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How to Save China (Sequel to *Skye's Diary*)

Date: 12/29/12 9:34 PM
From: syrup240

Woohoo! I was thinking about making a story like this, but I saw I needed to write a sequel to Skye's Diary, so here it is!! Sorry it pretty much has the same name as before, I couldn't think of a good one, plus this one actually involves saving China. With the help of Skye, Han Kai, Master Harachi, and the new Furious Five members, China will be saved from some tiny visitors........

Chapter 1- Skye's POV

Master Harachi had just taken us up to the Sacred Pool of Tears to meditate. Han Kai was sitting next to Axe, who he had made quick friends with. The shaggy-furred wolf acted like an older brother to Han Kai, giving him advise, showing him Kung-Fu moves, etc. We all sat together for a picnic Chi had packed. Annette passed around the dumplings and chopsticks, Jun passed around the rice, and I passed around the tofu. "Hey, remember the story of Po washing his pits in the Sacred Pool of Tears?" Axe asked, while giving us a big grin. "Who can forget? It's hilarious!!" Chi said, while the dumpling on his chop-sticks slid off into his bowl with a plunk! I laughed thinking of the memory.

When we finished eating, Master Harachi matched us up with sparring partners. Jun was with Annette, Axe was with me, and Chi was with Han Kai. ?Begin!? Master Harachi said as we sat and watched Jun and Annette battle next to the Sacred Pool. Annette tried a round-house kick, but it was too high. Jun scoffed, and dodged a drop-kick. After a while of fighting, Annette just ran around and tried to stomp on Jun. ?You call THIS fighting?? Jun said, while dodging with speed. Then he slipped, and when Annette was about to crush the pride out of him.... ?Annette has won?, Master Harachi said. Jun got up and dusted himself while giving Annette a glare. Then it was my and Axe?s turn. Axe smiled, he was more of a softie-prankster. The large, husky wolf got into his stance, and I got into mine. Being the Blossom Warrior was awesome!!! (As a side-note!!) ?Begin!? Master Harachi stated.

@Everyone: Sorry if the starting chapter wasn?t so great. I?ll post more as soon as I can!!!

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Date: 02/03/13 3:48 PM
From: jared228

how do u do it
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Date: 02/03/13 2:34 PM
From: Batskee

@Syrup240:
Hahaha!

I love it when other characters misunderstand the other person's sentance. It's so funny!
Silvermist: Dan Shy? And the sky is yelping?
Ruby: The sky is yelping? Great!
Zenghui: Great? What do you mean 'great'?
Ruby: I can' finally ask the sky some questions.
Zenghui: *facepalms*

~*Batskee*~

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Date: 02/03/13 8:51 AM
From: syrup240

@Batskee and Bluewire: Thanks!!!! And sorry for all of the question marks in the story. (GRRR!!!)

Chapter 13!!!!!! HUZZAH!

Chi struggled to fly higher with the red and gold Chinese paper lantern. The heavy rain battered his face, and the lightning made him swerve. The flickering candle inside was almost burnt out.

