Hey this is my FIRST fanfic so I don't want you to go too hard on me. Oh, and I hope you like "There's no place like home."
In a separate universe wizards and alchemists roamed across the land freely. These people could do extraordinary feats. In the world not everyone was a wizard, or alchemist. Those people are called non-mages. The non-mages were angry with the mages, but they had no power over the wizards and alchemists. Until today.
"Let us all stand up to the mages and alchemists!" a large man apparently named Gandalf shouted to the large crowd. Two teens walked up to the crowd a little curious and scared. "Why would someone want to the mages?" the tall female whispered to her best friend. The female had caramel colored hair and it had blue and red streaks in her hair. She was wearing a blue spaghetti strap shirt with gold lining, a gold jacket over the top, black caprees, and gold heels that lace up a little past her ankles.
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@videl6757: Wh-what!!! I thought I did horrible with the fanfiction! I'm sorry about the LONG wait, I'll post the next part...... NOW!
Part 3
?Ahh! Fire in the kitchen!? a cook yelled. Natsu and I were in the middle of getting to know everyone (but spiky) when we heard an opportunity to show everyone our skills. We ran into the kitchen immediately, and got everyone else in the kitchen out. ?Well, just in their luck! They said they were hungry!? Goku told everyone while he made sure no one interfered with our snack. Natsu and I haven?t had a snack like this in a while, so we enjoyed it, but we didn?t take so long that the kitchen would burn down. Gohan handed us sticks, so we could have fire to go when we were done ?cleaning up?. Everyone?s eyes looked like they would pop out of their heads when they saw us eating the fire in the kitchen. When we came out they practically jumped on us and opened our mouths to see if they were burnt to a crisp. That almost knocked the fire out of my hands, so I looked like an idiot trying to keep it from falling. At that spiky started laughing his big head off, so I chucked my fire as hard as I could at his head. The payback was fairly equal except for the fact that MY hair wasn?t on fire. Everyone ignored Veggie and proceeded to question us about the fire. ?We?re Dragon Slayers we eat our element, or in Mana?s case she eats four elements. The Iron dragon slayer eats iron, the Sky dragon slayer eats air, and so forth.? Natsu told everyone. ?Oh my, Natsu said something that made sense! It?s the apocalypse, RUN!? I joked. We all laughed knowing Natsu enough to know that he NEVER says anything that makes sense. We partied for a while until Natsu brought something up.
?Mana, I have a present for you from the guild.? Natsu told me. At the word guild, I burst into tears.
How do you like my little cliffy? Well until next time! The Ouran Host Club will be waiting for you!
UGGGGGGG! It's been tooooo long. It turns out I had two HUGE projects due TWO days in a row. I procrastinate soooooo I was pretty much doomed for the week. We also had to do them all in class, and I have some of the most talkative people in class around me. I ended taking them home and spending till 9 working on them. Sorry for beong so late. How about I stop frying your brains with pointless complaining and get to the story.PART TWO
Not having Happy to fly Natsu around when we drove there basically slowed me down too. We got to the driveway , and I had to drag Natsu there. By the time I got there everyone was blocking my way of sight of everyone in there, so I just listened. ?Mana is a strong girl for her age. She is among our ranks with no doubt. I know cause I fought her.? I heard Goku say. I could finally see a little bit, but they couldn?t see me. Suddenly a spiky haired short dude spoke up. ?Ha! Nice joke Kakarot! How can a 17 year old girl be among are ranks? I don?t even think she can be close to Yamcha?s ranks!? he said ?Hey!? I?m assuming Yamcha said. I was furious with spiky, how dare ha say something like that about me! I pushed through everyone in front of me, but it wasn?t hard because I was covered with fire. That happens to me when I get really mad. ?Hey, spiky! How about you try saying that again! Who do you even think you are!?!? I said preparing for a fight. He looked ready too, so I got closer poised to punch. Suddenly, I felt a hand on my shoulder. It was Natsu?s, though I shouldn?t be too surprised since he is the only one able to get this close to fire. I immediately calmed down. ?You?re lucky Vegeta. In our fight SHE beat me.? Goku pitched in. The look on everyone?s face was priceless. They all stepped away from me. ?Mommy, who is that pretty lady?? I heard a little girl with blonde hair say. I love little kids, so I went up to her and bent down to her height. ?Hi there, sweetie. What?s your name? I?m Mana.? I said in a gentle tone. ?Marron!? the little girl piped. Everyone was taken aback at my kind gesture. ?Hey, Marron. Do you want a special present?? I asked ?Yeah!? she said. I formed her name with water, froze it, and I gave it to her. I could tell by her expression that she loved it. ? Thank you Mana!? she exclaimed as she hugged me. I was introduced to everyone, and we all became friends instantly.
