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Date: 08/03/12 5:51 PM
From: Moodring98

So I was thinking at two girls (Cousins or Sisters) One who's already knows BTR and is friends with them and another one who's from a boarding school out the country and has no idea who BTR is. And then the one girl is in love with BTR and is best friends with them, So during the summer after BTR's tour they go to a summer house on the beach, no one knows there then it's just the guys and the two girl. no one else other then her house maid named Jamie. And the first chapter would be The school girl leaving her school and going to the summer house, (Hope you don't mind but I would like to be her) and then it just the summer. and the other girl (YOU) has know BTR for two years and has become best friends with them, that's how long the other girl has been at school.

Name: Blue Zomer.(Goes by Z)
Age: 14 (Could yours be 16 or 17) (In chapter 9 she'll be 15)
Crush: doesn't have one yet. (Either James or Carlos)
Looks: 5'3(so really short) Always wears short shorts and a tank or T( if it's cold skinny jeans and jacket)(and sometime wears sweatpants or sweatshirts). With sneaker or flip flops. Has mid back length red hair, big bright green eyes. no freckles, high cheek bone and slim half full lips.
Personality: leader, funny, always has something to say. can be kind, a bit pushy, and sometimes shy.
Extra: Loves to read and writing. Is on a swim team. Loves running. And has a stuffed bunny she sleeps with.

I'll write Chapter one once you fill out the form.

-Mood-
~I had an concussion last night.....

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Date: 03/03/13 9:54 PM
From: Moodring98

Can you write one chapter in your POV then I will. Thanks.

-Mood-

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Date: 03/03/13 4:53 PM
From: 1DRocksAK

That was great 		reply
Date: 03/03/13 2:34 PM
From: keerthana2

welcome!:) so do i write the next chapter or are you? @MOOd 		reply
Date: 03/01/13 10:04 PM
From: Moodring98

Ok That's great! thanks for doing this for so long without me.

-Mood-

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Date: 02/27/13 6:30 AM
From: keerthana2

@mood- yea u can do that! :) I was getting confused on what to do for Z's POV anyways 		reply
Date: 02/25/13 6:42 PM
From: Moodring98

Well can you write one more chapter and I'll start my POV again for Z. If that's ok?

-Mood-

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Date: 02/24/13 7:58 PM
From: keerthana2

CHAPTER TWENTY ONE
Keerth's POV
I feel terrible. Arguing with him was one of the worst things ive ever experienced. I let go of Kendall.
"You okay?" He asks
"Yea I guess" I say.
I then run upstairs and fix my mascara. Its getting late, so I throw my hair into a loose side braid and take my contacts out and put my glasses on.
I walk downstairs and see James sitting on the couch. His face still red.
He stands up.
"Look, I'm really sorry. I guess I over reacted." He says
"Its fine." I simply say and sit on the couch next to Kendall.
Suddenly, blue and Carlos come running in.
"Ha I beat you!!" Blue says.
"I only let you win!" Carlos says back to her.
They both laugh and sit on the other couch.
Logan then comes with a bowl of popcorn.
"Ok lets start the movie!" He says while sitting in the chair and putting his feet up on the coffee table.
"What movie are we watching?" James asks
"Black mummy"! (A/N not a real movie name) Carlos Says.
"No! I hate scathe movies!" I say
"dont worry you'll be fine. I'm here!" Kendall says hugging me.
Once the movie starts I hide my face in kendalls shoulder and he hugs me tighter. I feel so safe with him .

Z's POV
The movie starts and I'm sitting next to Carlos, hugging him tight. I could see James looking really mad at me and carlos. I didn't know why he was so mad thought. He said he never liked me. End of story. But I dont kknow...I still have feelings for him....the guy that bbroke my heart. I dont think I like Carlos as much as I liked James.

TBC

Sorry that the chapter wasn't really good...the whole time I had an essay for school to write and i was concetrated on that.
@mood- just wondering...do u want ur character to end up with Carlos or James

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Date: 02/16/13 5:49 PM
From: keerthana2

sorry im stil writing the chapter! its gonna be a loooooooong chapter which is why its taking so long 		reply
Date: 02/12/13 9:21 PM
From: keerthana2

Sorry for not posting the chapter! A lot has been going on in my life right now...ill post soon Tho!!!!! 		reply
Date: 02/03/13 10:13 AM
From: keerthana2

im gonna write the chapter today!!!

Keerthana2/2sir11

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Date: 01/28/13 9:32 PM
From: Moodring98

Good chapter hon

-Mood-

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Date: 01/25/13 6:24 PM
From: keerthana2

I'm sorry! I just have really bad writers block on what should happen with Z and Carlos. This chapter was supposed tto be only about them but I dont know what to do! Sorry!

