Hi I've been waiting forever to make a power rangers fanfic but I need a little help. I have an Idea for the plot but need some help for characters. Correct me if I'm wrong on anything and post Ideas for personality and description! Here are a few characters!
Name:Amanda
Age:13(I want my rangers to be middle school ages)
Color:red
Weapon:Firesmasher(correct me please!)
Connections:Lauren's daughter, friends with other rangers
Personality:confident(give suggestions please)
Description:Tall, blonde hair blue eyes, like a younger Lauren
Name:Mark
Age:13
Color:Blue
Weapon:Hydro-bow
Connections:Kevin's son friends with other rangers
Personality:Cautious, disciplined
Description:Like a younger, slightly less serious Kevin
I don't want to run out of room but I'll post more soon!(p.s. I need nylock ideas too!!!)
Hey, good job on this chapter!!! And I will try my best to keep your board alive. But as you know it's not up to me, it's up to the mods. I'll try my best though!!! And again, great job on this poem.
I just posted another chapter, but I'm going to summer camp for 4 weeks and won't be able to post! Please keep this board alive! I'll try to post as soon as I can after I get back!
Part 27 Jayden's POV-I am sitting in the kitchen trying to think of anything but what is going on.
"Jayden! Jayden!" An excited voice calls my name. I look up and see that its Amanda. "I think I have a way to wake the girl up!" This gets the attention of everyone in the kitchen.
"Are you serious?" I ask. She nods.
"Well then..." says Sam gesturing for her to get on with it. She takes a deep breath.
"You all know the sound of the gap sensors going off, right?" She pauses."If she is like us she would be trained to become alert when she hears it. And even if she's just a normal person it would startle her awake. Does anyone think it would work?" She looks at each and every one of us. We each nod. "Now does anyone know how to set it off? Or does someone have a recording?" I almost smile at this. She is a leader, and she doesn't know it. I think she'll make a good red ranger.
"I have a recording," said Carlos, holding out his samurizer.
"Well then, why don't we go try it."
Not a bad chapter, long in coming ans actually kind of short. Hopefully the next one will be a little longer? And sooner? Not a bad chapter. Continue SOON.
Wow I cannot seem to keep a deadline here! So sorry!
Part 26 Amanda's POV-We walk inside. I haven't been to my room here for over a month. I walk down the hallway and everyone else tries to find something to distract themselves with. We each have our own rooms, but we've never really stayed here. Or my friends at least. I've slept over here a few times. I open my door and close it quietly behind me. The rest of the adults are in one of the extra rooms across the hall from me. I sit down on my bed and look around. Not that I expect anything has changed, but because I need something to focus on. I end up thinking about the bed itself. What it would feel like to be woken up by the gap sensors alarms. I smile for a sec, as I imagine panic, especially if it was the first time this happened. Then it hits me. We were all basically trained to become very alert when we heard the alarm. And even if she is a normal person it could startle her awake... I jump up, eyes wide, and head for the door.
The last part wasn't quite finished, so heres the rest. I'll be picking up right where I left off.
She seemed like she was focused on something else, but she snapped out of it after hearing us again. She does that sometimes. Carlos' dad, Antonio, walked up to Amanda's uncle.
"Well you have to admit it was funny," he said. "Now, we're making dinner if anyone wants to help." Sarah perked up at that. " We're probably in for a long night." Amanda's uncle nodded.
"We're going to go crazy if we don't figure out whats going on," he said.
Amanda seemed to agree to this.
Ok then thats all I have right now!
So sorry this is way overdue! Been kinda crazy (I sprained my ankle) but I'm still here. Here's the next part!
Part 25 Sam's POV- I lost my balance and tried to regain it, but soon gave in to my own laughter and collapsed to the ground. The complete craziness of the situation, along with the fact that I tend to laugh a lot, just set me off. The others were laughing now too, and by the time we all stopped, most of the adults had gone inside. Amanda seemed focused on something else while her uncle said "Oh come on... it wasn't that bad." We all, excluding Amanda, laughed again.
