Hey everyone! I decided to start reviewing some fanfics, giving people advice how to make it better and such! I did one on Ilovevj12 "The Big Happy Family" to test it out.
If you want me to review your fanfic, you will just need to tell me the title of it and who it is by! For example:
Title: Looking Into The Future
By: Coreycat11
(Of course i cant review my own fanfic just a example)
Let me know below and i'll be more than happy to do a review on your fanfic!
Mods plz post!
Your Friend,
<3Coreycat11<3
The 12 Year Old Writer.
Kyla Mitchell: Granddaughter of Camille, and Friend of Caroline
Chapter 1 Part 2
At -
Caroline: Kyla , can you help me?
Kyla: What do you need Carol?
Caroline: Well my grandma looked really confused when a gave her this letter and now I think she might have forgotten her high school years.
Kyla: My grandma was friends with your grandma so I'll just ask her
Caroline: Thank you so much Kyla!
At the PWH Back-to- School Night-
(Jo and Camille are representing their granddaughters)
Camille: Jo Taylor, is that you?
Jo(confused): And you are?
Camille: Camille. Camille Roberts! We went to high school together!
Jo(doesn't know her): Right
Camille(Knows why Jo doesn't remember her): Well are you going to the Drama Club reunion?
Jo: I guess so
Camille: Then I'll see you there!
At Grandma Camille's house-
Kyla: Grandma, can I ask you something?
Camille: Yes, Kyla?
Kyla: It's about Carol's grandma....
TBC...
Hi! Please review this fanfic...
Title: The Game of Revenge
By: Faithmanga
Can I do two, please?
Title: How to Make it in Hollywood
By: Faithmanga
Thanks! -Faith-
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