"Hello 5 and Po, today there will be 5 new people to help train." said Shifu. "They are a lion, horse, snake, shark-" "A Shark?!!" interrupted Po. "Anyway, and a monkey!!" said Shifu. "Their names are Elamina, HayNut, Viperess, Sharantha, and Mono." mentioned Shifu. "Interesting..." said Po. "What??" asked Monkey. "Is Mono your cousin, because I learned that Monkey in spanish is Mono, so is he??" asked Po. "Yes, he is!!" sighed Monkey. "And Viper, is Viperess your cousin??" asked Po with curiosity. "Yeah, she knows Spanish, but I don't!!" said Viper. "Anyway, here they are!!" exclaimed Shifu. "You can call us Ella, Vivi, and Shara!!" said Elamina. "You guys can call me Nut!!" said HayNut. "Hello Monkey!! By the way, I don't have a nickname!!" said Mono. "I'll leave all 11 of you to doing business!!" said Shifu as he left. "Today you have to look straight, stand straight, head up, and follow instructions!!" demanded Tigress. "Yes master!!" said the newcomers.
To Be Continued...
I hope you guys enjoyed the first part of the chapter!!
Silvermist starts to get upset with the others and crosses her arms. "What do you guys mean by 'I don't know'??" asked Silvermist. "Oh, fine, alright!! We'll go down there!!" said Amethyst. The rest of them walk towards the slide with their backs slouched, except Viperess. Amethyst is the first one to go down the slide. The following person is Elamina, and she goes down the slide where she meets up with Amethyst. The third person to ride down the slide is HayNut and right before he gets off of the slide, he neighs and flings his tail towards the side of the slide. "Ooh, it?s amazing down here!!" said HayNut. "Yeah!! That?s what we?ve been telling you!!" said Kai Yae. The fourth person to slither down the slide is Viperess. The fifth and final person to reach the bottom of the slide is Charlie. "You guys weren?t kidding when you said it was beautiful!!" said Elamina. "Would we kid around??" asked Silvermist. "No, you wouldn?t!!" answered Amethyst feeling guilty. "Let?s go on some rides now!!" said Silvermist. All 9 of them run towards a roller coaster and everyone hops onto it. Kai Yae lays Mr. Shifu Fluffles on a seat and says, "Tell me how the ride was, okay??" Kai Yae makes Mr. Shifu Fluffles? head nod up and down. Kai Yae goes back to the seat where the lever to control the coaster is at. She sits down and swings the lever to start the roller coaster. "Let the coaster roll!!" yelled out Kai Yae.
"What do you guys mean by 'Uh'??" asked Silvermist. "Well, uh, um, uh, we just wanted to continue the quest and get out of the ditch!!" answered Amethyst and the others. "Maybe, there's another way out, like through this amusement park..." said Kai Yae. "I can't wait any longer!!" shouted Mono. Mono runs towards the slide and tries to hurry to be the first one at a ride. "Mono, don't you realize that you don't have to hurry??" asked Silvermist. "Yeah, I do have to hurry!!" hollered Mono. "Oh, wait, I see what you mean..." "Oh, Mono, always rushing to stuff without realizing the obvious!!" thought Elamina. "I wanth tho ridthe the slidthe down tho the amusementh park!!" yelled Sharantha. "No!! Let's continue up here!!" said Elamina and Amethyst. Sharantha goes towards the slide and rides it down to the bottom of the beautiful underground world. "Oh, ith's beauthiful!!" said Sharantha. "See?? I told you!! Didn't I, Mr. Shifu Fluffles??" asked Kai Yae. "Well, are the rest of you coming down or what??" asked Silvermist. "We don't know..." said the rest.
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It used to be above the ground, but since it was really old, it fell into a deep trench at the bottom of the ground!! Everything from the amusement park went down there. The amusement park was ran by a very old animal that was a Pygmy Marmoset (A small monkey) named Pylie. Once he passed away, the amusement park became worn out and fell down where it was never seen again... NOT UNTIL NOW!! :D
"Are you okay down there??" asked Amethyst. "What does it look like??" asked Silvermist. "I think that's a no..." said Amethyst. "Ding!! Ding!! Ding!! We have a winner!!" sarcastically said Silvermist. "Is it cold down there??" asked Charlie. "Yeah, but not as cold as winter!!" said Silvermist. "What do you see down there??" asked HayNut. "I see rocks, feathers, and..." "And what, Silvermist??" asked Elamina. "And an old amusement park that still seems to work!!" informed Silvermist. "Ooh, ooh, I want to see the amusement park!!" exclaimed Kai Yae. Kai Yae runs towards the slide that took Silvermist to the underground world. "Get ready for the time of our lives, Mr. Shifu Fluffles!!" yelled Kai Yae. "How is it down there Kai Yae??" asked Viperess. Kai Yae takes a slightly deep breath and says, "There are roller coasters, carousels, Ferris Wheels, go-carts, bumper cars, and a lot more things!!" "That sounds awesome!!" said Mono. "Now, you have convinced me to want to go down there!!" "Yeah, us too!!" said the others. "Well, come down here!!" hollered Kai Yae and Silvermist. "Uh..." said the others unsure of themselves.