Hello everyone, its your friend lacarp1224. I want to do another fanfic and yes i need characters. The gang is grown up and they have kids! And they are 1 big happy family! or are they? So please make a character and Liz1227 or coreycat11, if your reading this *whispers* Make a character for me but dont tell anyone *winks* So here are the couples
Bori: 7 kids + 2 new born babies
Jandre: 7 kids
Cabbie: 6 kids + 1 new born baby
Trina: *divorced as always* 4 kids
So those are my couples and please make characters
Clip:
-Gabe is walking to class when he bumps into Alyssa and their books fall-
Gabe: I'm sorry
Alyssa: Not it's my fault -They start grabbing their books when they grab one at the same time-
Gabe: Is this yours? -They look into each others eyes-
Alyssa: Yeah -Leans in for a kiss-
@Coreycat
I know what your going through with all the Bella stuff.I
have a friend/enemy. and all through
1st,2nd,3rd,4th,and 5th she has been copying my friends
.Now,she is a little better.
Although,I think she is trying to squeeze me out of the
picture.If you don't get that,imagine it..my life...
Review:
Is this fanfic realistic? Yes, lots of people (including me) are/can go through what Jazmine is going through with Sheyla
Every character included? Yes, you have done a good job on including every character. Not being negative, but maybe you could include the other characters more besides Sheyla, Ashley and Jazmine. (It'll get more people reading) It is fabulous and amaZAYN though!
Grammer and Spelling: AmaZAYN! 5 stars out of 5.
Ideas? I adore the idea you use. Drama is always a good thing to have in a fanfic and in this case the friendship between Jazmine and Sheyla is the drama. It keeps people attached to the story. Great job!
@Ilovevj12 Yeah probably. So, like Bella is my next door neighbor and we've been friends since like 2. We stopped being friends at 9 years old because Eileen was only 6 years old and broke something of Bella's on accident... so after Bella hating me for a year now she's begging for my forgiveness! Grr, life is complicated.
OMG! Bella Sheyla... they so alike... conversation on my way to school today!
Bella: Hey Liz!
Me: What do you want Bella?
Bella: *Looks at Eileen and laughs* What happened to your arm?
Eileen: Broke it on my bicycle.
Bella: Oh um thats too bad *Sarcastic*
Ashley: Sheyla was going to hurt me at school put you pushed me and got hurt instead
Jazmine: That little freak! Now I'm never forgiving her
-Sheyla walks in-
Sheyla: Hey is Jazmine-- -looks at Jazmine- uh oh
Jazmine: yeah uh oh
Sheyla: Jazz...
Jazmine: Don't you Jazz me!
Sheyla: Jazmine
Jazmine: I'm really tired of you trying to hurt my little sister! You know you can't hurt her because I'm here! So If your going to hurt Ashley, think again because the only person your hurting is me
Sheyla: -crying- I'm sorry! Jazmine I am so sorry! It's just I miss you and Ashley is always in the way of our relationship!
Emily: maybe if you didn't hurt her this wouldn't of happen
Sheyla: Jazmine please! I'm sorry! You were always there for me when I wasn't in the mood, you always made me happy and made me laugh... I missed that... Jazmine please
Jazmine: Leave me alone Sheyla it's not going to work and FYI don't even think about hurting Ashley again
-Sheyla leaves-
I heard you're making another fanfic with the characters from this one! GL!
"You shouldn't punch brainiacs..." ~Princess Bubblegum "We should beat him up until he starts making sense!" ~Jake "I don't know if it's a duck or a panda, but I want one!" ~Wendy "Status update: Ahhh." ~Dipper "I'm an ambush! *pops out of bush*" ~Jake "This castle is in... UNACCEPTABLE CONDITION! UNACCEPTABLEE!" ~Earl of Lemongrab "Escape, Jake! ESCAPE! *tries not to barf*" ~Finn
-With Charlotte Finn & Becca-
Charlotte: We should watch a movie
Becca: That's a good idea
Finn: What should we watch?
Charlotte: Oh let's watch the new cartoon movie! I think it's called the croods
Becca: I've always wanted to see that movie but I never got a chance to see it
Finn: Then let's watch it
Charlotte: Do you have a computer?
Finn: Yeah -gives her computer-
Charlotte: Thank you
Becca: What are you doing?
Charlotte: Downloading the movie duh!
-Hospital-
-Jazmine's dream-
Jazmine: Where am i?
-A truck is about to hit her-
-Ashley pushes Jazmine and gets hurt instead-
Jazmine: Ashley! -Kneels down next to her- Why did you do this?
Ashley: Because you saved me when I almost got hurt. You were always there for me, now it's my turn
-Jazmine wakes up breathing heavy-
Ashley: Jazmine! -Hugs her- Oh my god your okay
Jazmine: Yeah i know, I'm just glad your ok -Hugs her a little tighter-
Emily: How are you feeling?
Jazmine: Better but what happened?
Ashley: Sheyla...
@lacarp1224
I'm paying attention...I just wanted to inform Mabel18
about that...just if she didn't know...But,I hope you
continue the chapters!They are AWESOMETATIOUSFUL!!!!!
@Everyone Guys, i'm going to put all the characters in the story! I hate it when people tell that i'm forgetting to put them when i'm going to put them! Sheyla does hate Ashley because of what she did 3 years ago. It looks like you guys don't really pay attention to my chapters because I explained what happened. I even posted all the info about Sheyla, you guys don't look at my messages. I'm not trying to be rude or anything but this has to stop. I hate it when people tell me that i'm forgetting when i'm not because I have an idea of how to put them there. I'm the writer, just wait till I put them in
"You shouldn't punch brainiacs..." ~Princess Bubblegum "We should beat him up until he starts making sense!" ~Jake "I don't know if it's a duck or a panda, but I want one!" ~Wendy "Status update: Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh." ~Dipper
@Mabel18
Yeah.According to this quote,I think she does:
Sheyla:I still hate Ashley.
So...yeah...and,YOU HAVE BACON!?!?!?!?!AND DIDN'T
TELL ME!?!?!?!?!?Well?Pass me some of 'dat bacon.Oh
no...Waddles the Pig is here!!!!!He sees the bacon!!!
He's coming after me!!!!!Wait...how am I typing when
I'm holding my computer,holding a plate of bacon,
and running away from Waddles at the same time?
Oh!!!!I know!!!!You 'wanna know?Ok.Here it is.........:
MAGIC.........I am a Wizard trapped in a little girls body
named Peyton.*The real me*Hey Wizard!!!!Get out of
my body and have yours!!!*Gets out of Wizard body,
kicks Wizard body out of my body,and gets in my body*
Whew!!!!Well,now it's the real me!!Or is it.........?
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