I got to go now, I'll try to post more soon.
Ha Ha! Yep! Now here's a little more! This takes place sometime in the middle of the last part, so I'll call it part 24 1/2.
Part 24 1/2 Amanda's POV- Who is this kid! Jayden had made a decision that we should help her, and I couldn't disagree. I knew we were about to teleport, and I saw something in the grass. I quickly grabbed it and put it in my pocket. I would have to figure out what it was later. We teleported, and I was surprised at the drop we had, especially after when we did it we were on the ground. Sam started laughing, and once you start its a little hard to stop, as I was laughing too. We were all laughing soon enough. When we finally stopped, Mia, Emily, Kevin, Mike and my mom had gone inside with the girl. I just need to know who she is! Laughing helped me relax, but I would not be able to do anything else if I don't figure this out! I hope she wakes up soon.
For some reason it won't let the parts get very long Oh well! Here's more!
Part 24 Jayden's POV-I instinctively ran towards the girl. We help people whenever we can, and likely always will. she didn't seem hurt, but was still extremely strange. She had on what looked like one of our older practice uniforms from the Shiba house, as well as whatever happened with Kevin and that symbol. And she looked almost like... one of us. She seemed to be unconscious, and we couldn't just leave her here. I made up my mind. "Lets get her back to the Shiba house,"I told everyone else, who was crowding around her. My sister looked at me, confirming that she thought this was a good idea. "We need to find out who she is, and if she might know anything about the nylock attacks." Everyone nodded, and I pulled out my samuraizer. I hadn't done this for a while. I drew the symbol for teleport, and we eminently appeared at the Shiba house. About 6 inches off the ground.
That was a good and interesting chapter. They are getting a bit short so maybe you could work on that... And yeah, I think it's a really good idea to put POV's from their parents into the story. Continue soon!!!
Sorry I keep taking so long between posts! I'm trying to get out at least one part per week. I'll be picking up right where I left off, so here's more!
Part 23 Mark's POV- Amanda's mom asked my dad. He thought for a second, than said "I'm going to try something. And you might want to stand back." We took a couple of steps away and he pulled out his morpher, which I noticed was slightly different than ours. He drew a symbol with much more speed and accuracy than I could manage right now. He didn't even have to say what it does!( we have been told that saying the word was just to help hone our powers ) There was a flash of blue. Right in front of us, a girl, about our age, apparently materialized, and collapsed to the ground.
How's that? I'll try to post more soon! I just had an idea! Do you think I should post some parts from their parents point of view? Thanks, bye!
OK I'm back and I have more!
Part 22 Mark's POV-We still had no idea why the monsters attacked us. No one had even seen a nylock for years. I walked back over to the area where I first got the feeling someone was there. I walked straight into something, but I still didn't see anything! I felt for whatever it was again and my hand came to feel a smooth and glassy surface. "Umm, guys!"I called,"You might want to check this out!" It was also surprisingly cold, considering it was over 90 degrees outside.
"What is it?" Amanda asked as she and the others jogged over.
"Feel this." I told them when they got here.
"Woah!" Sam exclaimed.
"Is this some sort of joke?" Sarah asked. I shook my head.
"I don't think so."I told her. Amanda seemed to think for a while.
"Mom, come check this out" she shouted. The rest of out parents followed her mom and uncle over to us. "Feel this?" she put her hand up against whatever it was next to us and her mom followed.
"Hey Kevin, what do you think this is?"
Great Chapter!!! I love how you left it. Makes me eager for the next chapter. But I can respect you are going on a vacation. But please post the next part as soon as you can. HAVE FUN!!!
I just posted a chapter, but here's a hint for what might happen soon. Earlier I posted some character profiles. One of them is a ranger who we have not seen yet! Think about it! I won't be able to post for about a week- I'm going on vacation! It would be a little awkward to post from my dads laptop cuz were going to be in a hotel and my parents don't know I like power rangers. And my sister would tease me. So yeah. bye!
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