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Date: 10/06/13 1:52 PM
From: treine

Chapter 1: Part 1
The Newcomers

"Hello 5 and Po, today there will be 5 new people to help train." said Shifu. "They are a lion, horse, snake, shark-" "A Shark?!!" interrupted Po. "Anyway, and a monkey!!" said Shifu. "Their names are Elamina, HayNut, Viperess, Sharantha, and Mono." mentioned Shifu. "Interesting..." said Po. "What??" asked Monkey. "Is Mono your cousin, because I learned that Monkey in spanish is Mono, so is he??" asked Po. "Yes, he is!!" sighed Monkey. "And Viper, is Viperess your cousin??" asked Po with curiosity. "Yeah, she knows Spanish, but I don't!!" said Viper. "Anyway, here they are!!" exclaimed Shifu. "You can call us Ella, Vivi, and Shara!!" said Elamina. "You guys can call me Nut!!" said HayNut. "Hello Monkey!! By the way, I don't have a nickname!!" said Mono. "I'll leave all 11 of you to doing business!!" said Shifu as he left. "Today you have to look straight, stand straight, head up, and follow instructions!!" demanded Tigress. "Yes master!!" said the newcomers.

To Be Continued...

*~Treine~*
I hope you guys enjoyed the first part of the chapter!!

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Date: 09/11/14 9:20 PM
From: treine

Chapter 18: Part 1 The Exit
"Hey, Horphu!!" yelled out Drasonetta. "It's Master Horphu to you!!" corrected Horphu. "Well, what do you want??" asked Horphu without patience. "I thought you said we would go to the other side of the Underground World. You know, the exit??" proclaimed Drasonetta. "I'm the one who orders around here, NOT you!!" declared Horphu. "Well, don't you want to get the treasure before they do??" asked Jaypard. "Oh, why, yes I do!!" answered Horphu. They turn around and walk towards the exit of the Underground World. "Hasn't this roller coaster seemed to take ages now??" asked Amethyst. "Well, it's leading us to the exit, so it's also for a good thing!!" stated Elamina. "But, I want to get to the treasure now!! When will I get to see Shifu??" asked Kai Yae. "Soon, you'll get to see him soon!!" determined Karana. They go past a small sheltered tunnel that has many prehistoric things and animals. "What type of dinosaur was that skeleton??" asked Kai Yae. "That was a fossil and that was a Maiasaura, the mother lizard." acknowledged Charlie. "You are smart and an adorable wolf!!" complimented Kai Yae. They get closer and closer to the exit.
To Be Continued...
*~Treine~*

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Date: 08/25/14 6:39 PM
From: treine

Chapter 17: Part 3
The Meeting

"Oh, right, okay, I'm so scared!!" sarcastically said Charlie. "You watch the way you talk and act towards me, boy!! It's not the last time I've warned you!!" notified Horphu. "The only way you'll earn my respect is if you leave us alone!!" said Charlie. "I can say that this master never leaves anyone alone, not even us!!" informed Drasonetta. "Yeah, so there won't be a significant amount of chances that this evil master-mind will leave all 10 of you alone,? described Jaypard. "I will have a small 'talk' with you three back at the exit of the underground world!!" exclaimed Horphu. "I did not like that tone in his voice!!" uttered Tigrey. "Okay, so what are the names of all 10 of you??" asked Drasonetta. "I'm Elamina, that's Viperess, this is Sharantha, that is Mono, he is HayNut, she is Karana, those two are Amethyst and Silvermist, he is Charlie, and that small one over there is Kai Yae!!" announced Elamina. "Oh it's nice to be meeting all of you!! I am Drasonetta, that is Tigrey, and he is Jaypard,? informed Drasonetta. "They aren?t a very nice group to meet if you tell me!!" complained Horphu. The four walk back to the Ruby Palace.

To Be Continued...