The Son?s House
I woke up like I did when I woke up here for the first time, confused. I suddenly remembered why I was there. I used up too much magic power fighting Goku. Which I advise you NOT to do. I don?t really remember how it ended, but I guess I?ll ask Natsu or Gohan. I slowly walked down the stairs, and the first thing I saw was Goten, Gohan, and Natsu sitting on the floor watching a screen that looked like a lacryma. ?Hey, Mana! That fight was awesome! I can?t believe you won!? Gohan said. ? I won against THE Goku!? I screamed. ?Yeah you did!? Goku said as I turned around to face him. ?Wow, I can?t believe it!? I said with disbelief. ?You?re all banged up! We need to get you a senzu bean!? Chi Chi said as she shoved a green bean towards my face. I hesitantly popped it in my mouth. It suddenly gave me a huge power up, and all of my wounds left. ?Wow!? I exclaimed. ? Now, how about you take a shower, and you can have a fresh set of clothes for when we leave for Bulma?s place. Our friends are going to have a party, and we?re all going!? Chi Chi said. ?Kay.? I told her.
After my long shower, I went to my room, and looked through the closet. There were so many dresses good for this type of gathering, and I want to look nice. I went down stairs in something simple, and asked Chi Chi for some help on picking an outfit. To my luck, Videl, my classmate, was there. I asked her for some help looking for something to wear. We went up to my room, and started trying on dresses. In the end we found a dress. It goes to my thighs, and it is sleeveless. It?s red with fire accents at the bottom of the dress. It flows, and when I twirl it poofs out a ton. I was wearing red heels with the same fire accents. My hair was in a bun, and the front of my bangs were loose and flowing. Videl and I had become best friends almost instantly. ?Are you girls done up there?? Gohan yelled up to us. ? Yeah, we?ll be down in a minute.? I told him. We went down, and everyone was staring at me agape. ? Mana looks really pretty!? Goten said in amazement. ? I know, Goten.? Natsu said in awe. I blushed the color of my dress, and everyone started laughing. ?Are we ready?? Goku asked. ?Yeah.? we all said. At that, we set off.
Okay, don?t kill me, but I?m going to put this in two parts. It?s going to be because of how much detail there is going to be in it. I?m going to post on the weekend if I have too much homework during the school week. Gomen for the lie earlier about posting during the week!
Tell me what you thought about the fight. Did you like Gohan's reaction? Post, and keep it alive! I can post during the week because of ISTEP. Thank you ISTEP! Can you tell that I'm hyper?
I still have some writer?s block, so I?ll do my best if you bear through it with me.
?First, to be able to fight crime you need a disguise.? Gohan said. ?Why? Can?t we just go Dragon Force?? I asked. ?They?ll still notice it?s you.? Gohan replied. ?Okay, but I?m NOT wearing THAT horrid thing!? I demanded. ?Hey! I think it?s cool!? Gohan yelled. ?BWAAAA HAHAHAHA! YOU LOOK LIKE AN IDIOT! YOU?RE WORSE THAN GRAY!!! HAAAAAA!? Natsu yelled, almost bursting my eardrum. That?s something Natsu was good at, being loud. ?Mana, we haven?t seen you fight yet. I want to fight you!? Goku says butting into the conversation. ?I?m fine with that.? I replied. Gohan was now standing agape looking at me like I started sprouting wings. ?Dad, are you serious?!? Gohan said. ?Yeah, why?? Goku asked. ?She?ll get creamed!? Gohan yelled. ?You know I can hear every word you say right?? I asked offended. ?I want to see her fight daddy!? Goten demanded. ?I?m fine with that.? I said. ?Let?s go!? Goku said.
