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my first fanfic

Date: 02/23/13 4:25 PM
From: winxpomcp

so this is my first fanfic.....don't judge me!!
WARNING: I am REALLY bad at writing!
criticism is fine with me, just no nasty comments!
CHAPTER 1:
(penguins are standing in front of a REALLY big crate)
Private: So, Skippah, why are we here?
??? 1: yeah, why ARE you here?
Everyone except ??? 1:?!
??? 1: forget it, just GET ME OUTTA THIS THING!!\!!
??? 2: Ya know, no one likes it when you scream.
??? 1: (ignores ??? 2) Ok. Im counting to three, then you better get me out!!! ONE??..THREE!
(faint scratching noise)
??? 3: you call THAT an attack?
??? 1: im WORKING ON IT!!!
??? 4: knock it off.
??? 3: (kicks down wall of crate)
Skipper: I cant believe it??.
??? 2: believe it.
TBC

winxpomcp

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Date: 04/18/13 11:20 PM
From: winxpomcp

M'kay. ill see wat I can do. 		reply
Date: 04/13/13 11:27 PM
From: immacat

SUSPENSE! LE CONTINUE!
arrow: no one likes it when you yell,
me: Really?
pitch: i support you in all airs but uh how do i put this?
Jay: *in police officer outfit* all copyright values are rightly reserved to winxpomcp. im siteing you.
Arrow: does sombody need a hug?
Jay: NONO!
Arrow: come here! *comes at him slowly with arms out-streched*
Pitch: gotta love those two,
me: yeah, randomness aside, MY TURN TO BE UR FAN!

immacat

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Date: 03/24/13 4:44 PM
From: winxpomcp

fine....... the only reason the first chapter is bad is because when I was a silent reader, I started writing it, and I started at the middle of it (big mistake, don't do it). 		reply
Date: 03/18/13 6:11 PM
From: 7GaGa

We're not letting you give up. Please keep going! At least tell us what happens...
~7GaGa 		reply
Date: 03/18/13 2:26 PM
From: rico189

Whats gonna happen next? Please tell. 		reply
Date: 03/14/13 9:49 PM
From: winxpomcp

don't post here for two months or so, please! 		reply
Date: 03/09/13 2:49 PM
From: skpr1

Aw come on! The grammar's weird, but the FIRST chapter is awesome! The biggest part of a story is the beggining and end.
Skpr1 		reply
Date: 03/08/13 3:30 PM
From: 7gaga

Don't quit! At least do it for your silent readers! Why would you give up?
~7GaGa 		reply
Date: 03/07/13 8:59 PM
From: winxpomcp

hi.....im quitting on this fanfic. sorry.

you guys rock!

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