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Big Time Can't Stay In The Shadows

Date: 03/31/13 6:47 PM
From: Colacat3

Plot ~ New rules have been set for four teenage girl. 'no communicating with mortals in anyway' and thus they were shunned to a life with friends and family that were like themselves, never being able to talk to mortals. But what happens when they break the rules once and go down off their hide-away mountain dressed in cloaks and ready for adventure? They meet BTR that's what! They fall hard and now they have the decision of their lives to decide.

My character: Emily C. (Emmy)
Age: 17
Looks: Messy black hair that has flowers twisted into it and down to her mid back. Ocean blue eyes, dimples, 5'4.
Personality: Sweet, courageous, adventurous, gullible and forgetful, but mysterious and keeps things hidden easily, the brains (has to have a trade mark like this)
Magical Ability(s): Anything to do with her mind. Moving things, talking to people. Reading thoughts. Even moving things like fire an water
Crush: Logan

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Date: 04/27/13 3:52 PM
From: jksuperku

Trefour for the ball haha hey if you get my buddy request please say yes i am jksuperku oh and yes they can only depending on the situation bye.
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Date: 04/26/13 9:47 PM
From: Kendall258

Love it!!! <3
*:) Kendall258
~"We have the best fans in the world." -Big Time Rush
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Date: 04/26/13 7:47 PM
From: LOVEBTR998

GASP! THIS IS SOOOO INTENCE RIGHT NOW!
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Date: 04/26/13 6:24 PM
From: Colacat3

@every single one of my fans: You guys are what are gonna keep this fanfic going on nickelodeon. I have new ones now! Whoo hoo! This has got to be one of my most supported fanfics (though we?ll see down the road). A big THANK YOU to you and three cheers:
Me: HIP HIP
All: HOORAY!
Me: HIP HIP
All: HOORAY!
Me: HIP HIP
All: HOORAYYYYYYYY!

Now I may continue


Chapter 8

~This takes place after ALL the girls have talked to their crushes and told them their names~

Emily?s POV:

After I realized the flirtation that was going around with the boys (and even the girls) I immediately called a meeting with the girls (myself being one of the culprits).

*with the girls*
No one?s POV:

Emily: We CANNOT let these boys sink into our hearts!
Megan: Too late *waves timidly and flirtatiously at James*
Emily: KNOCK IT OFF! Do you not remember our prophesies? Our prophesies!
Isabella: Well ... maybe the prophesies are not true anyway, and if they were, what is the big deal if they are ruined or not ... and what do guys have anything to do with it?
Emily: *gasps* Guys! .. will take over our hearts and will lead us from our duties, besides I may have wanted to not listen to my father for coming off the mountain because I knew he was wrong, but that does not mean he is not right when he says to stay away from guys, our people or not.
Abigail: What is the big deal?
Emily: I just told you! Please guys ... promise me that you will not fall for them anymore then you have, you?ll just get your hearts broken anyway.
Abigail: Fine
Isabella: Whatever
Megan: If you say so

Megan?s POV:


As much as I did not want to admit it, Emmy was right (as she always is). We cannot fall in love, especially with mortals. Our prophesies states that we, as in all four of us, are going to become even more powerful in our late teens (which we all are) and be four strong beings, bound by our friendship and trust, that will help people from all over the world. Where does a guy fit into all that? ................... but on the other side of things .......... maybe Isabella was correct when she said that the prophesy might not even be true.


Emily?s POV


There is a lot more to our prophesy then the girls even know, one of which is a warning, a warning that I know and was told not to tell. They cannot fall in love, they just cannot. It will lead to their destruction, and maybe even the guys?.

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Date: 04/25/13 11:14 PM
From: BalFran4ev

AMAZING!
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Date: 04/25/13 8:53 PM
From: angel4861

I like this story it's interesting and creative
Please keep going
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Date: 04/25/13 7:50 PM
From: Vampir1346

Well, for a "bad chapter", it was pretty cute
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Date: 04/25/13 7:15 PM
From: Kendall258

Loved the chapter, it wasn't at all bad!
Kendall258
~"We have the best fans in the world." -Big Time Rush
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Date: 04/24/13 9:03 PM
From: Colacat3

@everyone- I feel VERY supported! Thanks

Chapter 7

Logan?s POV:

I decided to go wake up the pretty girl I met last night, the one sleeping on the bench. I didn?t want her to have as rude an awakening as the one on the hedge did from Mr.Bitters. I wish I knew their names .... I would not have to refer to themas, girl I met last night, or, girl on the hedge, etc .... I walked over to the peaceful figure and taped her lightly on the shoulder. I really do not think any kind of awakening, rude or sweet, would have changed a thing. She woke up with a jolt, screaming her lungs off. That startled me so much I jumped up and fell to the ground.

