Everybody use to say that the Eclipse Dragon was just a myth, never meant to be real. But the people of the Magic Dimension were soon to pay the price. It appeared, in the sky like an angel, but had no angelic mood, nor mercy. It said in a bellowing voice,
"People of the Magic Dimension. You have chosen not to worship me. As punishment, You must give up a child from the planet Quash to me." The people were frightened. Never, were they more scared. Quash, was in chaos. There were over 7.5 billion children on that planet, and every single one them was scared. The Dragon came back the next day, and chose it's child.
Ok, I hope you guys enjoyed Part 1! Part 2 coming soon!
I hate writer?s block. -___-
I sit down in my room with Cathy. Ms.F kindly packed all of our stuff, and had it teleported here.
Cathy walks in, carrying the last of hers.
?Ok. All done. YO KIM! I DON?T NEED ANYMORE HELP!? Cathy yelled.
?K!? Kim yelled back. Cathy saw me sitting on my bed.
?Hey, Luna. What?s wrong?? Cathy asked reassuringly.
I sighed. ?I guess I?m still a bit worried about Caroline.? Cathy put her arm around me.
?Hey. Caroline is strong. Wherever she is, she?s pulling through.?
?I hope.? I said.
I wake up in a small, dark dungeon. Strange? All I remember was running through the portal, and that?s it. I get up, and wipe dust that were on my skinny jeans.
?Hello?? I say, calling to the pure darkness.
?Hello?? I say again. All of a sudden, an orb of light came out of nowhere.
?Hello?? I get back.
?Who?s there? Show yourself!? I demand. A girl with brown hair appears.
?Who are you?? I ask.
?My name is Alyce. Me and 4 other girls are trapped down here.?
?But where are we?? I ask.
?That I don?t know.?
?Where are the other 4 girls??
?They?re right here. This is Rameesha, Marisol, Hazel, and Rochelle. We?ve all been taken.? Alyce said. I notice they?re all sleeping.
?What happened to all of you?? I ask.
Alyce sighed. ?We?ve been here for a while. It?s been so long since we?ve all seen the sunlight.?
I look around. ?Well, there?s got to be someway out of here. Do you know anything that we all have in common??
?Well, we?re all pretty powerful fairies.? Alyce says.
?Wait, what?? I say.
?Wait, you don?t know?? Alyce says.
?She can?t remember.? A voice says behind us.
?Rameesha, you need to sleep.? Alyce says.
?I have enough strength for this.? She says. She gets up and tells me the story.
?So, I?m the long lost princess of Quash?? I say when she?s finished.
?Yes, but there?s something wrong.? She says.
?What?s that?? I say.
?Quash is gone.?
Enough of Cathy, Kim, and Luna. (Although I like their characters.) Time to get to know Caroline!
We?re all in Ms.F?s office when she explains.
?All 3 of you are fairies.?
?Wait, what?!?!?!? I say.
?It is true. For example: Luna, you are fairy of The Golden Nightflame.
Kim, you are The Fairy of Fire and Light, and
Cathy, you are the fairy of Musical Dreams.? Ms.F says.
?Wait, so we?re fairies?? I say.
?Correct.? Ms.F says.
?How did this happen?? Kim asks.
?That, I do not know. That is for you to find out.? Ms.F says.
?So where?s Caroline?? Luna asks.
?The Zin kidnapped her, just after you jumped through the portal. They?re after powerful fairies, and I fear Luna is next.?
?How are we going to save Caroline?? I say.
?You won?t. We can?t take action, until you?re powers have gotten stronger.? Ms.F says.
?But-? I begin.
?No buts. You must get stronger. We have dorms set for you. Ruby will escort you there. All 3 of you are dismissed.? Ms.F says.
We leave without a word.
Intensity, RISING!!! I have learned how to copy and paste! WOOHOO!
Sorry I haven't been posting. Middle school is SO not the best event ever.
Well, I THOUGHT we vanished. A golden light erupted from me, as I said my name. The Zin soldier dropped me, as if blinded towards the light.
"Oh. My. Gosh. What just happened?!" Cathy said.
"I don't know!" I yell back.
"Heiyah!" I hear. I turn around to find... wait, what? FAIRIES.
"Back off!" I hear again. The girl with golden hair is throwing some sort of jeweled substance.
