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~~The Legend of the Eclipse Dragon~~ (Fan-fic!)

Date: 01/14/14 8:13 PM
From: Bloomcool5

Everybody use to say that the Eclipse Dragon was just a myth, never meant to be real. But the people of the Magic Dimension were soon to pay the price. It appeared, in the sky like an angel, but had no angelic mood, nor mercy. It said in a bellowing voice,
"People of the Magic Dimension. You have chosen not to worship me. As punishment, You must give up a child from the planet Quash to me." The people were frightened. Never, were they more scared. Quash, was in chaos. There were over 7.5 billion children on that planet, and every single one them was scared. The Dragon came back the next day, and chose it's child.

Caroline Rumor.


Ok, I hope you guys enjoyed Part 1! Part 2 coming soon!

Bloomcool5

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Date: 03/30/14 10:22 PM
From: Bloomcool5

Hey, everybody. I'm going to make an announcement.
I'm not going to continue this fic. I'm not going anywhere, and only 2 people voted my fic for Eclipse10's competition.
This fic is poorly written anyway. Anyway, it may be a while before I come up with another fic, and I know this one's not going to be missed.

Farewell.

Bloomcool5

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Date: 03/20/14 11:03 PM
From: Bloomcool5

~~Caroline's POV~~
I walk around the little dungeon.
"Hmm...there's go to be some way out." I say to Alyce. I begin to search for someway, ANYWAY, out of here. All of a sudden, I hear the main dungeon door open, and there stands a girl with short black hair with red streaks, and jade green eyes. She grabs me by my shoulder and says coldly, "Follow me, Caroline."
*Later*
I sit in a small room. It was probably the same size as the dungeon. I was tied up in a chair. The girl paralyzed me with, I think her own magic, long enough to trap me. I try to undo the knots the ropes hold, but it seems the more I struggle, the tighter the ropes get. I sigh, and hang my head down in defeat. Why was this happening to me?! What's so special at me? I mean, I AM the long lost princess of a long lost planet, but what does that have to do with anything? It makes NO sense what so ever. All of a sudden, the door to the small room opens, and the girl emerges again.
"Your turn." She says.
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Date: 03/18/14 4:47 PM
From: Bloomcool5

~~Luna's POV~~
Cathy opened her hands, and we saw a cute, little bunny!
"I found it on the school grounds! Isn't i just sweet?!" She said.
"Isn't it just?!" Kim said. She walked over to Cathy, and started to goggle over the bunny too. All of a sudden, I hear a knock on our dorm window. I walk over to it, and see a pure black owl carrying a letter. I run over to the window, and open it. The owl flies in. I take the letter. It reads:

DEAR FAIRIES, IF YOU EVER WANT TO SEE CAROLINE AGAIN, SEND US THE GOLDEN NIGHTFLAME.
~Z

"Holy moly, Kim, Cathy!"
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"Where did you get this?" Ms. Grezelda barked.
"An owl sent it, Miss." I replied.
"An owl?!" She said.
"Yes ma'am." I said.
"Who is Z?"
"I don't know ma'am."
Grezelda groaned. "Miss Faragonda will be hearing of this."
"Yes ma'am." I said. She then sent me out of her office. Outside, Cathy and Kim waited.
"Well?" Kim asked.
"They're not sure." I replied.
"Well, come on." Cathy said.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Bloomcool5

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Date: 03/13/14 4:52 PM
From: Bloomcool5

@Eclipse10
Thanks so much! I didn't know so many people liked my story! It really makes me
@Everyone
Please nominate my story for the fanfition competition hosted by Eclipse10! Now, the part you've been waiting for!!

~~Kim's POV~~
"Luna!" I yelled to her. She dashed awake.
"AHH! IT'S THE GOLDEN MOONS!" She yells.
"What?" I ask her. She looks up at me.
"Oh, it's you." She says coldly.
"Hey, what's your problem?" I shoot back at her.
She sighs and closes her eyes.
"I'm sorry Kim. I was up late last night trying to find a trace of Caroline." She says.
"Luna, you've been at this for days," I sit down. "You know what Miss Faragonda said. We just have to get stronger."
"But what if it takes too long? What if something happens to her? What if...What if..." She busts out crying.
I lean over and hug her. She sniffles.
"I'm sorry. I'm overreacting." Cathy rushes into the room, her hands cupped.
"Guys! You'll never believe...I'm sorry, do you need a minute?" She says.
"No, it's fine!"

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Date: 03/12/14 12:54 AM
From: Eclispe10

I'm here because I wanted you to know that you've gotten a spot in my fanfiction competition. We still need a lot of fanfics, so I'm just going to post a quick reminder on here: vote for your favorite stories on the thread titled Fanfiction Competition! Also, you might wanna keep an eye on the topic, Bloomcool5. Congrats!

