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Date: 04/17/12 4:13 PM
From: sparks9876

Here's the plot-[Hope you like it]
Rose-May & Jade,Logan's little sisters,come to visit.While staying something goes VERY wrong!Logan was working on an experiment,then it spills all over them!The experiment make them feel BTR's pain,so whenever a guy gets hurt,the girls feel their pain.The girls don't tell anyone about this.& the something else happens,one of the guys almost break his leg!Will that be enough for the girls to tell Logan what happened?Or will all this go to far?

Rose-May Mitchell[Usacait]
Age: 12
Hair: Dark brown,VERY curly,& shoulder length
Personality: Kind,loving,tomboy,sporty,& a genius

Jade Mitchell[Sparks]
Age: 12
Hair: Dark black,straight,& long
Personality: Not very smart,put not too dumb,shy,& nice

~Sparks

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Date: 02/19/13 8:36 AM
From: grinch24

Please don't stop!!! This is too good of a fantic to just stop!!!!!:(
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Date: 02/10/13 11:01 AM
From: sparks9876

@Grinch24-Thnx! :)
@Logieluvr1-I loved the ending!
Chapter 107 *Jade's POV*
James & Carlos were still siting next to me,while mom was checking on Rose.Every now & Carlos & James looked over at each other as if they were planing something . "So,Jade,"James said. "Ya wanna go to the park?" Carlos asked. "Uh..." I said. "Sure!" Kendall yelled from upstairs.Great,Kendall was on there side. "No thanks." I said. "Come on it'll be fun!" James said. "Nah,I'm good." I said getting up. "Come on let's go!" James & Carlos grabbed both my hands.& Kendall,now free from Cindy came running down stairs with Cindy following him,thinking Kendall was playing around. "I'm coming too!" Logan said. "Be careful!" mom yelled.Right before James could stuff me into the car,I grabbed on to the nearest tree & wouldn't let go. "I'd rather stay here with Rose if ya don't mind." I said. "Non-sense!"Kendall said coming over to me & pulling my off. "Let's go." Logan said.They finally got me into the car against my will.When we got to the park Carlos suggested we play hide & seek,I said it was a baby game,James said I was still little,I snapped back that I was 13 & in fact a teenager,Kendall laughed at me,I stomped on his foot,Cindy got mad at me,Logan rolled his eyes & said we were playing hide & seek,& that was the end of that.Now I'm it,& looking all over the place to find the guys & Cindy who also tagged along.Then an idea hit me,what if I just leave-none of them will know!It's genius!Once I was fully convinced about leaving.I saw Peter!He was practicing his soccer skills.He looked so cute in his soccer uniform!...
~Sparks
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Date: 02/08/13 10:57 PM
From: logieluvr1

TOO GOOD. LOVING IT ALWAYS.

logieluvr1

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Date: 02/08/13 8:32 PM
From: grinch24

love it!!!!
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Date: 02/08/13 5:57 PM
From: usacait

Chapter 206 *Rose-May's POV*
I heard Jade talking to James and Carlos. Jade probably wanted to hang out with Peter... That or Sir Combs-A-Lot and Lord Corndog were trying to get Jade in trouble. Either way, the two jesters here are up to no good. I turned my head (pillow still on top of my head) to see Kendall walk downstairs with Cindy attached to his leg. How long has that been going on? I don't care at the moment. I don't feel well. I don't feel well at all. I turned my head back into the pillow and groaned. The talking stopped and the thumping of footstep, who I am guessing was from Kendall, seized. I don't know what happened to Logan. He went upstairs to get mom, but it's been like what... 2 minutes? UGH! I heard several sets of footsteps come down the stairs. I don't feel like seeing who it was, my guess was Logan and mom or Alison and Sammy came over without me knowing. I just lied on the couch and felt worse than I did a bit earlier.

usacait
Cause You're My Cover, Cover Girl

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Date: 02/07/13 11:06 PM
From: logieluvr1

Great job!

@Sparks--did you finish Big Time Flu? What did you think of the ending? I thought tha it was sweet.