*~Treine~*

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Date: 08/11/14 1:42 AM
From: treine

Chapter 17: Part 2
The Meeting

"Whoa, that roller coaster sure is fast!!" exclaimed Drasonetta. "Maybe you can let us ride on your back, Drassy!!" suggested Jaypard. "Okay, but, then you two have to carry me on the way back!!" ordered Drasonetta. "But, you are too big and too heavy!!" whined Jaypard. "If you want me to carry you, then you have to carry me!!" informed Drasonetta. "Well, at least I have these great and giant muscles to help me carry you!!" gloated Tigrey. The three start running fast to catch up to the roller coaster quickly and hear a strange sound. "Did you guys hear that??" asked Tigrey. "It sounded like if someone was being choked!!" informed Jaypard. "Boys, boys, remember?? Horphu is being choked and we're trying to save him!!" explained Drasonetta. "Oh, right, we forgot!! Ha ha!!" laughed Tigrey. Tigrey and Jaypard get on Drasonetta and she starts to flap her wings. After 5 minutes, they catch up to the roller coaster to find Charlie still choking their master. "Charlie, come over here!! Are your muscles bigger than mine??" asked Tigrey. Charlie walks over to Tigrey, letting Horphu go, and he measures his arm with Tigrey. "Nope, yours are bigger!!" explained Charlie. "Oh okay, that?s good to know!!" assured Tigrey. "You trash bag, I will get you back!! Beware!!? warned Horphu.

To Be Continued...

*~Treine~*

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Date: 08/06/14 2:10 AM
From: treine

Chapter 17: Part 1
The Meeting

"Oh, no, I won't let go of you yet!!" said Charlie. After that comment, Horphu took out his wrist-caller and let the three know that he was in terrible danger in the underground coaster!! "Oh, it's our worst nightmare and our annoying master!!" exclaimed Drasonetta. "He says that he is being choked by a muscle wolf?!" read Drasonetta. "What?? Even more muscular than I am?!!" asked Tigrey. "Um, I don't know, but maybe a little bit older!!" informed Drasonetta. "Well, at least he's suffering just like we suffer when he's here!!" announced Jaypard. "Wait, wait, how did he get away from the Menace??" asked Jaypard. "Oh, right, I forgot about that!!" whispered Drasonetta. "Let's just go and save the wing-nut!!" demanded Tigrey. The three of them walk to the woods to find a hole there where Horphu fell down. "Are you sure you want to go first, Tigrey??" asked Drasonetta. "Well, yeah, I'm the only man here!!" explained Tigrey. "Um, hello, I'm a man too!!" hollered Jaypard. "Yeah, but I'm manlier than you!!" bragged Tigrey. Tigrey falls down and right behind him are Drasonetta and Jaypard, but when they land the roller coaster, creatures, and Horphu are gone. They run fast to catch up to the roller coaster and Horphu.

To Be Continued...

*~Treine~*

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Date: 07/23/14 10:34 PM
From: raphbeau

That is one smart wolf, and I am totally speaking the truth!! I would also do the same thing if I was like him!! What a funny thing to be when you are a 13 year old girl!! But seriously, I LOVE this wolf!!

'~*ILoveRaph*~'

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Date: 07/22/14 11:31 PM
From: treine

Chapter 16: Part 3
The Living Horphu

Horphu jumps up on the roller coaster on the seat of Elamina and lands next to her!! "Can you please get out of my seat?!!" asked Elamina. "No, I won't get out of this seat!!" announced Horphu. "Oh, yes you will!! I don't like you when I heard about how you treated my love, Shifu!!" yelled Kai Yae. "I'll handle him for you!!" said Karana. "Oh, thank you!!" thanked Kai Yae. "So, you Horphu creature, I thought you were gone and had a spirit only!!" mentioned Karana. "Oh, I was and did, but now I am the LIVING Horphu!!" shouted Horphu. "Why are you so weird and WEIRD?!!" exclaimed Charlie. "Oh, if you dare call me weird one more time, I will CURSE you and all of your kind!!" informed Horphu. "Oh, really?? Well, try to get pass me with these muscular hairy wolf arms and this massive hairy chest with a bulge and abs!!" bragged Charlie. Charlie did have a great figure since he was in a family of muscle wolves. "Well, your body does look great, but what would you do?? Choke me?? I mean I'm the greatest villain around so what do you think on doing??" asked and bragged Horphu. Charlie grabs Horphu by the neck and squeezes him with his big biceps. "You c-can let m-me g-go n-now!!" said a breathless Horphu.

