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Date: 01/21/13 11:22 AM
From: malmal50

part 1.
I was in the woods for a stroll.
Then I saw an old sign next to an old path.
Me: I haven?t seen this old sign before.
Then I went to see where the old sign was leading to.
Then as I went deeper into the woods.
I saw an old rusty gate that was covered with weeds and behind it was an old creepy house.
Me: what is this creepy place doing here in the woods?
Then I opened the gate to see who that creepy house belonged to.
Then as I went inside the yard.
the old gate closed by itself.
Then as I headed to the old creepy house I saw an old stables but there were no horses in it and lots of gravestones everywhere. And the grass there was old dry and prickly and the trees were had no leafs on them and there were old dry leafs on the path and on the road but I count help feeling like something was watching me.
Me: this place looks like no one was here in long time.
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Date: 04/11/13 7:54 PM
From: malmal50

thank you 		reply
Date: 04/11/13 7:17 PM
From: Wolfkitty2

I'M BACK!

I LIKED IT

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Date: 03/30/13 10:22 AM
From: malmal50

anything at all? 		reply
Date: 03/20/13 12:43 PM
From: malmal50

anything? 		reply
Date: 03/13/13 3:53 PM
From: malmal50

anything at all? 		reply
Date: 03/13/13 12:06 AM
From: malmal50

anything? 		reply
Date: 03/05/13 1:06 PM
From: malmal50

well everyone what do you think? 		reply
Date: 03/05/13 12:37 PM
From: malmal50

part 10.
Then we landed in the woods next to the old road sign.
Me: thank you for getting me out of there.
Kyle: your welcome. Who would ever live in that old place anyway.
Me: well I know who used to live there Ill tell you about it do you want to hear the story?
Kyle: ok then. I would like to know who did live there in the first place.
Then I told Kyle about the prince who used to live there and how he disappeared and wasnt seen again.
Me: and thats what happened to that creepy place.
Kyle: that is a sad story but it sounds fimilure to something.
Me: whats that?
Kyle: remember when you were turned into a dark wolf?
Me: yes.
Kyle: chum chum told me that the old forest enchantress who gave you that spell said that the spell was also given to a prince to battle his foes.
Me: do you think that could be the same prince who was missing?
Kyle: I dont know but it might be.
Then Kyle and I headed home with the cats.
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Date: 03/04/13 1:41 PM
From: malmal50

thanks storm 		reply
Date: 03/02/13 11:09 PM
From: stormtiger

Sorry this isn't going on for a long time but here it is!

Alright, *clears throat* now I have chosen some fan fictions which are very thrilling, intense! And *shudders* sometimes scary! And the fan fictions that were nominated are:

The Battle of Disaster by stormtiger[me]
The Quest for Awesome by BeeMel10
Howling Moon by malmal50

Post here to vote which of it is your favorite fan fiction. I'll be counting!

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Date: 02/28/13 3:25 PM
From: malmal50

part 9.
Then Kyle looked at me.
Kyle: oh dear [sob] mallory? please don?t do this [sob].
Then Kyle kissed me.
Kyle: [crying].
Then I woke up.
Me: what happened?
Then Kyle looked at me.
Kyle: Mallory? oh thank heavens.
Then Kyle hugged me.
Then I stand up off the ground.
Nathera: Im so glad to see that the girl is ok but we need to get of here fast.
Baxter: why?
Nathera: those ghost here will be looking for her and if they see all of us here they will trap us here forever.
Me: like they tried to do to me.
Kyle: oh dear! we need to leave this place.
Then kyle teleported us out of the house and back into the woods close to the woods.
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Date: 02/27/13 5:27 PM
From: malmal50