-Eclispe/Savannah

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Date: 02/24/14 5:37 PM
From: Bloomcool5

I hate writer?s block. -___-
~~Luna?s POV~~
I sit down in my room with Cathy. Ms.F kindly packed all of our stuff, and had it teleported here.
Cathy walks in, carrying the last of hers.
?Ok. All done. YO KIM! I DON?T NEED ANYMORE HELP!? Cathy yelled.
?K!? Kim yelled back. Cathy saw me sitting on my bed.
?Hey, Luna. What?s wrong?? Cathy asked reassuringly.
I sighed. ?I guess I?m still a bit worried about Caroline.? Cathy put her arm around me.
?Hey. Caroline is strong. Wherever she is, she?s pulling through.?
?I hope.? I said.
~~Caroline?s POV~~
I wake up in a small, dark dungeon. Strange? All I remember was running through the portal, and that?s it. I get up, and wipe dust that were on my skinny jeans.
?Hello?? I say, calling to the pure darkness.
?Hello?? I say again. All of a sudden, an orb of light came out of nowhere.
?Hello?? I get back.
?Who?s there? Show yourself!? I demand. A girl with brown hair appears.
?Who are you?? I ask.
?My name is Alyce. Me and 4 other girls are trapped down here.?
?But where are we?? I ask.
?That I don?t know.?
?Where are the other 4 girls??
?They?re right here. This is Rameesha, Marisol, Hazel, and Rochelle. We?ve all been taken.? Alyce said. I notice they?re all sleeping.
?What happened to all of you?? I ask.
Alyce sighed. ?We?ve been here for a while. It?s been so long since we?ve all seen the sunlight.?
I look around. ?Well, there?s got to be someway out of here. Do you know anything that we all have in common??
?Well, we?re all pretty powerful fairies.? Alyce says.
?Wait, what?? I say.
?Wait, you don?t know?? Alyce says.
?She can?t remember.? A voice says behind us.
?Rameesha, you need to sleep.? Alyce says.
?I have enough strength for this.? She says. She gets up and tells me the story.
?So, I?m the long lost princess of Quash?? I say when she?s finished.
?Yes, but there?s something wrong.? She says.
?What?s that?? I say.
?Quash is gone.?

Enough of Cathy, Kim, and Luna. (Although I like their characters.) Time to get to know Caroline!

Bloomcool5

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Date: 02/16/14 5:51 PM
From: Bloomcool5

~~Cathy?s POV~~
We?re all in Ms.F?s office when she explains.
?All 3 of you are fairies.?
?Wait, what?!?!?!? I say.
?It is true. For example: Luna, you are fairy of The Golden Nightflame.
Kim, you are The Fairy of Fire and Light, and
Cathy, you are the fairy of Musical Dreams.? Ms.F says.
?Wait, so we?re fairies?? I say.
?Correct.? Ms.F says.
?How did this happen?? Kim asks.
?That, I do not know. That is for you to find out.? Ms.F says.
?So where?s Caroline?? Luna asks.
?The Zin kidnapped her, just after you jumped through the portal. They?re after powerful fairies, and I fear Luna is next.?
?How are we going to save Caroline?? I say.
?You won?t. We can?t take action, until you?re powers have gotten stronger.? Ms.F says.
?But-? I begin.
?No buts. You must get stronger. We have dorms set for you. Ruby will escort you there. All 3 of you are dismissed.? Ms.F says.
We leave without a word.


Intensity, RISING!!! I have learned how to copy and paste! WOOHOO!

Bloomcool5

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Date: 02/14/14 6:58 AM
From: Bloomcool5

Sorry I haven't been posting. Middle school is SO not the best event ever.

~~Luna's POV~~
Well, I THOUGHT we vanished. A golden light erupted from me, as I said my name. The Zin soldier dropped me, as if blinded towards the light.
"Oh. My. Gosh. What just happened?!" Cathy said.
"I don't know!" I yell back.
"Heiyah!" I hear. I turn around to find... wait, what? FAIRIES.
"Back off!" I hear again. The girl with golden hair is throwing some sort of jeweled substance.
"I am Ruby, fairy of The Jeweled Dragon,"
"We are Leslie and Cheryll, Fairies of Color and Ice,"
"And I am Anna, Fairy of Ice and Snow,"
"SO BACK OFF!!"
"Convergence spell girls!" Ruby says.
"We got this!" The twins say.
"UNITE!" The twins say. An Ice rainbow emerges, and takes target of the Zin soldier. The Rainbow hits it, and it disintegrates. All of us cheer. Ruby comes over.
"Luna. Kim. Cathy. Someone wants to see you."

I know this isn't the best battle I've written, but hey.
Later,

Bloomcool5

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Date: 02/04/14 7:03 PM
From: KBF

Free licks from my dog!

