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Lost In The Future (Double with Ilovevj12 and Coreycat11!)

Date: 04/06/13 12:25 PM
From: coreycat11

PLOT: The gangs kids in the future (My kids from looking into the future) find a time machine in the Cabbie backyard! The kids go into it finding themselves 6 years into the future! They all act different too, especially the youngest ones: Chloe ,Chris,and Sierra (Chloe and Chris can talk of course in the future)

In the ( ) is how old they are in the present day, and beside that is how old they are in the future

Bori-
Chloe, 6 (0)
Chris,6 (0)
Lily, 17 (11)
Letty,Artemis,Rae,18 (12)
Olivia,20 (14)
Lina,21 (15)
Johnny,23 (17)

Jandre-
Sierra,12 (6)
Alissa,17 (11)
Steven,Adam,19 (13)
Makenize,21 (15) (This girl is a orphan i let AriFan11 make. She gets adopted by the Jandre family soon, so i include her)
Brody,22 (16)
Tyrell,23(17)

Cabbie-
Elize,Laity,16 (10)
Catherine,19 (13)
Madi,21 (15)
Jessica,Melisa,23 (17)

Okay i'll post chapter 1 once this posts! I hope you guys like it! Be prepared for an awesome fanfic.

Mods plz post!

Coreycat11

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Date: 05/05/13 11:09 AM
From: coreycat11

@Ilovevj12

Everything okay?

-Bori House- (They were doing a lot of time traveling so the story about why Laity and Alissa is mad at her is different)
Elize: *Rings doorbell*
Lily: *Answers and gasps* Elize! *Hugs her tight*
Elize: Uh, hello. *Hugs her back*
Lily: I thought you werent talking to me?
Elize: I'm not?
Lily: No. Remember what happened?
Elize: ...What happened? Remember i wasnt here yet. *They sit on the front porch*
Lily: Few years ago... Alissa and Laity and I were very close. Until this new girl came. Her name was Lexi. Laity and Alissa loved her. They basically ditched me. One night, Lexi was having a sleepover. Laity and Alissa lied to me about being busy that night, but really they were at the sleepover.
Elize: Hold up. Shouldnt you be mad at them and they shouldnt be mad?
Lily: *Sighs* There's more. I found out the next day. Laity and Alissa didnt even beg for forgiveness. They kept hanging out with Lexi and i got an idea. I decided to ditch them too.

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Date: 05/04/13 7:42 PM
From: ilovevj12

@Coreycat11 Hey Can you skip me??? I don't think I could do the next chapter soon... Sorry

ILoveVJ12

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Date: 05/04/13 9:17 AM
From: coreycat11

@Fairyretro

Hey umm just one problem with your skit. Lily isnt the one mad at Laity, Laity is the one. Alissa is too. So, they went into the future, started hating each other and in since they are in the present day they changed it by going into the future

<3Coreycat11<3

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Date: 05/03/13 7:05 PM
From: eileen185

Do more

Eileen

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Date: 05/03/13 7:17 AM
From: fairyretro

what if she goes 5 years into the future(which is in between the times she had been in),tries to fix the feud first Leo(the boy I made that has a crush on her)asks her on a date! She likes him back, so she cant say no! But she fixes it all up in the next chapter, like this.
Elize: Hmmmmmmm*texts lily*
the text: lily, laity says she is sorry! meet me and her at the beach later today.
~Elize
Lily: well Elize is Laity's sister and I remember that promise
*on Elize's 11 birthday*
Lily: lets promise never EVER lie to eachother. promise?
Lily, laity, Elize and alissa: Promise
*with laity*
The text to laity: Hey sis, I went over to lily's house and she said sorry! meet me and her at the beach later today!
~Elize
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Date: 05/02/13 10:17 PM
From: coreycat11

Sorry typo! Instead of "I waited for them to say yes" it was supposed to be "I waited for them to say no" lol

<3Coreycat11<3

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Date: 05/01/13 9:47 PM
From: coreycat11

This will be all Elize's POV:

Elize's POV:

Had to fix this! I went into my backyard and found the time machine. Still looked rusty and old. Perfect. I switched the time machine back four years. Everything flashed and twisted. Did it work? I got out my mini mirror. Yes! I was a ten year old. Let's test it. I went inside, finding Alissa and Laity 11 year olds again. "Do you hate Lily?" I asked Laity and Alissa. I waited for them to say yes, but to my surprise this was Laity's answer. "I thought we weren't ever speaking about her again" Laity said. "What do you mean?" I asked, nervously. "We dont speak of it!" Alissa said. They went back to painting their nails. Oh no! I changed the present day... in the future. Ugh, this is all too confusing! I went back outside to the time machine. What could i do?

