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The Wolf in the Snow

Date: 10/31/12 4:35 PM
From: Batskee

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Chapter 1
A cart sped down the steep and rocky road of Hong Luan City. People jumped out of the way from the on the loose cart. The wheels on it wobbled now. It made a sharp turn and crashed through a cabbage stand and into an alley. It slammed into the walls of the narrow alley and the pegs that kept the wheels on the cart started to come loose.
White-tail Chun and his wife Ginger Chun walked away from the food stand with groceries. White-tail stopped and his eyes grew wide once he saw a cart coming their way. He stepped in front of Ginger, wanting to protect her and was going to face the cart head on!
Then the cart was coming at full speed towards the two. Then, suddenly the wheels popped off the cart and the cart slid on the rocky pavement and stopped in front of White-tail.
He looked inside the large cart and his eyes narrowed, his ears were flat down, and he felt some anger surge through him. "Silvermist!" he growled.
She slowly looked out from the cart that was big enough for her to fit in and sheepishly smiled. "Hi, Dad," she said nervously.

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Date: 03/21/13 6:20 PM
From: Batskee

@Tigress116:

Silvermist: Thank you for the lovely compliment Blaze.
Me: See? Everyone agrees you were jealous. So you obviously must've been...
Travis: Oh just be quiet, Batskee!

~*Batskee*~
Silvermist and (the jealous) Travis

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Date: 03/20/13 5:58 PM
From: Tigress116

HAHA! You SO were jealous Travis!
Shadow: You kinda were.
Blaze: Mister Travis was jealous because of how pretty miss Silvermisty is!
Me: hehe, that just might be the reason!
Silver: GREAT chapter!
Me: I still feel bad for Kai. Now what is going to happen?! WHAT ABOUT THE POISON!?!?!
Shadow: Chill.
Me: WHY?!?!?!
Shadow: Oh brother...

Your fans and friends...
Tigress16, Shadow, Silver and Blaze

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Date: 03/18/13 6:17 PM
From: Batskee

Kai stood back and watched as Silvermist ran over to him and gave him a hug. They soon all hugged the wolf who had won the fight.
Kai turned his head to his left to see Tyro clapping for Travis as well. The mountain lion walked over to Tyro and the goat looked at him curiously. "Now don't tell me you're going to restore Zainen's energy."
Kai shook his head no. He wouldn't help Zainen after he had tricked him like that. "No, I want to make a wish."
"A cure for that poison?" Tyro asked, getting ready to snap his fingers and make it so.
Kai shook his head no. "I wish that Zainen, Lee, and Kylie would be locked away in the prison again, but that they would remain there for at least six years," Kai said.
Tyro smiled and snapped his fingers. "Your wish is my command."
Travis looked back at his younger brother, but he was gone. "Where'd he go?"
"He's in the prison, along with his parents," Kai answered.
Travis looked at the lion. He was still angry at him for betraying them. "So you can go release them again?"
The mountain lion replied, "No. No, not at all. They'll be there for at least six years."
Tyro saw that they didn't believe the lion. "It's true. He wished for it," Tyro spoke up, defending Kai.
Silvermist stepped away from the group and looke straight at her friend. "What about that poison?"
"I'll be fine," Kai said. He felt the sting in his stomach again, but did his best to ignore it.
Kai bowed to the group, fist-to-palm style, "I'm extremely sorry for what I've done to you all. I thought they were telling the truth to me. After all, they did help me when I was starving."
Travis was silent for a moment. They all were. Silvermist was the first to respond though. She hugged her friend. "It's alright."
Kai didn't know whether to hug back or not. He still knew that Travis was jealous of him. His brown eyes saw Travis nod slightly, giving him the 'okay' for him to hug her back.
"Well, that's nice that you finally got over your jealousy," Silverfang said to Travis.
"I wasn't jealous."
He was then answered by the whole group who said, "Oh, yes you were!"
Travis just crossed his arms and looked away, with a smile on his face.
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Date: 03/13/13 8:17 PM
From: Tigress116

Whoa..... AWESOME! WAY TO GO TRAVIS!
Shadow: We KNEW you could do it!
Silver: That was EPIC!
Blaze: Alright mister Travis!
Leon: Great job dude! Nice call.
Me: Over all, we LOVE it! And we can NOT wait for more!