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Date: 02/07/13 7:37 PM
From: sparks9876

Chapter 105 *Jade's POV*
Rose wasn't looking too good,I think she has a cold.Not good. "Logan?" I asked.He looked up from his lame math book, "Does Rose look okay?" I asked.He got up & looked at Rose's face. "Rose,are you okay?" he asked. "I'm fine." she said,then let out a nasty cough. "I'm going to go get mom." he said heading to mom's room. "I'm fine!" she said kinda weak.She laid back down & put her pillow over her face.Kendall came in,Cindy was attached to his leg & wouldn't let go like her life depended on it.I laugh.Kendall turned pink. "Stop it." he said calmly & went up stairs with Cindy still attached to his leg.James came & sat right next to me & Carlos on the other side.I turned on the tv. Nothing good was ever on in the mourning. "When does school start for you guys?" James asked. "A month & a half." I said. "Awww,who still has to go to school?" Carlos teased.James laughed. "Ha ha." I said sarcastically. "What are you gonna do later today?" he asked. "I don't know." I said suspiciously. "Oh." he said. "Why are you asking?" I asked him. "Uh," he said,he started looking nervous "No reason." I looked at Carlos,he was looking nervous too. "There's a reason for everything." I said. "Why do ya' wanna know?" I asked again. "Well,why are you asking?" Carlos asked. "Because,I want to know why you're so interested." I answered.I knew they were hiding something,I was going to find out.
~Sparks
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Date: 02/05/13 8:57 PM
From: usacait

@grinch24- thank you!

Chapter 204 *Rose-May's POV*
I sat on the couch, tired as ever. But I couldn't help but laugh. Cindy ran in without saying a 'good marrow' to anyone. She nearly plowed over Carlos. "Well hello to you too," Jade mumbled. I laughed a bit at that then slumped back down on the couch. I didn't feel too well. I needed a nap. I started to fall asleep but I felt a surge of pain travel through my arm. I groaned and sat up slowly. I looked around and noticed Logan staring down at something (or someone) and Kendall run past. Jade was sitting on the loveseat. Her facial expression said it all. She felt the pain too. I looked around and I realized, James and Carlos weren't in site. I then noticed James and Carlos were fighting. "KNOCK IT OFF!" Jade screamed. I would've, but it the words never came out. I coughed instead. Everyone looked at me. I ignored it and slumped back down. I don't feel too well...


usacait
Cause You're My Cover, Cover Girl

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Date: 02/05/13 3:43 PM
From: grinch24

please keep going!! I think this is the best fantic I have ever read!!! Awsome job.
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Date: 02/03/13 12:19 PM
From: usacait

@sparks9876- Yeah. I am SOOOO SORRY!!! I have been so busy with school, we have a research report, and clubs and choir and everything. I will post eith later today or tomorrow. Again, I AM SOOO SORRY!

usacait
Cause You're My Cover, Cover Girl

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Date: 02/02/13 1:37 PM
From: sparks9876

@usacait-Are you still there? :'(
~Sparks
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Date: 01/31/13 10:32 PM
From: logieluvr1

Please continue

logieluvr1

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Date: 01/26/13 5:28 PM
From: logieluvr1

plz continue

logieluvr1

@Sparks-New updates on both fanfics.

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Date: 01/19/13 3:56 PM
From: sparks9876

@Logieluvr1-Thnx,that means a lot!
Chapter 203 *Jade's POV*
I couldn't sleep.My foot still hurt.I tossed & turned.I heard the guys leave the kitchen.I looked up.They left.I got up to see what they did.To my surprise,it was actually clean.Maybe a little too clean.I moved the table just a little so mom wouldn't be so suspicious also moved the chairs. "What are you doing?" I heard a male voice.I turned around,Logan was standing there looking confused. "Trust me." I whispered. "Okay?" he said. "Why did you move the table & the chairs?" he asked. "Because it looks a little too good to be true.& plus when's the last time you guys left something looking so perfect?" I asked.He turn red. "Yeah,I thought so." I said. "I'll admit,Jade,you're pretty smart." he smiled. "Jet's go before we get caught." I said pulling him outta the kitchen.Kendall was siting next to Katie "Night."Logan said heading to his room. "What?" Kendall asked. "Not you!" Logan laughed.Kendall did too.I sat next to Rose. "Night Kendall." I said. "Night." he said laughing..."Mourning!" we heard James & Carlos yelled. "Already." Kendall said pushing his face into the pillow.James grabbed a pillow & throwing it at Kendall. "Dude!" Kendall said grabbing another pillow & throwing it at James. "Stop it,before it get outta hand!" Rose yelled.We heard the door bell ring. "I'll get it." went to go get the door. "Hey,Carlos." we heard Cindy's voice. "I'm out!" Kendall said racing to the stairs. "Hey Kendall!" Cindy ran after him.
~Sparks
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Date: 01/18/13 4:35 PM
From: usacait