<3Coreycat11<3

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Date: 05/01/13 4:30 PM
From: ilovevj12

Elize: This isn't right
Alissa: It's going to be okay Elize
-With Lily and Letty-
Lily: This is probably the best day ever, especially when I'm with my fave sister
Letty: Aww Your so sweet. You've always been my fave sister
Lily: I know
Letty: Come on -grabs Lily's arm-
Lily: Where are we going?
Letty: Wherever you want. Let's just call it a girls night out, we do whatever we want and forget about everyone
Lily: Love it! We should go watch a movie
Letty: Way ahead of you sis and after that let's go get ice cream and cruise around the city and other cities
Lily: You don't even have your license
Letty: We can always take the bus or just walk
Lily: I'd rather walk plus the movie theater is right around the corner
Letty: Let's go
-With Mackenzie-
Mackenzie: Where's Madi?
Brody: Who knows?
Steven: What am I going to do about Catherine?
Mackenzie: Go apologize or do something romantic
Steven: This is hard
Mackenzie: Just go!
Steven: Fine... bossy
Mackenzie: Heard that!
Steven: Sorry
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Date: 04/27/13 10:40 PM
From: coreycat11

Using FairyRetro's idea about Elize suddenly remembering everything!

-Cabbie House-
Alissa: *Rings doorbell*
Elize: *Answers* Hey. Come inside
-Laity's room-
Alissa: Whats going on?
Laity: Derek was cheating on me.... you'll guess with who with!
Alissa: Who?
Laity: Lily!
Alissa: OMG no way!
Elize: Yes way!
Laity: Now she hates me
Elize: Yeah she is overreacting!
Alissa: *Sighs and leans back* Yeah... she changed a lot when she started dating him.
-Sierra comes in and throws a rock, it hits Elize-
Elize: Oww!
Alissa: Sierra! Did you follow me here?
Sierra: Yep!
-Elize suddenly remembers-
Elize: Hey guys where are we?
Laity: Umm, at our house?
Elize: Are we 10 again? Thank God!
Alissa: No we are 14 years old.
Elize: What are you talking about? We were just 6 years in the future!
-Alissa and Laity exchange looks-
Alissa: I guess that rock hit her hard.
Elize: You guys have to believe me!
Laity: I'll go get ice. *She leaves*


<3Coreycat11<3

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Date: 04/27/13 10:13 PM
From: coreycat11

Now im gulity now... i over read your chapter... it makes sense now. #StupidMe

~Coreycat11
Give Your Heart A Break

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Date: 04/27/13 8:52 PM
From: coreycat11

Oh, it's okay! I can see why you thought Lily was mad at Letty! She wasnt though. Your chapter was fine, i promise!

~Coreycat11

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Date: 04/27/13 3:13 PM
From: ilovevj12

Now i'm confused... I just did a chapter that followed yours... Lily was kinda mad at Letty and Laity and Elize were going to tell Alissa something... If I'm off topic then i'm really sorry... Don't get mad at me

ILoveVJ12

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Date: 04/26/13 9:39 PM
From: eileen185

I confused

Eileen

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Date: 04/26/13 7:05 PM
From: coreycat11

@Fairyretro

Oh... *awkward pause*

@Ilovevj12

Hey did one of your chapters not show up?! Cause the chapter i see is completely off topic of my last chapter!


~Coreycat11

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Date: 04/25/13 12:41 AM
From: ilovevj12

Found it! :)

ILoveVJ12

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Date: 04/24/13 6:33 PM
From: ilovevj12

I already posted the chapter! Where is it????

ILoveVJ12

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Date: 04/24/13 3:12 PM
From: ilovevj12

@coreycat11 OMG That is so true! I wish we were siblings... We would have been really close

ILoveVJ12

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Date: 04/24/13 3:11 PM
From: ilovevj12

Lily: No, it's okay. I can't stay mad at you
Letty: Aw
Lily: but just don't do it again
Letty: Promise
Lily: I'm bored
Letty: Let's go trash Olivia's room and go throw toilet paper at The neighbors
Lily: You are super great sis! -They go to Olivia's room then to the neighbors-
-An hour later-
Olivia: Letty! Lily!
-Olivia storms to the living room and finds Lily and Letty watching TV-
Olivia: Why did you trash my room?
Lily: Who said we did?
Olivia: Your spray painted your names on my room
Letty: Sorry, I guess we did the wrong room
Olivia: You are so dead!
-They leave laughing-


Hey Corey, What is Laity and Elize going to tell Alissa? I couldn't think of anything....

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Date: 04/24/13 7:32 AM
From: fairyretro

*sigh* coreycat,i know,they were for looking into the future 2,and they posted on the wrong board
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Date: 04/23/13 10:10 PM
From: coreycat11

@Ilovevj12

Omg! this quote totally reminded me of you and I!

"Best Friends are the siblings God forgot to give us" :-)

~Coreycat11

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