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Date: 06/28/12 5:45 PM
From: keerthana2

This fanfic is about 4 girls at the age 12 who finally see the band of there dreams...big time rush. Later something happens to btr and they just dissapear. The girls grow up and are the same age of btr when they dissapeared...17. They meat the ghosts of BTR and then some weird things happen. Yup not a fanfic u would expect by me!
Here are the characters!
Keerthana (me)
Looks like: long dark brown hair parted to the side with a few light brown highlights. Colorful shirts, skinny jeans, black boots
Fave in band: James

Rebecca
Looks like: shoulder leanth light brown curly hair. Big button down shirts, jeans, tennis shoes
Fave in band: Logan

Maddie
Looks like: short blond hair with brown highlights. Shirts with her fave football team logo on it, shorts, flip flops.
Fave in band: Kendall

Bella
Looks like: long black hair, flowery shirts, skirts, sandles
Fave in band: carlos

Ok so here's chapter 1!
Keerth's POV
So here I am with my besties Rebecca maddie and bella.
Just a normal summer day by the pool. Usually we would make our parents drive us everywhere but they want us to start taking the bus. It was all calm until I hear a loud WOO HOO! then I remembered that windows down was my ring tone.
"Whose that?" Rebecca asked
"Oh its sage" I reply.
"What she text?" Maddie asked couriously.
"BIG TIME RUSH IS COMING TO OUR TOWN ON JULY 4!!!!!" I shouted
Then we all screamed and every one at the pool looked at us like we were nuts. Well frankly when it comes to BTR we are!
Then bella came over with our slushies.
"What happens why did everyone scream?!" She asked exited as usual.
"Big time rush is coming on July 4!" I shout to her face.
She got so shocked that she happens to fall into the pool! We all laugh.
"Hey its not funny!" She said still smiling
"I'll say. Now I don't have a slushie!" I respond
And we all laugh.
"Anyways do u think our parents would let us go to the concert?" Maddie asks
"They should...it is an open concert and is free!" Rebecca said.
I jump into the pool splashing maddie and Rebecca.
They then jump in as well. We all have been friends since Pre-K. Well except Rebecca. She moved to our school in 5th grade. After we finished swimming we all said our goodbyes and took the bus and we all went back to our house. I open the door to my house while texting my besties. I walk up the stairs to the living room and look up seeing my dad smiling.
"Am I in trouble?" I ask him
"Did u get a text about ur fave band?" He asks still smiling
"Um yea BTR will be here on July 4." I say still confused
Then I see my mom with something behind her back.
"So its an open concert..." my mom started
"...but backstage passess are not."
"Ok I'm still confused." I say
Then my parents show me 4 backstage passess to well the one and only BIG TIME RUSH!! I scream hug my parents and call my friends.

Keerthana

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Date: 05/10/13 8:14 PM
From: keerthana2

Chapters 23
Kendalls POV
I'm flying.
I dont wanna stop.
I look down and see the girls house.
Now I couldn't seem to be able
To land...so I kinda broke down there
Front door...
Whoops!
TBC
I know, bad chapter...ill write more tomorrow
I PROMISE!
Keerthana2/2sir11
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Date: 04/23/13 10:34 PM
From: waycest123

Hey I like ur fanfic! u should make more chapters!

waycest

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Date: 04/13/13 6:26 PM
From: bloomcool0

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE LET ME BE MADDIE
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Date: 04/01/13 9:33 PM
From: kath

i wanna be the one who <3's James.
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Date: 03/31/13 7:27 PM
From: Brody5626

What! I'M SO CONFUSED!!!!