part 7 1/2.
Then as Kyle and Baxter got to the cellar.
Kyle and baxter saw me in my cell passed out in a deep sleep on the ground.
Kyle: [gasp!] MALLORY!
Baxter: yikes!
Then Kyle and Baxter ran to my cell but the cell door was locked.
Then Kyle got his wand and cast a spell on the cell door and the cell door was unlocked.
Then Kyle puts his wand away.
Then Kyle opens the cell door and Kyle and Baxter ran inside my cell.
Then Kyle ran to me.
Kyle: Mallory are you ok?
But I didnt answer because I was still passed out in a deep sleep.
Kyle: oh dear! I hope I?m not too late.
Then Kyle listens to my heart to hear if it was still beating.
Kyle: [phew] her heart is still beating.
Baxter: then why is Mallory not waking up?
Kyle: I dont know.
Then Baxter saw Nathera sitting on the straw bed.
Baxter: hello beautiful cat.
Nathera: oh hello there. who are you?
Baxter: the names Baxter.
Nathera: Im Nathera.
Baxter: whats a beautiful cat like you doing here.
Nathera: Ill tell you later.
Baxter: I know we are here to bring this girl safely home.
Nathera: thats so sweet of you.
Baxter: well yes. that girl let me stay at her house as if it was my home so I had to save her.
Nathera: that is so brave of you to find her in this place.
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Date: 02/27/13 3:16 PM
From: malmal50

part 7.
meanwhile.
Kyle and Baxter got to the creepy gate of the hunted cottage.
Kyle: this must be where Mallory is.
Baxter: this place is pretty old. You dont think Mallory is in trouble do you?
Kyle: I hope not but I have to find her.
Then Kyle and Baxter opened the gate and they ran in.
Then as they got inside the house.
The ghost saw Kyle and Baxter.
Kyle: this place is haunted.
Baxter: what do we do?
Kyle: Ill see if they know where Mallory is.
Ghost: what are you doing here?
Kyle: has a girl been here?
Ghost: yes why?
Kyle: do you know where the girl is?
Ghost: in the cellar.
Then Kyle and Baxter ran to the cellar.
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Date: 02/26/13 11:23 PM
From: malmal50

part 6.
Meanwhile.
I was looking at the wall writing in my cell.
Then the ghost opens the cell door.
Ghost: hello again child.
Me: what are doing here.
Ghost: zella thought you were hungry and asked me to give you fanstastic a meal.
Me: ok.
The the ghost put the tray of fish and water on the the floor.
Then the ghost closed the cell door and left.
Me: well Im not hungry any how. Do you want the fish.
Nathera: sure.
Then Nathera ate the fish.
Then I drank the whole glass of water.
Then I passed out on the floor.
Then Nathera saw me passed out on the floor.
Nathera: child are you ok?
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Date: 02/14/13 10:12 AM
From: stormtiger

Guess who has returned? That would be me! 		reply
Date: 01/27/13 5:39 PM
From: agentrkl99

hay can i be in it??
agentrkl99 out 		reply
Date: 01/27/13 12:05 PM
From: malmal50

part 5.
meanwhile.
Kyle was headed deeper into the woods as he followed my foot prints.
Then Baxter came.
Baxter: hello Kyle.
Kyle: Baxter what are you doing here?
Baxter: I came to help you save Mallory.
Kyle: really?
Baxter: yes and this old path leads to somewhere dangerous I bet.
Kyle: what? ok then you can join me but if this place is dangerous we need to hurry.
Baxter: got it.
Then Kyle and Baxter ran to find out where this old road was taking them as they followed my foot prints.
Meanwhile.
I was in the creepy celler hopeing that I can ecsape somehow.
Me: [sigh] there has to be a way out of here.
Nathera: this place lots of hidden door and hidden rooms but there is no hidden door out of here.
Me: [sigh] I hope I get out of here soon.
Then as I sat on the bed of straw a ghost saw me from the cell door and the ghost flies to zellas room.
Then as the ghost got to zellas room Zella was sitting on her wooden petistle on her table.
Zella: what do you want now?
Ghost: its about our new guest.
Zella: ah yes. How is our guest enjoying her stay here?
Ghost: our guest doest like it here and is hopeing to escape from here.
Zella: what?
Ghost: our guest seem to want to leave this place.
Zella: I cant allow that but maybe a meal will cheer her up.
Ghost: a meal?
Zella: yes. our guest hasnt eaten I bet thats why out guest wants to leave but our guest will sleep after her meal.
Ghost: what will you give her?
Zella: some fish and a glass of water.
Ghost: yes Ill ask the rest of the ghost in the kitchen to get it ready for her.
Zella: and bring the meal to me to see if its ready for her.
Ghost: yes Zella.
Then the ghost flies to the kitchen.
Then zella looks at her bookshelf and the books slide to the eges of the book shelf and a small light green potin bottle flies to her.
Zella: ah there is. the sleeping potion I hid.
Then the door to zellas room and the ghost flies into zellas room and put the tray of fish and a glass of water.
Ghost: the meal for our guest.
Zella: thats wonderful to here.
Then the small potion bottle flies to my glass of water and pours the sleeping potion into my glass of water.
Zella: this should keep her quiet.
Then the ghost took the tray of fish and water to the cellar.
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Date: 01/24/13 9:04 PM
From: malmal50