To Be Continued...

*~Treine~*

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Date: 07/19/14 9:33 PM
From: treine

Part 3 I will do tomorrow or the day after tomorrow, so be ready to see that part!!

*~Treine~*

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Date: 07/19/14 9:09 PM
From: treine

In the message below, it was supposed to say Kai Yae, not just Kai!!

*~Treine~*

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Date: 07/09/14 3:53 PM
From: treine

Oopsy, did you guys notice that I accidentally put Karai instead of Kai?? Well, if you did, I meant to say Kai, not Karai. Okay, so don't say Karai, but instead say Kai. Sorry, and that was something that I barely noticed today about my mistake and I really meant to say Kai. So, please replace Karai with Kai. Bye!! My apologies for the mistake!!

*~Treine~*

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Date: 07/08/14 11:13 PM
From: TREINE

Chapter 16: Part 2
The Living Horphu

"I will rule the Valley of Peace one day, and that might be today!!" thought Horphu. "I can't wait until these weaklings figure out that I, Horphu the Red Panda, am alive!!" said Horphu. Horphu turned back to see that the woods looked small from where he was standing. That was when he fell into a wide hole that lead into the roller coaster that the others were still in. "Well, these will be the first ones to figure out that I AM alive!!" exclaimed Horphu. The newcomers of Shifu, Silvermist and Amethyst, Charlie, and Karana heard a noise of laughter, not regular laughter, but evil laughter. "What was that??" asked Karai while holding Mr. Shifu Fluffles. "I don't have a clue or any idea of what that was!!" explained Elamina. "I think thath ith sounded like the laugh of the Horphu creature!!" gasped Sharantha. "Really?? It did??" asked HayNut. "Oh, why, por su puesto que si!!" answered Viperess. "Um, what did she just say??" asked Charlie. "That means, yes, of course!!" explained Mono. "How happy am I that you are all here!!" bellowed Horphu. "I-It is Horphu everyone!! It is HORPHU!!" shouted Amethyst. "Yes, it is me!!" informed Horphu.

To Be Continued...

*~Treine~*

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Date: 07/07/14 11:37 PM
From: treine

@Trinera
Yeah, those were my favorite parts too sis!!

@Bigmewith
Thanks, that means a lot to me!! (:

*~Treine~*
(Next part comes tomorrow!!)

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Date: 07/06/14 7:56 PM
From: bigmewith

your a good whiter keep it up dud
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Date: 07/05/14 6:07 PM
From: trinera

What a nice chapter that was, but the part I enjoyed was when the Menace poked Horphu and made him squeal and run!! The Menace has to get out of the woods someday, but if not, the newcomers and added people shall rescue him!!

-T-

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Date: 06/24/14 5:38 PM
From: treine

Chapter 16: Part 1
The Living Horphu

"Roar, Roar, ROAR!!" yelped the Menace. Horphu fell to the ground and came out as a REAL red panda. The Menace saw Horphu and had a humongous grudge towards Horphu. Horphu started running, and the Menace did the same and followed Horphu angrily. "ROAR, ROAR, ROAR!!" roared the Menace. Horphu became scared and ran as fast as he could to get away from the Menace. But alas, Horphu tripped over a rock, which slowed down his running and made it easier for the Menace to catch up to him. "Don't eat me, I taste horrible and disgusting!!" squealed Horphu. The Menace bent over and poked Horphu with a sharp claw, which made Horphu shout and run even faster than he ever could!! "Shoo, Menace, shoo!!" said Horphu. Horphu finally got out of the woods and was panting heavily. The Menace tried getting out of the woods, but the vines from the trees made a fence, which stopped the Menace and caused him to turn around. "I finally got away from that disgusting, horrid, and the ugly-faced Menace!!" thought Horphu. The Menace was lonely and went back to his temple and just wished for a thing. "I wish to get out of these woods one day, even though the woods of the lost Menace will only be The Woods!!" thought the Menace. "Now, I AM alive!!" hollered Horphu while walking away.

