumped up and pushed against the wall with one foot and drop kicked Travis with the other. Travis quickly moved back, but his foot still hurt from Zainen's twisting it.
Zainen saw this and smirked. He could use this to his benefit. Zainen quickly tried to sweep Travis off his good foot, but Travis jumped up before it could hit him. Travis jumped up again after Zainen got up and kicked with both his legs, slamming Zainen into the wall.
The two panted, both getting tired. Travis rubbed his foot and Zainen rubbed his chi-blocked arm.
"Can't we just try to help them?" Silvermist asked Master Kainen.
"This is Travis' fight. He can handle this," Master Kainen said.
"I hope he can," Silvermist said quietly to herself.
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Date: 02/27/13 6:28 PM
From: bluewire

@batskee
cant wait for the awesome fight scene!
-bluewire-
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Date: 02/27/13 2:47 PM
From: Batskee

Heh heh, sorry guys. I'm still working on the next part. But I should come up with something soon.

~*Batskee*~

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Date: 02/21/13 10:10 PM
From: Tigress116

WHOA! GO TRAVIS!!!! WHOOO!!!!! Oh gosh, this is EPIC! I can NOT wait to see what happens next, this is just TO AWESOME!!!! CAN NOT WAIT!!!!

Your fan and friend...
Tigress16

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Date: 02/20/13 1:05 PM
From: nystar15

AWESOMENESS! Pure Awesome! Please post more!!

Nystar15

-"Me...still waiting for Ninja Turtle Tastic 3D to load..."

I'm just being random!

Author of Kung Fu Panda 4: The New Warrior of the Pure Dragon

-"Never mind...it loaded ;D BOOYAKASHA!

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Date: 02/19/13 7:13 PM
From: syrup240

INTENSE!!!!

Syrup240 ;D

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Date: 02/19/13 5:22 PM
From: bluewire

ooooooh!!!! super hero entree!!!!
-bluewire- really good timing!
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Date: 02/19/13 1:06 PM
From: Batskee

Silvermist was still in disbelief from what she was hearing. "A cure for what, Kai?" she asked softly.
Zainen rolled his eyes. "A cure for the poison that's within him."
Snowcrest looked over at Zainen. "Did you put it in him?" she growled.
Zainen shook his head no. He began to pace back and forth, his paws behind his back, and his head held high as he began to explain about Kai.
"We found Kai, hungry, weak, and in need of help. But before that," he continued with a twisted grin. "You're little friend here, upset an assassin. A very good one at that too."
Kai looked down, as if listening to this story was hard for him to hear. "So," Zainen went on, "that assassin poured in the poison that was contained in a tube, into the glass of water Kai was given. And so the torturing began."
"Torturing?" Silvermist asked looking at Kai.
But as she turned her head towards her friend, he just looked away. "So, you're here to cure Kai of this poison?" asked Mei.
Kai answered, "Yes. And also to get rid of Travis."
Silvermist narrowed her eyes at Kai and growled, "Harming Travis isn't going to help you."
"Zainen has agreed that once he's got Travis, I'll be relieved of this poison."
Zainen then smirked again and said, "Not exactly, Kai. There's been a change in plans."
The mountain lion looked at him suspiciously. "What?"
The metal-gray wolf quickly said, "Hold them down."
Lee and Kylie dashed quickly over to Kai. Before Kai could react, Lee had slammed him against the wall and had chi-blocked him. Silvermist was soon restrained by Kylie. Silvermist watched as Zainen made his way towards the goat.
"I would like to make my wish," Zainen said, crossing his arms and narrowing his eyes.
Tyro shivered at the thought of what Zainen might wish for.
"My wish. My wish would be that my brother, Travis would come to me, still in chains and still weak."
Before Tyro could snap his fingers to make the wish final, Zainen felt something tight around his throat. It soon pulled him back. His eyes looked to see Travis who was furious with him. "Wish granted," Travis growled as Zainen looked at him.
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Date: 02/12/13 5:56 PM
From: Bluewire

really awesome!
-bluewire-
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Date: 02/10/13 5:34 PM
From: nystar15

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Date: 02/10/13 9:30 AM
From: Tigress116

AWESOMENESS!!!!! PURE AWESOMENESS!!!!! Oh my gosh, WHAT WILL HAPPEN NOW?! I'm about to totally freak out. I MUST KNOW MORE!!!!! PLEASE post more soon, my friend!

Your fan and friend...
Tigress16

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Date: 02/09/13 2:00 PM
From: syrup240

This is a great story, Batskee!!!!!!!! Keep going! Never stop posting!!!!!!!!!!!

