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Kung Fu Panda: Doctor Who (Second Attempt)

Date: 04/13/13 1:32 AM
From: KFPDW

(Here we go again, attempt number 2 on this)
Episode 1: It?s Elemental
Part 1

China 221 BC

'The Jade Palace, home to the greatest kung fu master of all time, rules over the Valley of Peace and protects it from any danger that falls upon it. Under the masterful eye of Master Shifu, the Dragon Warrior and the Furious Five fight for Justice and Honour against any villain who dares cross their path with their awesome power of Kung Fu Skills.

For that they will be sorry for they had what will come to them and??no no no no, that?s not it.

Uh how about this??? For they will be pay with the awesomeness the Dragon Warrior disperses and??? Ok now that is just lame.

No wait, I?ve got it??. For they will pay with their lives for crimes they have committed annndddd now that just sounds too grim. UHAHH! Now you messed it up! And now you are awake.'

Po woke up from his lucid dream, He hated it when he messes up his dramatic narration that he does from time to time. Probably the reason of his mess-up is because Shifu had him and the Five training extra hard the past couple of weeks due to the fact that it has been very low key lately which pretty much stinks at the moment. Unless there was some action, Shifu would make up for with extra training.

Po got groggily out of bed and decided to refresh himself in the bathroom and get something to eat on the way there ?. and back. As Po crept quietly as he could along the hallway of the student barracks. He had a sudden tingling sensation which made him feel weird. Although he still felt sore all over from training so it was probably just that. Although there was nothing to get down about, after all he is now the Dragon Warrior. It was his dream to do Kung Fu and fight evil alone with the Masters ever since he was a cub. And that was totally awesomeness how fate got him a place at the Jade Palace and where he was today, but that was nearly 6 months ago since he became the Dragon Warrior and now things were starting to wear a bit.

The same bad guys kept coming back again and again and every time that happened Po and the Five had managed to beat every single time. Which is good but now it?s only starting to get too easy and the same routine of training over and over again was even starting to get bit dull. And now the only excitement Po gets around here is when his Dad, Mr Ping, gets him to help out at the Noodle Shop.

No wonder Po (sometimes mind you) get into mess every now and then, it is only to give life a bit of a sizzle. Although after accidently releasing the Mongolian Fist Demon, accidently erase the Furious Five?s memory and accidently breaking the training hall, There were only some many times you can go looking for trouble. And Po used up his looking for trouble meter exactly 6 months ago.

But it couldn?t be helped and was only because Po?s instincts had gotten restless and wanted some excitement. Not that he enjoyed messing up and go looking for trouble or anything under those lines because it gets him into deep water, it?s only because Po wanted to do things differently. There?s nothing with that. Although one of things he learned at his time at the Jade Palace is that some people aren?t always open to new ideas and methods of doing things. Especially if you are Po, in which case Shifu and the others always have had trouble trying to understand him. But in any case, things don?t always turn out bad in the end, sometimes certain situation turned out for the best thanks to Po?s methods of doing things differently and he especially felt proud of that.

And in any case any mess ups that have happened in the past, Po tries to keep them to himself when he can. What Shifu doesn?t know won?t hurt him. And now even that has become a bit dull for Po. After grabbing a bean bun on his way to the bathroom, Po filled up a bowl of cold water and splashed himself in the face with it to freshen up. It was then he realized that what he needed was change. Not from being the Dragon Warrior or anything but just a change. A change of events, a change of scenery, just a change that it is really out there. Something, anything that isn?t dull.

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Date: 04/17/13 12:59 AM
From: KFPDW

Part 4:
Back at the Student Barracks from where Po had come from, the crash had indeed awoke the rest of the Jade Palace Masters, the Furious Five whom were up and out ready for any unknown attacker. But there was no attack to their surprise. Master Tigress, the unofficial leader of the Five and the most devoted kung fu master of the Jade Palace was not to be put off easy. Just because there was no attack just yet doesn't mean there shouldn't be any cause for alarm. After all they'd all heard the crash from outside and crashes like that just don't usually mean anything. The second thing she realized was that Po was up with them. Surely he can't still be asleep after all that. She quickly checked his room to find that he wasn't there and fellow master Crane, a member of the Five checked the kitchen and there was no sign of him.