Goku and I took our stances. *BANG* We took off at the same time. He flew in the air to avoid my punches, but what he didn?t know was that I could use my Air Magic to fly. It caught him off guard, and it gave me the chance to go Dragon Force. I got scaly, and my power level went up ten times more than normal. He also had the chance to turn his hair yellow. Master said that it was called Super Sayain. His power went up really high. Master also said that I need to watch out if anyone goes Super Sayain. I kept my guard on high, and I made sure to listen and at the same time smell him attacking. My enhanced senses helped me a bunch in this fight. ?Element Dragon?s ROAR!!!? as I yelled that a huge wave of fire, water, earth, and air came rushing out of my mouth and hitting Goku. It knocked him to the ground so hard it made a huge crater. Since I had the chance, I put Goku in a fire cage. It didn?t last long, because he transformed again, and it blasted away the fire, This time he had really long blonde hair and his power level went up immensely. I still wasn?t giving up. I could tell that now he was serious, and I was too. This time I dropped to the ground, and I started to channel all of the earth and water to eat. ?Natsu! Give me fire!? I yelled. He gave me the fire and I started to eat all of the earth, water, air, and fire I could. Goku, Gohan, and Goten were all standing there agape. My power level went up so much I was confident I could win it with this one blow. I was also lucky, because Goku was still bewildered. ?Element Dragon?s Iron Fist!!!? I had so much force that it knocked Goku into the ground unconscious. ?Close your mouth Gohan, you?ll catch flies!? I yelled in a mocking tone. We took Goku inside, and I passed out right as we got inside.
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I am going to friend you if you like it or not, because you have been supporting me from the beginning. I'm glad you liked it, because I just modified what happened when I was daydreaming.
GAHH CURSE YOU WRITERS BLOCK!!!
I will post the new part,
Here it goes......
( ps. I.m going to do it all in Mana?s POV now )
The next day.
?Natsu! Get up!? I shouted. Sadly Natsu was the heaviest sleeper EVER, so I had to ask Chi Chi for a COLD bucket of water. Goten came to watch me drop the freezing cold water on Natsu to see his reaction. I feel a weird connection to the Son?s, and I don?t know why. All I know is that it?s a warm feeling, like I belong with them. ?Mana! Snap out of it!? Goten screamed in my ear. ?GAH!? When I screamed Goten made me jump, and the water splashed all over Goten, Natsu, and I. ?Goten!? I yelled. I started running after him like Lucy chases Happy. Speaking of them, I wander how they are? ?Uhhhhhh?.. What the heck just happened?? Natsu asked in an extremely confused tone. ?Nothing.? Goten and I quickly said before we ran out of the room.
In the kitchen.
?CHI CHI, SAVE ME!!!!? I yelled as Natsu was chasing me with a bucket of ice. ?Please, no! Goten made me!? I pleaded. ?WHAT!? Goten exclaimed. Gohan was watching agape as we ran around the kitchen. ? Come on guys. We need to get to school.? he said. ? All for it! BYE!? I said as I ran out of the door. ?Mana! Get back here!? Natsu yelled. It was like that all the way to school.
At school.
?Class, we have two new students joining us today. There names are Mana and Natsu. Say hello class.? the teacher said in a monotone voice. ?Does he have pink hair? That can?t be natural. That girl is hot!? we heard the class say, because of our enhanced hearing. ?What did you guys say!? Natsu screamed. All I did was blushed because of the comments, and I get nervous in front of a ton of people. I felt Natsu?s body temperature, and put a hand on his shoulder saying that it?s okay. I felt his temperature go down and we sat down next to Gohan. The whole day was so boring, and hard. When it was finally over we left and asked Gohan what he did on his free time. He said he fought crime. At that moment we found our first part of training.
So, did you like it? If you did let me know, and if you have any ideas let me know! BYE!
Thanks, and Macy YOUR rocks? *sigh* what am I going to do with her. I JUST got back from Illinois 10 minutes ago and I figured that I need to post and see if anyone did anything while I was gone. Soooooo.... I'll post the next part soon!
Great fanfic, you have good writing and your story is very interesting, I figured i'd let you know I was reading it even though I don't post comments very often. Can't wait til the next part.