Chapter 202 *Rose-May's POV*
Katie, Jade, and I crashed on the couch who knows when. When I woke up, it was the middle of the night. I checked the time and it was 12:23. I groaned and tried to go back to sleep. I heard some clamor in the kitchen and decided to ignore it. Right when I was about to fall back asleep, I heard a loud 'bang' and then I couldn't go back to sleep. Pain surged through my foot. Jade bolted up. Katie, well she stayed where she was. I clutched my foot and Jade did also. We looked at each other and got off the couch. We limped, or hopped, into the kitchen. We noticed Carlos and Kendall sitting on the ground and there were a few pots beside them. Jade and I looked at them. James had a big smile plastered across his face. "Some pots fell on them," Logan confirmed. Jade and I just looked at him. "REALLY!?" we, sarcastically, whisper-yelled. James nodded. "Yeah it was qui- wait. You feel their pain?" he laughed at first then though. "But worse," Jade confirmed. James? eyes widened and so did Logan?s. They forgot? Jade and I walked out and went to the couch. We soon fell back asleep.

usacait
Cause You're My Cover, Cover Girl

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Date: 01/18/13 10:16 AM
From: sparks9876

@Usacait-I think Jade feels James & Carlos' pain,& Rose-May feels Kendall & Logan's pain,put sometimes it switches.(I think.)
~Sparks
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Date: 01/17/13 6:44 PM
From: usacait

@sparks9876- QUESTION: Who (Jade and Rose-May) feels whose (James, Carlos, Kendall, Logan) pain? Or do they feel all the guys pain? I forgot lol

usacait
Cause You're My Cover, Cover Girl

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Date: 01/15/13 10:33 PM
From: logieluvr1

I can't believe it too. I hope that my fanfics can be like yours.
logieluvr1

@Sparks- Thanks for commenting on my work.

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Date: 01/15/13 6:10 PM
From: sparks9876

@Usacait-I know!I can't believe we've gotten this far!
Chapter 201 *Jade's POV*
"Girls!" mom yelled as we hugged her. "Where's Logan?" she asked.Rose & I looked at each other.Katie smiled. "We're not sure." we said at the same time. "Well let's go look for him,let me just go put this in the kitchen." she said. "We'll take them!"Rose & I shouted at her.She jumped a little when we shouted. "Um,okay?" she smiled. "I'll help!" Katie offered.We ran to the kitchen. "What are we gonna do?!" I shouted-whispered. "Hold on-let me think." Rose said. "Here's an idea-" Katie said "-keep your mom out of the kitchen,& at midnight we come out to clean up." she finished. "Let's go with her plan."I said. "Done." Rose said.We went back to mom. "Let's go find him." Rose said. "Find who?" we turned around.Logan!Mom ran over to hug him. "I missed you so much!" she squeezed him. "Can't breathe." he said almost passing out. "Sorry,sweetheart." she said letting go. "Are Kendall,James & Carlos here?" she asked. "Um,I think they're getting ready to go to sleep." he said. "Oh okay." she smiled. "We better too." she said pushing us up stairs.She went into her room. "Where are they?" Katie,Rose & I growled at him. "Chill!They're cleaning up the kitchen." he said in a very low voice. "It better be spot less or she's gonna find out." I said. "No she won't." Logan said. "Logan,you haven't been here in a while.But we have." Rose said. "She'll find out." Rose & I warned him...
~Sparks
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Date: 01/13/13 11:22 AM
From: usacait

@sparks9876- OMG!!! 200 chapters! Where has the time gone by?

Chapter 200 *Rose-May's POV*
Jade, Katie, and I were talking up in mine and Jade's room about everything and anything. Katie told us about ALL her adventures at the Palm Woods. A lot involved a guy name Gustavo. I don't think we met him yet. We were laughing at so many of her stories, Jade and I were crying of laughter. Jade even fell off the bed which made us laugh more... then Katie and I fell off the bed. Once our laughing calmed down, I heard a car door shut. I must not have been the only one that heard because Jade and Katie slowly came up from the floor. We walked to the window and noticed a car. Once we saw who was coming out of the car, Jade and I ran downstairs. Jade and I ran to the front door and Katie soon followed. Jade ran to look in the kitchen. "There is a bigger mess than before," she told us. My eyes widened. The front door opened and Jade and I just stood there. "Hi mom!"

usacait
Cause You're My Cover, Cover Girl

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