No one?s POV;

Emily: *sees Logan* Oh goodness! I?m so sorry
Logan: I?m all good *picks himself up*
Emily: Good now .. ARE YOU INSANE! Do you not know never to wake a sleeping person!
Logan: Uh .. *voice gets high * well
Emily: *rolls her eyes then looks at him thoughtfully and hides a smile*
Logan: I realized I?ve never caught your name ... what is it?
Emily: Emily, my friends call me Emmy
Logan: *thinks the name over in his head* Emmy ... *smiles* What a pretty name for *stops himself*

Logan?s POV:

Goodness! I almost said, ?For a pretty girl like you?! What is wrong with me! I have never felt this way about a girl before, not even Camille! When ever I think of her (which as been a lot in the few hours I?ve known her) I get all nervous inside and have to control my tongue or else I?ll say something REALLY stupid!

No one?s POV:

*with Kendall and Isabella*
Kendall: Why were you sleeping on a hedge?
Isabella: Why don?t you?
Kendall: *frowns* Because I have a comfortable bed to sleep on, that?s why! Don?t you?
Isabella: Yes .. *trails off*
Kendall: Why didn?t you sleep there last night? Are you in some kid of trouble?
Isabella: I will be .. or already am .. *shakes out of it* No matter though! I came here for fun and adventure and to meet mor-er- people
Kendall: *raises an eyebrow* I see ... what is your name?
Isabella: Isabella, you may call me Bella or Bells

@everyone- Sorry if this was a bad chapter ... tonight on nickelodeon may not be my best

Colacat3

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Date: 04/24/13 7:38 PM
From: Kendall258

Its okay. Lol. Loved the chapter!
Kendall258
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Date: 04/24/13 2:36 PM
From: Colacat3

@Kendall258-Sorry for my last post, I meant to talk to you Haha for some reason I thought it was Vampir1346 ... Vampir1346 has been one of my loyal fans so yeah ... but you have too and thank you!

@everyone- I think I'll write a chapter later today


Colacat3

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Date: 04/23/13 10:06 PM
From: Vampir1346

Love it
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Date: 04/23/13 6:51 PM
From: LOVEBTR998

@Colacat3
WOW! THIS IS AMAZING! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!
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Date: 04/23/13 3:57 PM
From: Colacat3

@Vampir1346- You are amazing! Thank you!

Chapter 6

Abigail?s POV:


I woke up to someone tapping on my shoulder and, thinking I was back at home and it was my mom trying to get me up to go do chores, a pushed the hand away. Well that only got me a loud scream in my ear to wake up. I didn?t rush though. I slowly blinked open my eyes and surveyed my surroundings. It all came back to me. I was down off the mountain, my parents probably discovering by now that I was not in my room. Me and the girls did not get to see our sleeping place clearly last night and I got a chance now. We were in an open area, but buildings were nearby. It seemed like this place belonged to the giant beige building not far away. There was benches, hedges and trees like we saw last night but now this place was filled with people everywhere. The building not far off was labelled, PALM WOODS, and from the books I?ve read before guessed this was a park and that building was a place where people live in. Very strange indeed. Where I come from each family gets its own home, they do not have to share. Sighing I sat up and standing in front of me where I was on a hedge not far away from Isabella was a rude looking man with corny glasses and black hair staring at me.

No one?s POV:

Abigail: Uh ... hello? ..
Mr.Bitters: Uh ... hello? ..! That?s all you have to say for yourself!
Abigail: You didn?t ask me anything
Mr.Bitters: *gestures to her and where she was sitting* I did not think I had to!
Abigail: *looks down* What do you mean?
Mr.Bitters: You are laying on my hedge in the Palm Wood?s park!
Abigail: *clues in* Oh! yes, sorry, but I needed a place to sleep and this hedge is very comfortable and-
Mr.Bitters: *cups her mouth* My park is not a place where poor people can come and lay their tired bodies in!
Abigail: *angered and bites his hand* I am not poor! I?ll have you know that my father is a very respected man!
Mr.Bitters: *snickers* Oh really!
Abigail: Yeah!

*with the guys*

Kendall: Uh ... Carlos ... isn?t that the girl we met last night? *points to Abigail*
Carlos: *looks and eyes light up* It is! *starts forward*
Logan: *holds him back* Wait, seems like she?s having an argument with Mr.Bitters ... look, she just bit his hand
Carlos: *smiles*
James: *squints and stares at her* Why is she on top of a hedge*
Kendall: She?s not the only one *points to Isabella a little freaked out, but still smiling*
Logan: And I think I just found the other two *points to Emily and Megan*
Kendall: She?s ... under a tree .... *looks at Megan* ... okay ....
James: Hey! That is not as weird as sleeping on a hedge!
Logan: *snickers* Haha, are you standing up for her, James?
James: What! No! Why ... would .. I .. do *voice drifts off*

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Date: 04/22/13 9:21 PM
From: Kendall258

Love this more each time! Hope to see a new chapter!
Kendall258/ BTR5051
Kendall: Im every Rushers boyfriend.
Carlos: What if they're taken?
Kendall: Then I'll be their lover. <3
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Date: 04/21/13 9:21 PM
From: Colacat3

@Vampir1346- SO glad you love it!
@missmiss25- New fan! Awesome!