'Unbelievable' thought Tigress 'finally something happens and the only panda whom supposedly lives for this kind of life and his not here'.

"Maybe he is already gone to investigate what happened" suggested Monkey, another fellow master "I thought I heard him creeping past in the hallway, probably after a midnight snack, again."

"Yeah right, that will be the day!" mocked Tigress "He is always late for training and such. He always keeps us waiting. Why should make the effort now?"

It was true that Po slacked off a bit from time to time. But the last few weeks he had improved with his training all together and this has been notice by the Master of the Jade Palace, Shifu and everyone else except Tigress who has her doubts. This was probably due to the fact that there wasn't any action recently and Po makes up for it by attending training sessions on time she had thought. Once it started up again with the action, things will go back to the way they were. Unfortunately Tigress was the type of person that was hard to convince. She knew Po was the Dragon Warrior and he had proved it countless of times. Nothing changes there. It just that Po personality can be a bit wearing for her. The others by now know that whatever happens, Po always means well in what he does, well mostly and that's OK for them. He has a different way of approaching things which turns out to have better results to what they have done before in the past.

But for Tigress, time and time again from her prospective, Po took things in too easily and got away with most things with either luck or childish behaviour. Have that can be justified is unheard of with her. Not only that, he constantly kept teasing her because of her seriousness and hard core. Although from Po's point of view it is only because he was trying to get Tigress to loosen up and trying to get along with her. But it is not an easy task for him.

Anyway Tigress would have to worry about that later and she said to the others "Come on, we are no use here. We've got to find out what that noise was!"

She turned to her comrades "Viper, Mantis, Crane, you guys check out the training hall and Monkey and I will check the Palace. If we don't find anything we'll rendezvous with you and you will do vice a verse, Ok?"

"Awwwwh, Come on Tigress" groaned Mantis whom was still half asleep "Do we have to the whole commando routine now at this time of night. We know the noise had to come from the Palace so why can't we just go and ......."

"Mantis!" asserted Tigress

"OK! OK! OK! I get it. We will split up" groaned Mantis.

"I know we are dedicated to protecting the Valley of Peace and all" said Mantis to Viper and Crane as they headed for the Hall leaving Monkey and Tigress to "But doesn't General know when to give it a rest?"

"Mantis, you know the way Tigress is. She just doing her job that's all" Replied Viper, she too just as tried as the rest of them but manages to compose her compassion none the less.

"Either way, I sometimes prefer to deal with the way Po handles things any day. Speak of which, Where is He anyway?"

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Date: 04/16/13 5:39 AM
From: KFPDW

Thanks for the Help Tigress714!!!!
I will keep that in mind! :)
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Date: 04/14/13 8:08 PM
From: Tigress714

Very good! fast learner! only just one thing to correct. the ? marks. i hate them. anyway, did you download wordpad? if you did, did you copy and paste your work from microsoft to wordpad then post? caus if you did, u can't do that. you have to rewrite it in wordpad, not the whole thing! only the " ' parts. also i see the ... parts aren't working either, huh? what i did is this:

Po is the ...dragon warrior!?

See the space? i'm not 100 percent sure it works, but it works for me. Hoped that helped!

~Tigress714

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Date: 04/14/13 7:09 PM
From: judger5367

Are you serious? Doctor who mixed with Kung Fu Panda? N-O.
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Date: 04/13/13 8:45 PM
From: KFPDW

Part 3

It was tall; it had windows on the top all-round the sides. It had to double doors which were big enough for someone like Po to fit through. It had a lamp on the top which shone brightly in the dark.

It also had writing all over it in a language that Po couldn?t understand. He couldn?t understand it, he knew he something crash in here and that box can?t possibly be it. Before, as Po just turned around to see the box he caught a glimpse of someone walking inside the box and closing the door behind him. Po moved slowly towards the box.