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Date: 02/01/14 4:43 PM
From: Bloomcool5

~~Luna's POV~~
My gold and black outfit glittered in the sun.
"Um... guys?" Kim says, "How are we going to fight them?"
"Oh shoot." I say.
The Zin quickly qrabbed me, and we vanished.
"LUNA!!"
~~Hazel's POV~~
"We've found her sisters." Icy says. "Hazel, you're going have to try harder, if you want to beat The Trix."
"Help me... Somebody, anybody HELP ME!!" I shout.
"That's enough." Darcy says.
~~Jessie's POV~~
The 3 sandwiches I'm carrying are really small. I felt bad about the 3 prisoners who were down there.
I felt bad for betraying them too...
"JESSIE!"
"AHH! Alyce?! What are you doing?!"
"You did this to us! YOU'RE THE ONE WHO BETRAYED US!!"
"AAAAHHH!" I wake up screaming in my bed. I checked my ditigal clock. 2:00 a.m. I flopped back on my bed, and begin tossing and turning. I was FREAKED. Yes, I did betray my best friends, but for a good cause.

I hope you guys liked my new character Hazel. Nobody suggested her, so I put her in.
Bloomcool5

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Date: 02/01/14 5:18 AM
From: Yurai765

@ Bloomcool5
Your welcome XD I never knew I sounded powerful.
If u want to know powerful... It should be my brother Ren.
He can control the golden moons. XD
Anyways, I am liking the story so far :D
Good luck with the rest of it!!!
(P.S If u don't have much space to write, go to word document, type how much ever u want, and then copy and paste it onto this, then u'll get a longer paragraph!)
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Date: 01/31/14 10:07 PM
From: KBF

This is so AWESOME!!!! Plz write some more!! I'll be

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Date: 01/31/14 8:50 PM
From: Bloomcool5

Ok, I"m gonna break the 3 days thing. I just REALLY felt like writing! :) Oh! And by the way everybody that's in the story, is going to be at the level of Charmix. If anybody put Above Charmix, that's going to have to wait. Sorry!

~~Ruby's POV~~
"Did you really see her?" Leslie asks.
"Of course! Do you think I would be lying about this?!" I say.
"Well, resulting to past events..." Cheryll says.
"Stop it! I did see her! She was as clear as day!" I protest.
"But she's just a myth! Along with her planet!" Anna says.
"Well, she's here, right now." I say.

~~Alcye's POV~~
"Marisol! MARISOL!"I whisper to her.
We were both in a dungeon. It was pretty dark, and cold. She probably passed out.
"Al-Alyce?" I hear.
I turn around to find Rameesha.
"Oh my gosh! Rameesha! Where have you been?! When me Marisol were fighting the Zin, you suddenly disappeared! What happened?!" I say as I question her.
"Trix... more powerful..." She says before she passes out too.
"No..." I say. "That's impossible."

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Date: 01/31/14 4:02 PM
From: Parisluv

please continue and if it is too long just put it in parts.
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Date: 01/30/14 4:51 PM
From: Bloomcool5

Sorry I'm overdue! I just got hit by a HORRIBLE snowstorm, and my internet was down.
Here's what you've been waiting for!

~~Jessie's POV~~
"WHERE'S THE OTHER ONE?!"
"I-I don't know sir." I say.
"Well, find her. We have The Eclipse Dragon, now all we need is The Golden Nightflame."
I was scared.
~~Kim's POV~~
"Where could she possibly be?" I say
We all looked around. Caroline was nowhere to be found.
"LUNA!!" We all hear.
"Excuse me?!" Luna says.
"We are here for you!! We are the Zin, and we want POWER!!!" The voice says.
"NOT UNDER MY WATCH!" I yell.
All of a sudden, Luna, Cathy and me, are enveloped from a blue light, and something, AMAZING happens.
We transform.

Ok, so you're probably wondering why I didn't describe the Zin, and why it is so short, and why Luna.

1. I only have so much space!
2.The Zin are changelings. You never really know what they turn into!
3.Luna sounded pretty powerful to me. Good job Yural765!
Anymore questions you want answered? ^w^

Bloomcool5

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Date: 01/26/14 12:10 AM
From: Bloomcool5

@musa137
Yes, but it's better if you go to my other post. I'll let Anna in later!

Bloomcool5

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Date: 01/25/14 6:44 PM
From: musa137

I like it! :) Do you take characters?
Name: Anna
Age: 13
Powers: Music, Ice, and Snow
Hair: I don't care
Everyday outfit: I don't care
Tranformation Level: Charmix
Transformation Outfit: I don't care
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Date: 01/25/14 6:17 PM
From: xandi

Sorry! I was actually talking to Eclipse10, mainly cause she was beating on her own story. Sigh. Anyway, as I said earlier, your story's great and I cant wait for the next part!

Thanks,
Xandi

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Date: 01/25/14 3:50 PM
From: Bloomcool5

@xandi
I don't mean to be rude, but my name's not Savannah, but glad you like my story anyway!

Bloomcool5

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Date: 01/24/14 11:09 PM
From: xandi

@Savannah
Your story is awesome! What are you talking about? Spacing it out and taking it slow just makes it suspenseful and more.... better? (Bad grammer, I know, but I didnt want to repeat myself hehe )

Thanks,
Xandi

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