Your fans and friends...
Tigress16, Shadow, Leon, Silver and Blaze

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Date: 03/12/13 7:00 PM
From: syrup240

WOOOH!!!!
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Date: 03/12/13 5:20 PM
From: bluewire

@batskee
wooo! travis learned restraint! go travis!!!
-bluewire-
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Date: 03/11/13 8:42 PM
From: Batskee

Chapter 15

Travis panted and so did his brother. Zainen held his chi-blocked arm, hoping that he would regain feeling somehow.
They were both tired and waiting for the other to make their move. Travis and Zainen were trying to think of every move to counter against the other.
Silvermist felt like shouting for them to do something, but knew it was wrong. This is Travis' battle, she thought to herself. But she so badly wanted to help him.
Master Kainen was starting to have some strong feelings to help him, but kept himself from doing so.
Finally, Zainen jumped up an kicked Travis back. Travis, too slow to dodge, was hit back and fell to the ground. He rubbed his foot and tried to get up. He was soon struck down with a palm strike.
Travis looked up at the wolf standing next to him. "Now, this ends," Zainen told him.
As he prepared to make his final move, Travis' anger rose. He wasn't going to lose. Not after all he's been through.
The wolf's fur bristled, his eyes narrowed, and growled, showing his fangs.
He quickly swept his feet under Zainen and gave a hard palm strike at him. Travis gave a high kick, then a punch, and a round house kick.
Zainen failed to dodge and block the attacks. Zainen felt his strength fading drastically. This battle would be over within seconds.
Travis chi-blocked his other arm, stomach, and legs. Zainen fell on his back and his eyes grew wide as he saw that Travis had defeated him.
Travis raised his paw to deliver the final blow. Zainen closed his eyes shut tightly, preparing for the hit. Travis hesitated though. He couldn't end his brother's life, no mattter how much pain he and his parents caused him.
He relaxed slightly and then unsheathed his claws. He scratched the young wolf's face and stepped back.
Zainen growled quietly and winced from the painful scratch Travis had given him, but was surprised that he wasn't dead.
Travis just said to him, "This battle, is over."

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Date: 03/08/13 6:27 PM
From: Tigress116

OH WOW! Poor Kai, poor Travis... WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN NOW?!?!?!?! AHHHH!!!! TO EPIC! I can NOT wait to see more, I sure am on the edge of my seat!

Your fan and friend...
Tigress16

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Date: 03/05/13 7:24 PM
From: syrup240

Nice job, Batskee!
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Date: 03/04/13 10:03 PM
From: Batskee

Master Kainen quickly round house kicked Kylie against the wall and saw Lee coming at him. Master Kainen gave him a hard punch back as well; leaving the two unconscious.
Dina and Darkmist helped Snowstar and Snowcrest up. Jade helped Mei and Chou get their capes out from the icicles.
Silvermist was relieved when she saw they were here. "Travis!" she said happily.
"Are you okay?" asked Travis, not looking away from Zainen. He feared that Zainen would try to attack while he was distracted.
"I'm alright," she responded.
Wolfy hugged Snowstar. Lou wagged his tail and said, "Snowstar! You're okay!"
Snowstar nodded, but then her attention turned towards Travis and Zainen.
Master Kainen, however, glared at Kai. Kai swallowed hard as the large polar bear shot daggers at him through the glare.
He didn't want to even think about the pain he would give him. He had enough troubles with the poison still running through him.
Travis tightened his grip on Zainen and narrowed his deep blue eyes.
Zainen just smiled sheepishly. "Brother, you wouldn't harm me would you? We are blood related."
Travis growled and said, "You are not my brother. I want nothing from you. You hurt my friends, you hurt my Dad, and you were about to take all that I loved away from me. Compared to the things I could do to you, harming you is an understatement."
Zainen was silent as Travis was about to give him a hard hit, but then Travis let him go. "If we're going to fight, I should at least give you a chance to run."
"Run? Ha!" Zainen scoffed.
"I wouldn't be laughing if I were you," said Master Kainen. Lee and Kylie tried to get free, but Master Kainen held them both back. Snowcrest and Snowstar looked at each other. They looked at Lee and Kylie and then at Master Kainen. He said to them, "Go for it."
Kai stepped back as he saw the wolves chi-block Lee and Kylie; just like the two had done to them.
He couldn't imagine what his punishment would be. He then felt a sharp pain in his stomach. The poison was starting again.
But he dared not make a wish. Especially when Travis and Zainen were about to fight.
Travis and Zainen both glared at each other. Silvermist, Wolfy, Lou, and White-tail went to help, but Master Kainen told them to stop. They looked at him curiously. "This is Travis' fight."
They couldn't do anything about it now. Travis rushed forward, giving a quick jab to Zainen's stomach. Zainen took a step back and gave a high kick at Travis.
Travis dodged and gave him a round house kick back. Zainen grabbed Travis' foot and twisted it. Travis winced and tried bring his foot back. He yanked it back and tried to swing at Zainen, but missed from his poor balance.
Zainen still held onto his foot and held it up into different angles, making Travis nearly fall down from time to time.
Travis finally got out of Zainen's hold and tried to chi-block him. He chi-blocked his arm and it just hung down lifelessly.
Travis tried to strike the other arm, but Zainen dodged it. Zainen jumped up and pushed against the wall with one foot and drop kicked Travis with the other. Travis quickly moved back, but his foot still hurt from Zainen's twisting it.
Zainen saw this and smirked. He could use this to his benefit. Zainen quickly tried to sweep Travis off his good foot, but Travis jumped up before it could hit him. Travis jumped up again after Zainen got up and kicked with both his legs, slamming Zainen into the wall.
The two panted, both getting tired. Travis rubbed his foot and Zainen rubbed his chi-blocked arm.
"Can't we just try to help them?" Silvermist asked Master Kainen.
"This is Travis' fight. He can handle this," Master Kainen said.
"I hope he can," Silvermist said quietly to herself.
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Date: 02/27/13 6:28 PM
From: bluewire