-Brody5626

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Date: 03/31/13 5:29 PM
From: sasafan

love ur chapters make moar! :(
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Date: 03/31/13 4:17 PM
From: keerthana2

Chapters 22
Kendalls POV
By the time I wake up I'm in a hospital bed.
I quickley get up and try to leave. The door is locked. I run to the other side of the room and smash the wall down. A nurse suddenly walks in. She screams and drops a glass of water and I run out the room.
I suddenly see a big pair of dark black wings come out of my back.
I run faster and faster until I'm suddenly flying.
TBC
haha sorry its so short!!!
Keerthana2/2sir11

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Date: 03/25/13 12:43 PM
From: keerthana2

CHAPTER COMING TODAY OR TOMORRO!!!!!!!!
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Date: 03/06/13 6:06 PM
From: amo13

When is the next chapter coming?

amo

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Date: 02/12/13 9:22 PM
From: keerthana2

Sorry for not posting! I'll post soon!
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Date: 02/03/13 10:12 AM
From: keerthana2

writing the chapter today!!!

Keerthana2/2sir11

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Date: 01/27/13 9:53 AM
From: Brody5626

great chapter! LOVING THIS STORY!!!

-Brody5626

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Date: 01/26/13 7:21 PM
From: keerthana2

Chapter 21
Rebecca's POV
I read the note and stare at it with a blank expression.
Could this mean they're coming back? I hope so! I dont tell the rest of the girls. I dont want them to get all excited and slowly watch them fall apart again if they don't really come.
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Kendall's POV
"We have to do this" I say. "They need us"
"But what if we get caught?" Logan questions
"Look they need us! They're breaking apart! You maybe be able to see them like this but I cant!" And after saying that I jump out of the ghostly clouds.
Once I hit the ground I grow...wings? They're black and have a lot of feathers. I slowly walk down the street. I've never really known what goes on here. Then suddenly a strange lady screams and she makes me drink something. Then I fall asleep.
TBC
Keerthana2/2sir11

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Date: 01/25/13 9:50 PM
From: Brody5626

cant wait! i just started reading this today and i LOVE it! it's a great fanfic. plz write more soon im dying to know what happens next!

"i didn't fall the floor just needed a hug"- Brody5626

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Date: 01/25/13 6:25 PM
From: keerthana2

I'm writing the chapter now! Its coming soon! :)

Keerthana2

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Date: 01/19/13 11:15 PM
From: isls

This is by far the best fanfic I have EVER read. Please please please times 100000 CONTINUE!!! Oh and maybe you could check out my fanfic Big Time You Write the Story! CONTINUE!!!!!!!
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Date: 01/19/13 4:08 PM
From: keerthana2

Chapters 20!!!
A few weeks later the girls didn't know what to do wwith themselves.
Rebecca quit her job, bella just watches vampire movies all day, maddie just sits in her room and crys all day, and keerth just sits in her room in the dark drawing really sad drawings while sobbing.
Maddie seems to be the most affected by this.
She loved kKendall with all her heart but never showed it.
The girls will never forget the guys. Their one and only true love.
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It was late at night. Rebecca was iin the kitchen crying her heart out when suddenly a note was on the kitchen table.

"We're really sorry. Please wait for us. -j,k,c,l"
It read.

Keerthana2/2sir11

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Date: 01/13/13 3:32 PM
From: cheetha1

i was seriously crying while reading that last chapter! PLEASE continue!!!
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Date: 12/31/12 12:09 PM
From: keerthana2

Chapters 19
Normal POV
"I'm so sorry" Carlos whispers to bella
"No no Carlos please dont leave...."
"I have too..." Carlos says
Bella gives Carlos one last hug with tears filling in her eyes. Just as the other girls did to there boyfriends.
"Logan? Please just dont go...."
"I'm sorry Rebecca. Just dont forget about me." He says.
She hugs him tightly. Not wanting to let him go.
"I'm sorry we have to leave. Hawk can really create some good revenge." Kendall says.
"I'll miss you sooo much kendizzle!!!!" Maddie says
And hugs him tight.
"What about me?" James says
"Aw come here!" Keerth says. And hugs him. Softly sobbing into his chest.
Then the 4 ghosts fade away leaving and the girls just stand there. The best thing that ever happend to them. Gone. The girls will never forget about them.

Keerthana/2sir11
So dont worry this might not be the llast chapter!!!

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Date: 12/22/12 11:13 PM
From: amo13

i missed this so much, i think this is my favorite fanfic! (and the first one i read on the btr board)
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