It was slightly scorched and a bit of smoke was rising from it surface. Po slowly raised his paw and touched the surface of the box. It hummed lightly under his fingers in a good way that reassured Po that this wasn?t something evil. And then that was when Po realized that his paw was burning on the humming yet hot box.

?AAAAAHHHHHHHHHH OWWWWWW!? Po yelled moving about away from desperately shaking of the burning sensation from his paw only to shove in his mouth.

There was a large thud and Po turned to see the box slowly with same wheezing and groaning sound that he heard from before except strained this time disappear right in front of his eyes. It his paw fell out of his mouth as he stood in awe as the box flicked out of existence like a flame on a candle and after a few moments it was gone.

Po?s awe slowly turned into an ?AWESOME!? and that was all he could say.

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Date: 04/13/13 8:00 PM
From: KFPDW

Part 2

As though fate was listening to his calls again, that something he wanted came true. As Po emptied the water bowl out the window, he looked up at the sky and saw millions upon billion of stars up there in the night sky. It was a breathtaking sight! As Po looked up, a streak came out of the sky.

?Whoa! Shooting star! That something you didn?t see every day. Or is it night?? Po thought to himself.

Then the shooting star did something odd, it started to jerk and zigzag across the sky.

?Especially a shooting star that moves like that? What kind of star is that, unless it is a living one? No, that would be stupid. Would it? Then again ???

But before Po could finish thinking that the star suddenly swing around and streaked straight into the Jade Palace which was in view from where Po was and there was an almighty crash as star crash-landed into the side of the Jade Palace. Po shielded his eyes from the crash and was in beyond disbelief. Did he just dream that or did that actually happened. No it did happen because there was smoke coming from where the star hit the Palace. Although he still could be dreaming so he pinched himself on the arm to check. Po gave a small yelp in pain and tried to stifle it so to not wake the others although the crash should have taken care of that already.

?Yep? thought Po ?Defiantly awake?.

That was enough proof for him. So Po took no time run as fast he could towards the Palace to see what the star looked like. Po never seen a star up close before. In fact no one has. Except maybe the great Kung Fu masters from beyond who are now all dead so Po would be the very first person alive to see a star up close in forever.

?That would totally be absolutely AWESOME!!!!? Po thought excitedly ?Now this is more like it?

Although that was not all fate had in store for him. Po felt like something big was going to happen, he just knew it. But as he clambered up the steps to the rear entrance of the Jade Palace, Po suddenly realized that before he saw the star crash he could have sworn that there was a faint wheezing and groaning sound coming from the star, he knew he heard it, but just didn?t realize it until now.

As Po entered the Palace, which by now was clouded by smoke from the crash and tried to cross over to where the star fell. Coughing, Po made his way around the Hall of Heroes arms outstretched to make sure he didn?t bump into anything only to knock the Whispering Urn Jar over and break it accidently again.

?We really need to put that thing on a higher shelve or at least somewhere out of reach.? Po said between coughs.

As the cloud of smoke became more and more dense it became harder for Po to see and breathe. He was about to consider to back out when he thought that the Dragon Warrior never backs out of anything no matter how hard and the smoke did start to clear up.

There muffled voice that Po could just make out that said ?Extractor Fans On!? and the smoke just cleared up. ?Oh that?s better!? said the voice after cough a couple times. It was a male?s voice that Po recognised as.

When the smoke clear, enough he was able to see better. From where he was standing he was facing the front entrance of the Palace and on his right was the large hole in the wall where the star burst through. The edges around the hole were burned and couple of flames were scattered here and there. Po looked around him to see that the hall was a mess; all the artifacts that were on display were knocked over or broken. Also there was a massive burn mark leading from the hole to the other side of the hall. Po?s eyes followed the trail to where the star should be still coughing a bit. But what meet Po?s eyes was not a star but a big blue box, standing inbetween one of the columns and a knocked over pedestal that presented the Whooping Sword.

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