"I am Ruby, fairy of The Jeweled Dragon,"
"We are Leslie and Cheryll, Fairies of Color and Ice,"
"And I am Anna, Fairy of Ice and Snow,"
"SO BACK OFF!!"
"Convergence spell girls!" Ruby says.
"We got this!" The twins say.
"UNITE!" The twins say. An Ice rainbow emerges, and takes target of the Zin soldier. The Rainbow hits it, and it disintegrates. All of us cheer. Ruby comes over.
"Luna. Kim. Cathy. Someone wants to see you."
I know this isn't the best battle I've written, but hey.
My gold and black outfit glittered in the sun.
"Um... guys?" Kim says, "How are we going to fight them?"
"Oh shoot." I say.
The Zin quickly qrabbed me, and we vanished.
"We've found her sisters." Icy says. "Hazel, you're going have to try harder, if you want to beat The Trix."
"Help me... Somebody, anybody HELP ME!!" I shout.
"That's enough." Darcy says.
The 3 sandwiches I'm carrying are really small. I felt bad about the 3 prisoners who were down there.
I felt bad for betraying them too...
"AHH! Alyce?! What are you doing?!"
"You did this to us! YOU'RE THE ONE WHO BETRAYED US!!"
"AAAAHHH!" I wake up screaming in my bed. I checked my ditigal clock. 2:00 a.m. I flopped back on my bed, and begin tossing and turning. I was FREAKED. Yes, I did betray my best friends, but for a good cause.
I hope you guys liked my new character Hazel. Nobody suggested her, so I put her in.
Your welcome XD I never knew I sounded powerful.
If u want to know powerful... It should be my brother Ren.
He can control the golden moons. XD
Anyways, I am liking the story so far :D
Good luck with the rest of it!!!
(P.S If u don't have much space to write, go to word document, type how much ever u want, and then copy and paste it onto this, then u'll get a longer paragraph!)
Ok, I"m gonna break the 3 days thing. I just REALLY felt like writing! :) Oh! And by the way everybody that's in the story, is going to be at the level of Charmix. If anybody put Above Charmix, that's going to have to wait. Sorry!
"Did you really see her?" Leslie asks.
"Of course! Do you think I would be lying about this?!" I say.
"Well, resulting to past events..." Cheryll says.
"Stop it! I did see her! She was as clear as day!" I protest.
"But she's just a myth! Along with her planet!" Anna says.
"Well, she's here, right now." I say.
"Marisol! MARISOL!"I whisper to her.
We were both in a dungeon. It was pretty dark, and cold. She probably passed out.
"Al-Alyce?" I hear.
I turn around to find Rameesha.
"Oh my gosh! Rameesha! Where have you been?! When me Marisol were fighting the Zin, you suddenly disappeared! What happened?!" I say as I question her.
"Trix... more powerful..." She says before she passes out too.
"No..." I say. "That's impossible."
Sorry I'm overdue! I just got hit by a HORRIBLE snowstorm, and my internet was down.
Here's what you've been waiting for!
"WHERE'S THE OTHER ONE?!"
"I-I don't know sir." I say.
"Well, find her. We have The Eclipse Dragon, now all we need is The Golden Nightflame."
I was scared.
"Where could she possibly be?" I say
We all looked around. Caroline was nowhere to be found.
"LUNA!!" We all hear.
"Excuse me?!" Luna says.
"We are here for you!! We are the Zin, and we want POWER!!!" The voice says.
"NOT UNDER MY WATCH!" I yell.
All of a sudden, Luna, Cathy and me, are enveloped from a blue light, and something, AMAZING happens.
Ok, so you're probably wondering why I didn't describe the Zin, and why it is so short, and why Luna.
1. I only have so much space!
2.The Zin are changelings. You never really know what they turn into!
3.Luna sounded pretty powerful to me. Good job Yural765!
Anymore questions you want answered? ^w^
Your story is awesome! What are you talking about? Spacing it out and taking it slow just makes it suspenseful and more.... better? (Bad grammer, I know, but I didnt want to repeat myself hehe )
Well, sometimes you will come back to comments, and sometimes not. It just works that way. (When I write on my fanfic, just respond to all the readers, it's like my good luck charm. And I'm finally on 80+ posts. Eek!)
It was a good start, though. I clicked because of Eclipse, but this story definitely has more of a sense of direction than mine (although I love my plot, it has a bunch of gaps in it and all the scenes are stretched so there's practically no action).