hi everyone! this is my very first fanfic and i hope u will lik it! if u have any advice or ideas for new chapters that will be great. but there is one thing i need though. i need a villian and possibly hench men. if u can help me with that, that will be fantastic. of course i will pick the villain and possiby henchmen later. hope u will like it!
Amazing job on the previous two chapters...I'm starting to get a feeling that I know where this story's headed. Anyeay, I'm loving it to the very core, and I'm actually feeling a little sorry for Jeia. Oh well...Until the next awesome chappie!
Ah, they feel like they belong. That's so nice.
Silvermist: It won't last for long.
Me: Why do you always spoil the happy moments?
Silvermist: It's called reality, sister.
Me: *rolls eyes*
Silvermist: But it's just so sad to see.....see...she's leaving! *sobs*
Me: It's alright. Her story and Kung Fu Spirit will live on forever.
Silvermist: I'll miss them too much!
Wonerful chapters T714! I look forward to more of the chapters.
The door shut as Tigress left again. The two animal friends came out of the bed, both with a face of confusion and worry.
Delgado said, "Who was that? And...did he just adopt Tigress?"
"Some kind of mutated rat." Jeia said as she titled her head. "And I don't know." The panther than became sadder. "...Maybe she was adopted..."
"But she didn't say goodbye!" Delgado whimpered.
"Then, maybe she's coming back then." Jeia said. Jeia furrowed her eye ridge, looking at the door. "She has to."
Later, that same day, the door opened to sleeping kids around the room.
"Guys?" Tigress asked.
Hearing the sound of her voice, Delgado sprang up from slumber and hugged the tiger. "Tigress!"
Jeia as well came over, a bit of sleepiness obviously on her face, but she fought it. "What happened?"
"That man named Master Shifu is helping me control my anger." Tigress said, smiling.
"Wait, so he's coming back?" Jeia asked, trying to contain her frown.
"Yeah, but only for an hour a day. The rest of the time, I'll be with you guys." Tigress smiled. Tigress noticed they weren't convinced. She understood. If she was one of them, she would feel the same.
"We thought you left us." Delgado said, his ears dropping against his head. "Without a goodbye."
"I would never do that, guys." Tigress said. "If I'm getting adopted, then you guys too. We stick together, no matter what."
The two seemed to lighten up at her words.
Tigress said one more thing, to convince them completely. "We stay together..." Tigress said, holding her palm out. She waited for them to finish.
Jeia and Delado smiled and piled their paws on top of Tigress'. They both said, "Forever and ever."
They all laughed and hugged. Their bond was too strong to break.
It had been a couple months since the training began with Tigress controling her anger. Soon after, the other kids began to like her. Delgado and Jeia played together a good game of dominos that Tigress gave them from Shifu. That same day, the door opened. The two cubs looked over and saw the care-takers come in. They were giving the two smiles...not fear.
"Come on out. Let's play with the other kids." One woman goat said, holding out her hand as well as the other.
Delgado and Jeia both looked at each other is astounishment. The slowly stood up and hesitantly took their hands. They gently led them out of the room and into the playing area. The children stopped playing and looked over at the two. The children did what the panther and wolf never thought they'd do to them. They came over with smiles and greeted them, as if they were new. They began to smile. They went over and began to join in on the fun, finally getting the feeling that they...
Delgado and Jeia played cards as they waited for Tigress to come back. Jeia felt a little distracted, she kept worrying for her friend.
"Ha! Crazy eights! I win." Delgado said, putting down his cards and showing all the eights he had.
"We're playing solitaire." Jeia said.
"Really?" Delgado said. "Oh, that makes more sense."
Then, the door opened. Before they could see, Tigress was thrown in on top the two kids playing cards. The door immediately shut after.
Jeia got out the pile first and helped Tigress up. Delgado stood on all fours and shook his fur, making it puff out a second later. He saw Tigress with a sad expression. Delgado's ear and tail dropped. He could tell they treated her pretty badly. Figuring he could cheer her up, he went up and said, "Hey, look, Tigress, I'm a pomeranian!"
Tigress only glanced at him before looking at the ground again. Then, Tigress lashed out on the wall, scratching it with all her force. Jeia and Delgado backed up, for they know what happens when she was angry. Finally, she was able to calm down and sat in the corner, facing it as she curled to a ball.
Jeia and Delgado gave each other a sympathetic look. They wanted to cheer her up. Before they could though, the door opened. Jeia and Delgado hid under the bed, out of fear. Tigress didn't move an inch.
"Tigress," The man said. Tigress moved her head slightly to him. "I am Shifu. I am-"
"Afraid?" Tigress growled.
The man closed the door behind him. "No." The man responded, showing no fear.
"Well, you should be." Tigress growled, facing him. "I am Tigress! Tigress, the monster!" Tigress then showed a face of sadness and returned to looking at the wall. "The monster no one wants."
"You are not a monster. You're just a little girl." Then man said, taking out a domino from up his sleeve.
Tigress turned around and gasped silently in amazement as the man made a curved row of standing dominos on the floor. Jeia and Delgado watched in silence of what was happening and didn't dare to interrupt.
The man, known as Shifu, picked up one domino and holds it out to Tigress. "Let us play?" Tigress hesitantly grabbed it from him, only to break it. A piece flew out of her hand from the power and Shifu caught it. "You must learn to control your strength. Come with me." He said, leaving the place.
Tigress hesitantly followed along, momentarily forgetting about the two cubs fearful for their friend.
I'd love to help! Whats the story about? I have a villain and a hench man too! The villain's name is Evilana its a girl cat and the hench man's name is Cannery its a boy macaw. So just right me back if its OK.
Well...this is...tragic. But no, I won't cry, I'm too hardcore.
Aw, who am I kidding?
Well, T714, you are definitely going to leave a permanent mark on these boards. I have a feeling this story will go down as a--c'mon, let's face it--a legend among Kung Fu Panda fanfics. I'm really glad I had the honor to read and this and the privilege to be your friend Sorry if it sounds like I'm exaggerating, but I mean every word.
This ranks as one of the best stories on here, ever, and I hope you use those amazing writing skills of yours for the best ways possible, and for the causes you feel matter most.
Now, enough with all that mushy stuff, but you will be missed...so will and the epicly awesome stories that we not only read, but felt, saw, and will always remember.