1 Out side the casle of lions (soccer ball rolls acros the screan)
Vince:gole!! Daniel:yes!..i told you i was going to beat you Larmina. Larmina:ya right i let you win Daniel:you achtay think i wold belev that? Vince:i don't know about you but all this braging is making me hungry! Daniel:ya me to...HAY ferst one in side the casel gets braging rights Larmina:later! Daniel:hay Voltron Control Room. Lance:you called us Pidge? Pidge:yes i'm piking up a distress signal and i was wundering if you new who? Lance:it's preobably thoes cadets i told them 15 times not to play wheth the distress box unles
it's an emergensy! Pidge:u lance before you blame the cadets
may i add that it's not evin coming frome arus...Keith:what?
Pidge:it's comeing frome planit cridor Lance:cridore why wold
sven be sinding a distress signal? Pidge:it's a distress signal
that only comes frome the lions. Lance:but all the lions are here Keith:when we were on cridore blue mustuf dropd
the box but we can stel chek .
27 Matt:hey voltron what color should my roof be? red or black? Lance:i think you should keep it red it really brings out the color of the house and we all know red is better than black. Matt:ok thanks! Lance:No pro bro.......keith whats with the death stare?.....oh the com was still on i din't mean that i was just... Keith:we'll talk about this later
lets just get the roabeast out of the way so we can help with the fire.. Hunk:sounds like a plan! Kela:This is so awesome!!! Daniel:i know right? meeting the Voltron force,Being apart of Voltron Force, and being the leg of voltron all on the same day! Pidge:she's on the Force now? Lance:guys stay focus Hunk:oh right i wonder how
allura is doing? (in the main village) Allura:ok i think we put it all out Marsue:wait look over there (another fire reached to the forest) allura:Oh no!
Thanks pal! And if you have any new ideas for my new story or things you liked that was on my old story that you want on my new story, throw it at me! P.S. First installment in about 4 days, so I'm excited about that! Well, talk to you later pal!
hello :3 i see you wanted advice to get your post to get and STAY on the boards simple. ^_^ i'v been studying how the board works and sucsess!!! xD the board goes by newest to oldest. each time someone comments on a topic it goes to the top and when it dose that another topic goes down and when a topic is all the way at the bottem for a long time it gets wiped off so what you need to do is keep comments, or commenting coming on your topic whenever you see it near the bottem to keep it active ;D
Your doin' good pal! Your post has been on this board for so long! And I have a question. Can you give me advice for my new fic so I can assure it stays on the boards this time? 'Cause I was kind of upset to find out that my old fic ( Probaly dont remember it ) was thrown off, so I want to make the new one last! 'Kay, thanks!
oh yes AlexStar13 i wanted to tell you you have a nice
fanfic your self! ^_^ you also have a bunch of fans
i guese i can say this is both are first fanfics! thank you for
reading my fanfic and i'd like you to be my buddy!.......and
.....i tryd so hard not to admit this but.......I HAVE RIGHTERS BLOCK! O_O WHYYY!!! so...i think i'll need
help than if i get a good idea or advice ITAL BE POSTED ON
ZE BORDS and....well you get the pic thanks again AlexStar13! by your friendly wolf SHARP WOLF 5! ^_^
Meh sorry you guys i'm just haveing problems thinking up the next part (sigh) fanfics are so hard to do -_- i also need help figering something out on one side i fell i shud
quit and give up. and on the other side i fell i shud finish what i started! witch side sud i lisin to help meh plz!
26 keith:how? kela:well like allura said we need every part of voltron and we need her to put out the fire so we need someone to take her place.daniel:meaning? kela:maybe i cud form the leg i mean white have alredy provein she can handle it she took you guys out in a flash.hunk:but you'v never done this before kela:by the looks of things we can aford to give it a shot! lance:kids got a point keith? keith:fine. Blue get to the fire before it gets out of hand grey help her out the rest of you split up and try to find a whay to take this thing down!(after a while they formed voltron and found the roabeast formed the sword and stuf voltron was pind down by the roabest and mad voltron acadintaly step on a house) bill:hello? matt:ya um bill voltron just steped in my house. Bill:oh come on this is the 5th time this week! matt:i know i know it was about tim i fixed my roof any whays hay what color shud it be?
bill:i don't know ask voltron? (i'v been wanting to put that part in for a long time)
25 (they was done takeing down the last roabest but it felt like something was missing but what?) Hunk:man that was fun we better do it again some time! Lance:any body else fells like somethings missing? Pidge:missing? Hey! what happend to the 3d roabeast! Hunk:mabe it went to arus with lotor Allura:LOTOR! HES ON ARUS! Lance:if hes on arus who knows what hes doing probubly heding for the castle. keith:than let's go! (the lions flew back to arus and whin they got there it was too late.The main vilage was on fire and destroyed drull ships was blasting and the roabest was steping on and smashing evrything) allura:oh no! Hunk:what are we going to do? Keith:um? allura i need you to try ta put out the fire lance i need you to...Allura:no! Keith:what? Allura:we need voltron and by the looks of it we need every part of him not just one leg. Keith:if we don't put out this fire soon it will spred to the forest! Kela:m mabe i cud help?