Axe looked up at Chi, who bravely led the town people out for evacuation. Master Harachi was there, too, seeing that everything was running smoothly. Axe held twelve bunnies, after the mom said it was mandatory that her kids where safe. The dark storm clouds kept rolling in, layers after layers of rain poured down in heavy sheets, making it almost impossible to see a meter ahead of you. "How much longer 'till we reach Bon She Lei??? They shouldn't be done evacuating yet!!!" "JUST IN TIME!!!" Chi hollered down to Axe. "Master Harachi! JUST IN TIME!" Axe shouted to his Master, who was in the back. He nodded, and helped an old goat push his cart further up the hill. Some pulled up their umbrellas, and Axe told them to stop. ?IT?S LIKE A LIGHTNING HAZARD!!!? Axe yelled over the thundering rain. People sighed and put their umbrellas down. ?COVER YOURSELVES WITH THESE TARPS!? Axe yelled as he passed out different colors of plastic tarps. ?AND IF YA? HAVE ANYTHING RUBBER, WEAR IT!!! IT?S A LIGHTNING-BLOCKER!!!!? Axe screamed over the thunder. A pig ran over to a cart, and happily brought out his rubber balloons. Axe gave a short laugh, and carried all twelve bunnies through the streets. Jun and Annette where back in the town, covering everything with tarps and pushing up sand-bags against houses. ?Where?s Skye and Han Kai? They should be helping us!!? Jun wined as he covered another shop with tarps. ?WHAT?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? Annette asked as she dumped a wheelbarrow of sandbags against a house. ?I SAID, WHERE IS SKYE AND HAN KAI? THEY SHOULD BE HELPING!!!!!? Jun screamed. ?NO, I DO NOT KNOW WHO DAN SHY IS. THE SKY IS BLACK, THOUGH, NOT YELPING!!!!? Annette screamed as her reply. She shook her head, wondering how anyone could think the sky was yelping. Jun just slapped a hand to his face and slowly brought it down in frustration. ?DON?T SPEND ALL DAY FACE-PALMING!!!!!! GET TO WORK!!!? Annette shouted to Jun. He just shrugged and pulled over another sandbag.

Hope that was good!

Syrup240 ;D

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Date: 02/02/13 7:37 PM
From: Batskee

@Syrup240:
Oh I'm sure they'll start commenting on this story again. Remember, we have lots of silent readers here!

Now, great chapter! I hope Skye and Han Kai/Simba will be okay.
Jared: I hope Han Kai goes back to normal soon. It seems as if Skye is about to really get him!
June: That wouldn't be pretty.

~*Batskee*~

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Date: 02/02/13 5:29 PM
From: Bluewire

@syrup240
hey!
really dramatic storytelling!!!! amazing!!!!
-bluewire- there's tons of silent readers
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Date: 02/02/13 10:44 AM
From: syrup240

@Batskee: Hmm, seems like you're the only one who still comments on here. CONGRATS!!!!

Chapter 12

"OKAY, THIS HAS TO BEE YOUR LAST PERSONALITY CHANGE!!!" Skye was so annoyed by Han Kai now. He had gone completely delusional!!!! Now mock 'Simba' was crying, and wining that he wanted to go home. "Weird snow-leopard!!!!!!!" he cried out. "If I didn't like you, what I would do.." Skye muttered under her breath. So-called 'Simba' cried even louder, and suddenly had a change in personality. "It's your fault!!!! You took me here in the first place!!! You probably kid-napped me!!! STRANGER DANGER!!!!!" 'Simba' screamed as he tried to bite Skye. "Bad kitty!! Stop! I demand you to stop!" Skye ordered as she dodged 'Simba's' claws. "I WILL FIGHT YOU TO THE DEATH!!!!" 'Simba' said, before a low rumbling started. "What's that?" Skye asked as she looked up questioningly. A huge dark cloud swirled in, and swept a shadow over everything. "That still doesn't explain-" Skye said, before she was cut off by a crack of white lightning and a deep rumbling sound of thunder. Soon, as if the clouds where cut open by lightning, rain poured down suddenly and with lots of strength. ?No. It can?t be?, Skye said as she backed up under a tree. ?What?!?!!? ?Simba? asked with lots of excitement and curiosity. ?This is nothing to be happy of!!! Now come here before we all drown!!? Skye said as she grabbed ?Simba? and ran. ?What the-? ?I?LL EXPLAIN LATER!!!!!!!!? Skye screamed frantically as she sprinted East. ?We should be in a small town called Bon She Lei soon. If we get their fast enough, the villagers should still be evacuating.? Skye huffed as she carried ?Simba? piggy-back style. They where both soaking wet, and soon Skye arrived to a muddy village. ?Hello??? Skye asked as she looked around and into shops. Nothing. It all seemed like a deserted ghost-town. ?Grr! They already evacuated!!!? Skye said as she ran ahead.

@Everyone: Hope you like this chapter!!

Syrup240 ;D

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Date: 01/31/13 5:18 PM
From: Batskee

Nice chapter!

