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Date: 03/06/13 9:26 PM
From: Antwaniano

Somehow my story got deleted so I am restarting it. But first a summary

Emma and Kendall dated but broke up because he thought she was keeping secrets for him, little did he know it was the biggest secret of?she was a mermaid. Because she could not tell him they ended breaking up.
Life goes on, 1 month later

Logan asked bella to vanessa's (Kendall's current girlfriends)pool party. Little did bella know that Vanessa had a plan to ruin her. She end up making bella fall into a pool(by chasing her with a wet drink knowing bella never takes wet things) and taking the rest of the party into her house leaving Logan and the rest of byre staring at bella. But Emma, Cleo, and rikki end up getting worried about bella and goes to check up on her. There they find nervous bella and the scared guys.While Emma freezes the door so no one inside the party will comeout, Logan sees the fear in bella and tries to help her out and the other guys follow.

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Date: 04/14/13 7:33 PM
From: isls

Nice! 		reply
Date: 04/09/13 8:41 PM
From: Antwaniano

BTW heres another preview of Big Time H20

Rikki -what does Neptune have to do with the curse?

Cleo- I don't know but its freaky

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Date: 04/09/13 8:38 PM
From: Antwaniano

Coolcatty9 thanks so much, I was starting to think no one liked my story so I means a lot.
Ok Big Time H20 part 3

While Kendall and Emma are talking, Bella ask Logan to talk to her too

Bella -thanks for inviting me to party, I so sorry I ruined it.

Logan-(looks at her eyes and says) you did not ruin it, I had fun

Bella-really,

Logan-(only a few inches away from bella and get nervous and says) we should probably get going

Bella- yeah its getting late

They walk up to the rest of the group and Emma and Kendall joins them. The guys drop tithe girls of at Emma's house and Cleo says


Cleo - do you think they will keep our secret.

All the girls look at each other and Bella says


Bella - I Dont kknow but I hope so.

The next day at school

The guys walk into the school and Kendall goes to find Vanessa there he finds her laughing with her friends and Kendall says

Kendall- Vanessa, I have to talk to you

TBC what will Kendall say?Hows the story so far

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Date: 04/04/13 9:43 PM
From: Coolcatty9

I love the chapter. I am very interested to see what will happen 		reply
Date: 03/28/13 9:01 PM
From: Antwaniano

Sorry about the mistakes in the previous chapter for instance

Kendall in the beginning is supposed to say I guess( not I guesz)

Next when Emma is talking it is supposed to say kinda of(not Linda of)

So those are the mistakes sorry again, Big Time H20 part 2

Emma - See what I am trying to say is doyouthinkwecanbefriends

Kendall -( laughs) what you said so fast I don't understand

Emma - (laughs) sorry, what I was trying to was do you think we can be friends ? Stares at Kendall eyes

Kendall- Yes, I would like that

Emma-great

Emma and Kendall sits down at look at the sunser

TBC please comment I would really like to know if I am doing a good job with this story.

BTW here's is a preview on what's coming soon to Big Time H20

what will happen when girls find out there is a curse on them and one of them might not survive!!!

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Date: 03/26/13 9:41 PM
From: Antwaniano

Big Time H20 part 1

Kendall- ((looks suspiciously at Emma) sure, I guesz

The walk somewhere on the beach

Emma- listen ii know. I was wrong to keep the secret from you

Kendall- (stop her from talking) I know why didn't you just tell me

Emma -(saying Linda sarcasticly) it not like I could wall up to you say hey Kendall the true is I am keeping a secret from you and it is I am a mermaid

Kendall-(laughs at the way she said it) true

Emma (laughs then becomes nervous and studery ) the point is... well what I'm trying to is that....
TBC what is Emma trying to say? Will Kendall listen?
How is the story so far?

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Date: 03/18/13 6:33 PM
From: Antwaniano

Thanks so much for all the nice comments, I was afraid no one was reading so it means a lot. Ok down to business

Summary part 2

The girls comeback ( from freezing the door ) when Logan ask. Can you girls help me she weighs a ton. That's when Rikki tells them that they are Mermaids and if they tell she will skin them like a fish. And they nod scaredly. They manage to get bella out. That's when rikki says stand back and drys bella off while bella says you found your power and smiles. Emma says lets get out of here and there all about to leave when rikki stops them and drys out the pool and they all leave. Where they go to the beach and explain everything to the guys (the guys are shocked but they listen). Afterwards Emma asks to talk to Kendall alone.
TBC will Kendall talk to Emma after keeping the big secret from him. And what will Emma say?

Now we are caught up before my story got deleted, I hope you like my story so far. Please comment

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Date: 03/17/13 10:50 PM
From: isls

Why do fanfics get deleted? I've tried seven or eight times to repost mine but it never works. In fact it will be a miracle if the moderators put this message up. BTW i was reading your fanfic before and i really liked it!!! 		reply
Date: 03/07/13 8:19 PM
From: Antwaniano

I will write summary part 2 soon 		reply
Date: 03/07/13 8:01 PM
From: nakey14

keep on writing im sorry it got deleted 		reply