CHAPTER TWENTY
Keerth's POV
"What was that?!" James shouted
"What was wwhat?" I asked trying to sound calm
"Stop acting like you dont know! You two are dating! You're cheating on me!" He yelled at me
"No its not that!" I said on the verge of tears.
"I know your lieing! I never thought you would do ssomething like this!"
"Like you've never done something like this before!!" I screamed at hhim
"You cheated on ME! so I moved on! What's your probelm?"
"Me problem is that you cheated on me with my best friend!" He shouted. His face turning red as a tomato with anger.
I then just break down. I hug Kendall tightly and cry into his shoulder.

Kendalls POV
She hugs me and starts crying. I hug her not wanting to llet her go. She deserved better.
"Who do you think you are controlling her life?!" I shout at James.
"She cheated on me! And YOU promised you wouldn't date her!" He yelled
"Well she deserved way better than you!!" I shouted.
He then just shakes his head and walks into the house while keerth is still crying.

Z's POV
I wake up in Carlos arms. He singing a soft song.
"You finnaly wake up huh?" He says and chuckles softly.
Its bright out and I relized we were close to the house.
"Carlos did you know we're close to our house?" I ask him
"Yes I did. I just wanted an adventure!" He says and laughs.
"Race you back!" I say
"Oh your on!" He says and starts running.

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Date: 01/18/13 10:25 PM
From: keerthana2

I have writers block on what should happend with Z and Carlos. Any ideas? 		reply
Date: 01/13/13 1:42 PM
From: Moodring98

Great Chapter

-Mood-

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Date: 01/13/13 12:17 PM
From: keerthana2

Ok so I wrote chapter 19...sorry there wasn't anything about Z and Carlos in the chapter....my laptop was running out of battery so I had to just finish it and post it...but now I have writers block on what will happen with Z and Carlos...what do u guys think should happen??? 		reply
Date: 01/12/13 8:55 PM
From: keerthana2

CHAPTER NINETEEN
Keerth's POV
I felt bad. I didn't want to be with James. I wanted to be with Kendall. But only he knew that. I was sitting in my room playing kendalls guitar that I always take. then there was a knock on my door.
"Hey keerth can I talk to you?" He asks
"Um sure Kendall"
He then takes his guitar and leads me outisde.
He starts strumming his guitar in perfect chords. His lips move as he starts to sing.

"latley I found myself thinking that I dreaming about u a lot. And up in my head I'm your boyfriend,but that's one thing you already got. He drives to school every morning, while I walk alone in the rain. "

He sang. Perfect lyrics, perfect melody, the song was just perfect.

"Would he say you look lovley in. Well if it was me then I would. Would he hold you when your feeling low? Well if it was me then I would."

He sang. He played his guitar perfectly. The amazing lyrics escaping his lips.

He finally finishes the song. He looks up at me with his puppy dog eyes I always fall for.
"Look, I just wrote you this song because, if I was your boyfriend I would do anything for you. I would never hurt you like SOME people would" he says.
I just smile and hug him.
"Thanks" I whisper still hugging him.
When we pull away I then see James standing behind Kendall looking more mad then ever.

TBC
oh and the song Kendall sang was "I would" by one direction

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Date: 01/02/13 4:38 PM
From: Moodring98

Great Chapter.

-Mood-

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Date: 12/31/12 11:53 AM
From: keerthana2

CHAPTER EIGHTEEN
Z's POV
"Carlos where are we?" I ask Carlos confused.
We were lost, and I was scared and freezing.
"I dont know..." he says
"Stay here" he says. "I'm gonna go see if I can gget phone service"
"No! I wanna come!" I say Hugging Carlos tight and whining like a little girl.
He laughs a little.
"Okay" he says smiling and looking down at me.
He sits down and he puts his arm around me. I rest my head on his shoulder.
"I love you Z" he says
"Love you too" I say quickly and fall asleep in him arms.

Keerth's POV
We drive home and Kendall helps me get up since I cant really walk. We go in the door laughing and smiling like a normal couple would. We walk in and suddenly James comes running and hugs me tight.
"You ok? I was so worries! What happend? Are you hurt?!" He questions.
I look over his shoulder and see Kendall looking hurt. His dark green eyes turning pale.
"I'm sorry." I whishper to Kendall.
he just nods his head and leaves.

TBC

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Date: 12/22/12 10:07 PM
From: keerthana2

Its fine and yea I'll continue! :)

2sir11/Keerthana2

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Date: 12/22/12 1:45 PM
From: Moodring98

Can you keep writing it and then maybe later next year I can start helping again. I just don't have time anymore so sorry.

-Mood-

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