Me: Ouch. He got a cut on his stomach? That's gotta hurt.
Silvermist: Definately!
Ruby: Hmmm. I wonder if it really would. *takes Zenghui's sword and looks at him* Hey, Zenghui. Tell me if this hurts.
Zenghui: *swipes sword from Ruby* Are you insane?!
Ruby: Maybe.

~*Batskee*~

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Date: 01/30/13 6:46 PM
From: syrup240

@Batskee: TGIF means Thank Goodness It's Friday.

@Everyone: Dedicating this chapter to Cutie-Pie.

Chapter 11 :3

Cutie-Pie chopped a tree branch in his way clean from the trunk with his glistening sword. He was stuck in the rain, having to be on look-out duty. He pulled an old cloak over his ears, his face hid in the shadows, his eyes glistening in the moonlight. He fastened the small copper clip, and went on his way. The lightning struck a tree ahead of him, and he sighed when no flames appeared. He got closer, then saw a spark ignite into a bonfire. He yelped in surprise, and ran away from the engulfing flames. Drenched in water and sweat, he pulled himself forward as hard as he could. The flames sent everything ablaze in a puff of smoke, the soaking wet water not even fazing it. Rain still paraded on, and the fire didn't even falter a bit. Suddenly, Cutie-Pie stopped running. The world whirled around him as he realized his cloak had snagged. He gulped, and turned around to see flames on steroids having a rampage. Cutie-Pie yanked as hard as he could, but the cloak didn?t budge. He pulled even harder, until he fell onto the ground. Heart pounding, he fumbled to un-fasten the copper binder. Sweating, he glanced at the roaring flames. Eyes prickling with the sting of smoke, he tried even harder to pry the cloak off. The fire crackled, and set the tree that was clenching his cloak ablaze in seconds. The gigantic flames crept up to Cutie-Pie?s cloak, and singed the end. Fire coming up his cloak, Cutie-Pie prepared himself for the worst, and un-sheathed his sword. As quickly as possible he cut through his cloak, but made a small gash in his stomach. Too frightened to wince in pain, he hurried along before anything else drastic could happen.

Syrup240 ;D

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Date: 01/26/13 12:24 PM
From: Batskee

@Syrup240:
Great part!
Ruby: Run Hatchet! Run!
Me: Freedom!!
Zenghui: Oh boy.

~*Batskee*~
What does TGIF mean?

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Date: 01/26/13 11:06 AM
From: nystar15

Hatchet ran away?!! have to read more! Please continue! :)
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Date: 01/25/13 5:37 PM
From: syrup240

@Tigress16: Three awesomes in one sentence? What great things will you come up with next!!??!!!

@Batskee: I feel really sorry for Hatchet, too. Poor little kitty!

@Everyone: I am super-stoked to tell you that I have-drumroll, please- FIGURED OUT THE CHAPTER NUMBER!!!! YAHOO!

Chapter 10 (No one's POV.)

Hatchet fled out of the hut, and ran across the camp. He ran far away from the closest tent, and only stopped when a giant thunderbolt shook the ground. The soaking wet Ragdoll climbed up a small oak tree, and sat shivering on a low branch. "Where can Master Cutie-Pie be? What will Master Lixue do to me? Oh, how will I get out of this!?!?" Hatchet's thoughts poured out like floodwaters over a dry desert. He only wished he was as dry as a desert!!! Hatchet shakily pulled out a match-box from his pocket, and took the last withering match out. He quickly peeled the protective wax coating off, and struck it against the box. Nothing. Scratch! Nothing again. Five more times and not even a spark. Frustrated, Hatchet put the small match back in its box and stuffed it in his pocket. What will I do? What can I do? Hatchet?s mind raced furiously. And then it clicked. He could run away. It would be risky, but what?s to loose? A pair of old cloth pants and a box of a single wet match? Yes, he would run away. He was already far from camp! So, Hatchet quietly slipped out of he tree and ran.

Hope you guys liked that chapter!!! I will post what?s happening to Skye and Han Kai soon! TGIF!!!

