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~The Wish~

Date: 11/26/12 9:25 PM
From: lola595

Alright here we go with Part 1:
It had been a long day at the Jade palace. Po and the furious five had been in the trining hall training all day and Po was tired and starting to get aggrevated. He was so tired and everytime he tried to rest Shifu would make him do more work. The five had already left for bed an hour ago but because of Po's "Laziness" he had to work extra.
Shifu: You must try your best panda at all times!
Po: I'm trying master Shifu but I'm just so tired! Can I please take a break!
Shifu: No! not until you get it right!
Po: Ahh!
No matter how hard Po tried he couldn'tget the move right and it was getting him angry.
PO: Arggg! I can't do this!
Shifu: yes you can panda, you're the dragon warrior and that means you'll need extra training!
Po: But i didn't ask for all this!
Shifu: Po!
Po: No I wish I was still at the noodle shop and you weren't here!
Ta da hope thats ok! To be continued....
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Date: 05/01/13 10:23 PM
From: Lola595

Po starred up at the building. The sign behind them read Bau Gu orphanage... they were here. Po knocked on the door and waited for someone to answer. Finally a goat answered the door.
Goat: Can I help you?
Po: um, yes. I was wondering if you know tig-
Goat shhh shhh shhh.We don't mention that monsters name! The orphanage is now a happy place now that she's gone!
The goat went to shut the door but Po stopped her.
Po: gone? what do you mean, gone?
Goat: oh, look at the time. Adopting times are over. time for you to leave and come back.. maybe never.
Po: Where is she!
Po noticed the metal door at the end of the hallway behind the door and began making his way towards it. The goat followed him down the ire dark hallway. Po slowly opened he door to find a disaster. The room and all it furniture was torn to pieces. Po picked up a piece from the sheets the resembled Tigress's shirt: Red with gold vines.
Goat: we kept her in here
The goat startled Po.
Goat: no one wanted to adopt her cause they were all afraid. Eventually she got too old for here, but she was still too dangerous for the real world. So they took her to Chorgum prison (think that's how you spell it)
Po looked out the window through the metal bars.
Po: Oh, tigress...

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Date: 04/30/13 9:53 PM
From: stuffpup

ok something tells mantis is going to be very annoying!
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Date: 04/28/13 9:18 PM
From: Lola595

When Mantis was finished eating he bolted out the door. Po chased after him having Mantis lead him to the center of the village.
Mantis: Where are the bandits?
Po: I never said there were any.
Mantis: but you said you needed my help!
Po: I do! I'm searching for the stone of-
Mantis: goodwill?
Po: wishes! and I needed-
Mantis: me to find it?
Po: well you to help me find it along with four others.
I need to undo a wish I made.
Mantis: I see. I'll help you panda but I must warn you I do not come cheap.
Po: trust me by the time we find the stone of wishes you'll be paid with something better then coins.
Monkey, Crane, and Viper met up with the two on the other end of town.
Po: guys, this is-
Mantis: Mantis! At your service! Lets go!
Viper: So where to next Dragon warrior?
Po: Next on our list is... tigress.
Po had given much thought about Tigress till then. Shifu had made big impact on her life then anyone else's. If Shifu didn't adopt her, who did?
Po: next stop the Bau gu Orphanage...
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Date: 04/28/13 2:54 PM
From: AmericaF

I hope that Po finds Monkey. I really like this story.
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Date: 04/27/13 5:27 PM
From: adaline1

wow mantis is way to fast
<(-_-)>yoda rules
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Date: 04/25/13 9:36 PM
From: Lola595

I just wanted to say thanks to all the people who are reading this and commenting! without you well... I wouldn't be writing this. Can't wait till I get to the interesting parts!

Mantis: where's my food? I ordered it an hour ago!
Waiter: um, sir? It's only been a minute.
Mantis: why are you telling me what time it is, when you should be making my food!
Po knew Mantis was once impatient and a little short tempered but he didn't think it was this bad!
Waiter: yes, sir.
When the waiter left Po approached the table where Mantis sat tapping his front leg on the table occasionally sighing loudly.
Po: You must be-
Mantis: Mantis? Master Mantis! Yes, that is I.
Po: I know. I need you-
Mantis: to stop bandits from attacking the valley? I'm on it!
Po: No! I need your-
Mantis: amazing Crime fighting skills?
Po: sort of its-
Mantis: very important, I know! oh, wait my foods here.
The waiter placed the plate on the table. Po had never seen anyone eat faster then Mantis at that day. He scarved down the large bowl of noodles in a blink of an eye. Po was amazed Mantis: alright, lets go!

