the forest we were in was quiet, dark, and spooky, were we could barely hear each others frightened pumping hearts, but i kept thinking 'no, be like the dragon lady doc told you about' but no matter how many times i thought that, i often found myself squeezing doc's flipper in pure fear.
me: you sure it was found here?
Dr.b: yes, they clearly said a supernatural creature was found here, but they didn't get proof of it
me: well no wonder! they probably dropped their camera running home to their mommy's!
*dr.b chuckles at my joke*
me:...what was that?
dr.b: what?
*SCREEECH!*
me: EEK!
dr.b: yep, that's the beast alright...
me: question, what IS the beast?
dr.b: not sure, but were gonna find out in a second..
*a dart of blue and pink runs by*
me: we should get outta here, NOW!
*i start pulling him away*
???: leaving the party so soon? come on! the fun is just beggining!
chap 7?)
dr:b: oh...you had a boyfriend?
me: i thought i did...until she stole him..
dr.b: what is troy exactly?
me: a shark, tiger shark to be exact
dr.b: oh...
me: you ok doctor? you dont seem right...
dr.b: what? im fine! its just, well...
me: you dont trust him?
dr.b: yeah, thats it...dont trust him...
hans: you're acting like you have a thing for oasis..
dr.b: what?! no!
me: why would you think that?
???: think what?
*we turn around to see duna*
hans: that doctor likes oasis
duna:...this isnt true is it?
dr.b: well, um-
duna: you like her?!
me: duna we-
duna: i dont believe this!
dr.b: i like her as a friend duna!
duna: oh...so...how you doing?
hans: whats it to you?
duna: its just that...i was just wondering if you had any...problems?
dr.b: well, there is one problem...
duna: what is it?
dr.b: we have arch rivals who apparently i cant seem to destroy-
duna: you want me to do that for ya?
me: really?
duna: sure, i love destroying things...*evil giggle*
(end of chap 7)
chapter 6)
me: at least she didnt kiss you
dr.b: dont say that! *shudders*
hans: should i activate the defense turrents?
dr.b: thats only for emergencies! and this is...actually, yeah, press it
*we hear voices outside*
duna: im telling you, he is shyer than a mouse!
???: dont worry duna, im sure he will like you someday
duna: you're so lucky you have a boyfriend!
???: *chuckles* yeah...
duna: so...what should i do?
???: try to control all the romantic feelings in you
duna: ok, thanks loretta!
loretta: you're welcome
*voices end*
me: no...not HER!
dr.b: who?
me: loretta...
hans: who's loretta?
me: my old enemy...ARCH enemy
dr.b: really? how'd you become enemies?
me: we fought over someone we loved...
dr.b: who?
me: ...troy...*lowers head and tears form in my eyes*
(end of chapter 6, can you guess what animal troy is? )
it took a while for chapter 5 to come up and i re wrote it a couple times and posted them accidentaly, so dont be shocked if a few more versions of chapter five appear, just read the first one and skip the others ok?
(chapter 5)
me: do you really think she'd do such a thing?
Hans: maybe...
Dr.b: possibly, she seems to have a quick temper
Me: you might wanna stay away from her then
Duna: *from outside* there you are!
Dr.b: not again...
*Duna walks in*
Duna: i've been looking all over for you!
Dr.b: *nervously chuckles* um, yeah, so was I...
Duna: but you ran away from me...
*Duna's round pupils turn to slits*
Duna: you do like me...right?
*Dr.b remains silent*
*Duna comes closer in a threatning way*
Duna: right?
Dr.b: well...umm...yeah, i guess
Me: *whispers to hans* good thing he isn't telling her the truth..
*Hans nods in agreement*
*Duna's pupils go round again*
Duna: oh, i get it, *smiles at Dr.b* you're shy of me aren't you?
Dr.b: what? no!
Duna: well, feel free to come see me any time darling
*Duna winked at dr.b, and left the lair, her tail wagging in a happy way*
*I look at Dr.b, who has a disgusted look on his face*
Dr.b: ugh...i feel sick just THINKING about her!
(end of chapter 5)
ok, since chapter 4 didnt appear, i'll re-do it)
me: *comes in lair with a weird expression*
hans: hey darling! *smiles in an odd way* whats up?
me: doc has an alien girl that has a crush on him.
hans:...umm, what?
me: well you see-
*blowhole rushes in*
dr.b: that girl is insane! she thinks i like her, and i dont!
duna: *outside* oh doc! were are you?
dr.b: *hides in a room and locks himself in*
duna: *walks in* were is he?!
me: umm, i think he went back outside
duna: got it! *runs back out*
*blowhole comes out of the room*
hans: man, is she crazy for you or what?
dr.b: yeah, she tried to take me back to her place, and when i refused, she said to or else...
me: or else what?
dr.b: thats all she said
me: should we tell her you dont wanna be with her?
dr.b: are you kidding?! she yells at me for not coming to her den! what do you think she would do if i told her the truth?
*me and hans exchange glances and shudder at the horrible thought between us*
(end of chapter 4)
chap 3)
me: a WHAT?
duna: i said a dinaurian you deaf tuna!
dr.b:...i have NEVER heard of a dina-whats-it before...
duna: maybe thats because you rarely think *smirks in a devlish way*
dr.b: oasis, hold her while i hit her *moves towards duna threatningly*
me: *holds him back* we dont know what shes capable of...
duna: *holds her clawed hand up and a waterball forms in her hand*
dr.b: how did you do that?!
duna: it's a gift, a natural talent, a-
dr.b: ok! shut up already, we get it!
duna: watch your mouth bad boy...
dr.b: no YOU WATCH...wait, WHAT did you call me?
duna: i called ya bad boy, bad boy *smiles in a weird way*
me: doc, i think the alien has a crush on you...
dr.b: *face turns red in embarrasment*
duna: *whispers to me* he's so cute when he's shy *giggles*
dr.b: um...i think we should go now.
duna: *grabs his flipper* you can't go! you just got here darling! but the girl must leave, now!
me:...*turns and goes to the lair with my head hanging*
(end of chapter 3)
The story is so good I just want more!!! I must say, the alien species thing? Did NOT see that one coming! Great job!!!!!! please keep posting I do not know what I am going to do while I wait for the next part.
chapter 2)
me: who said that?!
???: oh dont mind me...for now! hee hee!
dr.b: were are you?! WHAT are you?
???: that is none of your buisness sea mammal
me: show yourself beast!
???: fine, only cause i find you two amusing.
the beast came out and we gasped at what we saw. it was a female dino like figure, with pink feathers, blue and dark blue skin, yellow eyes, and a peircing stare, but she was pretty small, about half the size of me
???: satisfied?
dr.b:...
Duna: ok, since your staring ill bypass your time, im Duna.
me: *whispering to doc* shes a strange one.
dr.b: *whispers back* i agree
Duna: i heard that...
duna slammed her claws on my segway suddenly, she stared at me as if I was the alien here.
duna:...so you're the one...
me: what? who?
duna: you're the girl who works alongside..'that'
*duna points at dr.b with her tail*
dr.b: grrr....
duna: what are you? a devil?
me: what are you?
duna: oh me? well im the highly intellegent and strange alien species called a dinaurian.
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