Syrup240 ;D

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Date: 01/24/13 9:55 PM
From: Batskee

@Syrup240:
Aww, poor Hatchet. The cat seemed kinda nice.
Ruby: But he was working for the enemy!
Me: I still think he's nice.
Silvermist: Anyways, great story! Lixue seems to have such a temper.

~*Batskee*~
Can't wait for the next part!

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Date: 01/24/13 9:51 PM
From: Tigress16

AWESOME, AWESOME, AWEOSME! I can NOT wait to see more, this just ROCKS! you did GREAT on that chapter, LOVED IT SO MUCH!!!!!!

Your fan and friend...
Tigress16

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Date: 01/24/13 6:41 PM
From: syrup240

YAY! Thanks for commenting!!!!! :D

Part...umm.....this is awkward.... (No one's POV)

Lixue un-sheathed her claws as she screamed for Cutie-Pie in her hut. Rain poured down and drenched the camp filled with soaking-wet cats, who hid around fires under trees and in the few tents that where pitched. Five or more cats struggled to strike the wooden stakes needed to put up the tent, and failed miserably in the dark thunderstorm. An outraged Lixue scanned for the army general with her burning eyes, and was confused when a skinny, drenched Ragdoll breed cat hesitantly walked up to her. "Why are you here? I desire to speak to the head of armies, not a lanky cat like you", Lixue spat at the quivering feline. "The head general is not p-p-pr-present at the moment", the cat managed to choke out, "The only army cat they had left was me." Lixue scowled at the low-rank cat, but moved aside to let him in. He scurried in, and Lixue sat at a mahogany table across from him. "Who are you, first of all?" Lixue asked as she eyed the cat. ?I am-am-a-a-am Hatchet.? The cat stuttered. ?Well, Hatchet, tell me where Cutie-Pie is!!? Lixue started out her sentence with total self-control, and ended up leaning across the table and hissing at the poor Hatchet. ?No one is able to find out, Master Lixue?, Hatchet quickly stated. Anxiety filled the cat?s worried green-blue eyes, and Lixue bared her fangs in a devious smile. ?I tell you what, Hatchet. Do me a favor. Just a small one, please?? Lixue said with a sweetness that was just a little too sweet for anyone?s likings. Hatchet gulped and nodded quickly. ?GET ME CUTIE-PIE OR YOU GET IT!!? Lixue screamed as Hatchet ran on all fours mewing out of the door and into the storm. ?AND DON?T LET THE THUNDERBOLT HIT YOU ON THE WAY OUT!!!? Lixue yelled after the fleeing cat. The snow-white cat sighed and rolled her eyes as she leaned against the table. ?What can I do with these cats?? She asked as she rubbed her temples with the pads of her paws.

Hope you guys liked this chapter! It was really fun to write!

Syrup240 ;D

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Date: 01/24/13 11:30 AM
From: Tigress16

@Bluewire
Yup! I already beat the game, but I'm playing it through again! IT IS AMAZING! STARKILLER IS ONE OF THE MOST EPIC CHARACTERS EVER!!!!!!!

@Batskee
Wow... Ruby just LOVES trouble, haha!

@Syrup
FINALLY caught up. Sorry for taking FOREVER. But that ROCKED! SERIOUSLY ROCKED! I can NOT wait to see what happens, just TO AMAZING!!!!!

Your fan and friend...
Tigress16

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Date: 01/23/13 8:12 PM
From: nystar15

I catch up, and I love it! ;)
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Date: 01/22/13 4:04 PM
From: Batskee

Hahaha, putting someone in a pink dress sounds funny! I hope they get everyone in safely before the storm though.

Ruby: Nice one! I love drawing on my brother's face.
Zenghui: *yawns and comes out of room*
Ruby: Speaking of which...
Zenghui: *has mustache and onicle drawn on his face* What's going on?
Ruby: Nothing, brother. I'm just absolutely speechless about how great you look.
Zenghui: *smiles slyly* You look great too.
Ruby: Huh? *looks in mirror* WHA-?! *sees that he drew a mustache and go-tee on her face*

~*Batskee*~
Great story!

