Plot: An elderly woman named, Cat Valentine Sanchez gets an invitation to go to a reunion with her high school drama club. But she doesn't remember a thing about her high school years. So Cat goes to the reunion and begins to receive hints about her past and she slowly recalls the tragedy of a boy she once loved.
Characters:
Cat V. Sanchez: (Now) an elderly woman who doesn't remember her past
Caroline Valentine: Granddaughter of Cat. Goes to HA.
Nathan Sanchez: Husband of Cat.
?? ???: Cat's high school sweetheart/boyfriend.
Tori Vega: One of Cat's high school friend, and goes to the reunion.
Shelby Thomson: In Shelby's high school life, she was always jealous that Cat got to date the boy Shelby loved.
Beck Oliver: A good friend of Cat's high school boyfriend
Andre Harris: A friend of Cat's boyfriend in high school and was the musician of the drama club
Jade West: Just a member of the drama club during her high school years
Comment if you like this idea and want me to start it.
Review:
Ideas? I really like the idea. I've seen many kid fanfics, love storys, etc. But i've never seen this yet. It's great.
Grammer? Good. 5 stars out of 5.
Realistic? Well, this is based on a TV show. This would be pretty cute if it happened in real life. It's not unrealistic, though. Great.
Drama? Kinda. Drama keeps people hooked to the fanfic. The drama in this case is Cat , way older, hasnt seen the boy she loves in forever.
My Note Of Advice? Maybe you can post more chapters. You havent posted chapters in a few days and the key is to post it more often to keep fans hooked. I understand if your busy with school and all i totally understand. But keep in mind, summer is coming. Also, i saw below you accepted a character. Maybe you can accept more from people. To make the story more interesting, and it'll get more people to read it (Especially if their character is in it lol)
wait, instead of molly Vega(tori's daughter and Korra's mom) being dead, She and Korra could have moved in with tori after she divorced Korra's dad when korra was 5.
Chapter 1 Part 2
At HA-
Caroline: Korra, can you help me?
Korra: What do you need Carol?
Caroline: Well my grandma looked really confused when a gave her this letter and now I think she might have forgotten her high school years.
Korra: My grandma Tori was friends with your grandma so I'll just ask her
Caroline: Thank you so much, Korra!
At the HA Back-to-School Night-
(Grandma Cat and Grandma Tori are there, representing their granddaughters)
(Tori walks up to Cat)
Tori: Catalina Valentine! Is that you?
Cat(confused): Yes, and you are? (Note: Remember that Cat doesn't remember her high school years, including her friends)
Tori: Tori! Tori Vega, I went here with you!
Cat(doesn't know her): Right, Tori Vega
Tori(knows why Cat doesn't know her, but doesn't say a thing): Are you coming to the Drama Club reunion?
Cat: I guess so
Tori: Okay so see you there!
At the Bori home-
Korra: Mom I need to ask you something
Tori: Yes, sweetie?
TBC to Chapter 2................
can i send in a charictar?
name: Korra Vega
grandparent: Tori vega
clb look alike:bridgit mendler
age: caroline's
friends: caroline
enimies: noone
extra: she takes after her mother Molly and her Grandmother Tori,and started to live with tori after molly died
Chapter 1
At Grandma Cat's home-
(Caroline walks in, holding a letter for Cat)
Caroline: Grandma! Grandma! I have a letter for you
(She gives the letter to Cat)
Caroline: It says To Cat Valentine Sanchez and says Drama Club. Open it!
Cat: Go finish your homework, my dear Carol. I'll open it myself.
(Caroline goes off to her room)
(Grandma) Cat's POV:
I don't remember anything about drama club or being in it. The letter says there will be a drama club reunion at Hollywood Arts, Carol's high school. I remember going there but not anyone there. Not even this man named Beck Oliver, that says he was the Drama club president during my high school years. I'll think about this later.
BACK TO REALITY-
(Cat puts the letter back in it's envelope and Caroline comes into the dining room again)
Caroline: What does it say? (excited)
Cat: Nothing, but have you finished your homework?
Carol: Yup
Cat: Okay then lets go to sleep. Your Grandpa Nathan is already asleep.
TBC.....
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