Syrup240 ;D

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Date: 02/09/13 10:18 AM
From: EMOCHEETAH

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Mikbonetasic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!<:->
Starshadow: seriously Pinkamena
Pinkamena: I made you a meat cupcake
Starshadow: I love it (eats an meat cupcake)
Pinkamena Pie
Tails doll
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Date: 02/08/13 3:53 PM
From: Batskee

Master Kainen looked down at White-tail. He was unconscious and his paws were tied down behind his back. He picked up the wolf and said, "Hey, White-tail. Get up."
White-tail's eyes opened slowly. "W-where are we?"
"You're on Mt. Mihan. Travis' brother and Kai captured you and the others and left you here to freeze," Darkmist answered.
White-tail was still confused. He looked behind him and saw Wolfy. "I think I remember what happened. Or at least a small part of it," said White-tail.
He remembered fighting with Travis. Travis was pinned to the ground and he was about to knock him out when something kicked him off of Travis.
"Then everything went dark," finished Whiet-tail after telling him what he remembered.
Master Kainen brushed the snow off of Wolfy and Lou jumped into Wolfy's arms. "Are you okay?" asked Lou, licking his face.
"Yes, I'm fine," Wolfy said.
Master Kainen walked on all fours. "Silverfang?" he called out. "Travis? Chou?"
There was no answer. Then, as Master Kainen searched through the snow for his friends, he saw something kick up the snow. He saw it was Chou, struggling to break through the chains that attatched to his leg.
Master Kainen looked down at him. "Are you okay?" he asked.
Chou saw the polar bear. "Master Kainen! Yes, I'm alright, but Zainen, Lee, and Kylie are out of jail," he said.
Master Kainen used his sharp claws to try and break the chains. Chou still had the small metal cuff around his leg, but he could fly and move around. Chou flew up and onto Master Kainen's shoulder.
Chou used his excellent eye sight to spot the rest of their friends. Chou gestured with his wing towards the snow bank to the right. They brushed the snow off of Silverfang. He opened his eyes and saw the group. "What happened?"
"You were ambushed," said Yippy.
Silverfang looked at everyone. "Ambushed?" He remembered three wolves attacking them. "Oh no. Don't tell me it was," he began, but White-tail, Wolfy, Lou, and Chou finished, "Zainen, Lee, and Kylie."
Silverfang just nodded. "Yeah. Them."
"Now we just have one more," Master Kainen said looking at Chou. "Can you help me?"
Chou nodded. "Of course Master Kainen," he said.
They looked around for awhile. But they couldn't find him. They still couldn't find him after half an hour. "Travis!" Silverfang called out.
Darkmist stopped once she felt something odd under her foot. She lifted it up and saw a paw. "Hey guys! I think I found him," she said.
They came over and picked Travis up, out of the snow. Travis shivered. He was numb from being cover in the thick layer of snow. "W-w-where's Zainen?"
"He's going to Tyro. To the cave where wishes come true, you might say," said Master Kainen.
Travis' head was spinning but he insisted on going to the cave immediately. "And that's exactly what we're going to do, right Master Kainen?"
He wanted everyone to rest, but they all seemed determined to go to the cave. Master Kainen sighed. "Alright. Let's go."
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Date: 02/07/13 5:57 PM
From: nystar15

AWESOME!

Nystar15

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Date: 02/06/13 8:12 PM
From: syrup240

@Batskee:

Me: *still in closet* Hmmm.... *fingers over a map* Do you think Thailand is far enough????


Syrup240 ;D

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Date: 02/06/13 5:35 PM
From: bluewire

@batskee
(ding ding!)
*random wrestling ring appears*
Me: uh you know this is totally unfair!
Neo: yea, but it looks so fun!
(ZZZZT!)
*teleports behind me*
me:what!?
*grabs my ankles and starts spinning*
-bluewire- i think neo's winning....
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Date: 02/05/13 6:31 PM
From: Batskee

@Syrup240:

Me: *in Jared and June's home recovering* It's not...that bad. *tries to move hand and I cringe in pain* Ohhh! It hurts!
Jared: *walks in* Hey Batskee! Ready for another round?!
June: JARED! Don't lay a tail on her. She's recovering.
Jared: Aw, but June! The guys and I want to have a competition!
June: I don't want to hear anything about it! Now go and do something else.
Jared: *sighs* Alright. *slithers out into hall and shouts out* Okay guys, I guess we're just going to have to throw a complete stranger!
All my male characters: Okay!
Silvermist: Uh-oh...

@Bluewire:

Ruby: Yes! The fight is on!
Me: Don't encourage him!
Silvermist; Why not? *picks up mic and says in a referee voice* Now ladies and gentlemen, boys and girls, canines and felines, birds and bears, get ready for the ultimate Writer Tossing round you've ever seen!
Ruby: *cheering* Hurray!
Silvermist: In one corner, we have the victim...uhh I mean, writer, Bluewire!
Ruby: *cheers* Yay!
Silvermist: And in this corner, the thrower, Neo!
Ruby: *cheers* Yippee!

~*Batskee*~
Good luck to both of you writers!

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