To Be Continued...

*~Treine~*

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Date: 06/12/14 11:13 PM
From: treine

I'm sorry that I haven't made a new chapter or part yet!! I'm on vacation, but I brought my flash drive, so hopefully I'll be posting one soon!!

*~Treine~*

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Date: 06/05/14 4:38 PM
From: Yuppy23

I can't wait for Kai Yae to come in!
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Date: 05/31/14 9:11 PM
From: treine

Comments?? I have all of Chapter 15 finished and if you would more likely love to read the last part or part 2 for those of you who haven't read yet, then go ahead and read it and Chapter 16 will be posted today or tomorrow!! Bye and read the newest part and enjoy as much of it as you can!!

*~Treine~*

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Date: 05/31/14 1:07 AM
From: treine

Chapter 15: Part 3
The Potion and the Menace

"Oh, no, it is too late for this!!" shouted Drasonetta. Drasonetta and the other two befriended the Menace, who was the one who had the real potion. Drasonetta shook her tail to release Horphu from her tail and drop him directly into the Menace's mouth. "You beast, you savage, you will pay for this, hideous dragon!!" uttered Horphu. As Horphu was falling in the Menace's mouth, the Menace swallowed Horphu completely without biting him. "WHAT?? The potion has been inside the Menace all along?!!" blurted Horphu. "Now is finally our chance to run!!" whispered Drasonetta. The 3 animals ran out of the woods to lose Horphu, and Drasonetta gave the Menace a wink and a thumb up. Horphu grabbed his bottle and scooped the turquoise (the real color) potion in it. "I finally have this last potion to turn myself into a real live red panda and everyone will be afraid!! He he he!!" laughed Horphu. He drank the three potions and came to life as he was at one time. "I'm invincible now and I will kick my way through this Menace." thought Horphu. He kicked the Menace in the stomach and walked up to kick his mouth to come out free.

To Be Continued...

*~Treine~*

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Date: 05/24/14 8:03 PM
From: treine

The question mark after "To Be Continued" isn't supposed to be there!! What is supposed to be there is the three dots!! So, yeah!! (To Be Continued...) Bye!!

*~Treine~*

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Date: 05/23/14 9:49 PM
From: treine

Chapter 15: Part 2
The Potion and the Menace

"What do you mean you've had it with me??" asked Horphu. "That I'm tired of you treating us like we're nobodies and like we are just trash by the way you call us names!!" shouted Drasonetta. Drasonetta was urged to throw Horphu into the small line of river inside of the tunnel; that was located in the Egyptian building; that was hidden in the woods. "I think that I SHOULD throw Horphu into the river!!" thought Drasonetta to herself. Jaypard, who seemed to know what Drasonetta was feeling, understood what Drasonetta was thinking. "Do it Drasonetta, Horphu gets what he deserves!!" encouraged Jaypard. Drasonetta was excited to finally do what she had wanted to do to Horphu. "Get a taste of THIS!!" shouted Drasonetta. Horphu said, "A taste of wha-", and before he could finish his sentence, he was thrown into the river. Horphu never learned how to swim, so he drowned for a moment. "Why did you drop me, you hooligan??" asked Horphu. "Oh, well, maybe because you are a crazy creature who is cruel!!" insulted Drasonetta. "Excuse me?? I'm crazy??" asked Horphu. "HURRY UP!! We don't want him to catch up to us!!" hollered Drasonetta. Horphu got up as quickly as he could and grabbed Drasonetta's tail. "It is too late for that dunderhead!!" said Horphu.

To Be Continued?

*~Treine~*

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