Not very long ago I got u guys to vote and u voted on this one and the penguin is Skipper. Heres the first chapter
chapter 1
Private: Good morning!
Skipper: Private, what did I tell u about being cheerful in the early morning while im still waking up
Private: Sorry skippah
Kowalski: *comes down through hatch* Someone keeps coming around our habitat. Maybe u should come up
Skipper: :/ ok *goes up hatch*
Rico is already up there, Kowlaski and Private follow Skipper up.
man walking around: *turns and looks at skipper* Alice, come here plz!
Alice: What, u found an animal?
Private: found an animal?
Rico: wha...?
Alice: *grabs Skipper and gives him to the man* here u go John. One animal
John: thx Alice, He will be perfect for my tv show
Skipper: What?! No! At least, I don't think so...
Kowalski: Someone's coming!
John: Ok Skipper, here's the script for the first episode. Have any questions and i'll answer- *looks up* wha-????
Ashley: Uh oh, this is bad
John: Who are these people?
Skipper: They are my friends...
John: Well, I don't need them for my tv show. But I also can't send u back from where ever you came from.... Doctor, what do u think we should do with them?
Dr. Blowhole: Leave that to me
Skipper: BLOWHOLE!
Dr. B: Hello pen-goo-wins. Do u like my humanizer?
Kowalski: You made that?! *bangs head on wall*
John: Ok Skipper, here's the script learn it for next Tuesday.
The person to the right started to wake up
???: uhggg....
Skipper: umm who are you?
???: Wha- *looks down at himself* uh oh
Skipper: so, who are you?
???: Rico, can't you tell?
Ashley: *runs up to him* hi! i'm Ashley!
Rico: hi
Skipper: wait. Rico, you're talking normally!
Rico: wait, I am!
the person in the middle gets up
???: its probably the change between being a penguin then a human probably changed his vocal cords.
Skipper: Kowalski, enough with that! i think we could all guess that
Kowalski: how did u know it was me?
Rico and Skipper: -_-
The person on the left starts waking up
???: Skippah? Kowalski? Rico? what happened?
Kowalski: the ray back fired on us and now we're humans
Ashley: Hi, i'm Ashley, whats your name?
???: Private, nice to meet you Ashley
Ashley: Skipper, Private looks a lot like you. Are you guys brother?
Ok, so far no one has gotten the entire thing right but everyone has gotten one person right. Should I write the next chapter or do people wanna keep guessing?
ok The person in the middle that has blond hair and green eyes I think is Kowalski. The person on the right that has bright blue eyes and brown hair is Privet and the person on the left has grey eyes and black hair is Reco
Skipper: Uhhh... Kowalski? Private? Rico?
The three penguins who are now humanized are knocked out from hitting the wall to hard. The person in the middle has blond hair and green eyes. The person on the right has bright blue eyes and brown hair and the person on the left has grey eyes and black hair, like Skipper.
Ashley: Do u know who is who?
Skipper: No, the room flashed when it happened and I didn't see where they landed...
Ashley: Wanna guess who is who?
Skipper: No, not really...
Well, Skipper doesn't want to guess but YOU can! Plz post who u think each of them are. I already know who they are (Well duh, I'm writing the story!) The first person to guess correctly get a big virtual hug from me and a friend request, but anyone who wants a friend request gets one
DD: This IS EPIC!!!!
Me: Your great with making the characters personalities realistic!
DD: NEVER QUIT YOUER EPIC STORY OF EPICNESSES!!!!
Me: O-k...anyway, it's a great story, you should deffenitly continue on this! PLEASE!!
DD: EPIC!!!!
Thx to ALL the people who have been reading my fan-fic
Chapter 9
Private: Skippah? Is that u?
Skipper: Yeah, they turned me into a human....
Kowalski: THEY HAVE SOMETHING THAT CAN DO THAT?!?!... I mean, I think i can reverse it to turn u back into a penguin
Skipper: Ok good
Kowlaski gets the ray and starts messing with it. An hour later he has finished.
Kowalski: Ok. Private, Rico, stand behind me. Skipper, You ready
Skipper: Yeah.
Kowalski fires the ray. The recoil hits him, Private and Rico back into the wall
Skipper: Um.. I'm still a human
Skipper walked over to the wall they hit. Instead of three penguins there, there were three humans
Kowalski, Private, Rico, Marlene and Julian go looking for Skipper.
Kowalski: He's near
Private: U mean, in that scary-looking factory place
Rico: Yup
Julian: C'mon, c'mon we don't have all day!
They go into the factory and into a lit up room. The room has two humans in it. A girl, she looks about 20 years old and has strawberry-blond hair and green eyes. The other is a boy, he looks to be in his mid-twenties and has midnight black hair, pale skin and grey eyes. The man turns around
Skipper: You found me!
Private: Skippah?
Skipper: AHHHHH! WHY AM I A HUMAN?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!
Ashley: Its part of a research project. They're trying to see if making an animal a human then seeing if they can survive on their own, ya know, getting a job, getting food.
Skipper: Well, im busting out of here, u comin?
Ashley: Well, DUH!
back at the zoo, the animals are confused and worried
Marlene: Where's Skipper? Is he ok? Was he kidnapped by aliens? or-
Kowalski: Marlene! Calm down, I have a tracking chip in Skipper, We can track him and rescue him
Private: Wait... U chipped Skippah?
Kowalski: Nooooooooo......
Private: Whateva, lets go find him
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should i continue anyway?