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Date: 04/24/13 10:32 PM
From: KFPDW

@ lola595
I just wanted to say thank for your comments before with my Fanfic, I really appreciated it!
I think your fanfic is great by the way on how it's turning out.
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Date: 04/21/13 4:59 PM
From: AZAtigress

more please post more!!!!
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Date: 04/18/13 9:48 PM
From: Lola595

Next Chapter!
Mantis's village was next on the to do list for Po. When they finally arrived they decided that since they've been traveling for awhile (and Po's stomach was starting to growl louder then thunder) they would take a short break. The four stopped at a restaurant at the end of the street near the docks. When the waiter arrived with their food he carried: two plates of bean buns, four large bowls of noodles, and three bowls of soup.
Po: what? I'm hungry.
While the four ate their meal the began to hear a commotion coming from the other side of the restaurant.
Viper:what was that?
Po got up to see what was with all the yelling. While he was walking a tea pot was flying his direction to which he quickly ducked to avoid it. When he reached the table he needed to push through the few waiters to reach the small unhappy costumer. Mantis.
Someone's cranky! find out whats in store soon!
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Date: 04/09/13 5:18 PM
From: stuffpup

yay viper!
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Date: 04/08/13 9:54 PM
From: Lola595

Viper... no.
Po: what?
Viper: no. I can't just leave out of the blue. This village needs me and it's not safe. I know I was probably more then I am here in your world but here...I'm... I can't go. I'm sorry for disappointing you, Dragon Warrior.
Po walked outside with his head down.
Monkey: what's wrong-
Crane: is she coming with us!?!
Po: No she's staying here. I guess we'll have to do this without her.
Crane: oh
Monkey: man, all that for nothing!
The guards led the three out. Viper watched from her window as the three made their way through the village to the front gates.
Master Viper: you're not going with them?
Viper: I can't what if something goes wrong and you need me here.
Master Viper: Viper, I believe that that this warrior needs your help more then we do. Just as my place is here, your place is with them. to help the Dragon Warrior with his destiny. Go, my child.
Viper: thank you, father.
Viper hugged her father then left for the door. Just as Po, crane, and Monkey reached gates they heard the faint sound of someone caling"Wait!" Po turned around to find a snake bolting towards them before darting into the air and landing in front of them. Viper: I think you're going to need a fourth member of your team if you're going to complete your mission, Dragon warrior
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Date: 04/07/13 9:19 PM
From: Lola595

Viper: come with you? I-I just met you
Po: yeah, so did they... but we didn't just meet! We met the day I became dragon warrior, you just don't remember.
Viper: I think I would remember meeting you.
Po: please, viper!
Viper: I don't know. Leaving home, putting my life at risk, traveling to who knows where with who knows who, and possibly never returning! I'm think I'm Hyperventilating!
Po: Relax, you'll be fine with me!
Viper thought for a moment
Viper: My answer is...
What is it? What is it! Find out her reply and (hopefully) the last part of this chapter next!!
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Date: 04/03/13 7:25 PM
From: KFPDW

Great story!!! Can't wait to see what happens next with Tigress!!
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Date: 04/03/13 2:39 PM
From: stuffpup

love this!
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Date: 04/02/13 9:56 PM
From: Lola595

Viper led Po to another room that was Guard-free.
Po: ugh, you would not believe what I had to get through to get here!
Viper: You look a little worn out, stranger.
Po: Oh yeah, my name's Po. I'm the dragon warrior.
Viper: The dragon warrior? But the Dragon Warrior has not been chosen yet.
Po: It has! Well, in a different dimension. You see, you, the two guys that were with me-
Viper: the monkey and the crane that was starring at me?
Viper's cheeks blushed
Po: yeah and two other people, were part of a group called the furious five, the greatest Kung Fu masters in all of China. Until I made a wish that changed everything and made life the way it is now. So now, I need your help to receive The Stone Of Wishes so I can make life better again!
Po was getting pretty tired of telling that story. Viper looked at Po as if he was joking.
Viper: me? A kung Fu master? Ha! I don't even have fangs, how could I be a kung Fu master?
Po: But its true! And I can prove it, if you come with me.

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Date: 03/26/13 10:24 PM
From: lola595

Ok Viper x Crane fans this ones for you!
The guards led the three up to Master Viper's house. They led hem to a room where three chairs sat. One was empty which belonged to Master Viper, the other had a snake just a bit younger then mastre Viper who examined her visitors carefully, and the last one contained a much younger snake looking board, tapping the end of her tail on the arm rest. she lifted her head to see her guests when Po, Crane, and Monkey walked in. crane starred at the young snake with wide eyes before whispering to Po
Crane: is that Viper? the girl you said is coming with us?
Po: yep.
Po: Hi! if i may, I have a question to ask of you, Viper.
Po tried to be as poliet as possible with the many guards watching his every move.
Po: alone?
Mrs. Viper: My daughter will not-
Viper: yes!... I mean, you may.
Will Po convince viper to come with them? Or will she not be intrested in "adventure" Find out soon!
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Date: 03/25/13 10:24 PM
From: lola595

@ Tigrss417
Yes I am still reading your story and I still LOVE IT! You're an amazing author just like everyone else on the kfploa message board!

@ Everyone
Thanks for reading! I will post a new part hopefully tomorrow (tried to post it today but it wouldn't let me: computer issues!)

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Date: 03/25/13 11:40 AM
From: Tigress714

Awesome! can't wait for Tigress' part!
P.S. Are you still reading my story? i thought you left when you didnt comment in a while.
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Date: 03/22/13 9:49 AM
From: AZAtigress

I LOve this!!!! please more!!!
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Date: 03/21/13 2:35 PM
From: stuffpup

keep going!
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