part 3 1/2.
meanwhile.
I was in an old dungon with a straw mat to sleep on but I needed to find a way out and get home.
Me: [sigh] how am I going to get out of here?
Then the cat mummy came in.
???: I?m sorry I didnt warn you in time but those ghost here were too quick.
Me: thats ok [sigh] who are you anyway?
???: I am Nathera.
Me: what are you doing here?
Nathera: I came to see if you were ok.
Me: thank you. Im Mallory.
Nathera: if only I could get you out of here I wood but zella wont let you leave this place.
Me: [sigh] looks like Im stuck here.
Nathera: I dont know that but maybe someone will be looking for you.
Me: I hope so but there is something I want to know.
Nathera: and what is that?
Me: who would ever live in this here deep in the woods?
Nathera: well many years ago back when this place was full of life and new a prince used to live here. When grand Balls were held here all the time and when servants worked here. A king and queen build a place to stay here after there kingdom was lost. One day a war was lose and the king and queen and many of there subjects were lost forever because of the war. The prince?s heart was in so much pain from sadness after his family were lost forever in the war. But the prince wanted to go back to the war fields to battle the enemy to avenge the loss of his family. Then the prince went to zellas room and found a book that shows all the locations of every enchanter and enchantress in the world And found out there one enchantress in the woods a few miles away from here. Then the prince packs his things for war and headed to the stables and got his horse and he rides off into the woods and no one here saw him again ever since. Then this place fell apart with fear for the prince and Zella took this place for herself and a few days later the war stopped and for 100 years this place has been hidden from the world ever since.
Me: what ever happened to the prince?
Nathera: no one knows. some think he ran away after the war and he was missing for a very long time. Who knows what happened to him.
Me: that is a sad story.
Nathera: it is.
Me: I hope I ever get out of here.
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Date: 01/24/13 1:28 PM
From: malmal50

part 3.
Meanwhile in the woods.
Kyle was in the woods looking for me.
Kyle: Mallory? Mallory where are you?
Then Kyle saw the old road sign that I saw.
Kyle: what is this old road sign doing here in the woods?
Then Kyle saw some of my foot prints following the old road sign.
Kyle: Mallory must have followed the old road sign.
Then Kyle ran to find me as he followed my foot prints.
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Date: 01/22/13 4:22 PM
From: malmal50

part 2.
Then as I went to the front door of the old creepy house.
A ghost horse looks at me from the stables.
Then the ghost horse disappears.
Then the door opens by itself.
Then as I went inside I saw lots of old dusty creepy paintings and lots of old furnicher cover with dust and spider webs and and lots of old candles that were not lit in a long time and it was dark but the windows were the only light in the old house but I still couldnt help feeling like Im being watched.
Me: who ever must have lived here must have been very rich.
Then an old cat secofigus opens by itself and a cat mummy came to me.
???: wait what are you doing here? you have to get out of here.
Me: who are you?
???: Ill tell you later but listen you have get out of here before they see you.
Me: who?
Then some ghost fly around the room.
Me: what?s going on?
???: they found you.
Then a green floating magic orb with a ghost head inside flys in the room.
???: who dares enters this place?
Then the ghost in the orb looks at me.
???: ah hello I am Zella the sorceress of this old place. Now what brings you here?
Me: well I was in the woods and I saw this old sign next to an old path and I wanted to know where it leads to and I saw this place.
Zella: well in that case welcome we dont often have any guest here ectsep ghost of course [laughing].
Me: really?
Zella: yes but it gets lonely here.
Me: I see.
Zella: I hope you enjoy you stay here with us.
Me: what?
Zella: we dont have guest here often so you will stay here?permently!
Me: I dont like where this is going.
Zella: lock her up I have a room picked out for her. I want her cofterbul here?forever.
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