It was on a normal day when the Rangers were training outside while Mia was cooking for them. As she called them to come into the house to eat, the gap sensor went off:
Part 1
Mike: Puh, I'm glad we don't have to eat now, thanks to the gap sensor.
Lauren: Let's hurry inside.
Kevin: Mentor, where is the Moogers' attack?
Mentor: In the city, hurry!
Jayden: Let's go!
(In the city)
Kryptox: I like scared and worried people! The Sanzu River will rise if I suck all their scary and worries out!
Antonio: Not if we can stop you!
Lauren: We will defeat you and Master X!
Kryptox: What? There are now two of those Red Rangers? No problem, I can still defeat you!
All Rangers: Go Go Samurai!
Kryptox: Moogers attack!
Mia, Emily and Mike: Spin sword!
Kevin: Super Samurai Mode!
Jayden and Lauren: Fire smasher!
Antonio: Barracuda Blade!
Kryptox: No! You have won against my Moogers but you can't win against
me! (He fires an attack towards the Rangers and strikes them down)
Kevin: What idea?
Mike: We could help Jayden to have more fun by making him play video games again.
Mentor: And how? I tried many times to make him play again but nothing worked.
Emily: So Mike, what's your plan to make him play?
Mike: I like video games, how about I duel Jayden in a game? I mean he can't resist to fight even if it's in a video game.
Mia: That would be great. But how will you make him duel you, maybe he doesn't want to?
Antonio: How I know Jayden, he can be very stubborn sometimes and when he doesn't want to it's nearly impossible to convince him. The only person who could maybe convince him is Lauren, he does what she says. But at first I think we should help him get his memory back.
Emily: You're right, that's more important now. We will ask Lauren what she thinks about all that. Let's go and put the video game console in the living room and then head to the hospital to Jayden and Lauren.
Everyone: Allright.
(They put the console in the living room and went with the photos to the hospital)
...
(at the hospital Jayden and Lauren were talking together)
Lauren: The others will come soon with some photos to show you.
Jayden: ...You think that would help me remember something about them?
Lauren: I don't know, but i think it's worth a try. We do whatever we can to help you.
Jayden: ...Hey Lauren...
Lauren: Yeah?
Jayden: ...Could you tell me something about them? They said they are my friends, I would like to know them a bit.
Lauren: Sure, I don't know them very good but I'll try to tell you as much as I know. Let's start with Emily, she is the blonde girl and the youngest. She likes to help and make everyone happy. Then there is Kevin, he's the guy with the blue shirt, he's a serious person and he likes to swim. Mike the other guy, likes to play video games and is also a prankster. And the last one is Mia, she is like a big sister for everyone and she can cook very good, but for some reason the others don't like her cooking that much. That's all I know about them.
Jayden: ...They seem to be very good friends, I don't know how I can't remember them.
Lauren: Don't worry, you'll remember everything in time.
(In that moment the Rangers came in)
Both: Hey guys.
Emily: Do you feel better Jayden?
Jayden: ...Yeah, a bit.
Mia: Could you remember anything?
Jayden: ...No, I'm sorry. But Lauren just told me some things about you.
Mike: What did she tell you exactly? I hope only good things.
Lauren: Sure Mike, I left the bad things out especially those concerning you.
(All chuckled, even Jayden. Everyone was happy that after all he could laugh)
Part 16:
(Emily took out a box)
Antonio: What's in there?
Emily: I don't know.
Mike: Let's open it.
(they opened it carefully and looked at the things in there)
Kevin: What's that?
Mia: Seems like... toys.
Antonio: Video Games, a Baseball other toys and...the photo album!
All: Great!
Emily: ...Is that all Jayden's stuff?
Antonio: Yeah, I recognize some of them we played with as kids.
Mia: But why are they hidden there in a box in Jayden's closet?
(Mentor came in)
Mentor: Have you found the photos Rangers?
Kevin: Yes and a lot of other stuff.
Mentor: What have you found?
(he looked at the box)
Mentor: Where have you found that box?
Emily: It was in his closet.
Mentor: So there it was and I didn't find it.
Mike: How do you mean that?
Mentor: I thought Jayden threw all his kid's stuff away. I told you Jayden changed after his parents death and Lauren left. Before all that he liked to play Baseball and video games with his dad.
Mike: Jayden played video games?
Mentor: Yeah, he was very good. He won many video game tournaments. (he took a golden cup for the first prize out of the box) There are many in the living room too.
Mia: What happened? Why isn't he playing anymore?
Mentor: As a kid he had balance in his life. He and Lauren started to train early with their dad but were still allowed to have fun. Jayden played video games and Lauren loved singing and went to contests. Sadly they both stopped doing what they loved the most after their father died. You know as the Red Ranger he had duties and sadly not much time for his family. At least he played video games with Jayden and their mother helped Lauren with the singing and both were with them on their tournaments and concerts. They quit doing those things because it made them sad doing it without their parents. They dedicated themselves to the samurai life and forgot what it means to have fun.
