It was on a normal day when the Rangers were training outside while Mia was cooking for them. As she called them to come into the house to eat, the gap sensor went off:
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Mike: Puh, I'm glad we don't have to eat now, thanks to the gap sensor.
Lauren: Let's hurry inside.
Kevin: Mentor, where is the Moogers' attack?
Mentor: In the city, hurry!
Jayden: Let's go!
(In the city)
Kryptox: I like scared and worried people! The Sanzu River will rise if I suck all their scary and worries out!
Antonio: Not if we can stop you!
Lauren: We will defeat you and Master X!
Kryptox: What? There are now two of those Red Rangers? No problem, I can still defeat you!
All Rangers: Go Go Samurai!
Kryptox: Moogers attack!
Mia, Emily and Mike: Spin sword!
Kevin: Super Samurai Mode!
Jayden and Lauren: Fire smasher!
Antonio: Barracuda Blade!
Kryptox: No! You have won against my Moogers but you can't win against
me! (He fires an attack towards the Rangers and strikes them down)
Please, you have to continue Jayden's kept secret revealed! I really love it and it's one of the first fanfics that I read and that inspired me to write one by myself. You don't have to update every day, you can post whenever you got a new part, no one will be mad at you for not posting. Please continue it, I'll help you too if you want to. Tell me if you need help or anything, thanx.
@Luv2Rocka
It's great. Keep going.
erin897
I really want you to finsh "Jayden Kept secrect reveled." That's ones my favorite and should be finshed. 8imly
I'm really sorry for having you an my other fans wait that long! Like you said, I as well had to do a lot of other stuff like school. I try to post new parts as soon as I have written them, but I don't have that much time. I'm as well writing other fanfics, so please be patient if I'm not posting that much. What's with your fanfic with my idea? What happened, I panicked cuz I couldn't find it anymore on the boards. Are you still writing it? Thanx for reading my fanfic, I'm glad you like it!
Emily: Hey guys, are you hungry?
Lauren: Yeah, sure. And you Jayden?
Jayden: ...I`m not really hungry.
Lauren: But you have to eat something, please Jayden. You have bearly eaten since you are in the hospital.
Jayden: ...Alright, but not much. I`m really not that hungry.
Emily: Then I`m going to buy some food, I`ll be right back. See you guys.
(She went off but stopped outside the room, not visible to Jayden and Lauren but she could still hear them talking.)
Jayden: ...They want to help me remember and seem to be really worried about me. I`m sorry that I couldn`t remember anything.
Lauren: Stop saying sorry Jayden, it`s not your fault it was an accident. You will remember soon, promise. Don`t worry, everything will be fine.
Jayden: ...Thanks Lauren.
Lauren: ...No problem baby brother.
(They both chuckled a bit at her nickname for Jayden. Lauren then held Jayden`s hand until he closed his eyes for a few seconds, but then asked her)
Jayden: ...Why aren`t Mom and Dad coming? Didn`t you tell you`ll call them?
Lauren: (panicked a bit and didn`t really know how to answer) Yeah, well Dad is on a mission and Mom is visiting her friend who got sick. So they are both away for a few days and can`t come, but they will come as soon as possible when you are released from the hospital. Okay?
Jayden: ...Yeah, sure.
(After a few minutes Jayden fell asleep)
Lauren: (thinking) I`m sorry Jayden that I had to lie to you, I just don`t want to hurt you. It would break me to tell you the truth.
(She took the photos from the Rangers and started looking through them. Emily had heard what Jayden and Lauren were talking and cried because she knew that their parents were gone and that the Rangers had to tell it Jayden sometime. Emily then went out to get the promised food)
Lauren: (thinking) I`m glad that Jayden has such good and caring friends. He seems to have learned how to have more fun and to lose up more.
(She then closed the album and stood up to go out of the hospital for a few minutes to get some fresh air)
(Meanwhile Jayden was still sleeping in his room as a Nighlok appeared. He put some poison into Jayden`s transfusion tube, some moments after Jayden woke up slightly screaming)
Dokurox: So my poison seems to work. Master Xandred will be pleased to get you out of his way.
Jayden: ...Who are you...ah!...What have you done Nighlok?!
Dokurox: My name is Dokurox and I`m the most poisonous Nighlok. Master Xandred send me here to destroy you Red Ranger, so I poisoned you!
Jayden: (panting)... What are you talking about, I`m not the Red Ranger!
Dokurox: You can`t fool me Red Ranger, you will soon feel the effect of the poison. I`m drying out so I have to go, see you later Red Ranger or not! (laughs evilly and disappears)
Jayden: (thinking) What did he mean, I`m not the Red Ranger...yet. (Suddenly he started to feel the poison become more and more painful)...AHHH!
(Meanwhile Lauren was still outside as she saw Emily running towards her with bags full of food)
Lauren: Hey Emily. Here, let me help you with those bags.
Emily: Thanks. (She handed Lauren a bag) Is Jayden alright?
Lauren: Yeah, he`s sleeping right now. I just went out to get some fresh air. Let`s go inside.
(They went in and were on the hallway to Jayden`s room as they saw a crowd of doctors and nurses infront of his room. Then suddenly they heard him screaming at the top of his lungs)
Lauren: (shocked) Oh no! JAYDEN! (She let the bags fall down and ran to help Jayden)
I`m so sorry guys! I didn`t have time to post the part earlier, I had a lot of other things to do, I hope you can forgive me! :( I`m trying to post as soon as I can, but I`m also working on other fanfics right now. So I maybe won`t be able to post every week, but I`ll try. I would also like to have more comments that I know you like my fanfic, how about 10?
Next part coming is part 19 with erin897`s idea, if you still have an idea for a nighlok name please tell me and maybe I could use it.
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