@batskee
cant wait for the awesome fight scene!
-bluewire-
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Date: 02/27/13 2:47 PM
From: Batskee

Heh heh, sorry guys. I'm still working on the next part. But I should come up with something soon.

~*Batskee*~

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Date: 02/21/13 10:10 PM
From: Tigress116

WHOA! GO TRAVIS!!!! WHOOO!!!!! Oh gosh, this is EPIC! I can NOT wait to see what happens next, this is just TO AWESOME!!!! CAN NOT WAIT!!!!

Your fan and friend...
Tigress16

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Date: 02/20/13 1:05 PM
From: nystar15

AWESOMENESS! Pure Awesome! Please post more!!

Nystar15

-"Me...still waiting for Ninja Turtle Tastic 3D to load..."

I'm just being random!

Author of Kung Fu Panda 4: The New Warrior of the Pure Dragon

-"Never mind...it loaded ;D BOOYAKASHA!

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Date: 02/19/13 7:13 PM
From: syrup240

INTENSE!!!!

Syrup240 ;D

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Date: 02/19/13 5:22 PM
From: bluewire

ooooooh!!!! super hero entree!!!!
-bluewire- really good timing!
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Date: 02/19/13 1:06 PM
From: Batskee

Silvermist was still in disbelief from what she was hearing. "A cure for what, Kai?" she asked softly.
Zainen rolled his eyes. "A cure for the poison that's within him."
Snowcrest looked over at Zainen. "Did you put it in him?" she growled.
Zainen shook his head no. He began to pace back and forth, his paws behind his back, and his head held high as he began to explain about Kai.
"We found Kai, hungry, weak, and in need of help. But before that," he continued with a twisted grin. "You're little friend here, upset an assassin. A very good one at that too."
Kai looked down, as if listening to this story was hard for him to hear. "So," Zainen went on, "that assassin poured in the poison that was contained in a tube, into the glass of water Kai was given. And so the torturing began."
"Torturing?" Silvermist asked looking at Kai.
But as she turned her head towards her friend, he just looked away. "So, you're here to cure Kai of this poison?" asked Mei.
Kai answered, "Yes. And also to get rid of Travis."
Silvermist narrowed her eyes at Kai and growled, "Harming Travis isn't going to help you."
"Zainen has agreed that once he's got Travis, I'll be relieved of this poison."
Zainen then smirked again and said, "Not exactly, Kai. There's been a change in plans."
The mountain lion looked at him suspiciously. "What?"
The metal-gray wolf quickly said, "Hold them down."
Lee and Kylie dashed quickly over to Kai. Before Kai could react, Lee had slammed him against the wall and had chi-blocked him. Silvermist was soon restrained by Kylie. Silvermist watched as Zainen made his way towards the goat.
"I would like to make my wish," Zainen said, crossing his arms and narrowing his eyes.
Tyro shivered at the thought of what Zainen might wish for.
"My wish. My wish would be that my brother, Travis would come to me, still in chains and still weak."
Before Tyro could snap his fingers to make the wish final, Zainen felt something tight around his throat. It soon pulled him back. His eyes looked to see Travis who was furious with him. "Wish granted," Travis growled as Zainen looked at him.
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Date: 02/12/13 5:56 PM
From: Bluewire

really awesome!
-bluewire-
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Date: 02/10/13 5:34 PM
From: nystar15

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Date: 02/10/13 9:30 AM
From: Tigress116

AWESOMENESS!!!!! PURE AWESOMENESS!!!!! Oh my gosh, WHAT WILL HAPPEN NOW?! I'm about to totally freak out. I MUST KNOW MORE!!!!! PLEASE post more soon, my friend!

Your fan and friend...
Tigress16

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