Kevin: We never knew that. We actually didn't now much at all about their past.
Mentor: Jayden has a lot of self-discipline, but you didn't make it easy for him. Everytime when Mike played video games I'm sure he wanted to play too, but resisted. Since you Rangers are here Jayden and Lauren learned to lose up a bit and have fun. They didn't have a normal childhood like you or someone else but it's good to see them smile and have fun from time to time and I want to thank you for that.
Mia: We like to help them to lose up and behave like normal persons.
Antonio: Let's put the stuff back and go to the hospital.
Mike: Wait! Don't put it back, I have an idea.
@PRs4ever
Bwahahaha! :) Your post just destroyed me! Because I like my fans and you keep reading and commenting I'll try to post the new part by saturday or sunday, is that good for you?
@all
Thanx for your love and supporting comments, keep reading and making comments like that.
1. keep going!
2. please continue!
3. more please!
4. this is awesome!
5. MORE MORE MOREEEE
6. Can you please make more?
7. Alright, 7 comments... CONTINUE!! hehe
Thanx for your comments! Please make more that I know you like my fanfic, about 7 more comments like this and I'll post the new part.
P.S: @erin897
I'll post the rewrite of part 5 soon, sorry if you're waiting for it. Please be a little more patient, I'm working on it and it's almost finished.
Part 15:
(at the Shiba house)
Emily: Let's go and find some photos to show Jayden.
Mia: Yeah, but where did we put our photo album?
Kevin: I don't know, maybe Mentor knows.
Mike: Hey Mentor, do you know where we put our photo album?
Mentor: I'm sorry but no. It should be somewhere here.
Antonio: But isn't that the album only with the photos of us Ranger? Didn't we also want to find his family photos?
Emily: You're right. Mentor where are Jayden's and Lauren's family photos?
Mentor: I don't know, it was in the living room but he seems to have hidden it somewhere else after you all came.
Antonio: Why would he hide it?
Mentor: Maybe that you don't find it and ask him something about his past.
Mike: Great, so we have to search everywhere.
Emily: But wait, I think if he doesn't want us to see his photos we should respect that.
Mentor: You have a point Emily, but I if it helps him remember, I think he won't be mad.
Mike: Great, so now we have to search everywhere right?
Kevin: We should hurry and find them, let's go.
Mia: I think everyone should at first look in their own room to find either the Rangers' or family photos.
(they searched and met again in the living room)
Antonio: Anyone found something?
All the others: No...
Mentor: Hey Rangers, I think I found your photos.
Emily: Really, where was it?
Mentor: (hands it to Emily) Here in the living room.
Emily: Now we have to find the family photos.
Mia: We haven't searched in his room. (they looked at each other)
Antonio: What are we waiting for, let's go.
Mike: Yeah, but none of us has ever really been in his room.
Mentor: I don't think that he would mind as long as you put everything back on its place. Jayden doesn't like when his room gets messed up, allright?
Everyone: Allright. (they went into Jayden's room, looking around and started searching)
Emily: Wow, his room is pretty big...he hasn't got much stuff here.
Antonio: Yeah, he gasn't got many things that mean something to him.
(suddenly Emily's gaze went to a framed picture on the night table. It showed a family, seeming to be Jayden and Lauren with their parents. Emily look a while on it as Mia asked her)
Mia: Hey Em, who's on the picture? Is that Jayden? (then the others came and looked too)
Emily: Awww, they look so cute together...and happy. They surely miss their parents. I'll take this one too to show him. All went back to search, she took it and went to his closet to search for other photos. Something caught her eye when she opened it)
Emily: Guys, I think I found something, but not the photos...
Good names, I'll wait then till you post more. The names can be suggested till friday. By the way, the nameless Nighlok is the one of your idea with poisoning Jayden. I just read your new part, yay so happy that you're using my idea, thanx again. Please be patient for my new parts, I'll try to post them this weekend. You'll se soon I used your idea, I hope it's okay for you that your idea appears about three or four post later?
P.S. Thanx for reading and for your suggestions and good night hahaha!
Hey guys! I'm writing the next parts right now and I would be using erin897's idea. I just didn't have time to write it last week but it would be on the boards this week. As I was writing the other parts I was putting in a new Nighlok, but I haven't got a name yet. So I thought you could suggest some names?
Post your ideas please 'till friday and the winner's (nighlok)name will be used in my fanfic.
@erin897
About my idea, I would like Jayden to be like revived (maybe on Kayden's wedding or earlier or when you like) so that he is again in the fanfic. That would be great and thanx for being fair and using my idea.
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