Chapter 5


Emily: Megan! Hurry it up, you?re shuffling your feet!
Isabella: Yeah, it?s not like it is getting dark and we need to find a place to rest or anything!
Abigail: Mm hm *crosses her arms*
Megan: *sighs and swings around, her arms flying around*
Isabella: *eyes wide and mouth gaped* I?ve never seen her like this
Abigail: I know! .... It?s really scaring me
Emily: *agrees and carries on*
*the girls finally make it to a wide open area with benches, trees, and hedges*
Abigail: Perfect!
Emily: *claps her hand* It?s like this place was made for us! *runs to a bench* Good night all! *falls on her back on the bench and instantly goes limp*
Isabella: She?s asleep
Abigail: Yep
Megan: *sighs*
Abigail: *pushes Megan under a tree* Sleep
Megan: Okay .... *folds her hands together and slowly lowers herself, sighing*
Isabella: She usually hides her feelings so well ...
Abigail: If this is what love does, I don?t want to be in it ...... *thinks about Carlos and zonks out*
Isabella: Hello? *waves hand in front of her face*
Abigail: *sighs*
Isabella: I?m ... going .. to .. bed *stomps off to the hedge and lays on top of it*

*with the guys*

Carlos: I can?t get that girl out of my head!
Kendall: I know!
*they look at each other*
K&C: Wait ....
Carlos: What girl-
Kendall: -do you mean?
Carlos: The one that knocked into me .... I don?t know her name ... why didn?t I get her name ...
Kendall: Oh *breathes in relief* That is not the girl I mean
Carlos: Good ... remember LAST time we fell for the same girl? *looks up*
Kendall: *does the same*

*image in the sky*

Carlos: *hits Kendall with a baseball bat* I saw her first!
Kendall: *after recovering hits him with a guitar* No I did!
*carry on*
Logan: *walks in with the bagpipes, sees them, sighs, walks over, and blows bagpipes in their ears*
K&C: *cup their ears and fall to the ground screaming*

*out of image*

K&C: *shiver*

Colacat3

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Date: 04/21/13 3:28 PM
From: Vampir1346

I'm screaming in excitment right now I LOVED the Megan/James moment!!!! It was AMAZING!!! So cute!! More please
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Date: 04/21/13 9:40 AM
From: missmiss25

this is so cool
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Date: 04/20/13 10:36 PM
From: Colacat3

@Vampir1346- Oh wow! Thanks so much! That is SO amazing, maybe this fanfic won?t fail like some of my others have


Chapter 4


Logan: Why were you girls out here anyway, especially this late at night?
Megan: Why are you?
Logan: Stop answering a question with a question!
Isabella: Why?
Carlos: It is annoying!
Abigail: We think it is fun
Kendall: Well it is not!
Emily: Yeah, it kinda is ....
*boys slap their foreheads*
Logan: This conversation is getting NOWHERE!
Emily: *smiles* Took you long enough to figure that out *pats his back and laughs evilly*
Logan: *raised an eyebrow*
Kendall: Anyway, we should probably get back and ice our sore limbs
Emily: *a little disappointed* Oh, um ... okay

Emily?s POV


I don?t know why I?m so upset that they leave ... I mean ... they are just guys! They are just like every other guy that I?ve met on the mountain .... but my heart tells me that is not true .... especially this Logan. OH! I must stop it! My heart weakens me and I cannot live up to my potential and the prophesy I was given when I was little. My father always told me to keep a cold heart and, though my father is wrong on many things, I must listen to this piece of information, it is wise.

No one?s POV:


Megan: ..... * a loss for words* .... and, um .... WATCH WHERE YOU?RE GOING NEXT TIME!
James: *smiles* Sure thing
Megan: *a little taken aback*


Megan?s POV:


No one has every reacted to me like that. He just smiled at me ... and not one that was fake. It was REAL! A real smile! No sarcasm! No resentfulness! NOTHING! How? Why?

No one?s POV:


Carlos: Well bye *waves*
*the guys walk off*
*the girls keep staring*
Isabella: He didn?t reply to you with a snare, smart remark back, Meg
Megan: ................
Abigail: Megan?
Megan: ................
Emily: MEGAN!!!!!!
Megan: ... huh? What?
Abigail: *giggles* She was daydreaming
Megan: I was not!
Abigail: *shakes her head* Was too!
Megan: *opens her mouth and closes it, obviously remembering it was impossible to beat Abigail in a shout out* Let?s just keep going to ..... Where are we going?
Emily: *shrugs*
Isabella: EMILY!
Emily: What?
Isabella: You led us down here without a plan!
Emily: You knew that!
Isabella: ..... oh yeah
Megan: Let?s go .... somewhere
*girls nod and walk off*

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Date: 04/20/13 2:51 PM
From: Vampir1346

Thanks so much Colacat3!!! Love yah! Please continue!! I just can't stop reading this! I haven't been this obsessed with a fanfic in forever
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