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Date: 01/21/13 6:17 PM
From: syrup240

@Everyone: Sorry this is such a short chapter, I was pretty busy!

Axe ran around the corner of the mountain path, just barely slipping over the edge. Chi quickly flew up behind him, followed by Jun, Annette, and Master Harachi. "I..(pant)..don't...(pant)...see him!!" Axe huffed, as he bent on his knees. Master Harachi came over to the side of the path, and leaned over on Oogway's staff. "Skye is gone, too. Seems like they fell." The Kung Fu Master looked solemnly down, while Annette and Chi followed up behind him. Axe fell on his back on the rock steps, and nearly passed out from exhaustion. "I'm so tire-" was all he could say before he fell asleep. Chi pulled out some ink and a quill, but Jun was quicker than that. He has already drawn a mustache on Axe, and sat snickering with his Chinese brush. "If only we had one of my pink qipao", Annette said, as she pictured Axe in her magenta dress. "We need to head back to the Jade Palace. A storm is brewing up, and we must alert the town.For all we know, we might have to evacuate the whole Valley", Master Harachi said as they all hurried down the mountain.

Hope you like it!
Syrup240 ;D

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Date: 01/21/13 4:06 PM
From: Batskee

@Syrup240:
Hahaha!

Jared; What's so funny?
Me: Han Kai thought he was Viper's father.
Jared: *reads* What about it? They should be happy he has taken a liking to cobras.
Me: But he's not supposed to be a cobra he's supposed to be a pizza-loving black panther from Florida!
Jared: You don't have to hide it Batskee. I know you don't like cobras.
Me: What?! I love cobras!
Jared: *holds up tail* Don't. Just...don't.
Me: Jared, if I didn't like cobras, don't you think I wouldn't have created you and June?
Jared; Oh yeah...

~*Batskee*~
Great story! And also, I will be expecting twists!

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Date: 01/20/13 9:58 PM
From: syrup240

@Batskee: I'LL DO ANYTHING!!!!! Just please spare the video!!!! I.. uh.... have cookies!! *Holds up crude drawing of cookies.*

@Everyone: So glad for the comments! Be expecting twists!!

Part 6, I believe. No one's POV

"Wake up, leppy-leppy-leopard!" Skye coaxed, as she waved an almond-cookie in Han Kai's face. He was knocked out cold, but slowly started to twitch his nose like a bunny. Then he bit Skye's hand, who jerked it back, leaving the almond-cookie inside Han Kai. Skye stared at the pink bite-mark, and back at Han Kai with a quizzical look on her face. "SHAMBALA!" Han Kai screamed as he stood up quickly. Skye raised an eyebrow, until Han Kai screamed again. "YOU ARE NO MATCH FOR MY POISON-FANG TECHNIQUE!!" He screamed, as he bared his teeth. "No, not and impression of Viper's dad!!" Skye groaned, as she face-palmed herself. Han Kai fell to the ground, and tried slithering around like a snake. "Either that's a poor impression of the worm, or you've lost it." Skye looked at Han Kai. "Is that a challenge you seek?" Han Kai asked, as he attempted to rear up like a cobra. ?This personality change has got to go?, Skye said, as she picked up a stick and whacked Han Kai several times on the head. He fell to the ground groaning, but quickly got up. ?You aren?t Mufasa...? Han Kai said as he got up. ?And where?s Sarabi?? Uncle Scar!!??? Han Kai said as he pranced around like Simba. ?No, no, no! Not a theater character?, Skye muttered, as she picked up her stick again. She swished her stick around like Gandalf?s (or Dumbledore?s for that matter) wand, but Han Kai dodged and ran away laughing. ?Oh, I just can?t wait to be king!? He sang, before Skye rolled her eyes and chased after him.

WARNING: I do not own Scar, Simba, Sarabi, Mufasa, Gandalf, or Dumbledore. I was just using them for a segment in a story. All credit for those names goes to them.
Hope you guys liked it!!!!

Syrup240 ;D

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